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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 7

manvi was driving to cp while thinking what she just did. she actually left angrily from there and talked rudely to virat.
manvi : i am sorry partner... please forgive me... rishabh is the guy whom i love, i cant choose you over him...

on the other side, virat was hurt from manvi's behaviour.
virat : am i nothing for u manvi...?? i said it for your well being... you can meet naina later... cmon does you really think i believed this lie of urs... i know u wasnt talking to naina... there was someone else... there was a time when i was your priority but i think time does change every person... but why the hell am i thinking all this...??? my priorities also changed, so why not urs... but i am your best friend partner... i am feeling very bad donno why... did u feel the same when maya became my priority... but you always knew that maya was my priority... manvi dont this to me... i cant stand being avoided by you... i again want to be on your priority list... i am your partner after all...

scene shifts
maya : where is virat...?? its been so long... he must have called me... i mean cmon what if he has gone to meet his friend but his wife is here na... i should call him and ask what is taking him that much tym...
maya called virat
virat : yes maya
maya : so u remember i am maya...?? you didnt even call me... by the way where are u guys...?? having fun huh... old memories and stuff...
virat : it was fine... i am going to office...
maya : office...?? why...?? come home na...
virat : its important... i will take u out in the evening maya...
maya : promise...???
virat : hmmm... promise...

maya : thats like my virat... bye...
virat : bye...

virat ended the call and moved towards his car when on the way he saw dilli haat... the place where he had spent half of his college time... virat smiled and remembered the fun he used to have with manvi and their classmates...

virat got into the car and went to office but still he wasnt ready to accept that manvi left like that...

at cp
manvi : rishabh i cannot come baby...
rishabh : what...??? this is not done yaar...
manvi : what to do when i dont want to meet you...??
rishabh : what rubbish...!!1 where are u manvi...??
manvi : downstairs... come down asap...
rishabh : jhoothi... i am coming...
manvi : come baby...
rishabh came down running...
manvi : tum kitne acche lagte ho yun chup chap...

rishbabh : aur tum din bhar kitni sexy lagti ho...
manvi : complement tha...???
rishabh : tha toh...
manvi : i love you...
(and hugged him...)
rishabh : love u too... how much ur reunion...??
suddenly manvi felt sad thinking how she behaved with virat and she hugged rishabh even more tightly...
rishabh : are you ok manvi...???
manvi : hmmm...
rishabh : come then lets go to some place and then talk...
manvi : okk done... waise aaj toh tumhara popat ho gya na...
rishabh : all because of u...

manvi : hehe...
rishabh : cmon let me tak eu to barista... coffee soffee piyenge...
manvi : coffee... hmm... (thinking how she asked virat to have one and he refused)
rishabh : manvi... naina was saying u and virat were best of friends...
manvi : yeah...
rishabh : so then i should meet him... right...?? after all i am going to be fiance soon...
manvi : ofcourse but not before our engagement...
rishabh : engagement...??? i have given u a ring yesterday only... half of the engagement is already done,...

manvi : oh hello that was a sorry gift... engagement ring is still to come... n engagemnt doesnt happen like this that u would gift me a ring and we are engaged... you will make me wear the most beautiful and expensive ring in front of minimum 100 people...
rishabh : yeah... thats why you are most suitable for me n my family... full show off stuff... we can get engaged in private also...
manvi : private... naah... aunty n uncle would not like that...
rishabh : hehe... yeah but dnt forget u also want an engagement like that... grand one...
manvi : why would i not dream of a grand engagemnt when i am getting married to the most eligible bachelor of the town and one of the best businessman...
rishabh : you have got a point my honeybun... 😉
manvi : again honeybun... rishu... 😡
rishabh : no rishu manvi...
manvi : hehe... okkk... 😆

at barista
rishabh : u sit here and i will order your favourites...
manvi : lets see whether u know one or not...
rishabh : i have an experience worth of 2 years...
manvi : very true but still its time for test today...
rishabh winked at her and went to place the order...
manvi : you know me so well rishabh... you always bring this smile on my face and this happiness in my heart... i love you...
rishabh came back after a while...
manvi : ahem ahem... where is the order...???
rishabh : coming...
manvi : hmm...
manvi saw a waiter coming towards them with a food trolly...
manvi : whats this...???
rishabh : each n every thing you love...
manvi looked at rishabh lovingly with her chin resting on her hand...
rishabh : thank you (to the waiter) so here is your choco chip cokkies, cold coffee, chocolate truffle cake, brownie with vanilla ice cream with lots of chocolate sauce, and-
manvi : bas rishabh... main moti ho jaungi ye sab kuch kha kar...
rishabh : did i pass...??
manvi : yes with flying colours... 😃
rishabh : n i will love u even if u weigh 80 kgs and look like a buffalo...
manvi hit his bicep...
manvi : shut up... i will not become like a buffalo... i love being thin... see...
rishabh : yeah i can see that... but dnt u think its abnormally thin...??? 😳
manvi : i am going...
rishabh : sorry... i was joking you... you are just
perfect... any guy would fall for u manvi... any guy...
manvi : any guy...???
rishabh : yes any guy but let any guy fall for you... i will break his bones...
manvi : hehe... my jealous boyfriend...
rishabh : kitna shor hai na... tum loving keh rahi ho aur mujhe jealous sunn raha hai...
manvi : i said jealous only...
rishabh : hehe... now eat... dont waste my money...

manvi : haaww... money minded -
before manvi could say anything more, rishabh put the piece of cake in manvi's mouth and she happily eat that. manvi also made rishabh eat a spoon of brownie...
rishabh : you could have given me a piece of cake also...
manvi : thats mine... you eat brownie...
rishabh : anything for you my angel... 😃

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Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
RES 😛
UNRES 😃

Naina superb update 👏👏👏.. Virat is jealous and upset 🥳.. He wants to be Manvi's priority .. Wow.. Im so happyyy 😃.. Now Im sure he has some extra special feelings for her 😉.. Rishabh is a perfect boyfriend 😳.. Loved Manvi-Rishabh conversation.. Very well written 👏.. Loved the update.. Thank you for the pm in advance.. Eagerly waiting for the next part.. Take care 😃

Edited by meera.chaudhuri - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Double Update...~🥳! YAY~~!!!!! Virat sad cz of Maanvi's behaviour but desnt know y is he feeling like this🤪...when he meets Rishab he would get his answers ya fir jealousy...cnt wait for that...😈Rishab is sweet...loving him more with every update...!!😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow another beautiful update naina
after reading this update i am damn sure that their is something in virat's heart for manvi else why he felt bad yaar
anyways you knows better about that after all you are the writer
again it was a lovely update
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Syed695

Double Update...~🥳! YAY~~!!!!! Virat sad cz of Maanvi's behaviour but desnt know y is he feeling like this🤪...when he meets Rishab he would get his answers ya fir jealousy...cnt wait for that...😈Rishab is sweet...loving him more with every update...!!😊

yeah double update... wat to do yaar... this story is bcuming my favourite these days... 😳
glad that all liking rishabh manvi jodi...
thanks... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nishal310

wow another beautiful update naina

after reading this update i am damn sure that their is something in virat's heart for manvi else why he felt bad yaar
anyways you knows better about that after all you are the writer
again it was a lovely update
cont soon

thanks again sweetheart... i am very happy that u are back... really missed u all this tym... 😊
n yes slowly slowly i will tell u guys the things u all are dying to know... 😉
u gave a valid point... 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rinkel

Naina its fab lyk always !! 👏

waiting fr ur update...
Do pm me plss :😊

hey rinkel i will pm u from the next tym dear... 😊
thanks...
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: naina927

thanks again sweetheart... i am very happy that u are back... really missed u all this tym... 😊
n yes slowly slowly i will tell u guys the things u all are dying to know... 😉
u gave a valid point... 👏

haye sachi you missed me
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nishal310

haye sachi you missed me

muchii... i misse du n ur comments n updates... 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey it was so nice!
Manvi's ignorant behaviour has some effect on virat!
Thats good to hear!
But my one and only confusion is...
How cn it be virman at the end?
I mean i am so confused?
Why isn't manvi telling anyone about rishab?
I know u would say i have to wait as the answer will be revealed in the future!
But i can't
so u must continue soon!
Atleast for me plsss *puppy dog eyes*
thnx for the pm and cont soon!
Once again sorrryyy!
Edited by Hazza.oneD - 12 years ago

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