VIRMAN FF || DMG # 3 || TEASER Pg 128 - Page 79

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsm update !!!!! Luv manvi and kasak bond !!!!!!! Also like hot-hot virman !!!!!!!! Wndrful wrk ... Like rishab n naina con. !!!!!! Totlly awsm wrk ...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anvyagnihotri

👏congo...dear...👏




For what sweetheart... 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
PLzz pm me when update the next part naina.. plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
Please please please update soon nannu di!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Will try to update the chapter soon guys...
Till then please cooperate with me...


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Naina
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Posted: 11 years ago
Doordarshan!!!!!😆***Kripya Sahyog Karein**** 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: abbay

Doordarshan!!!!!😆***Kripya Sahyog Karein****



Exactly...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome teaser
waiting eagerly for the update
hope virman sort out the issues btw them
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Posted: 11 years ago
CHAPTER 36
~~ bas tum tak
manvi : now is my baby happy...???
kasak : very happy... n mumma...??
manvi : mumma is happy because her baby is happy...
kasak : woww...
manvi drove back to home just to find naina waiting for her at her place.
vanshika : see manvi is also back...
manvi : nainu...
naina : hiii mannu... i was missing you that why...
kasak : aur mujhe...??
naina : tumko bhi meri cupcuke...
manvi : mom main aur naina room mein...
vanshika : yes yes go...
kasak : aur main bua ke paas jaun...??
vanshika : haan... jao... (pulling kasak's cheek)
kasak : ouch dadi... its hurts...
vanshika : hehe... go now...
scene shifts
kasak : bua...
pragati : dont talk to me...
kasak : why...??

pragati : akele akele ghumi ghumi gaye na aap...
kasak : alley aap ghar pe ni the na... main kya karti...
pragati : mujhe phone kyun ni kia... bolo...??
kasak : mujhe number thodi aata hai... mujhe toh house ka number aata hai bas...
pragati : accha...?? jhoothi...
kasak : no jhootha joota... sachhi...
pragati : okk... par next time take me also...
kasak : woh toh dad se puchna padega... wo lekar jaate hai kahin bhi ghumane...
pragati : matlab mumma ghumi nahi leke jaati...
(enjoying teasing kasak)
kasak : nahi... mumma papa se darti hai na... is liye...
pragati : accha... you naughty girl...
kasak : i am a cute girl... meri teacher ne bhi kaha tha bua...
pragati : ok ok... cute girl...
scene shifts
naina : that reeta aunty is so irritating...
manvi : who reeta aunty...???
naina : mere hone pati dev ki maasi hai...
manvi : haha... ohh i see... but what heppened...???
naina : she had contacted pragati and uski aur meri jaan khaa li...
pragati : i swear...
naina : haha... come come... so manvi... she is my bridal outfit designer...
pragati : do i have to call you ma'am here also...??? (winking at naina)
naina : no... please... but pragati seriously tell me wasnt she just too irritating...??
pragati : she was... wish i never said yes... but on second thoughts, how do you stand that sugar coated candy...???
naina : haaye re meri kismat...
manvi : you two are just
pragati : wonderful... right bhabhi...??
naina : right... i.. i mean whats the need to ask mannu... main keh rahi hoon na...
manvi : jo nainu ne bol diya... so bol diya... (winking at pragati)
pragati : ok ok... i am new this mannu nainu thing na... may be thats why...
naina : never mind... you can join us pragu...
pragati : ohh thank you...
manvi : no thank you nanad ji... only fun unlimited...
"main kya karun...??? you talk to mumma " kasak came inside talking on the phone.
naina : tumhare boyfriend ka phone hai kasu...??
manvi : shut up nain... kaun hai baby...???
kasak : dad...
pragati : haaye...!!!!
manvi : hello...
virat : manvi note mila..??
manvi : hmm...
virat : tum mujhse gussa ho...??
manvi : ab nahi... (naina and pragati were teasing manvi)
virat : i love you...
manvi : hmmm...
virat : kya hmm...??? maaf nahi kia toh bta do...
manvi : kar dia yaar... virat lets talk after sometime...
virat : manvi cmon yaar... i said i am sorry...
manvi : virat try to understand... i will call you back...
virat : arrey but why...???
naina snatched the phone and said "i love you too"
virat : ohhh... naina maiya padhari hui hai...
naina : yup... now will you let me talk to my mannu... she is yours only so you can talk to her whole day...
virat : okk... enjoy... bye...
naina : bye...
naina disconnected the phone and saw kasak standing with her hands on her hips...
manvi : kya hua kasak...??
kasak : nain...
naina : yes...
kasak : nain ne mere papa ko i love you bola mumma...
manvi : baby its okkk...
kasak : arrey mumma aise kisi ko i love you nahi kehte...
manvi : kasu -
naina : i agree... aise i love you nahi kehte... i am sorry my cupcake...
kasak : okk... i am going... mujhe colouring karni hai...
manvi : okk go maate...
scene shift
swamini : why dont you have tea with us beta...??
naina : no aunty... actually i have to go...
swamini : bolo na manvi kuch...

manvi : nainu stay for sometime plz...
naina : okk... but...
swamini : but what...???
naina : but we kids will make tea... mannu, pragu n i...
vanshika : three people to make 5 cups of tea... naina...
manvi : M.I.L me n pragu will only stand n entertain nainu... she alone will make tea..
swamini : let them bhabhi...
vanshika : okk...
naina : aunty before i forget you all have to come tomorrow... swamini aunty you too n pragu toh is my designer now so she will be there only...
pragati : yeah sure but bhai nahi aa paega...
naina : no problem...
all the girls prepared tea and brought it in the hall... everyone was busy chit chatting when the door bell rang...
manvi : i will go and see it...
kasak : kaun aaya...?? kaun aaya...?? (came running with a crayon in her hands)
manvi : come with mumma...
kasak : chachu...
mohit : kasuuu...
manvi smiled at mohit and he entered picking kasak in his arms.
kasak : chachu aaj na maine dinosaur bnaya...
mohit : kyun...??? you should have drawn a witch...
kasak : witch... no no no... i will get scared... i am a small baby na...
swamini : aaj jaldi...??
mohit : hmm... i have to meet shikha tonight...
manvi : oye hoye...
pragati : chalo lagta hai meri ek aur bhabhi jaldi hi aa jaegi...
vanshika : bilkul...
mohit : i am going to my room... bye...
manvi : mohit bhaiya will you have tea...??
mohit : no bhabhi thank you...
naina : main chalti hoon mannu... sab wait kar rahe honge...
manvi : okk...
naina hugged and greeted everyone before leaving and just then kasak said " nain... meri kissey...??"
naina : come here then...
kasak : no... you come na nain...
naina went to mohit who was holding kasak in his arms, and kissed kasak and smiled at mohit who didnt seem to notice or he ignored it.
scene shifts
kasak : witch kaise draw karte hain...???
mohit was lost and didnt seem to hear what kasak was saying to him from last 15 minutes...
kasak : chachu... (poking him with a sketch pen)
mohit : ouch...
kasak : kaise draw karte hai witch...??? drawing book mein nahi hai...
mohit : draw a fish then...
kasak : maine draw kar li fish to...
mohit : frog...???
kasak : okkk...

manvi came to take kasak when she saw mohit lost somewhere and it was written on his face that he was upset about something...
manvi : mohit bhaiya... virat ne toh kaha tha ki aap log kal milenge...
mohit : bhabhi wo... wo kal kuch kaam hai...
manvi : sunday ko...?? okk never mind, that means you can join us tomorrow... right...??
mohit : join where...???
manvi : naina ki engagement hai na...
mohit : i would surely join you guys if i get free on time...
manvi : okk... come kasu... let chachu get ready...
kasak : okkk...
at night
11 am
manvi was looking at virat and was hell angry on him, she wanted to pull all his hair right now but didnt think of doing anything like it because she would never want to have a bald husband...

manvi : are you seriously apologetic...???
virat : yes... i have aplogised for like 20 times now...
manvi : but you never made it up with me...
virat : excuse me...
manvi : i mean no patch up and all... really...?? i mean a couple kiss and make up... but here i am watching this cartoon channel and you are working on this laptop...
virat : patch up ho gya tha phone pe... and what do you exactly want now...??
manvi : okkk... atleast hug me once...
virat : alley come here my baby...
manvi : coming baby... (winking at him)
manvi went to the the couch and took away the laptop and sat on virat's lap and hugged him...
manvi : i love you...
virat : love you too but i am still sorry for...
manvi : why are you sorry...?? i am sorry... mujhe tumhe gussa hona ka chance hi nahi dena chahie tha...
virat : nahi manvi... i sort of over reacted yaar...
manvi : no... that wasnt over reaction... you were jealous...
virat : okkk i was... but i have a right to be jealous... dont i...??
manvi : hehe... you have all the rights... but on a serious note, i want to confess something...
virat : finally...
manvi told virat that she met rishabh in the parking the day before and also that madhu created the differences between her n rishabh and how she ended up hurting rishabh...
manvi : but you dont have to feel sorry virat...
virat : manvi its because of me that -
manvi : no... its not... we were destined to be together... but that doesnt mean i dont feel bad for rishabh... i do feel bad and thats why i pray for him... i hope he gets someone better in his life...
virat : but if i wasnt in your lives, it all would have been so simple... dont you think so...??
manvi : no i dont think so... i would have never been happy with rishabh because i have realised that my happiness lies with you and thinking about my lfe without kasak, just seems impossible...
virat : i love you manvi... glad i found you... so i should say you found me...
manvi : i love you too... nothing can ever separate us... trust me...
virat : i trust you...
1 am
virat : what are we doing here...???
manvi : we are waiting for mohit... i want to know what happened...
virat : its their personal affair... why would he tell you...??
manvi : main bhabhi hoon...
virat : toh...???
manvi : toh kya...??? mera right banta hai...
virat : manvi kyun bechare bacche ko tang karna chahti ho...??
manvi : maine kya kia...???
virat : forget it... mera bhai bahut bhola hai... so plzz...
manvi : thats why i am concerned about him... tum jyada smart mat bano virat...
virat : manvi for god sake why are we hiding in the hall... lets go to our room...
manvi : okk... subah puch lungi...
virat : thank god... chalo...
next day
10 am

virat : kal late ho gya bhai tu...???
mohit : woh.. woh actually the car broke down...
manvi : had to be... 😳
mohit : what...???
pragati : matlab date pe der toh ho hi jaati hai...
kasak was looking at everyone unable to get why they were giggling and saying random things...
vanshika : bas ab mat tang karo usko aur...
swamini : kaisi lagi ladki...?? pasand hai...???
mohit : haan...
virat : itni jaldi kya hai... 😉
mohit : intezaar karke bhi kai baari haath khali reh jaate hain...
pragati : pyaar mein philosophy... thoda strange hai... nahi...???
manvi looked at virat signalling him whats the matter...
virat : chalo happy time is here again... bua ab shadi ki baat karlo jaldi se...
swamini : yes... yes virat...
pragati : congratz bhai...
mohit : thank you... (expressionless)
manvi : ab main bhi jethani ban jaungi... wow...
virat : promotion ho gya tumhara toh...
manvi : yes and all thanks to you mohit bhaiya...
mohit smiled at manvi...
virat : mohit come with me dude...
mohit : hmm...
kasak : ye kya ho raha tha... chachu shadi kar rahe hai kya...???
manvi : yes honey... chachu getting married...
kasak : fir toh hum bahut saari shopping karenge...
pragati : yes...

scene shifts
virat : mohit...
mohit : jee bhai...
virat : i have always been a friend to you first... right...???
mohit : yes...
virat : then why cant you share your problem with me...??
mohit : what problem bhai... i am fine...
virat : you are not happy... something is there in your heart which is hurting you...

mohit : there is love and it hurts like hell... (admitting the truth)
virat : love... but do you know why its hurts...??
mohit : it hurts because my whole life was about her, what if her whole life wasn't all about me...
virat : you really love her... dont you...???
mohit : but what difference would it ever make... nothing would change... neither my life nor the pain i feel every moment...
virat : so thats why you are too eager to get married to a girl you have barely met twice...???
mohit : i knew her for around 2 years... i fell in love with her everytime i met her... everytime i talked to her...

virat : you could have atleast told anyone of us about all this... why are you killing yourself mohit...???
mohit : what am i suppose to do...??? what should i have done bhai...??? you tell me what to do when the one person i wanted comfort from the most is the one who caused this pain...?? how can i still want so desperately for her to run into my embrace and kiss me taking all this pain away but at the same time also want so much for her to leave me alone...
virat : because you still love her... dont do this to yourself mohit... go get your love dude... you will die without her... i can see it in your eyes...
mohit : i died the moment i saw her walk past me knowing that she is going for ever... i still love her with all that i have even though she is not mine... not because i am fool... its simply because the love she gave me once still makes me smile...
virat hugged mohit in order to soothe him.. to decrease the pain he was going through...
virat : everything will be fine... you will be okkk... you will be happy again... trust me...
mohit : hmmm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow awesome update yaar
loved the patch up scene between virman






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