VIRMAN FF DIL MIL GAYE *PEEP IN* PG 144

First Previous

Page

109

Next Last

Frequent Posters

naina

@naina927

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

PART 2

maya entered vadera house after lunch...
vanshika : beta ho gayi tumhari shopping...???
maya : yeah mom... where is virat...???
vanshika : he just came back from office... he is in the room...
maya : ok maya... i will also go...
vanshika : go... did u eat anything...??
maya : yes maa... i am full...
maya entered the room and saw virat busy on his laptop...
maya : virat...
virat : hmmm...
maya : i went for shopping today...
virat : so...??? paise kam padh gaye kya...??? (so...?? did u run out of money...??)
maya : no... listen na...
virat : maya i am busy... can we talk later please...
maya : listen na today i met -
virat : let it be baby... i have an important work to do...
maya : virat... please listen to me once...
virat : ok speak up...
maya saw that virat was still working on the laptop so she snatched the laptop...
virat : leave it maya... i am listening to you na...
maya : but u werent paying attention...
virat : ok shoot...
maya : first of all, i am pregnant not you... so you are not allowed to get pissed off that early and no mood swings for you...
virat : hehe... yeah continue...
maya : and second of all... today in the mall-
maya was again cut by virat and he micked maya...
virat : there was 50% sale on channel products...
maya : oh shut up...!!! forget it... now i wont tell you a single thing...
virat : maya... tell me no... see i am sorry...
maya : no... get lost mr. vadera... i am going.
maya stood up from the bed and turned to leave when virat pulled her back and wrapped his arms protective around her.
virat : sorry na maya...
maya : you always do this...
virat : then i always apologise also...
maya : so typical virat...
virat : cmon now break the ice...
maya : okkk... so i met manvi today...
virat's grip on maya loosened as soon as he heard manvi's name...
virat : phir se kaho...
maya : yeah i met manvi...
virat : ohh thats great... how is that jungli billi...??? is she still that bina break ki gadi... (virat was suddenly full of excitement and happiness)
maya : yeah... she is exactly the same virat... its always a pleasure to meet her and i met a friend of hers... hmmm.. what was her name...??
virat : naina...
maya : yeah... naina... she is a sweet girl... just a chatter box like manvi...
virat : hmm... i know manvi n naina are like long lost sisters... they share a sisterly bond...
maya : yeah... n u know what manvi is still single...??
virat : what...?? come again... after 3 years of college, she is still single...
maya : yeah i was also shocked... i mean cmon.. she is beautiful, educated, independent and fun loving...
virat : yeah... wish i could meet her...
maya : when maya is here, her virat need not fear...
virat : what...??? try n be original maya...
maya : virat i got her number and she was very angry on her that u didnt contact her...
virat : i know... she must have said " i will kill you virat... "
maya : bingo...
virat : okk then i will surely call her someday...
maya : and catch up as well... by the way she congratulated you...
virat : you told her...??
maya : yeah bcos she asked me to join for coffee... i wanted to join but couldnt bcos of your strict orders...
virat : that is for your benefit only... see i also dont drink coffee these days...
maya : but u dont have to virat... you can have coffee...
virat : naah... the next time we will have coffee... we would have it together only...
maya : you are soo sweet...
virat : i know... now let me get back to my work else dad would fire me...
maya : okkk...

scene shifts
on the way back home...
naina : mannu...??
manvi : nainu...
naina : why did u say that u are single in front of maya...
manvi : because i dont wanna tell anybody until things get official... i want to introduce rishab as my fiance and not as my boyfriend...
naina : woww... so romantic... bhai is soo lucky...
manvi : i am toh double lucky nainu...
naina : how...??
manvi : first i got a friend like you and then as a complementary gift, i got rishabh...
naina : haaw... you called bhai complementary gift... you are toh gone manvi...
manvi : nain i called you my priced possession...
naina : ohhh... that ways... love you mannu...
manvi : love you too nainu...
naina : let me call bhai, he would pick me from your place...
manvi : nooo...
naina : why...???
manvi : because whole day long, mom teases me... if rishabh comes then you all would pull my leg uncontrollably...
naina : then toh i am definitely calling bhai...
manvi : do whatever u want to...
manvi concentrated on driving and heard the brother sister duo talking to each other...
naina : mannu...
manvi didnt react...
naina : mannu... (shook manvi) bhai... manvi doesnt wants to talk to you...
manvi : no... no... i want to... (she snatched the mobile frrom naina and parked the car in the corner...)
manvi : hiii...
rishabh : hello my princess...

manvi : i am very angry... why did you ditch me...?? what if i ditch you someday...??
rishabh : princess... i didnt ditch u baby... important meeting came up... i am sorry and dare you ditch me...
manvi : dare what...???
rishabh : forget it... jaana did you accept the apology...??
manvi : yes i did... n if everytym this happens, and i get a tiffany ring, then i would always accept your apology...!!!!
rishabh : everytime a ring would be a little boring... what say...???
manvi : true.. so i can manage with anything...
rishabh : i know... my girlfriend is so cooperative...
naina snatched the mobile from manvi...
naina : see you there bhai... dont be late...
rishabh : ok meri naina... bye...
naina : bye...
manvi : privacy naam ki toh koi cheez hi nahi hai...
naina : milegi milegi... shaadi ke baad privacy bhi milegi bhabhi...
manvi : thank you soo much...

at chaudhary mansion
manvi : mom...??? see who is here...???
mitali : coming my honeybun...
mitali entered the hall and saw manvi and naina standing there...
mitali : naina...
naina went running towards mitali and hugged her...
naina : aunty...
mitali : kaisa hai mera raja beta...???
naina : bahut accha... i was missing you...
mitali lovingly pulled naina's ear
mitali: chal jhoothi... tujhe toh meri yaad hi nahi aati...
naina : nahi aati hai na... thats why i came here to meet you and have self invited myself n bhai for dinner...
manvi : ting tong... i am your daughter mom... main bhi hoon yahan...
naina : hurr...
mitali : so naina what were u saying...?? rishabh aa raha hai...??? ( is rishabh also coming...?? )
naina : yeah aunty... woh kya hai na...
manvi : i will just go n freshen up...
mitali : take ur time to get ready mannu... wais ebhi rishabh aa raha hai na...
naina : hehe... aunty today i want to have rajmal chwal and the kheer...
mitali : sure mera baccha... but what about rishabh...??? what will he have...???
naina : manvi hai na...
mitali : kya...??? (what...??)
naina : i mean bhai manvi ke haath se toh zeher bhi khalega... (i mean bhai would eat poison also if manvi asks him to...)
mitali : naughty girl... now you also rest naina...
naina : yeah aunty...

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

ps : are you guys liking it...??? leave ur comments, doubts,and for that matter suggestions. gifts, chocolates n flowers are also accepted 😉

Quote

preity_d

@preity_d

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

omg nain kya shocking update
maya is pregnant with virat's baby???
am knife entered in my heart
I can't see virat with anyone else
I don't mind Manvi having bf but the pic is not showing dunno why?
NAIN WELLDONE

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Kanwal_chohan

@Kanwal_chohan

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Ing such a massive twist and that aswel right in the beginning
Of the story awesome start Maya seems nice hope she
Stays like that wonder how virat and manvi will unite
Please update ASAP and do pm me
Part 2 the second update was awesome loved naina and manvis
Little nok jhok thank god Maya is sweet wonder how the story will
Unfold thanks for the pm great start love the concept

Edited by Kanwal_chohan - 12 years ago

Quote

preity_d

@preity_d

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

hey Nain really liking it
but isme maya-virat end up karenge toh nahi na????
read the next part as well so Vivian is the man he he awesome

Quote

LoverBollywood

@LoverBollywood

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Awesome yaar..

Pleasee continue soon..

And thanks for the PM..

Quote

kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

oye maya and sweet kind digest tht bt will do tht for u :p
Cnt bear virat being so sweet and caring for maya :@
Anyways am liking the story its really interesting how will virmam meet
Plz jaldi update kariyo and pm ke liye thanx alot :)

Quote

Pyaasi Chudail

@PyaasiChudail69

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Bada maaza aane waala hai i m excited
Hehe and double khushi hogi wen viraat vl find abt rishab i guess he vl find after they vl fall for eachother
If i m not wrong this story is similar to kabhi alvida na kehna
Jaldi update plz

Quote

naina

@naina927

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: preity_d
hey Nain really liking it
but isme maya-virat end up karenge toh nahi na????
read the next part as well so Vivian is the man he he awesome

preetz its a VIRMAN SS...!!! only n only virat and manvi...