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Posted: 13 years ago
hey superbbb yaar...
maaneet r chooo cute after marriage...
i loved it...looking fwd...

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesoome.
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fab.
wondeful...
romantic...update...
loved it as usual...
do cont.soon...
thanx for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
continue soon
maneet nok jhok was mindblowing
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Posted: 13 years ago

kamal hai yaar. very very passionate update. awesome. I feel like while reading update it should not stop at all. but waiting is also not that bad. thanks


Edited by riatagore - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vivacious_gurl

deeps nice update... geet gave maan cutie to hug??? rofl... bechara maan... first morning wanted to wake up with geet in his arms n ended up getting cutie...

pari cant stop teasing geet na... hahahha...
hmmm so geet ne kheer banana seekh liya that for the chulha opening ceremony at maan's place...
now am waiting to see maan's reaction when geet will go to her maika for pag phera... how is maan gonna let her go... lol... n yah itna bada business ka CEO... apni dulhan ko Honeymoon nahi le jayega kya to some exotic location???



maan's reaction when geet will go to her maika for pag phera - yar both bride and groom will go to bride's house for pag phera as per my research...u want me to send Geet alone to myka..ok then i will ask Geet to leave Cutie with Maan until she returns from her myka

apni dulhan ko Honeymoon nahi le jayega kya to some exotic location??? - every one goes to Honeymoon after marriage but here Maaneet went to HoneyMoon before marriage...they went to Australia and stayed in a single house that is enough no HoneyMoon again🤣
Edited by sldeeps - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
its awesome update & its about romantic couple after sr the next morning 😉 keep it up.. waiting for next...thanks for pm !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan kissing cutie part s jst gr8...
daadi's qn s rt...etni jaldi utne ki kya zaroorat thi.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi...thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update. Geet very shy! Maan teasing Geet! Loved the scene with Maan n cutie. Dadi is so sweet! Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏awesome update👏
loved it❤️
maan is getting naughty day by day😉😉
continue soon😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART - XLIV



Geet is made to sit at the center with her face covered with the saree pallu and she is surrounded by Dadima's friends and close relatives. As per Mooh Dikhai Rasm Dadima introduced Geet to her family and to her friends...Geet is showered with gifts from all of them.


Titu: didi sirf bride is given all the gifts what about Maan jiju


Pari: as per the rituals, ur didi is introduced to the family to make her feel comfortable with the new family and gifts are given as a token of love to welcome her into the family


Titu: oh then Vicky what gift did u bring for Geet didi

Vikcy: bhabi has decided the gift by herself


Pari: what come again?

Vikcy: she asked me to present all the secrets of Maan bhai as her gift

Pari: matlab


Vikcy: in short his autobiography before bhabi entered his life

Titu: autobiography?


Vikcy: ha whether bro is having any girl friends...his likes and dislikes etc


Titu and Pari laughed listening to this


Pari: OMG!! Geet u have decided the gift for urself

Titu: where is the gift?...i mean how r u presenting the gift


Vicky: she told me how to present the gift also

Pari: Oh god!! Geet...can u show me the gift


Vicky: ya this is the gift

Titu: what is present inside this box?


Vicky: bro's life history in the form of a presentation...wait let me explain...his childhood photos, the places he like the most, list of the persons he hate , the things which he doesn't like, photos of my mom and dad, his friends list, the places where he has studied and so many other details.


Pari: did Maan has any girl friend in his life before his marriage


Vicky: Bro is very serious types...i have never seen him being close to girls...i got surprised when dadima told me that Bro is in love...he has very few friends, he talks less even with us...but Geet bhabi is very talkative we have become friends just like that...i am glad that bro chose her to be his wife


Titu: Vikcy ji itna khush mat hojayiyega...u don't know about her completely


Pari laughed and said "Titu stop it" Vicky didn't understand what Titu meant by his words.


Pari's self thought: God save Maan from this little Demon


Vicky came near Geet and gave this gift box to Geet.


Geet(whispered): did u collect every thing as i told u


Vicky(smiled): ha bhabi the CD's, photos and rest of the details i have written in a Diary

Geet: thanq Vicky


***************


They have arranged a Reception Party in the evening at their house itself. Dadima invited very few and important business friends to the party. Maan invited few of his friends to the party.


Maan : Geet he is...


"ur classmate in ur college...Ashwin right" she whispered in his ear "ur competitor in studies"..."hi Ashwin"


Ashwin: hello


Maan is surprised to know how she knows about Ashwin.


Maan: she is Meera

Geet: hi Meera


She again whispered in his ear "the one who proposed u when u r in 12th standsard..y did u reject her ?...she is looking very pretty how could u reject her?"


Maan got shocked listening to her.


Maan: he is ...ek minute tum khud batao

Geet: he is AAdi ur school friend...hi AADI


They congratulated them and left from there. Maan is still thinking how she got to know about his friends.


Maan: Geet how do u know about my frnz?

Geet: pata chal jata hai

Maan: kaise pata chal jata hai


She winked without giving answer to him.


***************


Maan, Geet and Titu went to Geet's home town for Pag Phere. Mohindar received them, Geet went to the kitchen to help her mother. Maan, Mohindar and Titu sat in the Hall discussing something.


At the kitchen


Rano: Geet beta...when did u come?

Geet hugged her Mom from the back

Geet: bus abhi


Rano: kaisa hai tumhara sasural

Geet: bahot acha..vicky and dadima are very nice to me

Rano: aur Maan?


Geet blushed expecting what her mother is referring to.

Geet: acha hai... isliye toh shaadi kiya maine unse


Rano: i didn't mean that, i know he is nice...how is ur married life?

Geet: mom ...aapko chinta karne ki koi baat nahi hai...he is the best, he knows how to take care of me


Rano felt happy after listening to Geet.


At the Hall


Mohindar: how is Savitri ji?

Maan: fine uncle


Mohindar: toh beta...Geet tumhe jyada pareshaan toh nahi kar rahi hai?

Maan(smiled): no uncle


Titu: jiju feel free...u can tell us if didi is bothering u...dad will tell u tips how to handle her...he is good at convincing didi...she doesn't listen to anyone other than dad


Mohindar signalled Titu to remain silent


Mohindar: voh baat ye hai ki...i am the one responsible for her stubborn behaviour...i have spoiled her...she has grown up but still behaves like a kid


Maan: don't worry uncle...i know about her

Mohindar: thanq beta...agar voh tujhe pareshaan kiya toh bura mat maniyega


Maan: plz uncle...aap ko ye sab batane ki jaroori nahi hai...i know that she does what she wants to but she never does anything wrong and she never hurts others...i like her childish behaviour...she is very naive... she doesn't know how to hide her feelings, she is pure at heart


Mohindar touched Maan's hands and said "thanq" once again.


At the kitchen


Geet: mom i have prepared Makhane Ki Kheer for Maan's family and thank god every one liked it


Rano: how many times i told u to come to the kitchen...hamesha uss computer ke samne baite rahte ho...bilkul ladka ki tarah ban gayi ho...na kuch khana pakana aati hai, na kuch ghar ki kaam aati hai


Geet is eating the sweets that are prepared by her mom while talking with her mom. Rano is ordering the maid the work she has to do while talking with Geet.


Geet: don't worry mom Maan knows how to cook

Rano (said angrily): so Maan is going to cook for u every day


Geet smiled uncomfortably at her angry mother and tried to pacify her mother.


Geet: there are servants at Maan's house...but still i will learn cooking ...promise...this time i am serious about cooking


They have dined together. Titu gave some gifts and sweets to the couple, Mohindar and Rano have seen Maan's love for Geet and they felt happy for their daughter.

***************

10:30 PM @ Khurana Mansion


Maan sat on the couch working on his lappy, Geet is sitting beside him leaning on his shoulder.


Geet: Maan

Maan: hmmm


Geet: MAAAN

Maan: kya hua Geet


Geet: don't u feel hungry?...u have been working since u came home...finish ur dinner and work with ur lappy i won't disturb u later

Maan: give me 15 minutes, i will finish it of


Geet: 15 minutes...u have said the same before 45 minutes... eat the food and work for hours together later, i don't mind...i will serve u the food and sleep peacefully


Maan: ek minute Geet

Geet: Maan i am feeling sleepy


Maan stopped working on the lappy and looked at her, she is talking with him closing her eyes.

Maan's self thought: what u want to sleep ???


Geet: Maan answer me


She got frustrated and opened her eyes when she didn't get any response from Maan.


Geet: u want me to help u??...chalo we will work together and finish it off...show me what's bothering u


PRECAP: i want to come to the office along with u


P.S: sorry for typos and other mistakes that have crept because of my limited knowledge.


Edited by sldeeps - 13 years ago

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