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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Niaksharma

4 updates hai der ho jayegi read karne me...
Plz pahele update kardo yaha...




Arrey ye kya baat hui 😛
Chalo i m updating in few mins for u
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hiii... M too late to start commenting on ur ff... But its never very late... 😊.. I just wanna write and tell u how good ur ff is... And ur style of writing and ur imagination in ur stories is just awesome... 👏😊.. I can't imagine the amount f stories that u think about and give them the shape of ur ffs and other stories that u write... Awesome... 👏😊.. Hats off to u...

About ur DMG... Its just beautiful... So many relations, so many emotions... Very well written... 😊😃👏.. Love all d relations..

Maanvi Virat and Maanvi Kasak being d best and d most lovable ones...😳😉.. Whether its an emotional update or a romantic one.. U write it subtly... And I wish I can sit and read it all day...

There are many parts that I liked... Haven't completed reading them... But I really wanted to comment once... 😊😆.. Couldn't control myself...

Will make sure that I read all ur stories and try and comment on all f them... All must b too good like this one... 😊😉.. M a big Virman fan... And ur stories just keep bringing the memories f the show back... In a better way.. 😊😃

You should keep writing... May b professionally... U write well... And love ur short os ... They are also good... Have gone thru some of them only... 😊😊

I will b a regular reader of this ff and I hope u will make me ur friend... And I will make sure I keep commenting on all ur fabulous updates that u give us after putting in ur thots and ur valuable time.. 😊😊😉

Waiting for the next update... Eagerly... 😊.. Hats off to u for this ff... 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

khushi madam u it that why i am updating it right now... 😃 BB dekhte dekhte update de rahi hoon main 😳 anyways after updating this mujhe EJEJ bhi read karni hai... i am too eager to read it 😳

CHAPTER 48

~~ ajeeb dastan
days passed by smoothly... like the silence before the cyclone that was approaching them slowly and slowly... on having an outlook it seemed so beautiful, so serene, so calm... but within some changes were happening... change in one's frame of mind, change in one's relationship with other... change in one's thought process...
in this time-span of past two months, manvi was getting restless... on one side, she was having a hope that she would have another baby soon... her dream, virat's wish, and kasak's little baby sisiter or brother... and on the other side, she was scared... what if she isnt able to fulfil this unsaid and forgotten desire of her husband... what if she never gets to experience this feeling of motherhood... the feeling of a small life taking shape inside her... the feeling of nurturing her little baby and feeling its each and every moment... she desperately wanted to have a kid... but there was only question on her mind... WILL SHE...?? her heart hoped for the positive results while her brain feared what if her dreams get shattered... every week or two, she would get a pregnancy test kit and every time it came negative, she got shattered and cried for hours... it was like her daily routine... she crying for hours on seeing that negative result... she was hoping that one day, the result would be positive and till that day she would keep trying...
No one... no one was aware of this state of manvi... not even virat... because she never showed him the ugly face of her inner turmoil... kasak, a little girl how would she understand such a difficult and complicated state of manvi... she was just happy that her mumma loves her way too much and pampers her... but there was one person other than mitali who somewhat had an idea about all this... vanshika maa was a little suspicious... manvi and her body language spoke something else whenever she was not around virat or kasak... having kasak around, manvi had a different glow on her face and a shine in her eyes... virat was always able to brighten up manvi's mood and make her life worth living... vanshika maa was wondering whats wrong with manvi... is there something she was hiding from them... was something bothering her... but she never was able to ask manvi anything directly... because always the emptiness in manvi's eyes made vanshika feel more and more bad and vanshika felt that asking manvi anything would indirectly hurt her...
there rishabh was regretting that he shouldnt have taken that step of scaring naina by the planned fire accident and if he did also, he shouldnt have shared it with raghav... if he wouldnt have, then naina wouldnt have decided to marry maan... it is not that maan wasnt a good human being... he was just perfect... a perfect gentleman... but he wasnt naina's prince charming... he wasnt naina's first love... her desire...
but something totally unexpected happened... the equation between naina and mohit changed drastically... naina was expecting mohit to understand her and respect her decision but mohit was behaving strange and weird with her. every time naina tried to apologise to him or talk to him, mohit would end up taunting her or talking to her in a rude tone. this hurted naina very much and she doubted her so called love for mohit... how can she fell in love with a guy who failed to understand her and a guy who turned out to be that selfish... when she can stay away from him for his well being, why cant he stand by her in the time of need... why cant he for once think about her family... her brother... naina only had two people in her life that mattered to her most until the time mohit came and they were manvi and rishabh... now manvi was happy in her life but her brother wasnt... her brother was struggling to save the business and their name and reputation in the society... in this emotional state, maan unknowingly gave naina the much neede comfort... he somewhat entered her comfort zone and surprisingly naina seemed happy in his company...
rishabh was going downstairs when he heard naina giggling... he couldnt believe that his nainu was that happy after such a long time... rishabh saw naina talking to someone on the phone and the moment naina saw rishabh she disconnected the call.
naina : bhai...
rishabh : i am happy seeing you happy... who was it...??
naina : maan the...
rishabh : are you sure you wanna go ahead with this marriage...?? i am trying to convince you that you can backout if you want...
naina : bhai i am happy and please now no second thoughts... i am happy... i will marry maan because he would never hurt me like he did...
rishabh : try to understand him nain...
naina : he should have also understand me...
rishabh : cmon nain...
naina : bhai please i beg u... did you understand manvi at that time...??
rishabh looked down as he knew the answer...
naina : no you didnt... so let it be... i am getting married and that too only to maan...
scene shifts
virat : manviii...
manvi : why are you shouting...?? i am here only...
virat : i shout because i love to...
manvi : better luck next time... now tell me what do you want...?? (hands on her waist)
virat : you...
manvi : aww... 😳 be serious... 😡
virat : okk help me with this tie na...
manvi : are you a kid...??? no you are not... kar lo apne aap... mujhe jaana hai...
virat pulled manvi in his arms and hugged her...
virat : jaana hai... (mimicing her) aise kaise jaana hai...?? mere liye time nahi hai tumhare paas...
manvi : all i have belongs to you... so dont try this melodramatic stuff on me...
virat : my intelligent shortie...
manvi : uff... gimme this tie... lemme tie this... warna...
virat : warna hum aise hi din bhar yahan... heavenly bliss...
manvi turned around and took the tie from virat's hand and started working on the tie.
virat : aye sexy... (playing with the strand of her hair)
manvi blushed a little but she didnt lose her focus and continued tying the tie...

virat : ab mujhe ignore bhi karti ho tum... sar pe chada liya hai maine... (pulling her even more closer)
manvi : virat... (showing her fake anger)
virat : ek kiss do na...
manvi : 10,000/- do na...
virat : huh...??? tum kiss karne ke liye mujhe paise logi... hawww...
manvi : virat main thapad marungi... so cheap of u... leave me... (getting out of his hold)
virat : arrey rukk ja jaaneman...
manvi : loafer jaise behave mat karo...
virat : haha... okk par koi apne pati ko thapad maarta hai kya... waise paise kyun maange...?? (winking at her)
manvi : mujhe shopping jaana hai...
virat : kyun...??
manvi : kyun matlab...??
virat : kuch nahi... i earn for you only... take my credit card and have fun shopping wifey...
manvi : thank you... (kissing his cheek) love you...
virat : love you too... keep smiling...
(kissing her forehead)

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ya ya i know you all missed kasak... but what to do it was a filler... 😳
stay tuned and just remember you guys, your likes n your comments keeps a writer going... it encourages to come up with more and better... your single line comment can also bring a smile on the writer's face... i hope you guys understand... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fab
first thank u for updating...
I didnt ecxpect my name there...
Thanks...
As always fab... No words for update
but its too short...
Wann virmaan longgg update...
Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
update kar rahi thi 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
itni jaldi padh bhi liya 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: naina927


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<font size="3">itni jaldi padh bhi liya 😛</font>


haa to...
Kitna short part...
Asa thodi hota hai...
Cake dikhake tophy dedi... Not fair...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Niaksharma

Haww...
Its too small...:|

will try to update next part soon...
sorry itna hi tym mila 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Abhi apne baki readers ko fast fast pm karo aur bolo fast fast like kare or comment... Which make u update soon...
Uffo.. Ek achche update ke liye kya kya karna padta hai...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Niaksharma

Fab
first thank u for updating...
I didnt ecxpect my name there...
Thanks...
As always fab... No words for update
but its too short...
Wann virmaan longgg update...

thank u soo much... i know its not that big... but twist main next chappy mein hi laungi...😉
abhi nahi... your name had to be there 😳

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