virman FF~DIL MIL GAYE~#2~ new Part 22 pg 126 - Page 23

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: naina927

kyun nahi samjhungi... behnein hain hum, dil ka rishta hai humara... 😉

sid M ko na jeeman ki jagah minu serial mein lena chahye tha nae?🤣🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
All da names r too good. I personally love da name mehek but dis is a name i have already used in my story for virman daughter. So i wud luv to hear some new name so Nirvi is really good.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: naina927

why sharam aaying bhabhi... its okk... 😉 okk take ur tym guys... 😉



sharam toh aagii hi naa meri pyaari nanad...samjaa karoo naa...😳...yeah we will take our time Nainu...😉...thz for understanding...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
i will surely update pmkk tomorrow...
for now its tym for dmg... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER 14 IN FEW MINUTES...!!!!! STAY TUNED...!!!!
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THIS PART IS FOR U AENNA... AS I PROMISED... 😊 😊
PART 14
manvi and mitali took the baby to their place after convincing vanshika a lot and at home they had to explain everything to mahesh and he agreed.
manvi : mumma i am going to my room...
mitali : okk baby... but have you told anything to rishabh about this...??
manvi : no...
mitali : no means... he has all the right to know manvi...
manvi : i dont think so mom...
mitali : did anything happen between you two sweetheart...???
manvi : mom nothing happened... but things will soon fall in place... i wil tell you everything but not now...
mitali : ok... take your time honeybun...!!

manvi : now call her honeybun (pointing towards the baby who was in her arms) and please spare me...
mitali : hehe... okk... and u ms. manvi dont make my honeybun sleep. i will get some milk for her.
manvi : okkk... but bring it soon for my little princess...
mitali : yes madam...
manvi took the baby in her room and stared at the condition of her room which was totally messed up.
manvi : uff...!!! now i need to clean this as well... princess u will have to wait... but where will u stay till then... hmmm... dad...
manvi took the baby to her dad's room and sat near him.
manvi : dad...
mahesh : hmmm...
manvi : i need a favour...
mahesh : what do u want manvi...???
manvi : please take care of her for sometime... i need to clean my room...
mahesh : okk... keep her on the bed...
manvi : dad... hold her in your arms... remember u have to take care of it...
mahesh : okkk... i understood ms. chaudhary...

manvi : thanks (and gave the baby to him)
manvi went back to her room, and cleaned it up and decorated it with some soft toys for the baby. she hurriedly rushed back to mahesh's room and found him playing with the baby.
manvi : enough of playing time dad... come princess (taking the baby in her arms) lets go baby to our room... goodnight dad...
mahesh : goodnight girls...
manvi took the baby in her room and carefully placed her on the bed and looked at the corner table where mitali had already kept the milk.
manvi : mela baby dudu piega... bhookhi lagi hai na mere bacche ko...
manvi tried making the baby drink the milk but she did it finally... in this whole process the baby was smiling and then felt asleep. manvi kept looking at her and donno when she felt asleep.
scene shifts
rishabh : pick up the phone manvi...!!! please baby... dont hate me... manvi... pick up the god damn phone...
rishabh had called manvi 10 times by now but she wasnt receiving his call...
rishabh : this is not done... you cannot ignore me like that... you just cannot...
in anger rishabh threw his mobile on the floor breaking it inot pieces.
naina : bhai... what happened...???
rishabh : go away nain...
naina : bhai... what are you upset about...??? tell me bhai... please... what happened...???
rishabh : i lost manvi... 😭
naina : what...???

rishabh told naina everything and became emotional.
rishabh : she would never talk to me...
naina : bhai... mannu aur uske gussa is not a big deal... you can make up to her...
rishabh : but she isnt picking up my call... i love her nain... bring my manvi back...
naina : bhai lets go...
rishabh : where...??
naina : to manvi's place... you guys should sort it out as soon as possible...
rishabh : but its late naina... what if her parents mind...?? this would spoil everything...
naina : you know na aunty is so cool... nothing will happen... lets go...
scene shifts
the baby suddenly started crying and manvi woke up with a jerk.
manvi : why is my baby crying...??? please dont cry my cupcake... i am there with you na... please baby... stop crying... chup ho jaa yaar... baby what will ur daddy say when he will get to know that u cried... please ur daddy's daughter na... please smile mera baccha...
soon the baby stopped smiling and looked ta manvi who was making various faces. manvi was playing with the baby when she felt something vibrate. she found that her mobile was ringing.
manvi : hey naina...
naina : open the door...
manvi : what...??
naina : i am outside mannu... open the door please...
manvi : okkk... okk i am coming...

manvi disconnected the call and opened the door and got the shock of her life... naina was not alone but rishabh was beside her who was looking devastated.
naina : can we come in...??
manvi : yeah...
manvi didnt look at rishabh for even once but rishabh was just looking at manvi and smiling aa if he got his everything back.
naina : mannu room me chalte hai...
manvi : hmm... NO.. (thinking about the baby...)
naina : why...??? cmon bhai...
naina took rishabh's hand and led him to manvi's bedroom.
naina : wowww...
manvi heard naina's voice and ran to her room.
she saw naina sitting near the baby and looking at her with a wide grin on her face and rishabh wa just standing still as if he saw a ghost.
manvi : nainu...
naina : arrey it is soo cute... tum dono ki hai...??? bhai why didnt u tell me...???
manvi : shut up naina... actually...
rishabh : actually what...??? kiska baccha hai ye...??
manvi for the first time looked at rishabh who was shaken up and his eyes all red but yet his voice was demanding...
manvi : actually...
naina : guys... can i play with her...??
manvi : nain be careful...
naina : i am going out... u guys continue...
naina took the baby in her arms and went outside the room.
rishabh came close to manvi and manvi stepped back. this made rishabh even more angry as manvi never backed out from him.
rishabh : look i am sorry... manvi...
manvi : please...
rishabh : i love you... i really love you... trust me i have nothing for madhu... i will fire her right now if u want... but dont suspect me... i cant take it... main tumhe bahut pyaar karta hoon...

rishabh took a step ahead again but this time manvi stood still and she didnt move back. rishabh cupped her cheeks and looked straight into her eyes...
rishabh : manvi... i love u soo much... i really dont care about this baby... i dont want to know how it came here and whose baby it is... i am only concerned about us n our love... i want you in my life manvi... i love you to bits... i cant even think of any girl other than you baby.. you are my everything
manvi...
this was enough for manvi now, she was already going through an emotional turmoil and lot many things happened in a single day, so she instantly threw herself in rishabh's arms and broke into tears.
manvi : i love you too rishabh... i really love you... please dont leave me ever... i cant stay away from you... losing you made me lose my senses...
rishabh was now happy as manvi was in all his arms and she herself said that she loves him. he rubbed her back and calmed her down.
rishabh : i am sorry mannu... i didnt mean to shout on you sweetheart.
manvi : maybe.. may be i over reacted... i love you thats why... i cant share you rishabh...
rishabh : shh... you are mine... just mine... i dont care about anything more...

manvi heard the baby crying and broke the hug. rishabh looked questioningly at manvi.
manvi : woh baby...
manvi turned around to go when rishabh held her hand and asked " what is this baby doing here...??"
manvi : let me go rishabh...
rishabh : manvi first answer me... naina is there with the baby.. she will surely handle...
manvi : rishabh i need to go to the baby... she is crying...
rishabh : ok go...
manvi went outside and saw naina trying to handle the baby, she went up to her and took the baby in her hands.
manvi : shh... alley why is my baby crying...??? 😕
manvi touched the baby's nose with hers and she stopped smiling...
naina : woohuuu... good goin mannu... but whose baby is this...??? 😕
rishabh : thats what i have been asking ur best friend nain...
manvi : actually its virat's n maya's daughter... maya dies in an accident today... so i brought the baby here...
rishabh : but what were you doing there...???
manvi : rishabh... actually... i took maya to h...hosp.. hospital...
rishabh : get to the point manvi... you cant lie to me...
manvi : i am not lying... trust me... nainu i am not lying...
naina : we believe u mannu... we really do... bhai...???
rishabh : hmm...
naina : did u see how manvi is handling the baby... ?? you are lucky bro...!!!
rishabh (looking lovingly at manvi) : i know...
naina : let us all play with the baby for sometime... what say...???
manvi : i love u guys... thanks for being there...
naina : love u too bhabhi...

manvi : nainu...???
rishabh : dont stop her manvi... i will make sure we get engage soon...
manvi : what...??
rishabh : yes... so nain u can call her bhabhi... no stress...
manvi : lets go to my room...
rishabh whispered into manvi's ears " i still dont believe it... i am not convinced "
manvi looked at rishabh in shock with eyes wide open while rishabh winked ta manvi and followed naina.
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Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
again!!!!!!

heheheheh! Soory w8 karane k liye!!! Apne stats k assignment k saath bhidi hui thi! haaassshhh!!!! Monday se college start know! 😡

Loved the upd8! finally rishabh ji is back and forgiven by Manvi !! Awww he was even ready to fire madhu to come clean in front of Manvi !!!! thats sooo sweet!!!!!! And yeah he got some hint of some thing hidden behind manvis behaviour! thats cool! But no viru in this !???? never mind !!!! I hope u will continue soon!!! (Greedy meee)!
Edited by abbay - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woah awesome update
again rishabh n manvi together :( plss bring virman soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res
what was that?
Nd
How can father being away from baby?
Anyways now everything going to be difficult for maanvi...
Plz continu soon..
Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i really liked this update especially baby's nd manvi's bonding. now i'm sure becoz of the baby she will starts ignoring raishabh nd this will angry him

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