DMG #4 || VIRMAN FF || CHAP 55 PG 134

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Posted: 12 years ago

#661

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break laga break already 8 😲😲😲😲😲 updates ho gyi hai mere comments k liye jaan ly gi kya meri

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kalpana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#662

awesome updates

loved it

felt bad for maanvi

virat and kasak's phone convo was cute

loved last part

plz cont soon

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naina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#663

Originally posted by: jia123sagar
awesome updates
loved it
felt bad for maanvi
virat and kasak's phone convo was cute
loved last part
plz cont soon
thanks for the pm

thank u jia... Will b continuing soon...

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saemeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#664

superb updates. .feeling bad for manvi. .cont soon. .

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Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#665

Fantastic Naina..!!

Loved how u have potrayed Maanvi's turmoil of craving of a child and very very realiztic...as a person behaves normal but theres ths blankness in them which is clearly seen when left alone..

And Vanshika ma did notice which is very sweet and taken plce of her mother even if she hasnt mentioned abt her desire of having a child..Every one has to pay for their mistake...and Maanvi is doin that...she just have to be pateint ..thats what shows the way u have conceived really well and in the end she got her peace of mind through Virat..which is clear that what ever happens in future he wouldn't leave her side...heat of moment can pull them apart but then to only strengthen the relation..!

And Naina has moved on finally..this is different side which is again the practical side of Love..when some 1 says we cant live without a person..well every 1 can stay without a person..if its destined it would happen or otherwise wise would be let it go..I know i have a general POV, but Naina..this is wahat i could think after reading..sorry if u din like..But i Loved the Update...Thanks for 2 Updates back to back...Superb..!!

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naina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#666

next update coming within an hour...

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naina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#667

This is the 50th update of DMG... 😃 you guys have no idea what i am feeling right now... it feels so special... 😃 and my heartiest thanks to all of you and my special thanks to my dear friend YUSHNA...🤗

and now to my baby aka shivali... you asked mumma to dedicate a chapter to you.. remember...??? i didnt dedicate it then because i wanted to dedicate the 50th chapter to you... SO THIS ONE IS FOR YOU... 😃

and i know my mishu will ask me where is here huggie n kissey... so here it is 🤗... I LUV U MISHU ❤️ and MINU FOREVER...

CHAPTER 50

~~ Har Kisi Ko Nahi Milta...

manvi was confused what to do... she had made up her mind to tell virat everything... but even on the thought of telling virat the truth behind maya's sudden demise was eating her up... she was scared for only one thing and that was living without kasak and virat... she cant live without her husband and her daughter... and what her little world gets shattered with this harsh ugly truth... but she had to do it... it was now or never... her thought process forced her to take her incapability to concieve a baby as a punishment for her deeds... she was apparently thinking that once she tells virat everything, god would bestow his blessing on them and she would have a baby... their baby... virat's and her baby...

manvi : this is right... i will tell virat but not now... not now... i am scared... i have to mentally prepare myself for anything that comes my way... i have to be strong enough to face anything and everything... because anything in the world would not hurt me except one thing that i fear and that is being hated by virat and staying away from kasak...

manvi wiped her tears and her vision cleared and looked at the mirror to see an exact copy of hers. manvi stared at her image... image of the real manvi... manvi chaudhary...

manvi (exact copy) : so you are hell bent on destroying everything...??? cmon you nutshell... stop right there...
manvi : so what should i do...??
manvi (exact copy) : let things go the way they are... and why...?? why the hell are you begging like this...??? you want a baby... right...??? go adopt one...
manvi : what are you saying...?? i cant... i want my own baby... virat aur mera baccha...
manvi (exact copy) : what the hell manvi...??? have you lost it...?? kya karogi ek bacche ka jab tumse tumhara sab kuch cheen jaega...???
manvi : kuch nahi hoga... virat loves me...
manvi (exact copy) : pyaar toh usne maya se bhi kia tha... (arms crossed against her chest)
manvi : woh mujhse sachha pyaar karta hai...
manvi (exact copy) : saccha pyaar... kuch nahi hota aisa iss duniya mein honey...
manvi : hota hai... pyaar se bda koi aur sach nahi hai... virat ne kaha tha mujhse... humara pyaar sabse bda sach hai...
manvi (exact copy) : kehne ko toh tumne rishabh ko bhi kaha tha ke tum usko chahti ho... that you love him... what about that...???
manvi : why is rishabh being dragged into all this...??
manvi (exact copy) : you dragged him... because he loves you, he became a part of all this... you complicated everything... YOU...
manvi : maine kuch nahi kia... kuch nahi... (nodding her head in negative)
manvi (exact copy) : you did it... and if the truth comes out... what will you do...?? you will beg for forgiveness... right...???
manvi : virat will understand me... he wouldnt leave me... i know that...
manvi (exact copy) : you know nothing... in one moment your world changed upside down and who knows when and in how much time your world gets crashed... okk lets dont think about you... think of kasak... you have spoiled her... she is addicted to it... uska kya..?
manvi : umm... i love kasak...
manvi (exact copy) : what will happen to that innocent soul if she loses her mother again... when she lost maya, she had you but what if she loses you...

manvi again broke into tears... she knows that without her, kasak wouldnt be able to survive as she is soo much attached to manvi that spending few minutes without her, is also difficult for kasak...

manvi was standing at a crossroad... she had to chose between the two roads that were in front of her... one road will save her world, her happiness, her child and the other one would only and only lead to destruction and will test their love... what is she to do...?? her next step would decide their future... a wrong step and their lives will be devastated... whatever road she choses, she will be at the losing end... she will lose no matter what and nothing in the world would ever be able to account the loss... never will she be able to get her life back... she will be finished and she wouldnt be alone this time... her family, her husband, her daughter everything would be finished and destroyed with her...

on the other side also, life was testing someone's love and destiny was ready to decide their future...

naina was angry on mohit for being so selfish and rude and ignorance from the girl mohit loved beyond limit hurted him so badly that in anger he took a project and asked the company to send him for that project. naina wasnt aware of mohit going abroad and thought that he has successfully pissed her off and stood against her... yes she loved him but that doesnt mean she will take any sort of shit... she wont... she is not forced by the circumstances to listen to him or anything like that... she have lived like a free bird and she will only rule her life... she will give a chance to maan... she will marry the guy who loves her not the guy whom she loved... if for once mohit stood with her and understood her decision, she would have given up her whole life for him... but not now... she is not like her bestfriend manvi who takes important decision in an emotional state... she unlike manvi calms herself down, analyse situations, and then take a sensible decision... and yes she has decided... she will give love another chance...

while manvi was too lost in her own problems, that she didnt notice that virat was too worried for her... he wouldnt sleep at nights and look at manvi... she would sometimes sweat at nights and hug him tightly... he knew something was troubling her but he wanted manvi to herself come to him and share her problem with him... he didnt want to force her to share things with him... sometimes he would feel he is too far away from her that she doesnt considers him worthy of sharing her secret... he felt as if he was only physically close to her and not in the real terms... did he fail as a husband was the question that used to haunt him all day... but he found no answer... no answer at all...

mohit was far away from delhi but his heart wasnt with him... it was still with naina... he loves her... he misses her... he wants her... he wants her so badly that if he loses her he will destroy everything...

mohit : i cant live without you naina... i failed naina... i failed again... call me once nain... call me once and i will come back to you... i will apologise... i will make you believe in our love all over again... i will stand by you but ask me to return once... ek baar awaaz dedo naina... bas ek baar...

rishabh was looking for naina in the house when he bumped into his not so dearest wife...
rishabh : get away...
madhu : you get away... dont piss me off early in the morning...
rishabh : you have already pissed me off sweetheart...
madhu : arghh...
madhu ignored rishabh and was about to walk past her when rishabh called her...
rishabh : madhu...
madhu : bolo kya bolna hai...
rishabh : have you seen naina...?? she isnt around...
madhu : i rarely see you my dear husband... so seeing your sister...
rishabh : get lost...

rishabh angrily walked off and again dialled naina's number but it was switched off for some reason...
rishabh : dont do anything wrong nainu... dont... ohh god... manvi... yes manvi...
rishabh immediately called manvi without thinking anything... he was just worried about his sister at the moment...
manvi : hello...
rishabh : manvi... manvi naina... naina...
manvi : rishabh... naina what...??
rishabh : i cant find her manvi... her mobile is also switched off...
manvi : what...?? ohh god... ye ladki bhi na... you dont worry rishabh... battery dead ho gayi hogi usko mobile ki...
rishabh : i dont get a good feeling manvi... you know what i mean... help me please...
manvi : rishabh i am sorry... i am myself struck up in problems...
rishabh : cmon you must be kidding... its not for me manvi... help me please...
manvi : what can i do rishabh...?? what...??
rishabh : i dont know... i need your support manvi...
manvi : u go and i will also go n look for her...
rishabh : hmm...

manvi and rishabh looked for naina and unable to find her they met at a place... rishabh was broken and manvi consoled him as a friend...
manvi : rishabh...
rishabh : all i have is naina... i cant lose her manvi...
rishabh needed support and so did manvi so she hugged him...
manvi : nothing will happen to her... you are there for her... i am there for her...
rishabh : manvi... my little sister... i love naina so much... i hurted her...
manvi : no you didnt... you cant... you cant hurt her...
rishabh : i did manvi...
manvi : no... shhh... (rubbing his back)
rishabh : what if she does anything wrong...?? (he broke the hug and held her hand)
manvi : no... she isnt weak... she is way too stronger than us...
rishabh : manvi i... i forced her to forget her love and destiny forced her to be with maan...
manvi : you should have stopped her then and there only...
rishabh : manvi there is a lot more to the story...
manvi : its not important right now...
rishabh : you are right... thanks manvi...
manvi : you dont need to thank me rishabh...

virat witnessed this scene from far away and misinterpreted it... he saw rishabh and manvi talking about something serious and then they hugged each other and as they broke the hug, rishabh held her hand and surprisingly she didnt object to it and continued talking to him and now they were smiling... he felt like going right now and punching rishabh so hard but she stopped thinking that he would make that mistake again and would wait for manvi to clear the air between them... she would come to him and tell him about this incidence... but if she doesnt, he dont know what will he do...

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Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago

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naina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#668

Originally posted by: Syed695
Fantastic Naina..!! thank u soo much 😃
Loved how u have potrayed Maanvi's turmoil of craving of a child and very very realiztic... aww... thanks again as a person behaves normal but theres ths blankness in them which is clearly seen when left alone..
And Vanshika ma did notice which is very sweet and taken plce of her mother even if she hasnt mentioned abt her desire of having a child..Every one has to pay for their mistake...and Maanvi is doin that...she just have to be pateint ..thats what shows the way u have conceived really well and in the end she got her peace of mind through Virat..which is clear that what ever happens in future he wouldn't leave her side...heat of moment can pull them apart but then to only strengthen the relation..! exactly... every word u typed is just too perfect and apt... 👏

And Naina has moved on finally..this is different side which is again the practical side of Love.. yup... thats what i am trying to show... two parallel love stories with two diff approaches 😉 😳 when some 1 says we cant live without a person..well every 1 can stay without a person.. thats what i believe in.... 😊 if its destined it would happen or otherwise wise would be let it go..I know i have a general POV, but Naina..this is wahat i could think after reading..sorry if u din like.. yes i didnt like it... i ❤️ it But i Loved the Update...Thanks for 2 Updates back to back...Superb..!!

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naina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#669

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon
Hello ji naina jiii.. kaise hai aap ?? i am good lara ji... wat abt u...??
Ayee haaye ... double updates... eeeksss... am toh happy beyond limits... make me also happy someday 😉

But what is happening with manvi yaar!!
She is slowly breaking down like this..
She in in deppression and some kind of guilt is
also eating her up from inside and that is connected to
the maya fiasco... damn...
In this way I am afraid she will soon herself spill out
that little yet khatarnak secret of maya's death tp virat...
Mitali already know about it and I am toh very much eager to
read the awaited drama of revealation...
Hope virat trust her, trust their love...
like he said ...
" Sabse bara hamara pyar hai.. baki sab jhut "

Only time will tell what fate has in store for these souls. you yourself answered every question of yours... what can i say now 😳

There naina- mohit- maan.. this triange love story is
also getting very interesting.. have some mercy on them
too naina ji... we will see lara ji

Kasak and all her cute talks...
Haaiii.. nazar naa lage isse kisiki.
Loved the way she said to manvi...
make bhi nahi kiya... muaaahhh !!!
Then this cutipie called virat and successfully
annoyed her adorable dad too... aaye haaye...
" Kismat khul gaya mera.. "
Bechara socha ki uske bibi nei fianally usse yaad ki... but .. armmm
chalo chodo...

Then kasu baby also irritated vanshika.. haa haa
" Mujhe maaf karo "
(rofling.. lolz)

OK .. I guess aap paak chuke hongi... nahi nahi... next time aur jyada pakana... it will make my day even more special 😃 😃
Tada.. take care
Will be eagerly waiting for your next updts and
congratulations in advance for your 50th chapter... thank u
Almost Tandulkar baan gayi hai tu... wahh wahhh !! haaye... best compliment ever... ❤️

Thanks a lot for the pms...
Will pakao you soon again when I am in mood...
till then aapni dimag thanda karlei... haa haa... kar lungi... try karti hoon... 😆

( P.S. _____ mere threads kei saare res unres kardijiye jiii, aur sabar nahi hota... ) kuch unres toh main jaan ke nahi kie... i was angry on you... itna short updt diya tha tune be intehaan ka...

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naina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#670

Originally posted by: nahaananya
amazing update yaar thank u
i love kasak sooo much 😳 me too...
she is such a sweetheart
and manvi is feeling really insecured..😲😲...
i hope the truth is not tooo far
neways want to seee junior virman 😃 hope so... fingers crossed...
thnkx fr d pm nainaaa ur welcome swthrt
chal continue soon
love ya luv u too...
anne