VIRMAN FF DIL MIL GAYE *PEEP IN* PG 144 - Page 21

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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 4

rishabh : i love you...
manvi instantly turned around and saw rishabh standing at the doorstep leaning against the wall and smirking...

manvi hugged him tightly and said " i love you too... i thought u are not coming... "

rishabh winked at naina and ruffled manvi's hair " how will i not come when i promised you...?? u fool... "
manvi broke the hug and hit his shoulder..
manvi : dont call me that and thank you for the gifts...
rishabh : anytime my love...
mitali : ahem ahem...
manvi : have some shame rishabh... mom is also here...
rishabh went to mitali ans hugged her...
rishabh : good evening maa... i hope i didnt made u wait for long...
mitali : its nice to see you rishabh... n i am happy that u could make it...
naina : my bhai bestest...
manvi : nain you changed your side... u are my best friend... remember...???
rishabh : she is my little sis honeybun...
manvi : mom u told him this also... oh god... why is my mom bent on snatching everyone i have...??? first my friend and now my boyfriend...
mitali : haawww...
rishabh : haaawww...
manvi : i am going... you guys carry on...
rishabh : you guys carry on... manvi needs me...
manvi : i dont need you... stay here with my mum n ur chamchi... and manvi stormed into her room.
rishabh : i only need you manvi... i will be back girls
and he followed manvi to her room...
manvi : what am i doing in this mad house...??? only dad is normal in this house besides me... mom is toh extra sweet like honey...
rishabh : n what about me...???
manvi : go back rishabh... have a chit chat session with mom n naina... have dinner n go...
rishabh locked the door and held manvi's hand.
manvi : leave me rishabh...
rishabh pulled her towards him and held her protectively in his arms...
rishabh : and what about the dessert...???
manvi adjusted herself in his arms and encircled her arms around his neck...
manvi : what if we have dessert before dinner...??
rishabh : someone was angry a minute back...
manvi : someone felt neglected and wanted all your attention...
rishabh : you are the love of my life and you are jealoue from your own mum n my little sweet innocent angel...
manvi : innocent angel...??? she read my personal diary today n even cracked the password of my lappy...

rishabh : oh my poor baby... by the way whats the password...??? i might also need it someday...
manvi lowered her eyes and whispered in his ears " rishu "
rishabh : what...??? i hate being that sweetu cute types you know na...
manvi : yeah i too prefer this hot n sexy avatar of yours... sweet cute types whole day long is damn boring...
rishabh : someone is in a dangerously romantic mood today...!!!!
manvi : beware... someone might eat you raw...
rishabh : i am all ready for being eaten up if someone like you will do me this favour...
manvi : it will always be me rishabh... dare some other girl come close to you... i will just kill her...

rishabh leaned forward, their foreheads touchings, their breaths tickling on each other faces...
rishabh : i love you... you are the colour of my manvi.. never ever leave me... i wouldnt be able to survive if it happens...
manvi : main koi pagal hoon kya...?? tum jaise item ko main kaise chod doon...
rishabh : thats not item manvi... thats eliginle bachelor of the town...
manvi : that eligible bachelor is right now in my bedroom... what is he doing here...??
rishabh : that eligible bachelor is with his girlfriend and is soon going to kiss her...
manvi : w..wh..what...?? leave me rishabh...
rishabh : kyun baby ko darr lag raha hai...???
manvi : n..no...
rishabh : wo dikh raha hai... it is clearly visible from the blush on ur cheeks, lowered eyes and racing heartbeats...


manvi : hmm...

( manvi closed her eyes and moved one of her hand in his hair signalling him to make the first move )
rishabh understood her unspoken words and pulled her even more close to himself and lowered his head.

manvi : i love you...
rishabh cupped her cheeks and went more close, lips shivering and hearts yearning...
" ankhon ko yu band karke, dheeme dheeme gin ginke..." spoiled the whole atmosphere and it was manvi's mobile which started ringing.
manvi : ek minute...
rishabh : let it be... lets continue...
manvi : it might be important rishabh...
rishabh : i am here with you baby... who is more important than me...???

manvi made a cute pout and got out of rishabh's hold and picked up the call...
manvi : hello...
? : partner...
manvi : v..v..virat
virat : how are you meri bina brake ki ghadi...??
manvi : virat... i am so happy... i am good.. tum kaise ho...??? you toh very fast huh...?? to be daddy...
virat : lets meet tomorrow... what say...???
manvi : perfect... i am dying to...
virat : same here... dying to see you ded futiya... i missed you manvi...
manvi : i still miss u partner...
virat : ko mila nahi kya...??? why still single partner...???
manvi : kal mil... fir btati hoon... bye virat...
virat : we can talk... i have time...
manvi : try n understand... i cant...
virat : okay... bye...

scene shift
virat : donno i felt as if something was there...?? something fishy...?? i didnt hope manvi to react like this... i really thought she would jump with excitement or shout as loud as possible on the phone but she didnt... are you sure maya that she hasnt changed...???
maya : yes virat... you are thinking too much... may be she was busy or something...
virat : no... she always had time for me... but today she straightaway ended the conversation...
maya : virat that was 3 years back...
virat : i think you are right... she is no longer my ded futiya... may be she has changed with time...
maya : hmm... just go n meet her tomorrow...
virat : yeah... but i think someone was there with her... for sure...


maya : okk... if there was someone with her, how can you prove it or for that matter verify it...
virat : your right... but i cant help thinking like this... leave it, lets go back home...

maya : okk...

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Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
6 likes n no comment...?????
what happened guys...?????
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Naina one more amazing ss frm u really liking n so sorry fr nt cmmentinhg in many of ur stories as i being stuck up wid my xams! Once i get finish wid them i will surely cmment bt fr that tyme being plz do keep pming me!
I knw u expect our reviews after writing so well bt i m sorry frm next time i will try to cmment urgh! I hate ts xam tyme its making everythng impossible! I knw u hau updatd ur pm list plz keep me in that n do pm me ur updates n i will try to cmment regularly! Its nt a promise bt will try my best!
Thankyou
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Posted: 12 years ago
awee love to see rishav manvi romance he he
I love to see manuu with others but can't tolerate virat with anyone else he he

now virman should meet stern smile
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mamaian

Naina one more amazing ss frm u really liking n so sorry fr nt cmmentinhg in many of ur stories as i being stuck up wid my xams! Once i get finish wid them i will surely cmment bt fr that tyme being plz do keep pming me!
I knw u expect our reviews after writing so well bt i m sorry frm next time i will try to cmment urgh! I hate ts xam tyme its making everythng impossible! I knw u hau updatd ur pm list plz keep me in that n do pm me ur updates n i will try to cmment regularly! Its nt a promise bt will try my best!
Thankyou

thanks afsan... 😊
i didnt know abt ur exams n all... but what to do when i get less response, i do get demotivated n sumtyms upset...
a single line comment or thanks also makes me going...
i will add u bck in the pm list of pmkk...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Naina i am tooo much in love with ur story and i beg u plzzz give update regularly of this and soon finish this bcz i am dying to read further
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Posted: 12 years ago
i reallyyy liked and plzzz add me to ur buddy list and pm me the next prt. i think virat is jealous becoz manvi is not talking to him properly
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: preity_d

awee love to see rishav manvi romance he he
I love to see manuu with others but can't tolerate virat with anyone else he he

now virman should meet stern smile

arrey ye toh bahut naainsafi hai preetz...
virat ne koi paap kiye hain kya...??? 😆
yes virman will now meet...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetyvirman123

Naina i am tooo much in love with ur story and i beg u plzzz give update regularly of this and soon finish this bcz i am dying to read further

yes yes i will give its regular updates bcos its new n fresh for me as well... tired of all continuing ffs...😳
glad that u are liking it so much... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Marooshmalik

i reallyyy liked and plzzz add me to ur buddy list and pm me the next prt. i think virat is jealous becoz manvi is not talking to him properly

hey thanks n i have sent u a buddy request...
i will pm u next tym n ur ryt... virat is a little unconfortable n uneasy with manvi not toking to him properly...

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