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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: GOOGLU

THANX ALOT DEAR:::))))

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update hope the cold tiff betwn virman end soon
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awesome update hope the cold tiff betwn virman end soon




It has just begun 😳
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Wohi toh 😉
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CHAPTER 44
~~ O Re Khuda
next morning was another usual day. manvi was busy in getting kasak ready for school while virat was thinking how to talk to manvi.
manvi : now my princess is ready... you stay here only kasu... i will be back honey...
kasak : ok mumma...
manvi left kasak's room and virat came in.
virat : good morning meri rajkumari...
kasak : good morning dad...
virat : kasak i have a plan...
kasak : plan...?? no no you will scold me later...
virat : no my jaan... i love you baby...
kasak : but kal you got angry on me... aapne mujhe daanta tha...
virat : i am sorry for that... ab toh sunlo...
kasak : bolo...
virat : why dont you ask manvi to come with us to school...???
kasak : kyun...?? morning mein toh hum jaate hain na akele...
virat : haan wohi toh aaj mumma ko bhi leke chalte hain...
kasak : okk.. okk...
(face beaming with happiness)
virat : now i am going... convince your mommy... okkk..??
kasak : okk...
manvi returns with a glass of milk in her hands.
manvi : mele baby ka milk...
kasak : mujhe school nahi jaana... (i dont want to go to school)
manvi : why...??? cmon now my daughter will go to school...
kasak : come with me na mumma...
manvi : dad jaa rahe hain na kasu...
kasak : no you also come na mumma... please...
manvi : okk... anything for you my jaan...
kasak : fir go n change...
manvi : isme kya problem hai kasak...??
kasak : aaj green day hai...
manvi : ye kisne kaha...??
kasak : mumma ke baby ne...
manvi : okk... mumma abhi change karke aayi... you go n eat till then...
kasak : mere cornflakes hai na...
manvi : yes...
kasak went out and sat beside vanshika while manvi went to change.
virat raised his eye brow and asked kasak what happened... kasak blinked both of her eyes in an attempt to wink and smiled.
vanshika : where is manvi...???
vikram : must be coming...
kasak : mumma mere saath school chalegi... mumma dad dono...
virat : accha... okk...
manvi came down and made kasak complete her breakfast.
after dropping kasak to school
manvi : why have you stopped the car...??
virat : i want to talk to you manvi... (getting out of the car)
manvi : about what virat...?? (though she knows what he wants to talk about)
virat : about... about what happened yesterday... (opening the door of the car for her)
manvi : i dont want to talk about that... lets go home... (remained sitting on the seat)
virat : we need to talk manvi... i apologise... i am sorry...
manvi : what are you sorry about virat...?? exactly what...?? yesterday whatever happened it scared me and i got hurt...
virat : i know baby... i know but -
manvi : yesterday kasak asked about maya... i understand kasak has a right to know about maya but not like this... she is too young to understand all this virat...
virat : i understand manvi... and i agree with whatever you are saying... its just that mom suddenly said that maya wouldnt have taken care of kasak the way you take of care... and i didnt like it... may be it was then that kasak heard our conversation.

manvi : virat i am her mother... i love kasak more than anything... you know it na.. i love kasu so much that i even thought of never having our child... (getting out of the car)
virat : i know jaan and i love you soo very much to ever doubt on you... you would never do anything that would hurt me or kasak... tum humari saanse ho manvi... humari zarurat...
manvi : please ab kabhi kasak ke saamne...
virat : i promise... maya ka naam kasak ke saamne kabhi nahi ayega unless n untill you want it...

manvi : i love you... (she hugged virat) love you soo much...
virat : i love you too... please mujhse naraaz mat raha karo manvi... i can handle anything but not this...
manvi : okk ab naraaz nahi rahungi... but you could have cooled me down in a minute like you did that day...
virat : which day...???
manvi : the day when we had an argument days before kasak's birthday...

virat remembered the day when he told manvi that he wants to have a baby with her and then how he promised her that he would kill that wish of his.
virat : i didnt do anything that day manvi... sirf sorry hi toh kaha tha...
manvi broke the hug and looked at virat with a sweet smile on her lips.
manvi : i really loved those bouquets... that was soo cute... pehle nahi kaha kyunki time nahi mila...
virat : which bouquets are you talking about...?? i am not getting anything...
manvi : virat you sent me two bouquets back to back that day... one of them with a sorry tag and other with i love you tag...
virat : khisak gayi hai kya... maine koi flowers nahi bheje the... i swear...

manvi now knew who might have sent those bouquets and whispered " rishabh... "
virat's grip on manvi became loose as he heard manvi whispering rishabh's name. he left manvi and sat on the driver seat and started the car. manvi get in the car still numb thinking that it was purposely done by rishabh that day as it was his old habit of sending her flowers.
manvi : how didnt i notice it...?? oh my god... he always used to send me bouquets... he was back in town at that time... virat...
virat was really not liking this feeling of rishabh entering their happy life and he silently kept on driving...
manvi looked at virat but no reaction from his side irked manvi...
manvi : i am talking to you god damnit...
virat : what am i suppose to say in all this...??? its between you n him...
manvi : between him n i... what do u mean...??
virat : i mean nothing...
manvi : are you doubting on me...???
virat : no i am not...
manvi : virat trust me i have nothing to do with rishabh now...

virat : i never said anything like that manvi...
manvi : are you by chance concerned why that guy sent flowers to your wife...??
virat : you have no idea that i want to kill him right now...
manvi : virat stop saying such stuff...
virat : cmon you gotto be joking... right...??

manvi : no i am not...
virat : are you worried about him or me...??
manvi : what...??? have you lost it yaar...
virat : you have problem even on the mentioning maya's name... maya who happens to be my first wife and i shouldnt have a problem when your ex is trying to get back at you... amazing,,,,!!!

manvi : you are not making sense...
virat : maya ke humare beech aane ka darr tumhari aankhon mein aaj bhi dikhta hai manvi, jab ki ypou know that maya is dead... she can never come in between us... aur mere baare mein kya...?? kya mujhe problem nahi honi chahie rishabh se... uss rishabh se jo humari aankhon ke saamne hain and he is definitely trying to come close to you...
manvi said nothing and thought about what virat said.
they reached home and soon virat left for office. an hour before he thought that everything will get back to normal... he n manvi will be together like always after resolving their issues but here they werent talking to each other... they had different thought processes going on in their mind and their different outlooks on it.
on one side, there is virat and manvi who are too close yet far and on the other hand, there is mohit and naina, two souls torn apart but still together.
mohit was on his way to the office and all he could think about was naina... he remembered the incident that took place two nights ago...

**** flashback ****
naina : because i love you...
mohit : dont run around in circles naina... come straight to the point...
naina : your house caught fire... it was not a major accident and no one got hurt...
mohit : i know that...
naina : it wasnt an accident...
mohit : naina...
naina : bhai... bhai ne gusse mein... he didnt like the idea of u and i being together... he had his own reasons and -
mohit : and he put my house on fire...
naina : bhai did commit a mistake mohit but... but he was not in his senses... you n virat being cousins infuriatated bhai... he hates virat for snatching manvi from him... though i know its nothing like that n i tried convincing bhai...
mohit : naina anything could have happened that day damnit...
naina : bhai did all this to scare me... he said if i didnt end whatever we had, he would not think even for a single time before hurting you or your family... so i agreed to what he said n i told you that i only played with you n your feelings... then bhai sent me to mumbai... away from you n this city... i met maan there for the first time... bhai n he were business associates... i dont know how... how things changed... our business wasnt the same it used to be... days passed and our association with maan increased and one day he proposed me. i straightway refused to him and as a gentleman he accepted it... but his elder brother... raghav.. raghav khurana love maan more than anything and he became friends with bhai... bhai had once told him whatever he did to you n me and that man he used it... he told me that if i didnt agree... he would spoil everything... he would spoil every single life attached to me... i was confused what to do and what not until the day i heard bhai talking to maan that the condition of our business was very bad... i agreed... many things were on stake n my single yes saved everything...
mohit : i left you... if i wouldnt have left you, then all this would have never happened...
naina : tumhari galti nahi hai mohit...
mohit : naina... i dont want to sound selfish par... par main tumhare bin nahi jee sakta... mere saath chalo naina... hum sab theek kar denge... (holding her hand)
naina : you cant be that selfish... (stepping away) how can you only think about yourself...??? think about your family, my family...
mohit : i am not that great naina... i am a normal human being... tumhari tarah main mahaan nahi hoon ke apni khushiyon ka gala dba doon...
naina : its your life... do whatever you wish like... but dont think that i would leave bhai in such a difficult situation... he is my everything...
mohit : may be thats why he snatched your love and hurted you so much... he is a spineless man naina...
naina : get out... just get out before i lose my patience...

**** flashback ends ****
scene shifts
manvi was very upset from the things happening around her and in anger she dialled rishabh's number.
rishabh : hello princess...
manvi : what do you think of yourself...?? kuch bhi karoge kisi ko pta nahi chalega...?? how dare you...??
rishabh : i think apne pati ke jagah mera number dial kar lia hai mrs. vadera apne...
manvi : maine aapko hi phone dial kia hai mr. rishabh singhania...
rishabh : wohuu... relax first... ab btao maine kia kya hai...???
manvi : you sent me flowers weeks ago... right...??
rishabh : which flowers...??
manvi : dont act smart...
rishabh : ok ok i sent those flowers... because i thought you must be missing these sweet gestures n all...

manvi : you dont need to worry about me... my husband is there to take care of me and to think about me...
rishabh : aww... mannu ko gussa kis baat ka aa raha hai...??
manvi : listen you... stay away from me n my life... because if you dont, the result wouldnt be good...
rishabh : are you threatening me...???
manvi : whatever way you take it... show me your face again and i will kill you...
rishabh : apni i mean maya ki beti ko bhi aise hi daanti ho... kya naam tha uss bachi ka...??? haan... kasak...
manvi : kasak ka naam bhi mat lena rishabh... dont test my patience...
rishabh : hehe... i will take your test honey but at the right time... till then be happy live these moments...
manvi : shut up... you -

rishabh : language... take care... bye...
rishabh disconnected the call before manvi could say anything and this made manvi more angry and pissed off...
manvi : how dare you talk to me like that...?? who gave you the power to insult me...?? its me... obviously it was my mistake to give you that power... arghhh... i hate you rishabh... i hate you...
scene shifts
rishabh : jaag gayi bhookhi sherni... (looking at his mobile screen) i am loving this baby... its soo much of fun...
madhu : having fun my dear husband...
rishabh : yeah my jaanu... you have a problem with that...
madhu : why would i have one...?? i have lot many things to worry about other than you n your so called love interest...
rishabh : control your tongue... dont force me to throw you out of here...
madhu : you will throw me out...?? hehe...
rishabh : dont under-estimate me...
madhu : i never did...
rishabh : get out... i dont want to see your face...
madhu : as if i am dying to see your face...
rishabh : how i wish you die someday soon...
madhu : same to you sweetheart... bye...
rishabh : bye... get lost...
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i am addicted to dmg these days n dont kill me if u get another update of dmg today only 😳

Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
YIPEEE ...I m first


loved the update...
continue sooonn plaaaeseee😊😊😊
Edited by virumanu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: virumanu

YIPEEE ...I m first


loved the update...
continue sooonn plaaaeseee😊😊😊

thank u n congos 😊
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow loved the update naina...this fight is gonna increase i suppose..I'm also addicted to dmg!! update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
i am addicted to dmg these days n dont kill me if u get another update of dmg today only 😳


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