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Res for psrt 50 ,,,,, 51,,,, snd 52...
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Lovely update!! 😃😃 Maan-Naina part was really nice.. Virman-Kasak moments were awesome.. That blue face pack scene is hilarious.. Men will be men.. They don't understand the importance of face pack! 😆 Kasak wants to have a pet.. I love pets too 😛.. Kasak-Virat convo was too good especially Virat's thoughts 😆.. Superb! Will be waiting for the next.. Take care 😊
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CHAPTER 53
~~ pyar ka dard hai...
sunday morning
today manvi and virat were too busy as they invited naina and maan on dinner after their marriage and so did they invited pragati... vanshika and vikram had gone to meet some relatives and kasak was enjoying her day... running around in the house, and playing with her new friend, her little brown doggy...
kasak : doggy come with me na... come... (shouting at the dog)
kasak gave him a hopeless look and ran to virat who was about to call mohit.
kasak : ye doggy toh meri sunta hi nahi hai... (hands on her waist)
virat : i told you earlier also... these pets... you wanted a doggy na... ab jhelo...
kasak : iski mumma kahan hai...??
virat : huh...??
kasak : ye apni mumma ko miss kar raha hai shayad...

virat sat on his knees and looked at kasak...
virat : what happened to your doggy...???
kasak : woh mere saath play bhi nahi kar raha hai... usko shayad apni mumma paas jaana hai...
kasak was very sad but she was sure that her doggy was missing his mumma...
virat : kasu...
kasak : hum usko uski mumma ke paas chod de dad...
virat : kasak beta...
kasak : mumma ke bina baby kar karega... hum doggy ko uski mumma paas bhej dete hai...

virat was feeling proud of kasak... his little one understood feelings so intensely... she could even feel the pain of a dog he just brought for her a week ago... she knows how difficult its for a child to cope up without his mother...
virat : i am proud of you...
kasak hugged virat and few tears rolled down her cheeks...
kasak : i will miss my doggy...
virat : i know jaana... but you know what i love you (kissing her forehead)
kasak : love you three...
virat : one ke baad two aata hai... fir three hota hai pagal ladki...
kasak : love you two toh mumma ke liye hai na...
virat : ohh meri nanhi pari...

manvi witnessed this scene and smiled with tears glistening in her eyes...
manvi : i love both of you...
manvi went and joined the duo... they were perfect... just perfect...
in the evening, all the preparations were done and naina and maan have already arrived.
virat : you dont miss us now... any specific reason nainnn...??
naina : i toh miss you day and night... (winking at him)
manvi : nainu... controlll...
maan : you guys are just too fun to hang out with... no doubt thats why my wife cant talking about both of you... she even told me your love story... hats off to you guys and your true love...
naina : maan dekhlo and seekh lo... you have to love me like virat loves mannu...
virat : ye toh nahi ho sakta...
kasak : sab mujhe bhul gaye... no one is talking to me... (sipping her juice)
maan : aww... i toh love you soo much... can i take you home...???
kasak : you have to ask mumma... hai na mumma...???
manvi : yes baby...
naina : kasu will come with nain... right...???
kasak : aur dad...???
maan : in that case, your nain and i should shift here...
virat : yeah actually...
kasak : good idea... par you both didnt get me any gift today... why...??
manvi : kasak...
naina : haha... ask maan uncle... he brought something for you...
kasak : really...?? gift for me... (shifting close to maan)
maan : yeah... but for that i want a kiss...
kasak : one kissey... promise...??
maan : promise...

kasak kissed his cheek and forwarded her hand and closed her eyes...
naina : how cute...
maan took out few chocolates from his pocket and gave it to kasak...
kasak : ye kaunsi chocolate hai...???
virat : kasak... (embarassed)
maan : my aunt brought it from paris... you didnt like it...???
kasak : i didnt have it... main taste karke btaungi... okk maan uncle...??
maan : take your time princess... till then i have got another gift for you...

kasak : one more gift...?? you need one more kissey then...??
naina : this time i want one kissey... all your love your maan uncle only... nain ko bhool gayi tum...
kasak : no cupcake...
(giggling)
naina : come here my cupcake...
maan gave a little jewellary box to manvi and manvi opened it to see a gold pendant with K written on it...
manvi : maan... naina... i cant take this yaar... dekho na virat...
virat : cmon guys... this is not done...
naina : cmon na jijuu... its okk... kasu meri cupcake hai na...
virat : according to you n my saasu maa, meri beti mithai ki dukaan hai na... toh mithai le aate... ye nahi...

maan : its our gift for this little angel... not for you both... so...
kasak : main dekhun...?? (taking the box) isme K likha hai... k for kasak...?? (not sure)
naina : yes... k for kasak... you like it...
kasak : yes i like it... thank you...
maan : she accepted it so you both will not say a word now...
manvi : okk...
manvi giggled on seeing kasak accept the gift and thereby thanking naina and maan.
just then the door bell rang, and manvi opened the door to welcome pragati and mohit...
manvi : welcome hai ji...

pragati and mohit entered and naina was suddenly comfortable on feeling somebody's sharp gaze on her.
maan also saw it and held naina's hand while virat thought that they are way too romantic.

virat : hey guys... welcome...
pragati : thank you bhai... hii naina... congrats again... hii maan...
naina smiled at pragati and maan replied pragati.
virat shook mohit and hugged him.
virat : how are you...???
mohit didnt say a word but kept looking at naina's hand which was held by maan. he was broken and now it was becoming difficult to control any further... the lava of his emotions was ready to erupt any moment...

manvi brought cold drinks and snacks for everybody. mohit suddenly left the hall and went outside. virat followed mohit because he was finding something strange in mohit's behaviour...

virat : mohit... anything wrong...??
mohit : i will kil him...
virat : what are you saying...???
mohit : she broke my heart so mercilessly that i want to kill him, then that so called love of mine and finally myself... i have had enough...
virat : chill... whats up with the girl you love...??? go and get her mohit... i told you take a step...
mohit : bahut der ho gayi bhai... kyun kia usne aise...??? kyun...??
scene shifts
naina knew mohit would now wouldnt be able to control his emotions, and everything would be destroyed...

manvi : where have this brother duo gone...?? i will go and call them...
pragati : bhabhi dont go... let them be...
manvi : prags cmon... they will keep on chatting that ways...

pragati : they wont... they wont... (pragati broke into tears) mohit... mohit bhai...
manvi : hey pragati... what happened yaar...?? tell me.. (cupping her face)
naina was looking at maan and her tears were threatening to fall any moment...

kasak, the poor soul was getting scared seeing this changing atmosphere... few minutes back, they all were lauighing and having fun and now... now its not the same...
pragati looked at naina with teary eyes and ran to the washroom.
manvi : whats wrong...??
manvi went out to see whats the matter...
scene shifts
mohit : she broke my heart... betrayed me... she killed me...
virat : mohit tell me who is she...??? who is that heartless woman...??
mohit : naina... naina...

mohit fell on his knees and manvi witnessed this scene... she was helll shocked on knowing this truth.
manvi (whispered) : naina...
virat looked sideways to see a shocked manvi and then looked at his cousin who was broken beyond limit...

virat : kaun naina...??? (still a hope in his heart that whatever he is thinking is not right...)

mohit said nothing and looked blankly at the ground.
manvi went upto him and sat on her knees.

manvi : nainu kaise...??
mohit : main sach keh raha hoon... naina ne... mujhe dhokha diya...
virat : but how is this possible...?? you didnt knew her... did you...?? did you mohit...???
mohit : bhai maine bahut pyaar kiya naina se... aaj se nahi... kal se nahi... jab se maine pyaar ko jaana tab se...
manvi : par aap dono alag kaise...???
mohit : mera kasoor hai ye ke main aapka bhai hoon... virat vadera ka cousin hoon...
(standing in front of virat)
virat never expected mohit to raise voice gainst him but here he was pointing a finger at him... blaming him for evrything that happened...

manvi : what do you mean mohit...???
mohit : thats very simple... very very simple... aapne (pointing at virat) rishabh se manvi bhabhi ko cheena aur rishabh ne mujhse naina ko... because of you both, i lost my love... aap dono ke pyaar ne naina aur mere pyaar ki bali le li... because of you both, naina and me are not together...
virat : there is a misunderstanding mohit... tu pagal ho gya hai kya...??? kaisi baate kar raha hai...
manvi : virat is right... there is something we all cant see... lets talk to naina...
mohit : what would she say...??? that rishabh asked her to leave me so that we all can be safe... i can be safe... who knows he had scared naina once again and marry maan...??
manvi : why didnt you tell us before mohit bhaiya...??? we could have talked about it... thing would have sorted...
mohit : i tried everything... i dont know why naina took such a step...
naina : because i dont want you...
mohit : you... you dont talk to me...
(pointing his finger at her)
manvi : nainu ye sab -
naina : can you excuse us please...
virat : no...
manvi : virat please...
virat : what does she think huh manvi...??? exactly what...??
manvi : virat please relax... dont make things difficult...
virat : she... your best friend destroyed everything... she broke my brother... look at his face for once manvi...
(pointing at mohit)
manvi : virat please... please dont say anything now...
mohit : bhabhi is right... bhai i want to have a word with mrs. khurana...
manvi and virat walked inside and leaving naina and mohit alone...
naina : mohit i am sorry...
mohit : sorry... what a word...!!! break somebody's heart... kill his soul and then utter a god damn sorry...
naina : mohit i just want to apologise for what i did to you...
mohit : ok i forgive you... bas mujhe un palon ka hisaab de do jo maine tumhare saath jeeye... unn aanson ka hisaab dedo jo tumhari yaad mein meri aankhon se bahe... wo pal jo maine tumhare bina jeeye, woh lauta do... aise nahi jaane dunga tumhe...
naina : omg... aaj achanak tumhe yaad aa gya that you love me... you ignored me... you behaved rudely with me... you disappeared like air... and i am at fault... 👏
mohit : marr nahi gya tha main... you couldnt even call me once...
naina : mohit for once and for all lets clear it... i decided what i want in life and i dont regret it...
mohit : you threw me out of your life... how convenient... but as u said... its over... we are over... i was a fool to love you that much... but what you did to me is still unjustified... hope you dont decieve your husband...

maan : she wont... and whatever happened is our destiny... so its better we all move on in life...
naina : maan aap...
maan : lets go nain... its time to say goodbye...

naina nodded her head in positive and stood beside maan and maan took naina inside with him.

manvi : i am sorry...
maan : no need to be sorry... we wanted to tell you guys something... we are leaving this country... next week we are moving to canada...
naina : i am really sorry... please forgive me...
maan : lets go naina...

naina looked at manvi and virat and followed her husband...
kasak : ye kya hua...???
manvi : nothing baby... nain had to go home...
kasak : mumma par -
manvi : shh..

virat went out and brought mohit inside while manvi took kasak to her room. pragati sat there in a corner praying to god to give her brother the power to go through this heartbreak...
virat : forget her mohit...
mohit : i will... i will someday
virat gave mohit a glass of water to drink and rubbed his back...
virat : i am really sorry... because of me-
mohit : bhai i am sorry... i blurted it out in anger...
virat : its okk... now you will start a fresh soon... promise me...
mohit : i will try...
virat : no trying... promise me...
mohit : i promise... but is it that easy to forget your first love...?? what if god forbid, it was you at my place...??

virat had no answer as he knew he would be devastated, if anything like this ever happens... for him forgeting manvi is like breathing without air... she is his everything, his world, his universe, his reason of living and he without her, would be like the end of the world for him...
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Superb Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved it
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oww kasak is soo sweet,
what naina and maan are leaving the country, how sad😔
but it wil be better for them..

maybe a new girl wil come in mohits life???

thanks for pm
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thank u mishu...
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Fab as always..
Too good
like it
thanks for pm
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Originally posted by: hangok

oww kasak is soo sweet,
what naina and maan are leaving the country, how sad😔
but it wil be better for them..

maybe a new girl wil come in mohits life???

thanks for pm



thank u bennu... Yup... No second parallel luv stry from now... Only virman... Mohit will get over the heartbreak but with time...
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Originally posted by: Niaksharma

Fab as always..
Too good
like it
thanks for pm



thank u khushi...

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