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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update.
but no virman😭
interesting precap.
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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER 40
~~ Mohabbat Aapse
manvi : virat get up...
virat : 5 mins more... please...
manvi : virat please na... from last 20 minutes you have been saying this same thing...
virat : 5 minutes i promise...
manvi : ufff... waking you up is more difficult than kasu... meri baby hi acchi hai tumse toh
virat : hmm...
manvi : what hmm...?? get uppp...
virat : gimme a kissey then...
manvi : you want only one kissey... very sweet...
virat : no no... i want 100... (opening his eyes)
manvi : hawww... 100 kisseys chahie meri baby ke daddy ko... alle le le...
virat : hmm... give na mumma... (pulling manvi into his arms)
manvi : no... pehle baby ke daddy fresh ho kar aaenge...
virat : no...
manvi : yes...
virat : no...
manvi : but only one kissey... okk...??
virat : hmm...
manvi leaned on virat and her lips were inch away from his when manvi kissed hs cheek and got out of his grip.
virat : cheater... 😡
manvi : all is fair in love and war... 😳
virat : yeh tha tera pyaar... aisi kissey di mujhe... ghanta kissey thi ye...
manvi : hehe... go get ready jaanuuu...
virat : hurrr...
scene shifts
madhu : naina... hey naina...
naina : hey bhabhi... (with equal sweetness)
madhu : naina i was thinking -
naina : cmon bhabhi... why do you waste your time in thinking...??? thats so boring... (teasing and taunting madhu... naina hates madhu n u all know why... uske bhaiya ko tang karti hai na madhu, thats why...)
madhu (making a face) : talk to your designer about your outfit...
naina : okk... anything more you want to say...???
madhu : try to respect relations...
naina : just see who is talking... you spoiled my brother's life... ting tong... do you remember...???
madhu : yeah i snatched someone's love and you... you are sacrificing your love... ohhh you are so great...
naina : thats none of your business bhabhhiii...
madhu : why would i care...?? because you think i am a stone... i dont have a heart... so let it be that way only...
naina : its better not to have a heart... because it only hurts...
madhu : love hurts... i know that...
scene shifts
virat : oyeee manvi... (shouting from the bedroom)
manvi : main nahi aa rahi... (shouting from the hall)
virat : kya hai...???
manvi : monday...
virat : arghhh... i know that... meri file nahi mil rahi blue wali... 😡
manvi : toh main kya karun...???? 😳
vanshika : hehe... cmon now go and help my son...
manvi : mom... oopss... aap toh saasu maa ho meri... you are on your son's side... hai na...
vanshika : yes D.I.L.
virat : manviii
manvi : aaa rahi hoon loudspeaker...
swamini : these two would never change bhabhi...
vanshika : thats their identity didi... essence of their relationship...
scene shifts
manvi entered the room and saw virat lying on the bed in maharaja style...

manvi : yes my dear husband... 😳
virat : find my file na...
manvi : you are having leisure time... and i should find your file...
virat : yes... find it asap... i have to go office also...
manvi : arrgghhh... this is not done...
virat : all is fair in love and war...
manvi : badla le rahe ho na mujhse...
virat : yes honey... 😃
manvi : kiss ka badla file... you must be kidding...
virat : find it mrs. vadera... whats the use of marrying you if you cant find a single file for me...??
manvi : so you married me just for finding a f**king file... unbelievable... 🤢
virat : hahaha... hurry up wifey... i know you wouldnt want dad to scold me in front of the employees... but if you want, then its okk...
manvi : shut up virat... u know na i wouldnt let anyone point even a single finger at you...
virat smiled and got up from the bed and hugged manvi from behind, who was looking for the file in the cupboard.
manvi : virat lemme find it na...
virat : i am sorry... (kissing her cheek)
manvi : ohh cmon you kept the file somewhere, that doesnt mean you will apologise...
virat : i have the file manvi... i was just annoying you jaan...
manvi turned around and hit virat's shoulder playfully.
manvi : haawww... itna bda jhooth...
virat : ouch... isko jhooth nahi kehte... 😉
manvi : but where is the file...???
virat : go n find... hahaha... 😆
manvi : this is not a treasure hunt competition... 😳
virat : wow what an idea it was...!!!
manvi : btao na... nahi btana toh main jaa rahi hoon...
virat went and took the file from the top of the cupboard...
manvi : cupboard ke upar... you knew na that i wouldnt check there...
virat : no... i knew that you woundnt be able to reach there dedfutiya... 😛 😆
manvi : koi apni wife ko aise kehta hai kya... 😡 argghhh i am going...
virat : going where...??? shopping...??? kitchen...?? kahan jaa rahi ho mujhe chod kar...?? main jee nahi paunga manvi... haha
manvi made a face and went out of the room leaving virat who bursted in laughter seeing her frustated cum angry expression... he loves when she gets annoyed.
scene shifts
swamini : where is mohit...??? he will be late...
vanshika : yeah usually he is the one who comes down on time.
swamini : i will go and see...
swamini went to mohit's room and saw him still in bed.
swamini : mohit... mohit... get up beta... (touching his forehead) he is having fever... Pragattiii
pragati : yes mom... bhai... aaj itni late tak... still sleeping...
swamini : fever hai isko... bring thermometer for him and some medicine.

pragati : okk...
after sometime
mohit : i am fine... let me go...
vanshika : no...
mohit : maami ji i am fine... i have to go...
swamini : kisi ki baat maan na seekha hi nahi hai iss ladke ne...
pragati : i agree...
manvi : kya devar ji... kabhi toh mauka milta hai itna rest karne ka... aaram se baitho aaj... hum sab seva karte hain...
mohit : bhabhi...
virat : shock mat ho... aisi hi hai teri bhabhi...
manvi glared at virat.
virat : i mean... matlab...
pragati : matlab bhai bhabhi se darr gaye hain... 😆
manvi : is time toh majaak mat karo yaar...
vanshika : lets all of us go now... mohit you take rest... okk
mohit : okkk...
scene shifts
naina : pragati i need you here...???
pragati : where...???
naina : office... i will text you the address...
pragati : okk...
naina disconnected the call and looked at rishabh.
rishabh : what...???
naina : bhai she will design it... i have full confidence on her... and reeta aunty chose her.
rishabh : i just want you to look like a princess...
naina : uff... okkk bhai sahab... once pragati comes, i will talk to her and will come to when we finalise things...
rishabh : okkk... now go, i have lots of work to do...
scene shifts
virat : i am going manvi... (leaning on the car)
manvi : please mat jao mujhe chod kar... aisi kya galti ho gayi mujhse...
virat : rehne do... ab aur nahi hoga mujhse...
manvi : accha... jao fir... (opening the door of the car)
virat : hehe... bye
manvi : bye love you...❤️
virat : love you too... ❤️
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i was thinking of giving a much longer update this time as i have typed this update long back but settled against it... u guys know why... the number of likes discouraged me... so i request you guys to discourage me even more this time... 😳 gimme around 40 likes this time... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kateyes

Part 38 : Nice update 😊😊😊😊 thank u maanvi guilt is over taking now y she is not telling virat d truth don't she trust her luv she is way too scared n insecure yes virat will get hurt n blame her but if he truly luvs her he will understand her dat she hadn't done dat intentionally it just happened bcoz destiny had decided dis if maanvi was not dere sum1 else had hit maya's car i agree... but when in anger, a person never thinks logically... hope she tell him or before it gets 2 late , rishabh n madhu 2 different people but still with each other if rishabh don't luv her y he hadn't left her ( yaar plz unka b kch krdo ) jaroor jaroor, maan luvs naina he 2 doubt dat naina don't luv him she luvs sum1 else ( is story mein luv triangle bht hain hope pragati k saath kch aisa na ho if 2 hav a luv story ahead 😉😉 ) n plz reveal naina n mohit truth now bht ho gya hai 😊 read the next 😉 😳
Part 39 : Nice update 😊😊😊😊 thank u finally naina n mohit r in luv with each other den y she is marrying maan ( don't tell me maan is blackmailing her i will kill u naina 4 doing dat 😡😡😡😡 ) stay tuned to know... 😳 , rishabh is 2 helpless he can't do anything 4 his sister he promise he will not happen anything 2 him ( means mohit ) n ( is dere any prblm with rishabh business 2 save her bro business she is ready 2 marry maan bcoz in last update u mention dat dey r business partners 2 ) fingercrossed let see wht happens next 😊😊😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kateyes

Firstly congo 4 d 4th thread 🥳🥳🥳🥳 thank u soo much n sorry 4 again late actually i commented on ur previous updates in dis thread bcoz i don't want ur last thread will get blocked bcoz it had completed 150 pages n my long comments blocked dat thread hope u don't mind so now enjoy my comments 😊😊😊😊😊 no no i dotn mind... its okk
Part 33 : Brilliant n such a long update full of surprises , cute moments n twists ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ thank u, oh virman fight was fb i thought dat will be real but u hav portrayed d scene very well 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 maanvi's insecurities n guilt is making deir life so complicated d way she was forcing deir marriage on virat was unexpected 😲😲😲 but still her possessiveness 4 kasak n virat fear of losing dem didn't let her think rationally she should hav give him sumtym 2 , y she don't understand dat virat was in love with maya dere marriage was not a burden 4 him dey both were in love as maanvi was also involve with rishabh not 2 dat extend like virat n maya but still she hav sum concern 4 him so how can she expect it 4rm virat 2 forget maya completely after all she is d real mother of his daughter though i agree manvi did so much 4 virat n kasak but it will always less infront of maya's death atleast she can give sum space 2 virat 4 1 day sometimes we ignore all the other things but time... time teaches us many things n that too in fraction of seconds😳 i hope maanvi should told him d truth by herself i m wondering wht will happen if virat cums 2 know about it himself he will definately not forgive her , kasak is such a sweetheart n nautanki her convos r really cute n adorable ❤️❤️ , maan ( new entry ) hope u will not ruined his image 4 naina n mohit seems like sumthing fishy btw dem , so finally rishabh is back i thought u hav forgot him but no finally again d update was mindblowing 😊😊😊😊 no no... how can i forget about my rishu 😉 😳
Part 34 : Fabulous update ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ thank u so finally d truth is out rishabh was innocent its madhu who done dis all feeling bad 4 rishabh ( but y u ruined my grls image yaar 😭😭😭😭😭 i luv her alot is ka badla ly longi tmse apne late comments se 😆😆 ) madhu show mein kuch jyada hi acchi hai, which i cannot digest... 😳 maanvi will b more guilty now 4 not trusting rishabh n his luv 4 her , y maanvi always hide things 4rm virat firstly she was hiding maya's death truth n now meeting with rishabh wht her prblm is don't she trust her luv 4 him n virat misunderstood everything hope dey talk with eachother n sort out dere prblm , naina maan mohit 1 more triangle luvstory hope it doesn't affect virman relation 😊😊 i too hope so 😉
Part 35 : Brilliant update ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ thank u jealous n possessive virat i was dying 2 see him in dis avatar but wht he had i was not expecting dat 😲😲😲😲 he should not hav done dat luv turns into lust making dey really need 2 talk before dere misunderstanding increase , poor kasak got scolded 4 his behaviour but luved mother's n daughter duo ❤️❤️ , finally virat has also realised dat his life n family is incomplete without maanvi he was trying his best 2 talk with her n luved his note ❤️ , mohit n naina definately sumthing is btw dem bcoz both r not excited 4 dere marriage , i don't like madhu n rishabh talk it broke my heart n d reason is uuu
😭😭😭😭 arrey rishbala aise bhi mast lagte hai mujhse toh... 😉 😆 but sorry for hurting u 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kateyes

Part 36 : Superb update ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ thank u 😊finally virman patch up n maanvi told him about her meeting with rishabh dere phone convo was nice luved dat scene ( nain ne mere paapa ko i luv u bola ab us angel ko kya ptah k kaise dil py pather rakh jiju bolti hai virat ko 😉😉😉 ) exactly... u understood me... baki sabne toh sirf rofl kia kasak was adorable as usual ❤️❤️, mohit n virat convo was nice 2 now its confirm 4rm my side dat mohit luvs naina otherwise he hadn't ignore her when she smiles at him bingo...!!
Part 37 : Fabulous update 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 arrey itni saari claps... thank u 😃 finally maanvi hav confessed d truth 2 her mom but y i felt like sum1 heard it ( hope dat sum1 was not virat , madhu or rishabh otherwise poor grl will b trapped ) , virat will misunderstood her , blame her 4 everything n never forgave her n rishabh can blackmail her n wht should i say about madhu ( u hav ruined my grls image feeling so bad 😭😭😭😭 ) bad girls... boys luv dem 😳 😆 , maanvi is already feeling guilty 4 hiding truth 4 virat n unintentionally hurt rishabh life is so unfair with her when she wants rishabh in her life she realised she luv virat n still want 2 married rishabh but destiny played a game n she married with virat afterwards she don't want a child 4 kasak happiness so no1 can blame her or called her a stepmother den she decide 2 b a mother but now she can't conceive n top rishabh is back now wht should poor grl do now let see wht her destiny decide 4 her , maan seems very nice guy n luvs naina 2 ( hope nothing will happens 2 maan image tmhra koi bharosa nhi hai mohit naina ko ek krne k chakar mein us ka b band baja do ) trust me yaar 😉, luved rishabh n kasak scene dat was cute one 😃😃😃😃😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
Oye ek hi account hai to ek hi like de sakti hun baki sabka badla hum sabse kyun le rahi hai [:/]
Awww virman are tooo cute aur virt aye haye kasu ki kami bilkul bhi mehsua nai hone di itna cute and romantic 😃
virman ke dialogues padhke dil khush ho gaya 😃
mujhe madhu pe phirse doubt hoing kuch to gadbad zaroor hai pata karna naina aur jaldi.mujhe bata 😛
i want manvi to be the jodi maker for mohit and naina afterall uska farz ek double wala ek bhabhi aur doosra bestie ka 😉
next part jaldi update karna ...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

Oye ek hi account hai to ek hi like de sakti hun baki sabka badla hum sabse kyun le rahi hai [:/] toh jisne like nahi kia, woh toh kar sakta hai na
Awww virman are tooo cute aur virat aye haye kasu ki kami bilkul bhi mehsua nai hone di itna cute and romantic 😃 i know...
virman ke dialogues padhke dil khush ho gaya 😃 badiya hai
mujhe madhu pe phirse doubt hoing kuch to gadbad zaroor hai pata karna naina aur jaldi.mujhe bata 😛 pta karke bta dungi
i want manvi to be the jodi maker for mohit and naina afterall uska farz ek double wala ek bhabhi aur doosra bestie ka 😉 ohhh... i will try
next part jaldi update karna ... lets see

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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update
loved it to the core ...
virman convo was cute ...
and mohit having fever omg ...
continue soon ...
sry nain cudnt comment longer...am in hostel 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hahahahah it was a hilarious update
Maza aa gaya virman ke drama se lol
Dey were superbbb nd aww I missed kasu...
But mjhe ab virman ka baby chahiye plzuu
Update soon..jaan..lolzx
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Posted: 12 years ago
ha what an virman relationship
nainu pls make couples togather i mean mohit and naina they two are really beautiful cant see their heart breaking pls naina i want in ur next update how virman help naina and mohit

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