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PART - LXXV


PART - LXXVI



Maan is seriously driving the car while Geet is trying to silence Arya, she has seen Maan and smiled ...then she thought of teasing him.


Geet (on behalf of Arya): mom dad has been a spoil sport, he promised u a wonderful date and is returning in the middle while we r enjoying there


Maan: ya ya...i had a wonderful date and this is enough for today...if we stay there any more the security guyz will personally drop us at the home

Geet laughed out loudly


Geet: kyun Maan Arya se itna darte ho kya...I told u that he has become a bratt but u didn't listen to me

Maan: ok madam i agree...now stop pulling my leg


They have reached home and Arya slept without bothering his parents. Arya is sleeping in between Maan and Geet, Geet is patting Arya while Maan is looking at both of them seriously thinking about something.


Geet: Maan stop staring at Arya...he is a kid he doesn't know anything...

Maan: yes i know...I am not staring at Arya because of his mischief at the hotel...I am worried that he is just like u


Geet: he is my son so he will be like me...what is very much fascinating ...wait a minute what do u mean by that

Maan: no nothing...mujhe laga ki bacha ladka hai...so he will be like me but kya kare he is like my DEMON


Geet: not only ur son agar lakdi hoti na thab bhi meri jaisi hogi...what do say baby?

Said Geet looking at her tummy


Geet: iss bar jaroor ladki hogi aur tumhe bahot tang karegi...Arya se bhi jyada

Maan: ha ha...agar ladki hogi toh voh definitely meri side hogi dekh lena


Geet: ha dekhte

Maan went near Geet and touched her tummy, he said with a faint smile on his face.


Maan: r u sure?...it's going to be baby girl this time

Geet: pata nahi...but Maan if it's a girl I think u will be more happier than me


Maan: ofcourse yes...I would love to have a little DEMON just like u...with a beautiful smile just like u...with the same innocence on her face just like u...Geet I want to be a proud father to a girl like u who loves her dad the most and I would definitely beat ur father in giving her all the happiness in the world...just wait and watch


Geet felt happy and hugged him

Geet: chalo dekte kaun kitna pyaar deta hai apne bachon ko

She broke off the hug and patted on Arya's cheek

Geet: don't worry baby mom is there for u

Maan: who said that ur dad is not with u


Maan kissed Arya and both of them smiled looking at each other.Geet's cell phone gave a beep sound and she took her mobile to check who has sent the message. The happiness in her eyes and the smile on her lips vanished after seeing the message, Maan got worried looking at the sudden change in Geet's face.


Maan: who is that?...is everything ok

Geet remained silent and didn't answer him, Maan touched her shoulder and moved her.

Maan: Geet...Geet...what happened?


Geet turned her face towards Maan, he has seen tears in her eyes. He got worried what's wrong with his DEMON...Geet is looking straight into his eyes.


Geet: kaise maafi maangu mai tujhe?

Maan: maafi?...kiss baat ke bareme baat kar rahi ho?

Geet: Maan we forgot that the baby is not ours...it's Pari's baby


Maan understood that the message is from Pari, he remained silent for few seconds.


Maan: Geet it's time to sleep...

Geet: Maan if u don't want this to happen...i won't...


Maan silenced her by placing his finger on her lips and made her lay properly on the bed.

Maan: issshhh


He covered Geet and Arya with the blanket and turned off the bed lamp.He closed his eyes stopping the tears to escape from his eyes.

Geet: Pari is fine now...but r u sure that she is fine...did Yash say anything


Maan: i have been in contact with him...he said that she is better now...don't worry she is going be completely fine within few days


Geet: ya... few days

Said Geet touching her baby bump

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After few days @ Bangalore


Pari: Yash we need to go to Mumbai immediately

Yash: ya Maan asked me to meet him at some hospital in Mumbai along with u


Pari: hospital?...Is anything serious...but Geet didn't mention me about the hospital

Yash: I am not aware of the reason

Pari: I hope everything is fine with them


@ Mumbai's Hospital


Yash and Pari rushed to the room were Geet is admitted. They have opened the door and have seen Maan sitting beside Geet on the bed. Pari went near Geet and Maan stood up from the bed.


Pari: Geet...what's wrong ?...Maan what happened?...y didn't u inform us

Maan remained silent, Yash went near him.


Yash: what's the problem?

Geet: nothing...I am fine Yash


Pari touched Geet's cheek

Pari: u r looking very weak ...what's wrong? Tell me Geet...if there isn't anything u won't call us right?...plz tell me what's wrong?


Geet: congrats!! to both of u

Pari: congrats??...for what?...have u gone mad?...Maan plz tell me ...


Maan: nothing to worry...congrats!!! to both of u for becoming parents

said Maan pointing towards the cradle in the room which they didn't notice yet.


Yash: it's not funny Maan...plz tell us the actual reason for calling us

Geet: this is the reason for calling u...to show u ur baby


Geet signalled Maan and Maan brought the baby from the cradle and placed in Pari's hands.


Pari took the baby into her hands and managed to smile

Pari: stop kidding Geet...ur baby is very nice...so u have become a mother again...y did u hide this from me

Geet: to give u a surprise


Pari smiled but Yash got irritated.


Pari's self thought: may be I am not as selfless as u r...sry Geet I can't stop myself from being jealous of u...u became mother again and I could never become a mother...u want to share ur happiness with me ...par mai itni achi nahi hu Geet...I can't stay here anymore


Yash's self thought: Pari has become normal after taking so much care...and when she became normal what r they doing to us? It might be funny for them but not for us...I thought Geet is really a nice frnd and is helping her frnd in every way...but I am wrong. Y did they call us here when they r aware of our problem...it's just to make fun of us...whatever might happen i am not going to take this any more...i am not ready see my wife in pain again


Yash : Maan I thought u guyz r helping me bring my wife out of pain...but i have never expected that u would hurt Pari...u r aware of her situation but still u called us just to make fun of...


Pari stopped Yash by holding his hand.

Pari: stop it Yash...they just wanted to share their happiness with us that's it...ok Geet...we r leaving


Pari kept the baby in the cradle.

Pari: Yash...let's go

Geet: Pari u forgot to take ur baby along with u


Pari is holding the door's handle...she got very much angry listening to Geet and turned towards with tears in her eyes.


Pari : enough Geet...I can't take it any more...u called us to show ur baby and we have seen the baby...plz don't torture me any more in the name of fun


Geet tried to sit on the bed while Maan helped her raise to the sitting posture.


Maan: it's true Pari

Yash: Maan it's no more funny

Maan: yes...it's no more funny...Geet sach bol rahi hai...it's ur child


Yash and Pari looked at each other listening to Maan

Pari: what do u mean by our child?


Maan: Geet gave birth to this child for u Pari...it's not our child...yes nobody is aware that Geet gave birth to one more child other than u and Yash


By now Pari and Yash stopped behaving aggressively

Pari: for me?...this child is for me

Maan: we didn't even look at the child till now...Geet wanted u to look at the child first...we don't even know whether the child is a boy or girl


Pari : what r u saying?

Maan: truth...the truth which we are hiding from the entire world since 9 months


Pari: Geet then...ur parents?

Geet: no one is aware of this fact...we moved to Mumbai to make u mother


Pari couldn't speak anything she went near the cradle and took child into her hands. Tears are rolling down her cheeks as she went and sat near Geet on the bed.


Pari: I can't accept this child...she is ur baby


Geet's eyes became moist whe she heard that the baby is a girl...she tried hard not to cry and looked at Maan...Maan felt half dead when his eyes met with hers' he couldn't face her. Maan went to the washroom and closed the door.


It is definitely not so easy to give away her baby for a mother, but what about the father is he strong enough to bear the pain of getting separated from his baby and console his wife at the same time. He shouldn't cry and let out his pain only because he is a man? Will he be able to hide his pain infront of his wife? Will he be able to give away his daughter?


Geet wanted to help her frnd because she is aware of the pain Pari has to undergo through out her life. Maan understood her wife and took this intricate decision but when the time came to give their baby how is he going to react?


Maan spent few minutes in the washroom crying out his heart and consoling himself...he came outside...while Geet is trying to bury her pain so that the pain won't take the shape of tears.


Pari: I can't accept this child...she is ur baby

Geet kept her hand under Pari's chin and said

Geet: toh tum meri bachi ko bhi apna pyaar nahi de sakti ho...can't u accept the baby which i have carried in my womb for 9 months just to present to u


Pari: this is not so easy for both of u

Geet: don't worry about us because the decision is purely ours...just tell me one thing can't u become mother of my baby


Pari is looking at Yash with teary eyes for his permission...but she is not aware that he didn't understand what she is asking him through her eyes...Yash had already decided to accept the child when Maan made it clear...he is unaware of what is happening around him, he is very happy that he has become a father now and her wife is going to be the mother of the child.


He didn't answer Pari's questioning eyes , he took the baby into his hands and kissed her on baby's cheek.


Yash: Pari she is our child...we are parents now


Pari felt overwhelmed and looked at Geet, the happiness on Pari and Yash's faces made Maaneet to forget everything...this happiness dominated their feeling of getting separated from the baby. They felt proud and satisfied when Yash kissed the baby.


Geet called Pari and Pari took the baby from Yash and sat beside her.

Pari: Geet look at my daughter...say hai maasi baby


Geet smiled as said "now ur dream is fulfilled right?...ur family is complete now" she wiped off the tears on Pari's cheeks.


Geet: ab tum bhi meri tarah Aunty ban gayi ho

Pari: I am ready to become aunty for "MITRA"


Geet: MITRA?

Pari: yes ... my baby's name is "MITRA"...she is the symbol of our friendship


Geet smiled through tears and called Maan to have a look at the baby which made his heart to cry more when he has seen that the baby is exactly like Geet...he swallowed his pain and smiled for Pari's happiness. There is no boundary for Yash and Pari's happiness...Pari has never seen Yash taking Arya into his arms but now Yash himself is calling the baby "MITRA" and hugging her which made Pari to smile.


Pari : thanq Geet...for making my family complete ...I am sure agar mujhe ek behan hoti voh bhi tumhari tarah nahi hoti

Pari hugged Geet and asked Maan "don't u want to join in our hug" which made Yash to feel 'J' again.

Yash: MITRA ur father is taking care of u while ur mother is enjoying with her frnz

************


After Yash and Pari left from there


Maan and Geet both are aware that it's not so easy to console each other but Maan wonder the way Geet gave her baby whole heartedly. He is looking at her adoring her strongness. He came near her kept his hand on her head which made Geet to open her moist eyes. Maan reduced the gap between them and whispered in her ears.


Maan: Geet I LOVE U

Geet looked at him and she couldn't control her tears.

Maan: I am waiting to listen the same from u


Geet(with a cracking voice): no Maan...I don't deserve ur love...I can't tell u that I LOVE U...u asked me for a daughter and I have separated her from u...I am sorry


Maan: so..so what...can't u give me daughter next year

Geet (smiled): what if it's again a boy?


Maan: hmmm...ok we will try once again

Geet: what if it's again...


Maan: we will try and try until u give me a baby girl

Geet opened her mouth wide open


Geet: OMG!!!...there is no use in marrying u i have to face the labour pain every year...do u have any idea about how rapidly the INDIAN population is growing and u want me give birth to a child every year...do u think I am a ...


Maan stopped her non stop chatter by closing her mouth

Maan: pata nahi how ur father managed to handle my DEMON

Geet: Maan if u call me a De...


She stopped when she heard some noise and stopped fighting with Maan.


Geet: Oh No!!...aaj phir se SPIDER MAN bangaya...no Maan mujhe ek bacha kaafi hai...look at him


Arya is trying to climb the table where the medicines are kept and has thrown the tonic bottle on the floor.


Arya's self thought: no mom i also want a sibling to fight with... I mean to play with


Maan: like mom like son

Geet(became angry): what did u say?

Maan: nothing


Maan brought Arya near Geet and made him sit in his lap then she gave a bite on Maan's nose.


Maan: ouch...what is this for?

Geet: punishment in advance if u won't give me baby girl next year itself


Maaneet's married life will remain the same fighting with each other, supporting each other, consoling each other and loving each other till the end of their life.


If

ARYA is symbol of Maaneet's love

MITRA is symbol of Pari and Geet's friendship...Oops!!! Maan's as well.


P.S: sorry for typos and other mistakes that have crept because of my limited knowledge


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76 parts ufff!!!!! finally completed my FF.Thanx to each and every reader for loving my FF and for my buddies for encouraging me all throughout

Edited by sldeeps - 13 years ago
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Edited by sldeeps - 13 years ago
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1st To Comment Greetings

me super happy dear u knw for wt ur ff was the first one to read in if an ur my first buddy ...
right now i m very emotional...
Awesome Glitters writer no doubt in tat dear ...Awesome Scraps update ...
Beautiful Greetingsbonding betwn maaneet ... Arya is aBeautiful Comments...
Beautiful Scrapfrndship betwn geet an pari..
altogether .. I CAN'T TELL U THAT I LOVE U is a beautiful journey with had all emotions and variety of flovaur ...Chocolate Graphicshave sweets lets celebrate dear ...Big Love Greetingsplz continue writing dear ... me now itself waiting fopr ur second ff...God Bless You Comments
i ll never miss u dear...
I Love You Greetingsdear Teddy Bear Graphics
Edited by poongs123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow amazing...
am speechless..
wht an amazing journey.. luved the FF..
beautiful ending..
thanx a lot..
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum part dear
nice ending
really superb
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
mindblowing update. i had tears in my eyes reading this update. friendship ho tho geet our pari jaisa. ofcourse maan also. it was very touchy. epilogue kab tak?? plz make it fast. u r a fabuls writer. penned down all the emotions so well. i will b waiting desperately for ur nxt ff. so do it fast.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Love it graphics...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sooo sweeet!luved the ff soo much!
Pls,start another one as u have a natural talent for writing!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
omggg u ended this too😭😭😭😭😭

pls start something else for maaneet

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