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Posted: 12 years ago
nice entry...nice promo
Manvi is right
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2 promos !!! Wowww !! Both are shocking n scaryyy !! Wat had happen ?? Excited n looking forward for the update :D
New entries !! Great 😃 awesome !!! :)
Maha eiposode !! Eeeks !! Waiting waiting nainu ^_^
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Superb promo...i loved the 2nd 1...eksss...cont soon
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Awesome the Promo's and Entries are really good...Promo 2 is really awesome...
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Mishu❤️Nainu
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both the promo and new entry
look intersting update soon
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eeekkksss promo its intresting😎mumma continue soon
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Awesome promos!! ⭐️ 2nd one is shocking.. Virat shouldn't have said that! Poor Mannu :(.. New entries! Excited for that.. Waiting for the maha episode Naina.. Take care 😊
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kitne din promos pe kaatne padege 😔
but mahaepisode de rahe ho to thik hai

new entries seems to be interesting ... update soon
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Hiii everybody... these days i am struck up in somethings but i really miss everybody over here... wonder what will happen when the show comes to an end... anyways lets forget it...
i am here with the maha episode...
its exactly 4950 words, so i demand longgg comments 😛 n u have to give it... warna main next update chotu sa dungi... 😳
CHAPTER 33
~~ tere dar par sanam
at night
virman bedroom

both lying in bed... manvi waiting for the clock to struck twelve and virat thinking about the day which changed his life... on this very day he lost maya... yes he moved on in life, he married manvi but somethings can never be forgotten... they always remain in our heart though locked but it would be wrong to name those memories as the one long forgotten.

manvi : virat...

virat : hmm...

manvi : thank you...

virat : for what...??

manvi : for the party... kasak really wanted it and i am glad u agreed...

virat : i agreed for your n kasak's happiness... i am living for u both... and i dont want to miss even a single chance of giving you both happiness...

manvi looked at virat trying to notice this sudden change in her husband's tone n body language...

manvi : are you okkk...??

virat : hmm...

virat turned around, his back facing manvi... he didnt want manvi to notice his feelings today... seeing the tears forming in his eyes will hurt manvi and make her think that maya is still in between them... he knows how manvi is and will make an issue out of it considering her possesiveness for kasak and for him...

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virat remembered what happened three years back on kasak's first birthday... virat tried staying at home with manvi and kasak but he couldnt... so he went out for sometime... he needed fresh air to breath... suddenly maya, her memories, her nonstop talks were hovering over virat's mind... all he could think was maya and the last conversation he had with her the day... the day everything changed...

**** flashback ****

maya : virat...

virat : maya...

maya : what are u doing...??

virat : i am doing underwater diving baby... u wanna join...

maya : leave this file for sometime na... listen to me...

virat : i am listening and i dont listen with my eyes... my ears are in the working order..

maya : arghhh... then look at me and then listen...

virat : i know you want ice cream... right...?? i will just get it...

maya : no... cant u just listen to me for once...

virat : from the day i fell for you, i am listening only... when did u give a chance to say something...?? and you know what i think our baby will also be a chatterbox like you...

maya : so...??? whats wrong in being a chatterbox...?? dekhna my son will be just... just amazing... super intelligent and most dashing...

virat : this time its a girl... we will talk about your son later...

maya : no... humara beta hi hoga... par agar beti hui toh... toh aur bhi mja ayega... nahi...???

virat : yeah but did u disturb me for this chit chat for yours...??

maya : ohh i literally forgot about it... so virat take me to a temple na...

virat : temple... right now...??? maya i am running late for work... we will go in the evening...

maya : no... i want to go virat... i dont know why... but i want to go...

virat : maya sweetheart... i thought you would ask me to take you for a walk, or a movie... but suddenly temple... are u okk...???

maya : actually...

virat : cmon say it now...

maya : i am not feeling good... something is wrong... dil bahut ghabra raha hai... darr sa lag rha hai...

virat immediately left is file and went towards maya and took her in her arms...

virat : what is wrong baby...??? kya hua jaan...?? are u okk...?? and the baby...

maya : virat i am scared...

virat : when virat is here you dont need to fear... remember...??

maya : hmm... aaj kuch accha nahi lag rha... (almost in tears)

virat : dont maya... dont shed even a single tear... dont...

maya : i love you... (holding fistful of his shirt)

virat : i love you too... now sit here and i will just inform dad that i am not coming...

maya : no... you go... i am fine...

virat : i can see you are not...

maya : i am fine... ab jao... irritate mat karo...

virat : you are just unpredictable... one moment u want me to stay and next moment u want me to go... decide it first honey...

maya : i have decided... go virat... nahi jaoge toh meeting miss ho jaegi...

virat : uff... ok i will be back soon... okk...??? (virat turned to leave)

maya : okk... suno... (holding his hand)

virat : yes...

maya : ek tight wali huggie do na aur kissey bhi...

virat : aaja meri despo... (opening his arms wide)

maya : shut up... (hitting him and hugging him the next moment)

virat : now you will rest and in the evening we will go to the temple... okkk...??

maya : okk...

***** flashback ends *****

virat returned back home and another shocker was awaiting him...

vanshika : virat are u okk...???

virat : yes mom... manvi...??

vanshika : she is in the room...

virat : okk...

virat entered his room and found that manvi was nowhere to be seen and kasak was also not in the room... virat saw that the balcony door was open, he went outside and saw manvi sitting on the floor with a knife in her hands...

virat : manvi... (shocked)

manvi said nothing and a tear rolled down her cheek.

virat : manvi what are you doing here...?? leave this knife...

manvi : i am sorry...

virat : what are u saying...???

manvi : i know i failed... i am unable to fill the void in your life... i should die... yes... i have no right to live...

virat : manvi dont act stupid... leave that knife right now...

manvi : i love you virat...

virat went near manvi and snatched the knife from her hands...

virat : what do u think u were doing...??? life is not a game damn it...

manvi : you love maya and i love you... i know why u left me alone today... u wanted to be with maya n her memories but why is it hurting me this badly... why am i feeling that i failed in being your wife...???

virat : manvi...

manvi : i am unable to take her place... may be i am not good as her...

virat : stop it... you know i love you... if i didnt, i would have never married you manvi... you are my everything... i am living just because of you...

manvi : then why are we so far...?? hum kyun aaj tak ek nahi ho paye... kyun...??? gimme the knife back...

virat : shut up... just shut up... and go inside...

manvi : no... give the knife back... virat i will snat-

next moment, the world stopped for manvi... she was numb... she never felt like this before... not when rishabh touched her or kissed her... feeling of his lips against her was something... something electrifying... something which she never experienced... it took manvi sometime to respond but as soon as she got her senses back, she kissed him. she was dying for this moment to come in their life... she was dying to cover this remaining distance between them...

manvi broke the kiss and hugged virat...

manvi : i cant lose you... i am too scared... i love you...

virat : i love you too and dont worry i wouldnt let you go... you are mine... you belong to me manvi...

manvi : really...??

virat : really... now tell me where is your darling daughter...???

manvi : mom ke saath...

virat : hmm...

manvi : virat woh knife kahan chala gya...?? (breaking the hug)

virat : i threw it away and now cmon lets go inside...

manvi : but i am still not convinced...

virat : so...???

manvi : so better convince me or... or i will...

virat : nautanki ho tum poori... jaan nikal di thi meri...

manvi : mujhe godi mein lo na...

virat : kya...???

manvi : haan... isme kya hai...??? pati ho tum mere...

virat : okk... (picking her up in his arms) aur kuch...??

manvi : i gave u many hints now... solve the remaining question paper yourself...

virat : no... not now... (moving towards the room)

manvi : virat... please... make me yours... i cant live this... do u think i will not be able to satisfy you...??

virat put manvi on the bed and sat next to her unable to say a thing...

virat : i know why you want this and that too tonight...

manvi : i dont know what you are saying... i just know that i love you... and what is wrong in coming close to each other... we are married...

virat : i love you too but... but i... i need some time...

manvi : i dont have time... no more time... i want you... or else i will do something to myself... i am serious...

virat : manvi...

manvi : dont manvi me...!!! i am serious... i will kill myself...

virat : okk... go... go and kill yourself...

manvi : virat i am serious...

virat : i am also not joking... and i am wondering how can you be so insensitive sometimes...

manvi : because i am in love... and all is fair in love and war... its a war between your past and your present...

virat : ohhh... manvi look at me... you seriously think that maya is between us...

manvi : if she isnt... then prove it to me... prove it that you love me... prove it virat...

virat : okk then...

next moment was just the one which manvi was waiting for... she won her husband... his present won... manvi was happy thinking that she got virat now and that too on the very day he lost maya... she will now have her husband in real sense...

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manvi : virat...

virat : goodnight manvi... (trying to avoid the topic)

manvi noticed the choked voice of virat and she knew what he was thinking... she knew he was thinking about the day which turned his life... but this very day reminds manvi of the mistake she did and makes her feel more guilty... and everytime her guilts start burdening and pressurizing her, a smile on kasak's face enlighten her mood and spirit. the happiness on kasak's face makes her realise that she is given a lot for this family... she is doing everything she could have done... yes she did a mistake, but it doesnt mean she hasnt repaid for it... she has done a lot... she has sidelined her dreams and aspirations... she hasnt worked on her relationship which could have given her everything she ever dreamnt of... rishabh was the perfect guy for her... he gave her everything... expensive gifts, immense deep love, outings, lavish lifestyle and what not... but after kasak came in her life, she could only see kasak... some people might name her care and love as her guilt but it wasnt like this... initially she took care of kasak because of her guilt of breaking a family, of being the cause behind maya's death... but as time passed, she genuinely got attached to kasak and started loving her as her own daughter... she was her little princess... loving kasak made her come close to virat and explore her hidden feelings... kasak brought her close to virat and his life which was once only a dream for manvi to be a part of... he was her first crush, and soon the circumstances turned her crush into love... she somehow realised that she love virat and staying away from virat would hurt her... kasak was the only reason that made her realise that she loves virat or maybe it was another way round... did she love kasak only because she is virat's daughter... because she is a part of him... manvi has no idea about this but she knows one thing that in this whole process she forgot about rishabh and ignored him and his love... if she hadnt ignored rishabh, he would have never cheated on her because she was the only thing he ever wanted... manvi knew that rishabh really loved her and he would never ever cheat on her... but he did... he did it may be because she only pushed him away those days... she didnt give him his share of love and attention, instead she n her whole time, love and attention was for virat and kasak...

manvi : i know what you are thinking...

virat : i am not thinking anything...

manvi : why do you always behave strange on this day every year...??? why damn it...?? (suddenly losing all her calm)

virat : manvi please... gimme some time...

manvi : i am giving you time from the last three years...

virat : ohh thank u soo much for that... i really appreciate it...

manvi : virat dont talk to me like that... its hurts...

virat : try to understand... cmon i lost maya this day... i lost my wife god damn it

manvi : then what am i...?? a substitute...??

virat : manvi i love you... i really do but that doesnt mean that i dont even have the right to think about maya or miss her...

manvi : virat i am sorry... main tumse bahut pyaar karti hoon na shayad isliye... i am also sorry for maya... but i love you jaan...

virat : i know... i am just emotional today thinking how everything changed...

manvi : hmmm... i understand... but please dont shed a single tear in front of kasu... its her birthday virat...

virat : dont worry... her happiness is of utmost importance... manvi please... please never feel ignored or left out... please... you are my everything manvi... i am living only because of you...

manvi : i love you too... but now smile for me... please atleast try na... oh my god...!!!!

virat : kya hua...???

manvi : its 11 : 55 pm... get up my dear husband... lets go n wish kasak...

virat : she must be sleeping manvi... we will wish her in the morning...

manvi : no... we will wish her right now... cmon... it would be fun...

virat : okk...

manvi slowly opened the door of kasak's room asking virat to follow her. manvi went near kasak and kissed her forehead and suddenly kasak jumped and hugged manvi which scared both virat and manvi...

kasak : mummmaaa...

manvi : hooo... you were not sleeping, were you...???

virat : ofcourse she wasnt... u scared us beti...

kasak : haha...

manvi broke the hug and made kasak sit in her lap and kissed her forehead.

manvi : happy birthday my princess... may god bless you baby... mumma loves you soo much...

virat : daddy also loves you... and now come to me my doll...

kasak got up and ran to virat who picked her up in his arms and kissed her cheek... while manvi got up and went out of the room...

virat : wish u a very happy birthday jaana... and not only mumma... your daddy also loves you and we got many gifts for u...

kasak : thank u dad... gifts...??

manvi : gifts toh mumma k paas hai aur baby papa ke godi mein hai... (coming inside and standing close to virat and kasak)

kasak : main aa ri hoon na mumma...

manvi ; come to me my jaana... and here is your gift... (holding the gift in her hands) see mumma papa brought a beautiful doll house for you...

kasak : doll house... woww...

virat : yes... you wanted it, right...??

kasak : yes yes... ab hum sab doll se khelenge... yes... (almost like annoucing a verdict)

vikram : no...

the trio turned around and saw vanshika and vikram standing at the doorstep with gift and balloons in their hands...

kasak : daadu please...

vanshika : aww my poor baby... daadu khelne do na apni poti (grand-daughter) ko

vikram : daadi dont spoil my image... arrey how will you play with the doll house when daddu brought more interseting gifts for u...

kasak : sachi daadu...???

vikram: come here first...

kasak ran to vikram hearing two words " more gifts "

vikram : happy birthday my grand child... and gift chahie na...??

kasak : yes daadu... gifts do na...

virat : bhookhi kahin ki...

vanshika/ manvi : shut up virat...

vikram ignored them all and went out of the room holding kasak's hand who was busy glaring at virat...

vikram : all this is for you...

kasak : daadu... wowww... cycle... and teddy bear... yeh game me mere liye hai...

vikram : all of this is for you...

kasak : thank you daddu... pick me na daadu...

vikram picked kasak in his arms and she kissed his cheek...

vikram : now lets go inside... ek aur gift bhi hai...

kasak : ek aur...??

scene shift

vanshika : and this is from me your dad...

virat : mom ye... manvi say something na...

manvi : MIL its so much... virat is right... there is no need of this gold chain...

vikram : this is not for you both... its for kasak...

vanshika : yes... and DIL just take it now...

manvi : okk MIL... and its beautiful... thank you maa papaji...

virat : hmm... its beautiful... thanks...

vanshika : okk now we all should sleep... chale vikram...??

vikram : yes... okk you three also sleep... bye goodnight...

virman : goodnight mom dad...

manvi : kasu... cmon sweetie... now sleep... tomorrow you have to go to school also...

kasak : mumma... daadu bought a teddy beal, a cycle, and games for me... when will we play with it...??

virat : goodnight my princess... manvi make her go to bed.. i am waiting...

manvi : okkk... cmon lets sleep...

manvi put kasak to bed and lied with her in the blanket...

manvi : is my baby happy now...???

kasak : yes mumma...

manvi : apko pta hai, daadi daadu loves so much...

kasak : n mumma...??

manvi : mumma loves you so much... just like the small diamonds in the sky...

kasak : mumma wo diamond nahi stars hote hain...

manvi : aww... mumma ko pta hi nahi tha... meri jaanu toh bahut intelligent ho gai...

kasak : haan aur kya... hehe...

manvi : naughty...

kasak : mumma kal hum chocolate cake cut karenge na...

manvi : yes baby...

kasak : aur kal nain bhi ayegi na...

manvi : yes...

kasak : aur naani naanu...??

manvi : wo bhi ayenge... (they will also come)

kasak : aur bua and chachu...??

manvi : they will also come... but how come you are asking suddenly about pragati bua...???

kasak : arrey they will also bring gifts na...

manvi : haaye ye ladki bhi na... gifts ke liye party rakh rahe hain...

kasak : haha...

manvi : chalo now no more hehe... go off to sleep...

kasak : okkk... my eyes are closed... see...

manvi : oh yes they are... chalo now think about...about... about...

kasak : mumma...

manvi : woww... yes think about mumma and kasu... what are we doing kasu...???

kasak : playing in the park...

manvi : woww... then there must be rides also...

kasak : yes... four four...

manvi : no... see carefully there are five... not four...

kasak : no mumma... one.. two.. three... four... five ni hai...??

manvi : it is there... carefully see... concentrate... keep quiet and think about it...

after 10 minutes...

manvi kissed her forehead and carefully closed the door...

scene shifts

manvi entered the room and saw that virat was already sleeping. manvi went to bed and cuddled with him taking his arm and resting her head on it... getting into his protective embrace to enjoy the beautiful journey to dream world. virat smiled while sleeping and tightened his hold on manvi pulling her closer.

CONTINUED BELOW...

Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago

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