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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
manvi pregnant😃
really excited for next update
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awseome update
loved it
finally maanvi is pregnant
plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
M so happy wit the regu updates u give.. And my kasu.. She is so desperate to stay in a hotel.. Such a cutie pie.. Cumng to kasu's mamma i hope she gets cnfrmtn for her gud news nd my kasu gets her sibling.. Love u kasu... Thanks naina 4 such a amazing kid character.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I have every reason to love this update...
and you know why :)
Manvi is pregnant... kasaks little sister on her way... yieepppieee...
When manvi was crying in the shower I felt
like this time also negative aaya kyaa but that God
the test was positive.
Loved manvi and mitalis convo...
Kasak is going all crazy for the london tickets... haa haa...
Loved the way virat wished manvi... it was really cute and adorable..
The diamond ring virat gifted manvi is gorgeous yaar...
Not to forget virat sacrificed london tickets for that ring and
that is more awsm.. dil aagaya aaj viru boy pei...
But I am afraid for the real dhamaka...
Eager for the revealation...
Thanks a lot for giving regular updates these days...
Thanks a lot for the pm also...
Take care...
Cont asap... Tadaaa...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Syed695

Res

Unres..😃

First so Sorry for being two days late..My net wasn't working...n was fixed today...!!

*Back to Update*

Awesome Update..!!!

KAsak is very cute..she was face pack..so like kids...Men think bache darr jaenge...but they dont see how much kids love being replica of their mom..specially their clothes, acessories and some also with their beauty habbits..Waise i have seen young boys as well😆..unhe samjhana padta hai...this isn't applicable to them, alas they take alot of time understanding..!!

And VirMan..back to their sweet mode...but i was a little surprised that Virat didn't listen to the recording...but then it clicked ur writing the Drama..tau dhamaka to hoga..but then i feel it might anger him but wouldn't seperate them..rest will wait for the story to proceed...M Loving the Progress Naina...!!!

n Once again m so sorry..for being late..😊Take care Dear..!




sorry worry ki need nahi h yaar... Its fine fauzia...
Thank u...😊
Ur comment compensates for everything...
I agree with you on the mask thing... Even my cousin asked me what face pack should he use... 😆
Waiting for the next comments...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chap 53...
Awesome..!!! Loved it two entire different portrayal in this Update..i did point this out earlier...but towards the end...how did the two love stories shape out...and m with VirMan love...their can b everything but cant live with out each other..Simply Nice..!

But also naina's decision wasn't wrong either..Maan stood up for her...and that what wife wants at the of need he should stand for her and givethe needed courage to face the situation...which Maan did and Mohit ran off...so Naina isn't wrong either...hence the different kind of love or say different colors...Loved it Naina..!!!

Chap 54...

Superb..!!! Maanvi finally found her happiness which she has been refusing for the sake of the community...And loved that her patience paid off so well...But then the progress of the Update shows the silent storm thats approaching...1 Kasak may refuse the new found happiness and the truth...But then again u might have planned a complete different plot..cz i read the update twice..there was happiness no doubt..but then u have also kept few unfinished...Superb Naina...Loved the Progress...!!!

And yes Loved Virat's Surprise...he actually sacrificed Kasak's long time demand of spending time in london...she is kid nw hence will have such cute things to ask...trip n the doggy...So cute..but nice that Daddu handles her...Eagerly Waiting for Next Naina...Thanks for the PM..!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: naina927



sorry worry ki need nahi h yaar... Its fine fauzia...
Thank u...😊
Ur comment compensates for everything...
I agree with you on the mask thing... Even my cousin asked me what face pack should he use... 😆
Waiting for the next comments...


Comment kardiya..!!!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
pm me when u update next :) it was really sweet
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
plzzz continue soon!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER 55
~~ Ab Poore Hain Hum
the sun rose in the light blue sky, welcoming a new day and a new beginning. manvi opened her eyes asthe first ray of sun fell on her face. she smiled a little and looked at her ring finger and admired the ring that was her birthday present. she looked at virat and kissed his forehead. she got up and got freshen up. she came out of her room and went to the kitchen to be greeted by vikram who was making his tea.

manvi : papaji main bna deti hoon...
vikram : happy birthday beta...
manvi : thank you papaji...
vikram : aao aaj main tumhe chai pilata hoon... (cmon today i will make tea for you)
manvi : but -

vikram : dont underestimate me... i am good at it... and do ask your mother-in-law when she returns...
manvi : ok... then papaji kadak chai bnaye... (then papaji make it strong)

vikram : sure...
manvi loved the tea her father-in-law made and she was surprised that he knew making tea and all... because her dear husband, cant even boil eggs...

manvi : dad teach something to virat as well papaji...
vikram : ohhh i tried... but i cant... abhi tak janaab ki neend bhi nahi khuli hai toh...
manvi : haha... i understand... its okk... papaji i will just go and wake kasak up...
vikram : ok till then i will also go and get ready...
manvi went to kasak's room.
manvi whispered
" kasak... baby wake up... " into kasak's ears.

kasak : why...??
manvi : because its morning baby...
kasak : why...??
manvi : because its time for school...
kasak : no...
manvi : yes... get up my muchkin...
kasak : kissey do...
kasak opened her little arms and manvi hugged her and kissed her eyes.
manvi : mela baby aur kitna soyega... huh...
kasak : 2 minutes...
manvi : aur mumma ko wish kaun karega...??
kasak : oohhh fooo main bhool gayi... (rubbing her eyes)
manvi : haan... (pouting)
kasak : happy birthday mummmaaa...
manvi : thank you mera bacha... aur mumma ki kissey...?? (pointing to her cheek)
kasak : ye rahi... (saying this she kissed her cheek)
manvi : thank you soo much... chalo... ab bathie bathie karle... warna mera baby school ke liye late ho jaega...
kasak : wowww...
manvi : kasak... itni loudly koi scream karta hai kya...???
kasak : ye kisne di...??? (touching her ring)
manvi : hmm... papa ne...
kasak : mujhe kyun nahi di... mujhe bhi chahie...
manvi : aww... ye kasu ki hai... jab meri baby big ho jaegi na, tab mumma ye kasak ko dengi...
kasak : kab...???
manvi : kasu ki marriage pe... (pulling her cheeks)
kasak : par meri marriage kab hogi mumma...???
manvi : hmm... abhi toh 20 years hai...
kasak : 20... matlab 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 (counting on her little fingers)
manvi : haan baby... 17, 18, 19, 20...
kasak : abhi toh bahut time mumma... (making a sad face)
manvi : agar meri jaana ko marriage ki itni jaldi hai toh mumma will find a good boy for you...
kasak : nahi... mujhe nahi chahie...
manvi : hehe... typical... cmon now... bahut baatein ho gayi...
manvi got kasak ready and went out to see vikram sitting on the dining table and reading newspaper.
kasak : good morning daadu...
vikram : good morning my little princess...
kasak : papa still sleeping...???
(looking for virat)
manvi : yes... you sit quietly now...
manvi went to prepare breakfast for the duo.
after breakfast, manvi took the car keys when vikram stopped her.
vikram : i will drop kasak and tell your husband to come to office today... late chalega par chutti nahi hai janab ki...
manvi : hehe... ok papaji...
kasak : bye mumma...
manvi : bye baby... love you...
kasak : love you too mumma...
manvi prepared tea for virat and went to her room. manvi looked lovingly at virat who was still sleeping.
manvi : ghadhe bech ke so rahe hain mister...
manvi kept the cup on the side table and sat on the bed near virat. she leaned forward and ruffled his messed up.
manvi : get up and shine my dear husband... (shaking him) virat... utho na...
virat shifted a little and turned his face around. his back facing manvi...
manvi : oh hello... (shaking a bit harder) sabse late uthte ho tum... woh bhi roz...
virat : lemme sleep manvi... please apne FM station ki volume mute kar do...
manvi : haaww... me n FM station... hadd hai...
virat : shhh...
manvi : ye toh heights hai... get up mr. virat vadera...
virat opened his eyes and sat esting his back against the head board of the bed.
virat : lo... uth gya...
manvi : ye lo tumhari bed tea... (picking the cup from the corner table)
virat : rehne do usko... (making her leave the cup)
manvi looked at virat confusingly.

virat : main birthday wish kar loon pehle... (grinning)
manvi : karo...
virat : itni door se kaise karun...??? paas aao... (pulling her close)
manvi : wish door se kar sakte hain patidev... (nudging his cheek with her finger)
virat : nahi nahi... bilkul nahi...

virat naughtily pulled manvi while she tried to distance her from him, intentionally teasing him... in this process of pushinga nd pulling, something broke. manvi looked down and saw that the thread of her mangalsutr broke, one portion of the mangalsutr got entangled in virat's fingers. manvi kept looking at her broken mangalsutr and had tears in her eyes. virat looked at manvi and a fear gripped his heart.

manvi : ye theek nahi hua... (taking her mangalsutr in her hand and collecting th bead which fell on the bed and the others which got scattered on the floor)
virat : manvi...
manvi : ye nahi hona chahie tha... apshagun hota hai...
virat : aise kuch nahi hota... bakwaas hai ye sab...
manvi : nahi...
virat held manvi's hand and made her look at him.
virat : main theek karwa dunga shaam tak i promise... ye apshagun shagun kuch nahi hota...

he hugged manvi and manvi held a fistful of his shirt in her hands. though virat efficiently consoled manvi and but he himself was feeling scared. he was not getting a good feeling... he looked at the mangalsutr that was in his hand and closed his eyes. he will not let anything happen to them... they would always together no matter what... he wouldnt let her go... she is his... only his...

manvi : we are together... hai na...??
virat : hmm... we are fine...
manvi : i know... accha suno...
virat : hmm... (brushing her long hair with his fingers)
manvi : papaji ne kaha hai ke tumhari chutti nahi hai... late jaoge toh chalega, par jana jaroor...
virat : hehe... ditto aise hi kaha hoga dad ne...
manvi : haan... but he loves you soo much...
virat : yeah yeah... i know...
manvi : kaash maa bhi hoti aaj...
virat : missing your saasu maa huh...??
manvi : wo meri maa hai... samjhe...?? (breaking the hug)
virat : samajhna hi padega... warna meri class lag jaegi...
manvi : wo toh hai... ab chai peelo... thandi ho gayi hogi...
virat : i want something hot... (leaning close to her face)
manvi : jyada hotness se aag bhi lag sakti... (wrapping her arms around his neck)
virat : aag toh jal chuki hai... ab toh bujhane ka time hai... (moving his hands up and down her waist)

manvi was getting weak and wondered how he seduced her everytime, he came close to her. their closeness brought a smile on her face reminding her of hers newly found happiness...

virat : happy birthday manvi...
their noses were touching each others and breaths tickling each other's face.
manvi : thank you soo much...
their lips were just half an inch away when their magical moment was broken.
virat : arghhh...
manvi : hehe... pick it up... (looking at the culprit - her mobile)
virat : mom hai...
manvi snatched the phone from virat and recieved the call...
manvi : hello...

vanshika : happy birthday D.I.L. god bless you beta...
manvi : thank you maa... when are you coming back... i wanted you to be here... (virat took the opprtunity and placed few kisses on manvi's neck)
vanshika : i too wanted the same beta... anyways enjoy your day and give my love to kasak and virat...
manvi : s.. sure maa... (pushing virat) okk bye...

manvi disconnected the call and glared at virat...
virat : what...??
manvi : ye kya rahe the tum...?? control nahi hota tumse... shaitaan pati...
virat : bacche ke saamne chocolate ka dabba rakh do and aur kaho beta ye khani nahi hai...
manvi : excuse me... tumne mujhe chocolate ka dabba kaha...??
virat : nahi maine khud ko ek bacha kaha...
manvi : very smart...

manvi got up from the bed and turned to leave when virat held her hand and pulled her backward. manvi fell on him on the bed and for a moment, her breath got hitched thinking of the delicate life growing inside her and virat turned her, going on top.

virat : so...??
manvi : so...
virat : aag bhujhani hai ya nahi...
manvi : nahi...
virat : good... ladki ki naa ka matlab haan hota hai...
manvi : you cheat... you double crossed me...
virat : so what...?? accept your defeat mrs. vadera...

manvi closed her eyes and sealed his lips with hers. she slowly started moving her lips and sucking his lower lip and when she was about to win, virat took the lead and his lips were on her in a hard and passionate kiss rather than the sweet romantic one.

virat : i wont let you win... (he whispered in manvi's ears)
manvi : meri toh haar mein bhi jeet hai...

manvi smiled and pulled him closer... two yearning souls again came close to each other and their bodies moved rhythimically as if each and every move was planned and something that was out of control was desire burning inside them. they were two halves which were meant to be each other's. they were designed to be together till eternity...
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impt note :
* i will unres my res soon... ( sabse pehle abi ka number hai, fir nimi ka... aur baki jis jis ke bhi hai, please btana dena...😉)
* fauzia darling, can you please give an updated of EMA... plzzz
* will reply to all the comments soon... 😳
* aur jiske res ab tak unres nahi hue hai... kripya kar dijiye 😳
* i have updated today just for you guys... so kindly like button press kar dena, nahi toh comment dedo... even better 😉
* if you are interested in a new different story, here is the link...
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago

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