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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: naina927




Arrey its okk 😊
Abt an hour...



oh ok! jaldi update karne ke liye try karo pls!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 47 : Beautiful update ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ full of lovely moments virat was hell scared dat he scolded maanvi infront of kasak n now she will not talk 2 him but maanvi handle d situation very well d way she make kasak understands her father luv n care 4 both of dem was cute hope dey solve dere all prblms by mutual understanding , kasak was adorable as usual ❤️❤️❤️ n rishabh naina convo was little confuse firstly he wants his sis 2 marry a guy whom she don't luv but wht now or naina is doing all dis bcoz sumelse told her 2 do so ( maan's bro ) m i correct 😉😉😉
Part 48
: Nice update ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ firstly missed kasak very much u hav portrayed maanvi's emotions very well how badly she was craving 4 d child she is acting all happy in front of her family but in reality she is devastated hopes get wht she wants , luved tie tying scene it was cute n romantic ❤️❤️ , so i was correct maan's bro is d 1 4 whom rishabh is forcing his sis n finally he realised his mistake 2 n naina is liking maan but at d same tym she is hurt by mohit behaviour ( it is correct dat only grlz hav a heart 2 sacrifice dere luv n happiness 4 dere family boys r selfish in dat case )

Edited by kateyes - 12 years ago
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Kya hua tera wada...
Woh update in hour...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I know i m late...
Sorrryyy...

Just updating the next chapter soon...
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UPDATING FAUZIA...
I WANT U TO BE NUMBER 1 TODAYT 😊
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i want to dedicate this chapter to my HONEYBUN aka shivali... my baby... mumma sorry bol rahi hai kyunki mumma baby ko pehle wish nahi kar payi na... 😳 mumma ko maaf kar do jaldi se warna mumma tickling karegi 😉

love you sweetheart... god bless... i wish u a very very happy birthday...!!!!
and
thank u khushi for motivating me always... 🤗
CHAPTER 52
~~ Tera Saath Hai Kitna Pyara...
first night... this very word is enough to make butterflies dance in one's stomach. think of poor naina, who was feeling as if every possible species of animals were jumping in her stomach... she was hell nervous but there was a bit of sadness in her heart as well... whenever she thought about this first night concept, there was only one name in her mind and that was mohit and now... now she is someone else's wife... its her decision and she is sure that she would never regret it... maan would never let her regret it... his immense love and care for her is visible in his eyes and she was idiot to ignore it for such a long time... but now, her eyes have opened and thoughts cleared... she knows her husband loves her and thats the only thing that matters.
naina turned around to look at maan who looked more nervous than what she was... she giggled on seeing him and waited for him take a step further after controlling her laughter...

naina : maan... i mean suniye... i wont eat you alive...
maan looked at naina and suddenly all her nervousness vanished.
maan : you better call me maan only...
naina : i would also prefer that actually... i know its kinda strange and weird...
maan : exactly...
naina : so lets be friends and -
maan : and soon everything will fall into place...
naina : thank you...
maan : thank you for marrying you...??? hehe... i should thank you then...
naina : no i meant... thank you for understanding... thank you for understanding that i have nothing to do with my past now...

maan : i love you naina and i am soo happy that you chose me...
naina : i had to maan... i hate the feeling of being helpless... if i had chosen mohit then -
maan : let it be... but honestly i dont think he ever deserved you...
naina : love happened and its still there... so i would really appreciate if you dont pass such comments...
maan : ok... i am sorry i didnt mean to hurt you...
naina : sorry and thank you... arghh... this is getting too formal yaar...
maan : i know... just be ourselves with no sorry and no thank you... wat say...??
naina : perfect...
days passed and everything was going smooth... naina maan exploring thsi new relationship and strengthening their love and trust. there on the other hand manvi was improving... her doctor asked her to take minimal of stress and take good care of her and most importantly have faith on her and the treatment and the supreme power, god...
virat : manvi... (coming into the room)
manvi : bolo gi...
virat : haaye... bolo gi...
manvi : virat ji...
virat : ok listen to me... lets call naina maan today... tumhari nainu ka leg pulling session reh gya na you see...
manvi : hehe... but please jyada nahi... best friend hai wo meri...
virat : okk your highness...

manvi : now go and work... dont keep staring at me like this... (pointing at virat)
virat : okk... par painting ka passion kahan se jaag gya achanak... (why suddenly this passion for painting...??) (looking at manvi who started applying the face pack on her face)
manvi : excuse me... that wasnt funny...
virat : i knows this is not funny... its scary... bechari meri bachi darr jaegi if she sees it...
manvi : haha... jao na please...

virat smilingly turned to leave when kasak ran into the room. virat was expecting her to atleast shout or get scare of manvi but she ignored virat and walked to manvi...
kasak : mumma...

(only for u bhabani... 😊)
manvi : hmm...
kasak : mujhe bhi lga do... plzzz... (she has learned one more cute habit of making a pout with a cute expression adoring her little face)

virat's eyes bulged out of shock the moment he heard it.
manvi nodded her head in negative...
kasak : please na thoda sa...
manvi : no... (in a weak tone, face pack may crack, you see 😉)
virat : kasak what happened to you my baby...??
kasak : ask mumma to give me also... (pulling his jean)
virat : haaye aaye meri jean chodo pehle...
virat picked kasak in his arms and stood behind manvi and looked at her through the mirror.
virat : why do you want this blue thing...??
virat asked his angel who was busy looking at manvi and literally mentally pleading her to apply some on her face too...
kasak : face beautiful ho jaata hai dad baad mein...
virat : nahi baby... but why do you need it... meri princess already itni beautiful hai...
virat tried his level best to pacify kasak while manvi sat on the bed and closed her eyes.
kasak : mumma bahut beautiful hai na...??
virat : yes... mumma is very beautiful...
kasak : dad thats because of blue face pack only...
(stating as if it was a universally known fact)
virat : haww... this manvi never told me this particular secret...
kasak : maine bta dia na... ab help karo na...?? (whispering into his ears)

virat was confused how to convince kasak as she was hell bent on making him agree and thereby convincing manvi to put some on her face. he knows how diffcult it is to win arguments from women and this little replica of manvi was difficult to argue with...
kasak made a disappointed face and hugged virat hiding her face in his chest.

virat : jaanu... (caressing her hair)
kasak : mujhe baat nahi karni... (doing this nautanki intentionally)
virat : ek secret hai...
kasak : secret... (looking at him now with excitement)
virat : hmm...
kasak : tell me then...
virat : lets go outside... yahan mumma sunn legi...
kasak : mumma is sleeping... (pointing at manvi whose eyes were closed)
virat : no she is not... she is such an actress...
kasak : sacchi...??
virat : hmm... muchii...

kasak : chalo lets go...

virat took kasak outside in the balcony...
kasak : secret kya tha...??
virat : its mumma's birthday...
kasak : mumma ka birthday...
virat : yeah... 16 november...
kasak : fir hum party karenge...??
virat : any which way you want... mumma ke liye surprise hoga...
kasak : hum mumma ko caaarrr gift karein...??
virat : mumma already has one... (to himself : ye toh mere budget ki maar legi... aur dad meri class lga degein...)
kasak : fir hum london mein hi kuch buy kar lenge... hai na dad...
virat : hmm... (to himself : ye london jaa kar hi rahegi... i thought bachi hai bhul jeagi.. )
kasak : ok na papaaa... (stretching the word papa to gain virat's attention)
virat : okk... now go and play...
kasak : ok...
virat kept kasak on the ground and she ran into her room.

virat returned into his room and manvi was admiring her face in the mirror. virat came and hugged manvi from behind. manvi swayed a little in his arms and smiled looking at their perfect image in the mirror.
virat : waise mujhse lucky to ye kambhaqt sheesha hai...

manvi : aww... my dear husband is jealous... is he...??
virat : yes he is... because his wife is too far away from him these days and she doesnt love him anymore...
manvi : your wife loves you more than anything in this world...
virat : accha...?? aisa hai kya...??
manvi : hmm... dekho... dekho meri aankhon mein... bolo kya dikh raha hai...???
(turning around, her arms around his neck and eyes loooking straight into his eyes)
virat : kajal... lakme absolute... rs. 750/- only
manvi : arghh... you are the heights...

manvi pushed him and she almost got out of his hold when he pulled her back into his arms.
virat : teri aankhon mein mujhe apni surat dekhe...
manvi : aankhon ki gustakhiyan... maaf ho...
virat : aankhein band kar ke jo ek chehra najar aaya, wo tum hi ho ae sanam...
manvi : aankhein bhi hoti hai dil ki jubaan... bin bole kar deti hai, haalat ye pal mein bayaan...
virat : gulaabi aankhein jo teri dekhi, sharabi ye dil ho gya...
manvi : aankhon mein neendein... neendon mein sapne... sapnon mein baatein teri meri...
virat : teri aankhon ke siva duniya mein rakha kya hai...
manvi : ok i give up... (making a sad face)
virat : like always... you cannot win from me...
manvi : college mein main jeet ti thi...
virat : jhoothi... main jeet ta tha...

manvi : i used to win virat...
virat : you used to lose honey...
manvi : you liar... accept it i used to win...
virat : i used to win manvi...
manvi : haha... you used to lose...
virat : you used to - - - - -

while arguing with each other, virman didnt realise that while walking backward and backward they landed directly on the bed...
manvi : ouch...
virat : now who used to lose manvi...??
virat started dangerously leaning more and more on her and manvi was blushing like a newly wedded bride... as if this was the first time they shared such a proximity... manvi herself used to get amaze how he still have such an effect on her...
manvi : v..virat...
virat : no its manvi... manvi used to lose everytime... (tracing the outline of her face with the tip of his nose)
manvi was numb and she closed her eyes... she was getting weak and weak... his love melting her...

virat : it was you manvi... who...???
manvi : me...
shivering under his touch and the butterfly kisses he laid on her face.
virat : good girl...

manvi was still hypnotised under the spell of his intoxicating touch and husky yet sexy voice that she didnt realise that virat got off her and was lying on the bed enjoying seeing his effect on manvi. manvi soon after realising no movement, slowly opened her eyes and looked at virat who smirked on seeing her... she knew he would someday tease her mentioning this incident... one more incident added to his " you fell weak " list... manvi quickly got up from the bed and was about to run out of the room still blushing when she banged into kasak...

kasak : mumma... papa... come come...

kasak pulled manvi back to the bed and sat on the bed in front of virat. manvi and virat looked at kasak and waiting for her to start. manvi was now getting impatient to hear the newly cropped demand of kasak as she knew she wanted something, the moment she looked at her face.

virat : hello...?? kasak...
kasak : mujhe doggy chahie... brown colour wala... (sometimes looking up and then down and then at manvi)
virat : whattt...??? no ways i hate dogs... 😡
kasak : mummaaa...
manvi winked at kasak and asked her to stay quiet...
manvi : virattt... (extra sweet tone)
virat : no... no this wont help...
manvi : suno na... kasu ne aaj tak maanga hi kya hai...??? ek doggy hi toh hai mere viru...
virat : you know i hate dogs... no manvi... no ways...
manvi : please na... i will take care of it... baby ko mna thodi kar sakte hain...
virat : ofcourse kar sakte hain...

kasak : kyun...??? (getting up... hands on her tiny waist)
virat : kyun kyun...???
manvi : jaan maan jao na... meri kasam...
kasak : kha lo na kasam dad... fir hum pizza kha lenge baad mein...
manvi looked at kasak asking her to stay quiet... kasak made a face and sat down again on the bed...
manvi : virat please na... please...
virat : manvi dont... mujhe emotional blackmail mat karo...
manvi : doggy tumhe tang nahi karega... main hoon na...
virat : they create mess manvi... dogs are like shit...

kasak : shit...??
manvi : virattt... yes or no... 😡
virat looked at the sad faces of manvi and kasak...
virat : for the last time... YES... but dont expect me to be anywhere near that dog...
manvi : done...
kasak : woww doggy aayega... yey... fir main uske saath hide and seek khelungi...
virat : manvi make sure kasak doesnt goes too close to that dog...
manvi : manvi at your service... anything you say...
virat : okk... karo jo karna hai...

manvi : yeyyy... (taking kasak in her arms)
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Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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First so Sorry for being two days late..My net wasn't working...n was fixed today...!!

*Back to Update*

Awesome Update..!!!

KAsak is very cute..she was face pack..so like kids...Men think bache darr jaenge...but they dont see how much kids love being replica of their mom..specially their clothes, acessories and some also with their beauty habbits..Waise i have seen young boys as well😆..unhe samjhana padta hai...this isn't applicable to them, alas they take alot of time understanding..!!

And VirMan..back to their sweet mode...but i was a little surprised that Virat didn't listen to the recording...but then it clicked ur writing the Drama..tau dhamaka to hoga..but then i feel it might anger him but wouldn't seperate them..rest will wait for the story to proceed...M Loving the Progress Naina...!!!

n Once again m so sorry..for being late..😊 Take care Dear..!


Edited by Syed695 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Apna comment reserve kardiya...:)) Waiting for the update..yaha pe 12 AM in the night..Good night dear!!!

YAY.!!! M actually first for the 1st time here..:D:D!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Actually I too dont like having pets!! but yeah maani should understand its not good to fulfill every demand of kids! but it was really cute uppu I just hope soon maanvi would be able to conceive!
Edited by abbay - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
abh yeh doggy kuch naa kare... nice update naina!!:)) continue soon!

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