VIRMAN FF || DMG # 3 || TEASER Pg 128

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#421

awesome update Naina
U gonna end this one... So soon
But loved the update eagerly waiting 4 next part
Try to update soon

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#422

oye hoye looks whose here ...its rishabh woh bhi still full of love for manvi pagalpan and all haan eeeksss am soo excited par madhu kahan gayi bechare ko baksh diya kya 😆😆and want naina back tooo no not you want mannu's nainu back 😛😛

the update too emotional i know manvi did wrong but koi mannu ke saath aisa kese kar sakta hai aur woh bhi virat didnt expect this from you virat 😭😭itna rude behaviour ab pata nai yeh kese manega i feel manvi's small little family is gonna break away now onwards coz ab rishabh bhi toh aagaya hai ...lets see the new twist and turns.excited for it ...😃

update net one jaldi jaldi 😊😊

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virmanfan013

@virmanfan013

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#423

naina ji see who is here 😳

omg lalala it was superb fab and mind blowing part and i enjoyed the whole update in a sad motion 🤣

aww hamare virman mein itni duriyan aa gayi. and this is all b'coz of you so i am katti with you 🤣

haww virat not talking to manvi and manvi was heart broken don't know why but i could feel her pain when the love of your life start ignoring you 😳 he even scold her in office

poor mannu bearing all this torture but it is her fault too

why don't you she understand when second baby come then love is devided equally kam ya jyada nahi hota. nainu mannu ko samjha na yeh sab

over all it was beautiful update and very well written..do cont soon 🤗

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princess369

@princess369

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#424

nice update really liked it nd emotinal plz plz sab kuch theek.kardo virman ke damiyaan nd i doubt that that flowers were send by someone else to manvi update soon
nd plz plz plz plz i beg u. plz plz plz continue ur story pmkk u made me cry. if u don't update that stort then i wouldn't give to any likes nd comments on ur other stories nd yes this is blackmail nd u have to do this plzxzzz
:'(

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naina

@naina927

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#425

TEASER

manvi entered the room and virat closed the door...
manvi : kya kar rahe ho...??
virat took a step closer to manvi...
manvi : vi..virat... cmon this is not the time to romance...
virat : manvi...
manvi : dekho abhi rehne do... main jaa rahi hoon...
manvi hurried went towards the door when she felt virat just behind her and his hands on hers shoulders. this sent shivers down her spine and manvi turned around ready to go with the flow. next moment she found herself being pinned to the wall.

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#426

Nice teaser..! but I still have a feeling he has found out something from the past or some thing botherin him real bad..waiting fir the Update..!

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Mahnoor

@Ssmmnnaa6

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#427

Ahhh confusing teaser:| cant guess dat virat was in mood of romance or anger.
Update soon naina plz and dnt discontinue PMKK:(

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abirami

@madhuharini

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#428

love this update and teaser sounds interesting... Waiting for ur update... update soon dear😊

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#429

Awesome teaser nainuu !!~~ mujhe toh kuch garbar lag rahaa hai !!!🤔 i guess something is really fishy abt virat !!! looking forward for the update !!! :D