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Aastha

@..BiLlY..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#471

Cute patch up..
Kasak is soo cute..
n he last lines..OMG!! they were just fabb!!!
Loved the update..

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naina

@naina927

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#472

NOTE : guys in the end of chap 29th, i worte that this may be the end of happy updates but i guess u all missed the " MAY BE " part... happy updates abhi hain... so chill... now go n read the update... and iss update ko main bahut muskil se danger se bcha ke laai hoon, so please gimme longgg comments... okkk else i will cry 😭

CHAPTER 31

~~ ankahee unsuljhi baatein...

sunday morning
manvi was lazily sitting on the bed while virat's head in her lap...
virat : what happened...??
manvi : nothing... (running her fingers in his hair)
virat : missing your kasu...??
manvi : yes... i hope she is fine...
virat : naina gayi hai na... and we all know how much she loves kasak... tumhari nainu tumhari kasu ko apni jaan se jyada sambhal ke rakhegi...
manvi : virat you are right... but still you know na that i have never left kasak with anyone...
virat : haaye... kabhi mujhse bhi pyaar kar lia karo mumma...

manvi : aww... baby ko mumma ka pyaar chahie...???

virat : hmm... do na pyaar... (pulling her towards him)
manvi : no baby... aap bahut demanding ho jaate ho fir... (teasing virat)
virat : nahi... i promise... no demands this time... please na mumma...
manvi : baby ko kissy chahie...???
virat : hmmm...
manvi : okkk... (bending to drop a kiss on virat's cheek)
muahhh...
virat : ye kya tha...??? bheekh de rahi ho mujhe...???
manvi : huh...???
virat : aur kya...???
manvi : virat...
virat : kya virat...??? isko kissey kehte hai tumhari bhasha mein...??? (is that what u kiss in your language...???)
manvi : hawww... are u trying to say i dont know how to kiss or probably i dont know where to kiss...???
virat : suit yourself...
manvi : arghhh... dont irritate me virat... i am going... get away from me... (pushed virat and about to get up from the bed)
before manvi could stand properly on the floor, virat pulled her towards him and she fell on him. virat immediately tighten his hold on manvi and before she could react he turned her and came on top of her. manvi angrily looked at him for few seconds and then looked the other side to hide the pink shade of her cheeks.
virat : blushing and blushing at time... tum 60s ki hindi movie heroine ho kya...??
manvi : i am not blushing... (while her face was showing something else... the proximity like always was making her melt in his arms)
virat : really...?? the look at me meri sherni... (putting is finger under her chin making her face him...)
manvi : utho... mujhe jaana hai... kasa-
virat : shhh... (his finger on her lips and eyes locked)

manvi looked at virat without blinking her eyes and vise versa and after sometime manvi happily said " i won... "
virat : what...???
manvi : i won... you are the one who blinked your eyes first...
virat : arghh... ms. moment spoiler... you have lost it seriously...
manvi : haha... i was joking na virat... look at me na... (keeping her palm on his cheek)
virat : no looking shooking now... i have an important meeting day after tomorrow... (getting up)
manvi : no... (pulling him back) virat... listen i am sorry...
virat : its okk... (again getting up)
manvi : papa u dont love me... hai na...??
virat : do u love papa...??? no naa...
manvi : hawww... i toh love you soo much...
virat : no u dont...
manvi : kissey doon papa...??? (making a cute pout)
virat : no... i dont want that petty kissey... (smirking)
manvi : you have to take it or else i have to forcefully give you one or you have the third option n that is you gimme a kissey...
virat : baby no kissey today... (teasing manvi more n more by rubbing his nose on her cheek)

manvi : but why...???
virat : daddy isnt in the mood...
manvi : virat ab itne bhaw mat khao... (warning him)
virat : hadd hai... jab kissey maangu toh problem nahi maangu toh problem... tum chahti kya ho... (pecking the tip of her nose)
manvi : abhi dikhati hoon...
manvi pulled virat by his collar and pecked his lips lightly and next moment leaned more on the bed leaving virat's collar thereby making him want her more. and as she expected, she felt his lips on hers and his hands cupping her cheeks. manvi smied in the kiss and pulled him closer while kissing him back. the warm, spicy scent of her creamy skin was driving virat crzy and he groaned against her lips and he was actually lost before he even got started. the taste of her lips was rocketing a sensation through him, scorching and burning him. he felt manvi stiffen in his arms and the temptation of exploring her even more all over again was becoming tpo poweful for him to ignore. manvi was feeling strangely powerless and her hands moved to his chest to flaten out against the hard wall of his chest. she could feel his heartbeats and soon found her body begining to soften and moulding itself more to his. manvi found her body burning with each n every touch of his on her body and this time she didnt want him to stop as this was happening for the first time after the argument they had dats back. she never knew she was so badly wanting him from so many days and she wants to give him everything... everything a wife gives to her husband... she wants to have his baby inside her... she wants to see that smile on virat's face... she wants to fulfil that little wish of his... after sometime, virat broke the kiss and was panting and looking at manvi wondering where is she lost...
virat : manvi...
manvi looked at virat and patiently wanting him to understand her unsaid words. she wanted more this time.. a kiss wasnt what she wanted this time...
manvi : virat i... i
virat kissed her forehead and got up leaving manvi all disappointed...
virat : jaan i already told you before that we dont need anyone in our life...
manvi : but -
virat : woh sab chodo phone karke puccho ke ye naina maiya hai kahan...??
manvi : hmm...

after sometime
naina : we are back...
kasak : yes we are back...
manvi : aww my kasu... i missed you soo much my baby... (picking her up and kissing her cheek) i hope ur cupcake didnt trouble you nainu...
naina : no mannu... she is a sweetheart... exactly like you when we were kids...
manvi : my baby is like mumma...
kasak : yes nain told me...
manvi : call her maasi baby...
naina made a face and virat saw it and naina smiled at him to cover up for herself.
kasak : nain u only told me to -
naina : actually na i told her to call me nain... maasi bahut aunty types sound karta hai na... i am not that old u see... i am only 26 n soon to be married.
manvi : nain u can never change... never babes...
naina : hehe... anyways i hope u guys had fun... kyun jiju...???
virat : we were about to when u ruined the moment...
naina : hawww...
kasak : hahaha...
manvi : stop it you two... cmon lets sit in the bedroom nain...
virat : yeah u ladies continue... i have some work to complete...
manvi : tumhare liye coffee laun...?? (asking virat)
virat : nahi... i will make one when i need... you enjoy your time manvi...
manvi : okk... (smiling widely)

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virman's room
kasak : see i brought these dolls mumma... ye bahut beautiful hai na...???

(thank u meera aunty - piyali istyle 😉)

manvi : yes baby...
naina was looking blankly at the mobile screen and manvi noticed it...
manvi : maan is really a nice guy... isnt it...??
no response...
manvi : nainu...
manvi shook naina a little and she looked at manvi startlingly...
naina : what...???
manvi : i said maan is really nice... isnt he...??
naina : yeah he is...
manvi : do you like him nainu...???
naina : hmm...
kasak : mumma pink colour better hai ya black...??
manvi : pink baby... play with the doll jaanu...
kasak : okk...
manvi : so basically you like him...??
naina : yes...
manvi : you want to marry him...??
naina : yes...
manvi : you know him well...??
naina : yes...
manvi : you like his company...???
naina : yes...
manvi : you are not in love with him...??
naina : yes... no... no... i mean i love him...
manvi : no you dont nainu...
naina : mannu it is not like this...
manvi : nain look at me... why are u getting married to him when you dont love him...??? i have seen him and the very first time i met him... i knew he wasnt the one for you... he isnt the prince charming you dreamnt of nainu... why are you marrying him...??? tell me naina...
naina : bhai... bhai wants me to marry him... he thinks maan is the right guy for me...
manvi : so u are with maan because rishabh wants you to be with him... this is not done...
naina : i dont know mannu... i know nothing... i am trying... i am trying to know him and change myself... i am trying very hard mannu...
manvi : nain listen to her heart... remember you told me to listen to my heart and get married to virat... you only made me take a stand for my love... then how could you not stand for yourself...
naina : let it be mannu... i have to go now...i have to go with maan's aunty to buy the engagement ring... and now dont worry about me... i am fine and see i am smiling (poiting towards the smile on her face)
manvi : how can i not worry nain...??
naina : oye chal na... nautanki mat kar... i will call you mannu... okk...??? and my cupcake... come here na... (calling kasak towards her) where is my huggie and kissey...???
kasak : alley nain... main dungi na kissey...
kasak kissed naina and hugged her and next moment ran to pick up the dolls lying to the bed and stood in front of naina again...
kasak : thank u for them... i love them...
naina : your most welcome my baby... and i love you too... muah...
manvi : listen you... buy a good expensive ring... okk...???
naina : hehe... okk... bye...
manvi : bye...

after naina left, manvi looked at kasak who was still busy with her new dolls...
manvi : kasak to maja aaya aaj...??
kasak : bahut saara... i like nain...
manvi : oh really... woww...
kasak : and naani also joined us... 😛
manvi : naani...??? 😲
kasak : yes... main, naani n nain... humne bahut saari shopping ki and zoo bhi gaye...
manvi : toh mujhe bhi le jaate... kya hai...?? (making a cute pout)
kasak : mumma zoo mein na tiger tha... wo aapko kha jaata toh... toh hum kya karte... isliye aapko leke nahi gaye... (making a horrified expression on her face)
manvi : ohh... thank u baby (trying to control her laughter)
kasak : what to do mumma... i love you soo much...
manvi : hehe... i love you too...
virat : whats up girls...??
manvi : nothing... she is just telling me that she didnt took me to the zoo because there was a tiger and he could have eaten me... and she loves me way too much to risk my life,...
virat : dont tell me... hehehe... she cooked up the whole story herself... kasak aap mumma ko itna pyaar karte ho baby...???
kasak : yes dad... but why are u both laughing...???
virat : i am not laughing... ask mommy... am i laughing manvi...???
manvi : no...
virat : see... mumma also said that dad isnt laughing...
kasak : no... jhooth... you both laughing at me... hai na...??? (jumping on the bed in anger)
manvi : why would anybody laugh at my princess...???
kasak : i dont know...
virat : so lets work on finding what you dont know... 😉
kasak : okk... (said being all confused... and mind it kasak being confused is a rare thing... very rare thing...)

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Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago

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Strikhedonia

@Strikhedonia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#473

The update was awesome!!!👏

Loved Manvi and Virat's part!!!😛

Kasak is really cute and of course confused soul!!!😉

And Naina??? What about her??? She doesn't love Maan and marrying him only for Rishabh!!!😕

Something is definitely wrong!!! I guess so...😲

Thanks for the update and love you nannu di!!!😛

Edited by ArthyV - 12 years ago

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Shivani Rajput

@ShivRajput

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#474

Nice update.. so misunderstanding yet not cleared.. Waise I wanna ask are you planning to write how dey gt attracted physically towards aftr marriage or not 😉

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naina

@naina927

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#475

Originally posted by: ashishi
Ye upd to nainu pe hei saara😉

haan... kyunki nainu star hai na iss ff ki 😉 ⭐️

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naina

@naina927

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#476

Originally posted by: ShivRajput
Nice update.. so misunderstanding yet not cleared.. Waise I wanna ask are you planning to write how dey gt attracted physically towards aftr marriage or not 😉

if u guys want to know it, i can write it...

but when talking about my take on it... i am not planning to write anything like this 😳

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naina

@naina927

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#477

Originally posted by: ArthyV
The update was awesome!!!👏 thank u aaru

Loved Manvi and Virat's part!!!😛 had to be

Kasak is really cute and of course confused soul!!!😉 no no... virat confused my little angel

And Naina??? What about her??? She doesn't love Maan and marrying him only for Rishabh!!!😕 naina ka bhi apna kissa hai... more would be revealed... stay tuned

Something is definitely wrong!!! I guess so...😲 keep guessing

Thanks for the update and love you nannu di!!!😛 ur welcum n thank u for the comment

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#478

Lovely update Naina!!! ⭐️⭐️ Full of cute and sweet moments!! Loved Virman conversation a lot.. Superb!! 😃 ''bheekh de rahi ho mujhe'' - 😆 Hilarious! Virman are adorable 😃.. Their romantic moments are also veryy nice 😳.. But Virat doesn't want a baby :(.. Hope they will sort out their MU soon.. Naina doesn't love Maan, she is marrying him for her brother only 😔.. But I still think that she is hiding something important from Manvi.. Naina-Kasak-Manvi scene was super cute ❤️.. Kasak is so so cute and adorable!! 😃 She made a really nice story though! 😛😛 Loved Virman-Kasak moments.. Perfect family! ❤️❤️ Update was very well written! 👏👏 Eagerly waiting for the next part.. Take care 😊

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#479

Superb mindblowing updt...loved mumma papa kissing scene...shooo cute...lolzzz...so manvi even want a baby now...kasak scene was even so cute...something is fishy abt naina n maans wedding...cont soon