DMG #4 || VIRMAN FF || CHAP 55 PG 134

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VIRMAN FF
DIL MIL GAYE
THREAD 4
**** PROLOGUE ****
FIVE OF BEST SAYINGS...
Shakespeare Said :-

" A Boy And A Girl Can Never Be Friends Forver. So Its Essential To Draw Lines..."

Bayren Said :-

" Friendship Is The Starting Step For What We Call Love... "

Wordsworth Said :-

" Proposing A Boy Or A Girl For Friendship Is Nothing But Indirectly Saying, I Love You... "

Shelley Said :-

" Love Is An Everlasting Friendship... "

Auston Said :-

" If One Can Become Your Best Friend, Then He Or She Can Easily Become Your Life Partner... "

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thank u all of you for your immense love and support... and for fulfilling my stupid wishes 😛 😃
love you all... ❤️ muah...
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***** INDEX *****
<<THREAD 1
<< THREAD 3
chap 23 a new beginning
chap 24 khoobsurat aaj
chap 25 humara aaj
teaser
chap 26 holding my world
chap 27 kachche dhaage
chap 28 bebasi dard ka aalam
chap 29 ab dooriyan itni hai toh
teaser
chap 30 piya aaye na
chap 31 ankahee unsuljhi baatein
chap 32 lazy lamhe
chap 33 tere dar par sanam
chap 34 iko hi mangya si yaar
chap 35 poore se zara sa kam hai
precap
chap 36 bas tum tak
teaser
THREAD 4
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 37
~~ ye rab se dua hai...
(from the movie kurbaan)
maan : When I see you the World stops. It stops and all that exists for me is you and my eyes staring at you. There's nothing else... No noise, no other people, no thoughts or worries, no yesterday, no tomorrow. The World just stops and it is a beautiful place and there is only you... Just you, and my eyes staring at you... but when you're gone, the World starts again, and I don't like it as much. I can live in it, but I don't like it. I just walk around in it and wait to see you again and wait for it to stop again. I love it when it stops. It's the best thing I've ever known or ever felt, the best thing, and that, beautiful Girl is you naina... Will you marry me naina...???
manvi nudged naina and whispered to her " awww... say yes nainu... that was so cute... "
naina : yes... yes maan... (with teary eyes)
everybody clapped for the beautiful couple present there on the stage.
manvi : they are looking very good together... hai na...
virat : yeah... actually she found her prince charming today...
manvi : hmm... i dont have any doubts now... no doubts at all...

virat : good... but i am not feeling good here...
manvi : i can understand... but what can we do...??
virat : wohi toh... i mean having rishabh and his wife around isnt that comfortable...
manvi : i know...
madhu : hey manvi... (with a fake evil smile)
manvi : oh hello madhu... how are you...??? (with the exact same fake smile madhu gave her)
madhu : i am good... how have you been...?? and is he your husband...?? (pointing at virat)
manvi : i am very happy... almost feels like the queen of the world and yes, he is husband.. virat... virat vadera... (locking her arm with virat's) and she is madhu (looking at virat) rishabh's wife...
virat : hello...
madhu : hello handsome... nice meeting you...
manvi : ahem... (saying madhu to stay away from her man)
madhu : so do have kids...??
manvi : yeah... what about you...??? didnt plan one...??
madhu : excuse me... enjoy the party...
manvi : sure...
madhu went and virat looked at manvi...
virat : tich tich... poor madhu...
manvi : i hate her... 😡 she used to act like such a abla naari...
virat : calm down mrs. vadera... its okkk
scene shifts
kasak : main toh bore ho gayi hoon...
pragati : main bhi...
kasak : bua hum kya karein...???
pragati : i dont know... see your mumma papa seems very busy...
(sipping her juice)
kasak : mumma toh sirf dad se love karti hai shayad... (enjoying her finger fries)
pragati : woh toh hai hi...
mohit : what happened girls...???
kasak : chachu meri party hi acchi thi... ye toh boring hai...
mohit : haha... yeah...

vanshika : stop this you all... party mein hi baithke burai kar rahe ho...
swamini : i should also join the kids bhabhi...
vanshika : kya didi... aap bhi...
scene shifts
mitlai and mahesh entered the party and rishabh was the first one to welcome them.
rishabh saw mitali and hugged.
rishabh : hello beautiful...
mitali : hello handsome... how are you beta...??
rishabh broke the hug and held her hands
rishabh : i am fine just missed you a lot... hello uncle...
mahesh : hello... (in a formal tone)
mahesh didnt want to come there but they both came there only for naina not for rishabh who betrayed his daughter.
manvi saw this and was quiet for sometime. virat followed manvi's gaze and felt uncomfortable...
manvi : mom...
virat : hmm... lets go...
virman met mitali and mahesh...
mahesh : how are you virat...??? (happy to see virat)
virat : i am good papa... how are you...??
mahesh : happy on seeing my kids happy...
mitali : where is everyone else...??
manvi : come lets go mom dad...
scene shifts
madhu : rishabh...
rishabh : paise chahie...?? (straightaway cutting madhu in between)
madhu took a deep breath and ignored rishabh's comment...
madhu : lets start the engagement...
rishabh : yeah...
soon the engagement was done and everybody congratulated naina and maan...
scene shifts
kasak : sorry...
rishabh looked down and saw kasak who just collided with him while running...
rishabh (bending a little) : its okk princess... i am rishabh... what is your name beautiful...???
kasak : kasak... hello...
rishabh : hello... woww what a beautiful dress... you really look like a princess...
kasak : my mumma told me already...
rishabh : so enjoying the party or not...??
kasak : actually uncle... party bahut boring hai...
(whispering to rishabh) mujhe toh neeni aa rahi hai...
rishabh : boring...😲 kyun boring hai...?? khaana accha nahi hai...??
kasak : maine nahi khaya... sirf finger fries khaye aur manchurian bhi...
rishabh : ohh i see... wo theek the...???
kasak : yummy the... aur maine toh juice bhi piya... (teasing him)
rishabh : woww...
kasak : aapko pta hai... woh -
manvi : kasak...
kasak : mumma...
rishabh looked at the source of the voice and found manvi standing there and clearly she wasnt happy seeing this scene.
rishabh : so she is your daughter... nice...
kasak : mumma ye na rishabh uncle hai... i like him...
rishabh : i like you too baby...

manvi : excuse me (looking at rishabh) come baby, lets go to dad... (holding kasak's finger)
rishabh : teekhi mirch...
scene shifts
manvi : you will not talk to him from now... okkk...??? (feeding her with rice)
kasak : why...???
manvi : because i am saying this...
kasak : okk... pta he called me beautiful also...

manvi : hmm... (to herself - flirt karna nahi bhulta insaan...)
mitali : manvi...
manvi : mom...
mitali : we need to talk... come with me...
manvi : main kasak ko khana khila rahi hoon abhi...
mitali : my honeybun will eat herself... right kasak...???
kasak : yes naani...
manvi : mom...
mitali : come with me...
scene shifts
manvi : why did you bring me here...???
mitali : mannu...
manvi : mom... cmon say it...
mitali : i know its not the right place but its high time you think of having your own baby...
manvi : dont start it again mom... please...
mitali : day before yesterday also, i heard some people talking about why you dont have a baby till now... its been around 3 and a half years you are married...
manvi : let them talk mom... let them be...

mitali : but they are not wrong... you should plan a baby...
manvi didnt said a word but the tears flowing from her eyes were saying something...
mitali : dont hide anything from me my honeybun... say it manvi...
manvi : mom... mom i...
mitali : say it manvi...
manvi : mumma i... i am.. i was... mom i...
mitali : i am listening
manvi : i am sorry mom... i hided something... maya.. maya ka..
mitali : maya ka kya manvi...???

manvi : mujhse maya ka accident hua tha... (numb and expressionless)
mitali : w..wh..what...???
manvi : yes... thats why.. why i decided that kasak would be my only child...
mitali : oh my god... ye kya kar dia tune manvi...
manvi: i am sorry mom... i didnt do it intentionally... i was crying and upset that day and -
mitali : and you ran into that innocent soul... you destroyed a happy family manvi...
manvi : mom... woh ek haadsa tha.. aur maine -

mitali : in your guilt you got married to virat... right...???
manvi : no... no mom... i love him thats why... thats why i married him (said between her sobs)
mitali : but no one would understand it manvi... no one...
manvi : mom... please... please i beg you... dont tell anyone about this... please...
mitali : dont worry manvi... i wont honey...

manvi hugged mitali and cried...
manvi : mom...
mitali : shh... stop crying manvi... stop baby...
manvi : i was scared mom... virat would hate me if it comes to know of all this...
mitali : i dont doubt that... listen to me honeybun...
manvi : hmmm...
mitali : plan a baby... your and virat's baby... that baby will bound you two forever...
manvi : mom i... actually...
mitali : whats now...???
manvi : i think i cannot conceive...
mitali : what...??
manvi : yes... i have taken the pregnancy test several times at home and it always come negative... mumma i am scared...
mitali : it happens... dont lose hope and soon you will have your own baby... i strongly feel it... (consoling manvi but mitali was scared today... scared for her daughter's life and her happiness)
manvi : thank you mom... i love you...
mitali : love you too...
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bennu, jesmy, ankita ~~ this ones for you girls... 😃
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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thank u 😊
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Congrats yaar for your 4th tread...
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res
unres!

Hey, a big CONGO 4 New thread sweetie...😃😉😉
And Thankyou 4 upcoming PM...😃⭐️
Hoping 4 bright future of VIRMAN...😊😭
Bye!!
Edited by nixdix - 12 years ago
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Thank you everyone...
infact i should thank u... u spammed the previous thread 😉
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Before I start with my useless talks, first of all CONGRATS DI for the new thread!😃

I have to say this story is going pretty well!😉

The update was awesome...👏👏👏

Wish to see kasak-rishabh bond if possible...😳

I want Virat to know this truth as soon as possible!😊

Take care!🤗


Love you nannu di!❤️
Edited by Angelic_Friend - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I loved this part!!! actually the way manvi confided about the truth to her mother was what i was looking for!! It will be surely bringing the twist in near future and actually I too really want the truth to come out in open about maya 's accident!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
kasak is so cute
maanvi told the truth to her mom
plz cont soon

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