VIRMAN FF || DMG # 3 || TEASER Pg 128 - Page 44

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Posted: 12 years ago
Dont know why but i couldnt press the linke button...
Liked the treasar but i dont have a good feeling ...
Hope to see them happy again
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Posted: 12 years ago
Virat ko pta chal gaya about maya'a accident! ****my wild guess****
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just amazing update. I guess virat didn't snd the flowers. Watever but waiting for part 30.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice teaser
seems interesting
plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Interesting teaser.something serious going to happen.
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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting teaser
update soon 😊
Edited by shirhid - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
is virat drunk ???
confusing teaser doesnt look like he is mood to roomance so wat exactly is it...
update sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER 30
~~ piya aaye na...
manvi came back to her room after promising vanshika that she would eat with virat when he comes back. manvi admired the flowers and took one red rose out of them and sat on the couch thinking about how beautiful her life was... no no how beautiful her life still is...
manvi : i know you were angry virat but that time would be soon when you yourself will come and talk to me... i know you jaan... you will come back to me... and you yourself will make everything okk... ohh god how much i love this habit of yours... i wonder how you always take a first step and sort out things in fraction of seconds as if nothing ever happened... but what changed you... i have no idea... i really dont... i mean i know from such a long time but you never were one of those who take an initiative to sort out things... you always wanted me to take a step and apologise to u... but now... now the tables have turned... you came and make it up to me whether it was my fault of yours... did my love change you or the credit goes to my princess... god knows... i know only one thing that i love you... love you soo much and i promise...i promise nothing would go wrong... whatever happened last night will never happen again... never...

time passed and manvi fell asleep on the couch still holding a rose in her hand. virat returned home and saw manvi sleeping on the couch with a rose in her hand. he knew she was waiting for him and fell asleep in the process... virat scooped up manvi in his arms and took her to the bed. he carefully put her in the bed and covered her with the quilt and took the rose from her hands. virat got up to leave when his heart stooped him and he sat close to manvi and caressed her hair.
virat : i know you are waiting for me to take the place step and i wouldnt mind taking it. but something is bothering me manvi... trust me i am not angry on you... i am angry on myself and i feel disgusted... how can i behave this like this...?? last night i said so many things things to you without even thinking... i hurted you manvi and this thing is giving me a pain which is unexplainable as well was unbearable... i promised that i would keep you happy and would let a single tear come in your eyes... but last night i myself brought tears in your eyes... i hurted the angel who brought light in my life... i hurted the girl who supported me and my daughter in the time we were all lonely... i cant believe i hurted you... how can i break my promise...??? par main kya karun kal raat... kal raat maine wo keh dia jise main apne dil mein chupa ke baitha tha... i am unable to keep my words partner... i really want a baby... humara baby... kuch zyada toh nahi chahta main... par dont worry... ab ye topic kabhi nahi ayega... i can live without a baby but not without you... we are happy... we are complete... we dont need anything because we have everything... everything a couple needs... but give me sometime manvi... sometime to kill this new cropped up wish of mine... just sometime more... till then i will have to maintain this distance between us... because staying close to you, would stop me from letting go my desire of having a baby with you... i love u manvi...
next day
manvi woke up and found herself in her bed and she smiled thinking that virat must have brought her to bed when he returned. she saw virat sleeping with an innocent smile on his face.
manvi : i love you virat... (kissing his cheek)
virat scrunched his nose and turned to the other side. manvi smiled and ruffled his hair saying " bilkul apni beti pe gaye ho... i mean wo tum pe gayi hai... "
manvi got up and went to wake up her darling daughter...
manvi : good morning jaana...
kasak : sone do na...
manvi : haww... kal toh mera baby jaldi soya tha... fir bhi neeni aayi... why so...???
kasak : kyunki baby ko aur sona hai... 🥱
manvi : baby aajkal kuch jyada hi naughty ho gaya hai...
kasak : no... baby bahut sweet hai...
manvi : who said so...???
kasak : baby said so... 😉
manvi : oh that means my baby is all freshen up... cmon get up now... its bathie bathie time baby...
kasak : bathie bathie... my bubble bath...??
manvi : yes your bubble bath... now shall we...??

kasak : yes...
while getting ready
kasak : today dad didnt miss me...??
manvi : what...???
kasak : arrey kal dad ne mujhe miss kia tha na and he slept in my room...
manvi : ohhh... actually last night your dad missed me sweetie...
kasak : that means he loves you more...
(thinking deeply)
manvi : no... he loves you more... (smiling at her smart kido)
kasak : but why doesnt dad loves you more...???
manvi : ummm... 😕
virat : who said dad doesnt love your mom more...???
manvi turned around to see virat standing at the door smiling at both of them...
kasak : mumma said so... (cutely replying to virat)
virat : your mommy is wrong... dad loves you both equally...
manvi looked at virat with all the love she had for him...
kasak : equally...??? matlab half half...
virat : yes... means same same... where is my kissy...??
kasak : mumma... (giggling and clapping)
manvi : what...??
kasak : dad is asking for a kissy... (saying this kasak closed her eyes with her tiny palms)
manvi : hawww... naughty girl dad is asking for a kissy from you...
kasak : hehe... ohhh
virat : what have you done manvi...??? you have polluted my kido's mind... chiii
manvi : haww... maine kuch nahi kia virat...
kasak : haha...
virat : i am waiting outside...
manvi : okk... kasu u have become very naughty these days... who taught u all this...???

kasak continued giggling...
again the perfect family was back together... virat dropped kasak to school and after returning he saw manvi and vanshika working in the kitchen.
virat : manvi...
manvi : hmmm...
virat : i need to talk to you...
manvi : toh kaho na...
virat : room mein chale...??
vanshika : haha... you go manvi...
manvi : yes mom... so chale patidev...??
virat : hmm..

manvi entered the room and virat closed the door...
manvi : kya kar rahe ho...??
virat took a step closer to manvi...
manvi : vi..virat... cmon this is not the time to romance...
virat : manvi...
manvi : dekho abhi rehne do... main jaa rahi hoon...
manvi hurried went towards the door when she felt virat just behind her and his hands on hers shoulders. this sent shivers down her spine and manvi turned around ready to go with the flow. next moment she found herself being pinned to the wall.
virat : listen manvi... i want to say something...
next moment manvi opened her eyes and looked at virat who looked very serious.
virat : i need time...
manvi : time means...?? (all scared because the fear of losing her world gripped her hear agian)
virat : i understand your point of view and i totally agree... but i just want time... i am sorry for what all happened...
manvi : but i know you are sorry...
virat : manvi... i love you very much... but lets just stay away for sometime...
manvi : away for sometime... what are u trying to say...???
virat : coming close to you would push me towards that unfulfilled wish of mine...
manvi : again a baby,,,, tumhe baccha chahie na... toh main dungi na tumhe bacha... bas mujhe khud se door karne ki baat mat karo... we will plan a baby...

" tring tring "
virat : hello...
? : hiii...
virat : who is this...???
? : mujhe itni jaldi bhool gaye jijuuu...
virat : dekho naam bta do warna -
? : arrey baba itna gussa...
virat : dekho...
? : naina... naina bol rahi hoon...
virat : naina... tum bhi na...
naina : haha... tum mujhe bhool gaye na virat... aur meri best friend toh tumse shaadi karte hi apni mannu ko bhool gayi thi...
virat : nahi bhoola... tu hi kahin gayab ho gai thi... aur ye le apni mannu se baat kar...

virat gave his phone to manvi and went to get ready for office.
manvi : nain...
naina : aur kya haal mrs. vadera...??? aap toh mujh nacheez ko bhool hi gayi...
manvi : nainu...
naina : mannu... tu theek hai na...???

manvi : hmm... (controlling her tears) mujhe kya hoga... bilkul theek ho...
naina : aur meri cupcake...??
manvi : teri cupcake toh patako ho gayi hai... bahut smart hi wo nain...
naina : kaise nahi hogi after all she has been brought by my mannu... meri jhansi ki rani... mannu i want to tell you something...
manvi : kya...??
naina : i am getting married... wohuuu 😃
manvi : what...??? sachi...?? 😲
naina : muchi...
manvi : par kisse...??
naina : maan... maan singh khurana... bhai ke business partner hai...
manvi : tu khush hai na...???
naina : haan...
manvi : at last meri nainu ko uska prince charming mil hi gaya...
naina : pta nahi... waise tujhe aana hai... okkk...??
manvi : 101% but when are u coming nainu...??
naina : after 3 days... i will be back mannu... i missed all of you so much...

manvi : we missed you two... but nain do u like him...??
naina : i dont know mannu... i havent spend much time with him but bhai.. bhai knows him...
manvi : so how is everything...??
naina : hmm... its alright here...
manvi : you are hiding things from me nainu...
naina : there is nothing to tell mannu... will see you soon...
manvi : okk... bye... see you soon...

manvi disconnected the phone and saw virat stepping out of teh bathroom.
manvi : naina is getting married...
virat : hmm..
manvi : she wants us to attend it...
virat : we will...
manvi : virat i am ready...

virat glared at manvi from the mirror and manvi looked down unable to meet his gaze.
virat : cant we start just end this topic here...??
manvi : thats what i am doing...
virat : i wanted a baby but not like this... i dont want you to get ready just because of a mere fear of losing me... i am not going anywhere... i am not going to leave you... u know why...?? because i love you... i love you soo much...
manvi : i love you too... and if your happiness lies in having a baby... why cant i think of your happiness for once virat...??
virat : you always think about me n kasak manvi... you dont need to prove your concern baby...

virat turned around and manvi ran into his arms unable to control her emotions...
manvi : mujhe khud se door mat karo... i love you from each n every cell of my body virat... i love you soo very much... i can do anything for you jaan... and i know this time i am wrong... i am hurting you...
virat : shhh... you are not wrong... its just about the choices and their wrong timings... my manvi can never be wrong... i am wrong...
manvi : can we just stop this blame game... i am hating it...
virat : okk... i hate it too...
manvi : dekha... choices met at right time...
virat : hmm... tu hai toh i will be alright...
manvi : main tera saaya hoon...
virat : main teri saanse hoon...
manvi : main teri dhadkan hoon...
virat : main tera dil hoon...
manvi : main tumhari chahat hoon...
virat : main tumhara sapna hoon...
manvi : nahi... tum meri haqeeqat ho...
virat : haaye... maar daala...
manvi hugged virat more closely and hided herself in his chest hoping nothing would ever go wrong now...

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ab ayega mja... 😉
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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**unres**

Ab hogi rishu ki entry!!! some past sparks will flow in ,some revelations ,some evilness and some separation! ab mjhe bhi ayega mza!
Edited by abbay - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nain ko aayega maza humme milegi saza 🤣

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