VIRMAN FF DIL MIL GAYE *PEEP IN* PG 144 - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice one...

how will virman fall in love wen they love their partners...gonna b gud twist
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dairymilk12

naina awesome update dear 🤗

hey hema i am so elated that u read it n on the top liked it...!!!!!
u made my day...!!!! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 3 in few minutes...!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 3

scene shift...
manvi's room
manvi locked the door and jumped on her bed and the she was admiring the ring rishabh gifted her...
manvi : wowww... this is so beautiful... i am really lucky that you love me rishabh... wish i could also love you the way you love me... yes i like you but i am still confused whether i love you or the royal treatment that you give me... do i love your nature or your sweet gifts... dont know... i know only one thing that i like being with you and i love when people tease me from your name... i think this is only called love... god knows...!!!! but i know one thing i would surely marry you n become mrs. manvi rishabh singhania... anyways now i should get ready else naina will tease me the whole evening...

after 15 minutes...
manvi came out and searched for naina and at last found her in the garden doing something on her laptop...
manvi : nainu... bad manners...
naina : you are my best friend...
manvi: so...?? it my personal lappy nain...
naina : no longer personal...
manvi : but how did you open it...?? it had a password...
naina : i cracked it... you remember i am doing MCA... i know how to crack passwords and all...
manvi : but how did u guessed it...
naina : hehe... u know i cracked it in less than 5 minutes...
manvi : but how...???
naina : very simple... the things that couldnt forget will be the password... so i typed rishabh, then naina, virat, pizza and finally i cracked it... RISHU...
manvi : you are soo bad nainu... this is not done...
naina : you also hid such a big thing from me, did i get angry...??? by the way mannu, this is not done...
manvi : what is not done...???
naina : you n bhai kissed... your first kiss ever and you didnt tell your bestest friend... how could you...???
manvi : stop being dramatic... now you are not only my best friend.. you are the sister of my boyfriend... n u read my personal diary...???
naina : yes i did... i tried controlling teh temptation but at last i lost...
manvi : naina... i will kill you...???
naina : by the way you had a crush on virat...???
manvi : stop it...!!!!
naina : you never told me this...???
manvi : yes i had a crush on him but it was just momentary... we were just friends...
naina : thank god else bhai would have killed him...
manvi : yeah yeah... you n your bhai... get up naina, atleast freshen up a little...
naina : bhai tujhe dekhne aa raha hai mujhe nahi... and saying this she ran away...
manvi was standing there only and sighed " yes naina... i had a crush on virat... "

scene shifts
viaya room
maya : u know virat i noticed something...
virat : whats the latest thing u noticed...???
maya : manvi was wearing a beautiful daimond ring...
virat : so...??? oh wait a minute, you want to say that she lied or something...
maya : no... i should ask her from where did she buy that ring... i also want one like that...
virat : u have our engagement ring... dont you...??
maya : yes i have but that ring was so elegant...
virat : have a look at your ring... this is also manvi's choice... i still remember how will hunted for this for like 4 hours...

maya : oh please virat... i have heard this story atleast 20 times...
virat : dont be jealous... she is just a friend...
maya : i know baby... i can never doubt you...
virat : thats like my wife... now lets go our for a walk n get some fresh air...
maya : good idea... lets go... i will have an ice cream also...
virat : have as much as you want...
maya : chhoo chweet...

scene shift
chaudhary mansion
mitali : mannu... call rishabh and ask where is he...??? its already 9 pm...
naina : yes mannu call bhai na... he will pick up your call...
manvi : will you guys relax n let me call...
mahesh : dont tease my daughter mitali...
mitali : our daughter mr. chaudhary...
mahesh : u guys carry on... i am going to my room...
naina : wow aunty u really have an upper hand... naari shakti...!!!!
mitali : shut up...
manvi dialled rishabh's number and he didnt respond...
manvi : he is not picking up the call... i wonder where he is...
naina : dont worry... may be bhai is driving...
manvi : hmmm...

just then the door bell rang...
manvi : rishabh hi hoga... (might be rishabh only...)
naina : i too thnk so...
manvi excitedly went to open the door and saw an unknown person stanging at the door witha bouquet in his hand.
manvi : we havent ordered this...
man : excuse me mam its for ms. manvi chaudhary...
manvi : thats me... who has sent this...??
man : mr. singhania...
manvi : thank you...


manvi turned around and looked at her mom n naina who was looking at her with eyes wide opened...
manvi threw the bouquet at naina and she catched it...
manvi : tumhe poojniye bhai ne bheja hai... it means your bro is not coming... another sorry gift... (your loving brother has sent this... it means he is not coming... another sorry gift...)
naina : hehe...
manvi : this isnt funny naina... he spoiled the whole evening...

mitali (controlling her smile) : its ok mannu... he must have been caught somewhere...
manvi : mom i am waiting for him like an idot here... and he... (she felt a grip on her waist)
rishabh : i love you...

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Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

yay!!!me first!!!ha ha so i guessed right!!manvi does have a thing for virat.maya n rishab both are cute.and i love your naina here.😉

i've decided one thing.i'll not use my brain over this fiction.or my head will burst!!!!!can you plz make virat's part a littlte long.😳
love you🤗
Edited by daydreamer9 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow this was really sweet likd it :)
Manvi had crush on virat ;)
And rishabh is a sweetheart :)
Like the nainu mannu bonding ;)
Pls jaldi update karna ya
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update, can't wait for virat manvi to meet
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kulsum_vish

wow this was really sweet likd it :)
Manvi had crush on virat ;)
And rishabh is a sweetheart :)
Like the nainu mannu bonding ;)
Pls jaldi update karna ya

thanks... 😊
will cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mika17

awesome update, can't wait for virat manvi to meet

thanks n it would be soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: daydreamer9

yay!!!me first!!!ha ha so i guessed right!!manvi does have a thing for virat.maya n rishab both are cute.and i love your naina here.😉

i've decided one thing.i'll not use my brain over this fiction.or my head will burst!!!!!can you plz make virat's part a littlte long.😳
love you🤗

best decision ever disha... 😉
i will make everything happen my way... just trust your naina maina... 😉
i will try to give virat's POV... bcos i know u wouldnt be loving viaya scenes... 😳
thanks sweetheart...!!!!

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