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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: alicemath

Hey Naina...first of all ...sorry for the late comments...

Cuming to the update...itz was amazing as ever...👏
So the story has taken a leap...but Naina...itz really a bit sad to c virat ignoring his wife dat too wen shez nine months preg...n hw can he leave her alone...again felt bad for maya...😔
Dying to knw virat's reaction when he comes to knw abt rishab n manvi...
Both Virat n Rishab seem to b equally possessive abt Manvi...
Gosh i cant wait to c hw VirMan r gonna end up together...
Absolutely loving and enjoying the story plot...
Plz cont soon n Thnx a loot for the PM!!!😊

its okk... dnt be sorry... infact i am happy that u commented... 😊
maya thinks virat is ignoring her to that extent but actually he isnt... maya is feeling insecure as a wife... cmon who wouldnt when her husband is spending more tym with his so called clg frnd...
yes very true virat n rishabh are both possessive for manvi...
i will continue soon n will pm u as well... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Tu kab update kar rahi hai
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman


|😆 to phir hum ek hi thali ke chatte batte hai 😉

ohhh woww that is great...!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: copypaste


Tu kab update kar rahi hai

ek ghante main...
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
w8ing eagerly 4 dmg updt
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waoo waooo waooo another amazing update 4rm my maina👏👏... really so sweet of u😊😊... like always i loved ur update so much... Hhahahahah virat ki har bat mein maanvi bechari Maya (esa tou hona hi tha meri mannu ki jo jaga le li us ne😆😆).. hahahah loved virat's dialogue (this pregnancy thing is really getting on ur nerves Rofl😆😆)... Hawww a little little felt bad 4 maya virat said (ok go enjoy) thats bad... Maya is not a negative character i think thats y felt bad 4 her..otherwise i tou just hate her😆😆... Awww loved this dialogue of Rishabh (so he is very attractive n handsome... to be mrs. rishabh singania dare u look at somebody else other than me... i will kill him and marry you forcefully...)
Awww loved this update to the core.. Dear i know m again late sorry 4 this... n thanxx 4 the pm n continue soon...😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
updating
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another
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15 mins...!!!!!
sorry for
the delay...!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 9
manvi left rishabh's office and was driving back home. she decided to call virat...
manvi : hello my viru boy...
virat : what do u want manvi...??
manvi : why are u so rude...???
virat : i am just upset... u tell...
manvi : actually na i want to tell you something...
virat : i also need to tell u something partner...
manvi : bolo na... main sunugi...
virat : u know what maya left the house in anger n i also didnt stop her...
manvi : what...??? tum gadhe ho... how could u...??? call her n apologise u idiot...
virat : tu usko col kar na...
manvi : haan so thats she vents all her anger n frustation on me...
virat : tu smart ho gayi hai... credit goes to my company...
manvi : hehe... joke tha...??? hasna tha...??
virat : no it was a fact... listen guess what...??
manvi : what...?? tune phir koi kaand kia...??

virat : kaand... chii... watch out ur language...
manvi : tell me or i am ending the call...
virat : maya suspected me for having something with you...
manvi : what...??? usko lga ki humara kuch chal raha hai...
virat : hehe... yeah...
manvi : history repeats itself... isnt it...???
virat : yeah... remember college days how everybody used to suspect us of being in a relationship...

manvi : yeah n that geek who proposed me saying " hum aapko bahut pasand karte hai manvi ji... "
virat : and the way u called me suddenly and introduced me as ur boyfriend... no no u shouted at the top of ur lungs and said that u love me n blah blah blah...
manvi : yeah... everybody was so shocked that some of the girl fainted and some cursed me...
virat : but that was fun partner... remember how we were the star attraction of the college for the following one month...??
manvi : i do remember... thats was so nice... each n everybody used to stare at us like anything...
virat : n we... we didnt miss even a single chance to make them believe that we are a couple...a couple madly in love...
manvi : hmmm... now call maya... we can discuss this later also...
virat : hmmm...
they ended the call but both of them had something or the other about this particular phase of their life...

virat : and i wish we never stopped acting like one... whole day enacting like a couple in love, made me somewhere believe that may be we can be one... i started loving the feeling of being close to you n the way u treated me as if i was the most special person in ur life... it felt so good... but soon u told some of your friends that we arent together any longer and this news spread like a forestfire... i then realised that it was all a part of the game for u... but not for me manvi, i really felt something for you... stop it virat... stop it... whats the use of going back into the memory lane... lemme call maya n apologise...

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manvi : wish we were together... wish it all didnt start from a lie of mine... i already had a crush on you n being with u whole day n acting as if we were a couple was making everything difficult for me... i was finding it difficult to be natural in front of u... i was afraid that this lie of mine was only making my hidden feelings grow for u n i cant afford to lose our friendship... i had to end it... i had to...

scene shifts
virat called maya up and she picked up the call...
virat : i am sorry...
maya : who do u wanna talk to...???
virat : i wanna talk to mrs. maya virat vadera... can i...???
maya : no...
virat : why...??? i have all right to... i am her lawfully wedded husband...
maya : but u didnt stop her while she was leaving...
virat : because i am mad and a very big fool... i have anger management issues you see... now please tell my wife to come back soon... u know i really love her... she is my everything...
maya : i love you too... these pregnancy hormones are really getting over my senses... i just blamed u for having something for manvi and poor manvi... she did nothing n i insulted her...
virat : its okk... i can understand... you just take a u turn n come back...
maya : hmmm... i am coming... love you...
BANNGGG... there came a very loud noise...
virat : maya...??? maya...?? hello... maya...
virat : are u okk maya...??? maya...????

scene shifts
manvi : uff... this traffic... what the helll...!!! n why are these people standing here like there is a street play going on...??? oh my god... save me from this traffic jam thing... arrggghhh... forget it... i have a lot of time... i can wait...
manvi took her mobile and opened whatsapp...
manvi : hey nainu...
naina : kahan ho bhabhi...???
manvi : nainu... not now...
naina : okk mannu...
manvi : so whats up...??
naina : nothing... just came for a coffee with mayank...
manvi : ahem ahem... but he is a flirt nainu...
naina : i know... i am also flirting with him... time pass u see... i also dont want anyone right now... :D :p

manvi : hmmm... very smart huh...??
naina : yeah very... u tell how is bhai...??
manvi : ask ur bhai only... why are u asking me...??
naina : bcos he is seen mostly with u mannu...
manvi : shut up nain... enjoy ur date...
naina : date... spare me... its just like another meeting...
manvi : yeah yeah i know... bye nain...
naina : bye mannu...

manvi : arrggghh... still this traffic thing is not cleared... lemme go n check... what the hell is taking that much time...??? lemme go n check... yes i have lots of time... main toh velli... chal manvi... lets go... jaane mein kya hai... time paas ho jaega... chalo...

manvi goes near the crowd and saw here n there except the place where she should...
manvi : uncle... ye kya ho gya hai yahan pe...???
" beta ji... kisika accident ho gya hai..." came a reply...
manvi : acchaa... aur ye traffic kab tak clear hoga...???
" pta nahi beta ji... " came another reply...
manvi : hmmm...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cutiepie2244

Waoo waooo waooo another amazing update 4rm my maina👏👏... really so sweet of u😊😊... like always i loved ur update so much... Hhahahahah virat ki har bat mein maanvi bechari Maya (esa tou hona hi tha meri mannu ki jo jaga le li us ne😆😆).. hahahah loved virat's dialogue (this pregnancy thing is really getting on ur nerves Rofl😆😆)... Hawww a little little felt bad 4 maya virat said (ok go enjoy) thats bad... Maya is not a negative character i think thats y felt bad 4 her..otherwise i tou just hate her😆😆... Awww loved this dialogue of Rishabh (so he is very attractive n handsome... to be mrs. rishabh singania dare u look at somebody else other than me... i will kill him and marry you forcefully...)
Awww loved this update to the core.. Dear i know m again late sorry 4 this... n thanxx 4 the pm n continue soon...😊😊

hey thanks anji... i replied to all of ur comments... did u see...???
anyways coming to ur comment n its reply...
virat ki koi baat manvi ke bina complete hi nahi hoti... 😛
dnt wrry... better late than never my angel... 😉

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