DMG #4 || VIRMAN FF || CHAP 55 PG 134 - Page 50

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Aenna



Yipppyyy m first... 😉 😆
lolz all thnks to my nainu... luv u alot... love u too ❤️
yaaayyy m first hu...wooow khushi control nai ho rahi... mujhse bhi nahi after seeing the length of the comment 😃

ok ok now let me come to d update... as d story is going amazing... thank u
I dont think I hv much to speak..coz its just fabulous... d update was as usual awwsumm...
virman r drifting apart coz of d misunderstandings between them...
nd I sumwhere think dat rishab is doing all dis purposely...
kahi use maya ke accident ka sach to nai pata chal gaya???
😲 pata nai ho sakta hai... may be or may be not...
coz if he wud hv then he must hv blackmailed manvi by now..

but ya I dont no..coz only nainu knows.. 😉 yes only i know... n for u to know... stay tuned... regular updates coming ur way u see 😳

nd here in dis update.. d way virat was fighting wid manvi
omggg he seemed to be affected so much by all dis..
what will happen wen he will come to no about dat maya's accident.. hope till dat tym manvi conceives..
nd virat wont let his baby leave him... lets see n hope for best

nd awww poor kasu... she is shoo cute... but more den her I felt bad for manvi...
dese fights r making her to think about her decision to marry virat..nd to think about rishab..
nd dats what I will not lyk lolzz... ok ok ab aai bari meri demand ki... sabse pehli..

I want a romantic update after dis fyt.. which will help them to hv dere baby..
Embarrassed 😆 tere liye maine try kia hai... see in the next update... but it wouldnt be hot... 😳
lolzzz... mat sharmaa nainu tjhe hi likhna ...
or apna aap ko or mohit ko beech me mat ghusaiyo virman ke romance mke plzzz unka alag se soch liyo... .. mohina will not come in between virman... 😉

ok now my next demand... dat I want d next update jaldiii chahe abhi hi krde...lolzz *runs* updating in few minutes
kya karu tujhse zyada m addicted to dis!!! to plzzzuuu... acha wese mera index dekhiyo teri tareef kari hai... :p dekh lia... thank u...
chal ok mera long comment ho gaya m satisfied... (my longest comment) next update mein bhi first place res karke rakhun kya...?? 😉
it was over all mind blowing...
I loved it to d core... thank u soo much n lots of love
luv u...
Embarrassed Embarrassed

~luv aenna.. ❤️ Embarrassed

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: JESMY143VIRMAN

awesome update
virat is douting manvi😡😡😡how dare he to doubt her?😡😡😡
poor kasak and manvi.
continue soon.
thanks for pm in advance.

thank u jesmy 😊
pyaar mein shak aa hi jaata hai 😳
updating...
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Posted: 12 years ago
It's amazing
The figth b/w virman is increasing day by day and kasak is also being affect by these fights... Eagerly waiting to know what will happen b/w virman and kasak...
Continue soon and thankx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
@@@@ this one is for aenna who has been demanding something romantic... though it was very difficult for me to include this little bit of romance at this stage, but still i tried... @@@@
CHAPTER 46
~~ Waada Raha
manvi : you have to answer me...
virat : what answers...???
manvi : lemme ask it clearly then... what will we tell kasak...?? she heard us fighting... it will affect her virat.. we need to make her believe that everything is alright between us... and now you have to tell me how... how we will make her believe on us...
virat : i dont know...
manvi (held virat's arm and turned him around) : woww... i dont know.,.. how convenient it is... right...??
virat : why did you want to start it again and that too such an odd hour...??
manvi : virat this is not done... you shout on me... you fight with me... and when you have enough you go out n to where... i have no idea... and then you come home drunk...
virat : i am not drunk...
manvi : who are you fooling...?? ohhh you think that i havent even touched alcohol or something... i very well know about all these stuff honey...
virat : you toh know about every damn stuff...
manvi : lets calmly sit and talk...
virat : i also came with up with this option in the evening...
manvi : so lets talk na... whats the problem...??
virat : you made an issue out of it... it was not me darn it...
manvi : ok it was me... but you pounced me like anything...
virat (cupping her cheeks) : i am sorry...
manvi : virat... virat i love you jaan... main tumse bahut pyaar karti hoon...
virat : but that -
manvi : i called him but do you know why... i called him because you didnt do anything...
virat : manvi...
manvi : rishabh never had or will never have a right on me... you have a right on me... you.. you are my husband... (placing her hand over his) you should have broken his nose... but you went on a silent annoying mode... toh maine usko call kia and warn bhi kia...
virat smiled listening to manvi's words.
virat : tumne usko warn kia... kaise kia... mujhe bhi btao...
manvi : tum meri kheecho mat... maine usko bol dia that if he tries to do anything now, i will kill him...
virat : meri sherni...
manvi : haan sherni manvi... and if you fight with me again, i will break your nose...
virat : ok ok... i have to be careful from now on... god save my nose...
manvi : matlab you will fight with me... (pulling him close)
virat : yeah may be...
manvi : hawww... jao mujhe baat nahi karni...
virat : aww meli shelni gussa ho gayi...
manvi : haan... kyunki tum mujhse pyaar nahi karte ab... you always get angry on me...
virat : i am sorry... maaf kardo na mumma...
manvi : okk dad... jao maaf kia...
virat : thank you... now can i go n change...
manvi : hmm... waise bhi i am very tired...
virat : kyun...?? aisa kya kia din bhar tumne...??
manvi : gandi baatein mat karo ab... go n change... i..
virat : i what...???
manvi : i want to sleep in your arms...
virat : ditto...
after 10 minutes
manvi : kahin jana hai tumko...??
virat : nahi... kyun..??
manvi : main tumhari biwi hoon...
virat : mujhe pta hai manvi...
manvi : toh fir zor se pakdo na... aise kisi uncle ki tarah kyun hug kar rahe ho...
virat : hehe... you are the heights...
manvi : no you are also the heights and thats final... (kissing his cheek)
virat : i am scared... scared to lose you... (entangling his fingers with hers)
manvi : but why...?? why virat...?? when you know i love you soo much... why did you thought that i -
virat : this stupid fear... it made me think like that... main tumpe shak nahi kar sakta manvi... nahi kar sakta...
manvi : whenever you get that idiotic stupid fear back, think about only one thing... I LOVE YOU... i love you from the bottom of my heart... i gave you my heart, my heartbeat, everything i have... me, my soul, my body... everything that belongs to me is yours... i am yours...
virat : i know i have hurted you... i am really sorry... manvi main soch hi nahi paa raha tha... i dont like rishabh... i dont like him anywhere around us...
manvi : why cant we ignore him...??? is he that important...??
virat : no he is nothing in front of you my honeybun...
manvi : dont call me that... (poking his nose)
virat : okk my honeybun...
manvi : virattt...
virat : manviii...
manvi : virattt...
virat : manviii...
manvi : shut up...
virat : chal naughty... (playfully hitting her cheek)
manvi : haawww... maine kya kaha hai sharabi...???
virat : shirt up...
manvi : mera pati talli ho gaya hai... hai na... (ruffling his hair)
virat : apne pati ko challenge mat karo mrs. vadera... (taking her hand out of his hair and kissing it)

manvi : kyun...?? challenge kia toh kya hoga...??
virat : sunna hai ya karke btaun...??
manvi : hmm... kal btaun...?? (tracing her finger along his face)
virat : dekhlo... take your time... (turning around)
manvi : nahi nahi... maine soch lia... itna time thodi lagta hai virat ji...
virat : lemme sleep manvi ji... its very late...
manvi : ye acha hai... aag lga do fir jaake so jao... (manvi also turned around facing the other side)
virat giggled and then turning around hugged manvi from back.
virat : what did you just say...??? maine suna nahi tha manvi ji...
manvi : ji humne kuch kaha hi nahi tha... (smiling)
virat : nahi ji... humne sunna kuch matlab aapne kaha hai..
manvi : ji lagta hai apke kaan baj rahe hain...
virat : nahi nahi... kisike dil mein dhol baj rahe hai... sunn rahe hain ji mujhe...
manvi : ji mujhe toh nahi sunn rahe...
virat : koi nahi main sunaun aapko...??
manvi : nahi ji... humein dhol mein interest nahi hai...
virat : nahi hai toh aa jaenge manvi ji...
manvi : nahi ji... aap humein behkayee mat...
virat : kyun...?? aapko darr hai ke aap khud ko sambhal nahi payengi...
manvi : ji humein sharam aati hai...
virat : kis se...??
manvi : aapse... aur kis se virat ji...??
virat : humse sharam ayegi aapko toh fir ho gya kalyan...
manvi : par humein lga tha apko woh sharmili types pasand aati hogi... (facing him now)
virat : nahi mujhe toh woh sherni types pasand hai... pataka ek dum...
manvi : chota packet bda dhamaka types...
virat : haan...
their noses touched, eyes locked, one's breath tickling the others, hearts thumping...
manvi : love you...
virat : i love you too...

sometimes these three words sort out all the differences better than anything else. sometimes nothing matters other than this simple confession... sometimes we only want one thing - just one word... LOVE... Love doesn't make the world go round. Love is what makes the ride worthwhile... its just like a roller coster... once you have completed the ride, you want to ride again...

virat was looking straight into manvi's eyes and soon looked at her radiant face, wodering... no actually trying a pick a single instant when she doesnt look pretty.
manvi : i dont wanna let this moment go... where are you lost virat...??
the feeling of the soft skin of her hands running over his chest drew virat's attention.
virat : you were saying something...?? were you...??
manvi : no... its better we stay quiet tonight... let the silence do the talking...

soon their eyes were dipped with passion and hand travelled to all the places they should have been. it didnt took him much time to rip every shred of cloth off her and subject her to pain and ecstasy.

though this wasnt the first time... or their first night together... but it felt different... different from what they ever had or felt... this was their love... true love... nothing else... sometimes in life, these passionate moments are because of hunger, because of the urge to be loved, because of the need of this body... but today this was like a bliss... a fear of losing each other and then the joy of celebrating their reunion... celebrating their togetherness...
but life isnt a bed of roses... it keeps on changing... it changes every minute, every second, every time this earth rotates, every time we breathe... sometimes we notice it, sometimes we dont... but that doesnt mean nothing has changed... change is constant...!!! and virman's life will also change... this change will surely test their love for each other, their trust on each other, and the strength of their relationship...
NEXT CHAP WILL BE SOON... I WILL NOT SEND PMS, IF I UPDATE SECOND PART TODAY ONLY...
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
baap re nainu !!! tjhe DMG ne pagla diya h!!!! toot pade h iske to upd8s!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
while reading 1st update i was like😭
my virman were fighting
poor kasu was broken😒
but second update😳
aap tou love mein PH.D kardiya hongi mumma🤣
virman romance always make me☺️
ab aur wait nahi hongi i want to knw hw will virat react after knwing abt maya's truth😔
contiue soon 😊love u🤗mumma
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: abbay

baap re nainu !!! tjhe DMG ne pagla diya h!!!! toot pade h iske to upd8s!!!

haan anki... par main karun... 😳 as i said i m addicted to it 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: _keertu_

while reading 1st update i was like😭

my virman were fighting
poor kasu was broken😒
but second update😳
aap tou love mein PH.D kardiya hongi mumma🤣
virman romance always make me☺️
ab aur wait nahi hongi i want to knw hw will virat react after knwing abt maya's truth😔
contiue soon 😊love u🤗mumma

thank u soo much my baby... 😃 mumma has still to do post graduation... si PHD toh abhi bahut door hai 😉 aur agr mumma ka abhi ye haal hai toh... uff think of the time when i complete PHD 😉 😆 love u too... ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
How r u nannu di? Missing u😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Angelic_Friend

How r u nannu di? Missing u😳

i am veryyy good... what abt u honey...??😊
i also miss u...
all thanks to this fan fic forum 😡
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