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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update...just superb!! :))
Thnx for the pm!!
Plz cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Superb dear 👏
I'm liking the new avatar of Geet 😉
The entire dancing part of Geet was fantastic 👏
Pari 😆 ... poor girl 😆

Loved it 👍🏼
Thanks for pm ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Deeps, sorry for commenting late this time. Was unable to visit IF for 2 days. Just caught up with the last two updates. They were simply superb. Story has a very nice pace. Loved the little teddy u have shown. Geet is like me...even I love collecting soft toys...particularly all kinds of teddies. And Geet's new avatar was simply oomph...and the way u have described her dancing in the room ...that was so seductively written...enjoyed reading it...Thanx also for the pm...waiting for the next part...
Edited by Mehek25 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Mehek25

Deeps, sorry for commenting late this time. Was unable to visit IF for 2 days. Just caught up with the last two updates. They were simply superb. Story has a very nice pace. Loved the little teddy u have shown. Geet is like me...even I love collecting soft toys...particularly all kinds of teddies. And Geet's new avatar was simply oomph...and the way u have described her dancing in the room ...that was so seductively written...enjoyed reading it...Thanx also for the pm...waiting for the next part...



that's ok dear😊

i also have a cutie at my home😉, i thought of posting my cuite's pic initially ... but later dropped the idea for some reason😆

Geet's dancing part - thanx for loving😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: an.anit




Wow ..Hot Update next ...




yar i didn't mean that i am updating yesterday itself, i have started writing the update when i logged out
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Posted: 14 years ago


aanie i told u that i am leaving within 15 min ...right
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Posted: 14 years ago

PART - XV


Maan took steps towards his room in a trance, he entered his room and landed on his bed with a thud. He buried his head into the pillow and whispered to himself "SEXY... BAR... DANCER".


He tried to sleep so that he would forget what he has seen. But as soon as he closed his eyes Geet's parted lips appeared in his dream as if she is inviting him to kiss her. Her cleavage, her seductive eyes, swinging waist everything about her is driving him crazy. Initially he got fascinated by her personality and being herself in each and everything she does. When he is young he had crushes, but he is never serious about them and he never involved deeply with women. He is sure that he is impressed by Geet's behaviour, in fact whatever Geet does he began to like it. He doesn't know the reason y. He thought maybe he likes her for being naive and pure at heart. But today he realised that he is getting attracted towards her physically also, he always used to question himself y Geet's proximity makes difference to him, he found answer to his question today because even before he knew that he likes her he got attracted towards her.


He accepted to himself that he got attracted towards Geet both mentally and ...physically but still he is unsure what name has to be given to this feeling CRUSH, ATTRACTION, DESIRE,LUST, LOVE or anything else. He is thinking what effect he has on Geet ' "Does she feel the same for me?" he wants to find the answer for this question by hook or crook. But he knew about Geet, it is not so easy to find out what is going in her mind. He has to deal with her very sensitively otherwise he might lose a good friend. He has been thinking about Geet the whole night, he doesn't know when he slept.

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Early morning


Geet is preparing sandwich for her breakfast. Maan came into kitchen and has seen her preparing sandwich for herself. Geet saw Maan and wished him "Good Morning" with a sweet smile on her face. Suddenly Geet's flying kiss flashed before Maan's eyes, he cursed himself for not forgetting last night's LIVE DANCE SHOW. Somehow he managed to wish her back. He wanted to start a conversation with her, he is thinking for an excuse.


Maan : Geet will u preapare a sandwich for me also

Geet : sure


She took a bite form her sandwich placed it in her plate and started preparing another one for MAAN. Maan casually took her sandwich and said "Geet i am feeling hungry i will have this one, u prepare another one for urself"


Geet grabbed the sandwich from Maan's hand "Maan this is mine, i will prepare another one for u...i don't like sharing food with others" saying so she again took a bite from her sandwich.


Maan grabbed the sandwich from Geet's hand - "that's ur problem but i don't have any problem in sharing food with u" saying so he took a bite from her sandwich and started leaving the kitchen with the sandwich in his hand.


Geet is frowning and cursing him "stupid...idiot...rascal...i hate u". Maan heard Geet cursing him he came back, said "thanq very much for hating me" and then left from there. Geet became furious "he is intentionally irritating me...u ...u ...i will definitely find a way to irritate u as well".


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At the office


Geet got stuck at one point while compiling the code, it is displaying an error. She is trying to find out where the code is wrongly written. She has been struggling with this compilation error from half an hour. She is becoming restless unable to point out the location where exactly the problem is. She is biting her nails and her scarf in between while thinking for solution.


Maan observed that she got stuck somewhere, he thought of helping her he was about to ask Geet whether she needs any help. Geet's scarf got stuck to her shirt button when she is playing with the scarf thinking about the solution, she is trying to free the scarf from the button but it's not coming out of the button. She got irritated opened the top button of her shirt, freed the scarf from the button and placed the scarf beside her lappy on the table. Now her first button is open and her deep cleavage is clearly visible, Maan's eyes got fixed on her cleavage. She closed the top button of her shirt and now she placed the collar of her shirt in her mouth and started biting the collar.


Maan is seeing all this and suddenly realised what he is doing, he turned away from Geet then he noticed that he is not the only one who is drooling over Geet's cleavage Rohan is also staring at Geet without blinking his eyes. Maan became furious at the thought that Rohan also has seen Geet the same way he is looking at her. He is very much angry on Rohan's intentions towards Geet, but then a question aroused in his mind. "Rohan is looking at Geet in the same way as he is looking at Geet, then y is he getting angry on him? ' if whatever Rohan does is wrong then he is also wrong in looking at Geet with wrong intention in his mind".


Maan's self thought: Whatever it might be i don't like anyone to look at Geet in this way, i am not going to tolerate this.


Thinking so he purposefully moved his chair close to Geet's chair, he removed her collar from her mouth with his hand and placed his hand on her right hand.


Maan: Geet what r u doing stop biting ur collar and now tell me what is the problem we will sort out


Geet showed the error which is troubling her both of them worked together and solved it within 10 minutes.

Geet : thanq Maan this stupid error is bothering me from half an hour


Maan took the scarf which is laying on the table and said seriously "Geet wear it"


Geet took the scarf from Maan placed it around her neck and shrugged her shoulders looking at his strange behaviour.


He intentionally behaved touchy-touchy with Geet so that Rohan would stay away from Geet and would be in his limits. Rohan has seen Maan being close to Geet... after solving Geet's problem Maan gave a deathly glare to Rohan as if he is warning him to stay away from Geet.


Maan realised one more thing Geet is not complaining or behaving uncomfortably whenever he touches her. He recalled her fight with her when he played prank on her and when he tried to convince her on the couch. But she herself never touched Maan, she used to be in her limits.


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Evening at their house

Maan is searching for a file in his office bag, he didn't find the file in his bag then he remembered that he gave the file to Geet, so he went to her room to collect the file.


Geet is on video chat with her MOM when he entered the room. Geet has seen Maan entering her room and closed her web cam, gave an excuse to her MOM and stopped the video chat.

Maan: Geet plz give me the file which i...


Geet: Maan what r u doing here? Do u know that u r living along with 2 girls? ...then y did u wear these indecent clothes...u came straight into my room with ur sleeveless shirt and shorts, flaunting ur muscular biceps and legs... i am on video chat with my mom, if she sees u in this attire in my bedroom what will she think of me? Do u have any idea what sort of questions i have to answer because of ur stupidity?


Maan is wondering at Geet's non-stop complaints. He just came for a file and she is fuming at him without any reason.


Maan : I don't know that u r chatting with ur mom, u have kept ur door wide open so i came inside without knocking...and what's the problem with my clothes...they are decent enough

Geet : Do u think these clothes r decent ?


Maan became irritated by her behaviour.

Maan's self thought: she thinks that i am wearing indecent clothes...just a moment i will let her know who is indecent


Maan tunred on the CD player and started playing Zara Zara touch me touch me song. Geet didn't understand what Maan is doing. She is staring at him blankly trying to find out the reason for his strange behaviour.


Geet : Maan what r u doing?

Maan : Don't u understand anything?... i am not the indecent one...u r the one who is indecent ... u SEXY BAR DANCER

Geet(opened her mouth wide open) : SEXY BAR DANCER!!!!...u r calling me SEXY BAR DANCER


She stood infront of the mirror checking her clothes. Maan is laughing looking at Geet checking out herself in the mirror.


Geet : mai kiss angle se tumhe sexy dikh rahi hu... what's all this non sense y r u playing this song

Maan(in a teasing manner) : Geeet!!! Kal rat tum kya rahi thi ...bhool gayi...mai yaad dilau


Geet now understood what he is referring to.

Geet : iska matlab...last night...have u seen me dancing???

Maan : yes i have seen ur indecent and SEXY dance


Geet became furious she pushed him on the bed and she is lying almost on top of him.


Geet(said angrily) : don't call me sexy again...and u... how dare u? U r peeking into my room during night ' don't u know that it is wrong to peek into a girls room


Maan is shocked at her behaviour, it took few seconds to react for him.


Maan : what am i supposed to do then, u left me with no other option ... u r disturbing me with ur stupid songs ...u didn't even respond to my knock on ur door, so i had to peep into ur room

Geet : don't give me lame excuses ... i am not going to leave u today


She started hitting him with her hands cursing and shouting at him. Maan is trying to free himself but she is not letting him leave from there.


Pari heard Geet shouting at him and came to Geet's room. She got scared at what she has seen 'Maan on Geet's bed and Geet is lying on top of him.


Pari's self thought : what are these guyz upto...what r they doing?

She screamed suddenly. Geet looked at Pari.


Pari : Geet what r u doing?

Geet: can't u see... hitting him

Pari : like this!!!... Geet leave him


Pari forcefully pulled Geet away from Maan.

Pari to Maan: what happened? What did u do? Why is she behaving like this?

Maan(in a teasing manner) : Geet shall i tell her what happened?


Geet started throwing files, flower vase, pillows whatever came to her hand in Maan's direction. Maan is trying to escape from the shower of Geet's weapons on him.


Pari stopped Geet and asked Maan to leave from there. Before leaving her room Maan gave a pat on CUTIE and said "BYE CUTIE".

Geet : don't touch my CUTIE

Maan listened to Geet's words and took CUTIE along with him to his room and closed his door. This raised Geet's temper to the core. She freed herself from Pari's grip and rushed towards Maan's room.


Geet(kicking the door with her legs) : Maan open the door...give me my CUTIE back...u IDIOT open the door

Maan didn't respond to her, he is smiling to himself at Geet's mad behaviour while fondling CUTIE.


Geet(shouting at MAAN) : MAAN I HATE U

Maan (from inside the room): thanq very much for hating me


PRECAP: Geet ye mat bhoolo ki mai ladka hu aur tum lakdi ho, agar mai chahta ho to tumhare saat kuch bhi kar sakta hu



PART - XVI

Edited by sldeeps - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW IM TOTALLY LOST AFTER READING UR FF.😲.. I HAVE IDEA NOW HOW MAAN WOULD HAVE FELT .😆 AFTER HER DANCE😳...AND IM TOTALLY STUNNED DEAR .😳...I HOPE HE CUSM BACK TO NORMALL POSITION SOON...LOL...
AND IMSOORYY I DINT CUMNT ON UR PREV POST DEAR COZ OF VOLTAGE FAULT HERE SO SORRY😭

THIS FOR U
AND NICE UPDATE PAL...👏...AND UR PRECAP IS MAKING ME MORE ANXOIUS......
SO GREAT GOIN DEEPS😉
LOVE
THABASSUM😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it dear... these two behave like kids and v love it..
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Posted: 14 years ago
great part dear geet becoming angry and maan teasing her

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