VIRMAN FF DIL MIL GAYE *PEEP IN* PG 144

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Trings Shring (Mishi rehman)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#371

Originally posted by: naina927

now everything sorted mishu... i am okkk... 😊

hmmm😃chal upd kr we r waiting

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Posted: 12 years ago

#372

Originally posted by: ashishi
hmmm😃chal upd kr we r waiting

dungi mishu... dungi... thoda wait kar le meri jaan... 😉

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Trings Shring (Mishi rehman)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#373

Originally posted by: naina927

dungi mishu... dungi... thoda wait kar le meri jaan... 😉

waiting waiting twing twing hehehe

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Trings Shring (Mishi rehman)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#374

Knock knock
upd dedo meko !!

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Athira soman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#375

thanks for the story ...keep going..😃

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shilpa09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#376

nainaji.. sorry aaj tak maine yeh story pada hi nahi tha...

aaj padha aur khud ko jhoote marne ka maan kiya.. how stupid of me to miss such awesoe story...

i m sorry dear...:(

now coming to story...😛

u shocked me dear😲.. ek ke baad ek hearyt attacks de diya yaar... manvi in love with rishab.. then virat married maya.. then maya pregnant... omg!! u nearly killed me dear...😆

but u nailed every character and their complicated relations... i mean... even though virat and manvi are in love still they are far away from realization... 😉

and this 5th part showed how virat and manvi were longing for each other.. their sweet hug expressed how badly they missed each other...

awesome naina...👏 u are really fab dear... hatt's off to u dear:)👏👏👏👏👏👏

now i m really looking forward to story...

please do continue soon:)😃

thnx 4 pm dear:)🤗

Edited by shilpa09 - 12 years ago

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Meera Chaudhuri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#377

Naina kaha pe ho??? Update kardo plzzz 😳

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Trings Shring (Mishi rehman)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#378

upd upd lalala jaldi jaldi lalala
aj me free or koe bhi upd nahi de rha

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naina

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Posted: 12 years ago

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mishu update in 10 minutes...

stay tuned...

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naina

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PART 6

manvi : so...??? hows life...??? (eating the sandwich)
virat : life is good... u tell...??
manvi : have the sandwich na...
virat : i am having... cant you see...
manvi : what happened to u...?? there was a time when you would snatch the sandwich from me and eat... and now you are sharing it n eating...
virat : sharing is caring... 😉
manvi : oh yeah... your wifey must have taught you this...
virat : nai re... nothing like that...
manvi : hmmm... coffee...??
virat : toh drink it na...
manvi : no your coffee... you havent even touched it...
virat : i told you i wont drink this... i will pay for it ded futiya... 😉
manvi : okk... your wish... by the way this ded futiya only n only sounds good from u... i swear... 😃
virat : dare anybody call u that... only i have that right...
manvi : possessive...?? but why for me...??? maya ka kya haal karte ho... 😆
virat : oh shut up...
manvi : virat did u really miss me...??? (hoping for a yes...)
virat : hmm... i always missed my best friend... though we used to tease each other n fight whole day but yes...
manvi : thats so sweet... 😃
virat : manvi why are u still single...?? waiting for someone special...??
manvi : tum nahi mile na... 😉
virat : toh ab toh mil gya hoon na... (winking...)
manvi : have some shame viru.. you are married dude...
virat : so...???
manvi : ahh haaye cheapadh kahin ka...
virat : nautanki kahin ki...😛
manvi : how is everybody at home...????
virat : good... maa will be so happy when i will tell her about you...
manvi : i too miss aunty... and the kheer she used to make... my mum cannot make one like that...
virat : your mum cooks awesome pasta which my maa couldnt... so what...???
manvi : come over n eat pasta then...
virat : then u also come over n have kheer... wat say...???
manvi : done...
virat : cool then... you are most welcome ms. chaudhary...
just then manvi's mobile started ringing " aankhon ko yun band karke, dheeme dheeme gin gin ke... "
virat was about to reach the mobile when manvi hurriedly picked the mobile from the table with her face turning pale...
manvi : excuse me...
virat smiled and saw her going far away to a corner...
virat : aisa kaunsa call tha manvi that u couldnt pick in front of me... stop it virat... she has a life of her own... stop bothering her (whose call is that u couldnt pick in front of me...??)
virat saw manvi chirping on the mobile like always and smiled but next moment got jealous thinking who might be on the phone. earlier only he was the one who could make manvi smile or for that matter giggle like a child but today there was someone else on his place...

scene shifts
manvi : hello...
rishabh : missing me...???
manvi : did i call...???
rishabh : i know u must be missing me but may be bcos of your friend u couldnt call me...
manvi : right... (sighing)
rishabh : i have got a surprise for u today...
manvi : surprise...??? what is it...?? tell na...
rishabh : me... 😉
manvi : uff... you are toh mine only... whats the surprise...??? 😕
rishabh : i am coming to pick u up... enough of your reunion session...
manvi : what...??? but how...?? i mean...
rishabh : you wont believe manvi... today in the board meeting, i was lost in your thoughts n when dad asked me to give the presentation... i almost fell of the chair n on the top i called my secretary as manvi...
manvi : hehehe... what...??? you are impossible rishabh... 😆 😆
rishabh : as a result i am on a day off... basically dad is kicking me out of the office today...
manvi : haawww... my baby... rishabh what if i meet u after an hour at cp...
rishabh : thats awesome... i will wait for u n please end up that meeting of yours soon babes...
manvi : oh hello... lemme talk to my friend na... i will reach there on time... bye...
rishabh : bye...

manvi came back and sat...
virat : so who was there...???
manvi : hmm... woh... naina...
virat : ohhooo... so hows naina...??
manvi : she is good...
virat : is she also single or she found her prince charming...???
manvi : she likes every second guy so i cant say anything... 😆
virat : hmm... okk...
manvi : partner are u still into music...???
virat : naah... i barely get time yaar n when i get time, then maya eats it up all...
manvi : hehe... she has all the right to...
virat : manvi yesterday night when i called you, was anybody there with you...???
manvi almost choked as soon as she heard the question...
manvi : n..no... no one was there... actually i... i had fever...
virat : fever...?? then why did you come here...??? u idiot... you should have stayed back and rest... come i will drop you back home...
manvi : home... no... i have to go somewhere...
virat : you are not going anywhere... u need rest partner... u know na you are so weak.. you get ill easily... come lets go back home...
manvi : i have to go to...its important...
virat stood up and held manvi's hand.
virat : we are going...
manvi : no we are not... leave my hand...
virat turned around n said " manvi...?? "
manvi : see you later virat... bye..
manvi freed her hand from his grip and left...
virat stood their trying to digest what exactly happened...