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Dream come true with maaneet
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Hi everyone i make this page for all my writing update so you can comment hear ,give suggestion, talk  etc 😉

 new part update link given in index look  down in index


Index of teaser and note


teaser of all work                               -


2 Jan

New os now turn ss  Dhadkan do dilo ki gift  of CHRISTMAS   


Teaser of all work                                                                    

Journey...
                                                        





note for Os Dhadkan do dil ki                                      

teaser of  part 6 Adoore Sapane                                      






Life of geet    
                                Dhadkan do dilo ki                                        
                                      Adoore Sapane                                           

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3857084?pn=29

Note
Adoore sapane

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3857084?pn=32


Life ...
Dhadkan
Adoore
Journey ...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3857084?pn=34

dhadkan
life
adoore
journey

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3857084?pn=37

Dhadkan
Life
Adoore

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3857084?pn=39

please look this need help

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3857084?pn=42

Happy holi
and new story link

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3857084?pn=47

teaser 

dhadkan
fate
adoore
life
journey

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3857084?pn=48

about myself (mahi)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3857084?pn=52


thodi masti  from your mahi 😉

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3857084?pn=61

life
journey
fate
adoore

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3857084?pn=70

addore

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3857084?pn=75

massage from FB

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3857084?pn=80

adoore
fate
journey

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3857084?pn=81

fate

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3857084?pn=85

fate

adoore

new story  prologue

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3857084?pn=90 


Uljhe
fate
adoore

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3857084?pn=94


maaneet image

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3857084?pn=98

page 99

fate
uljhe
adoore
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3857084?pn=100


adoore
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3857084?pn=105

adoore
uljhe
fate
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3857084?pn=109


introduction of character ff Time pass
love story of teen age

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3857084?pn=113

maaneet image for time-pass

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3857084?pn=117

time pass next character dev

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3857084?pn=118

journey
fate
uljhe
adoore
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3857084?pn=128

 






Edited by Mahimaan - 9 years ago
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My first ff

Life of geet





Prologue

 

Geet kapoor What is love or marriage I don't get meaning of marriage or so called love after two year of marriage, yes I am married women for society I am mrs geet dev kapoor but in my marriage I always trusty for love respect from my husband Kya hamari society main women /aurot hona itna bada pap/sin hai, my so called husband always abused me for his physically incomplete Yes he could not make physical relation with any women, and he could not digest this truth and everyday he tor-char me abuse me for his inconvenience. Then you can ask me about my family but on name of family I have my uncle and cousin brother they only want to finish their duty with marriage and get the rid from my responsibility. In my life I have happy moment in my working place yes I am working women because my husband earn for only drinks and his so called hobby race and many other so my job is for our basic things of life and I have wonderful friend like Pinky and Adi ,many people may ask why I cannot divorce dev ,and I admit that I don't have guts to face the society as single women when everybody want to abused or took advantage of single women so''this is my life I lost my all hopes from my life

index

                Part 1 New  strom / tuffan  in geet life            
 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3632879

          Part 2 Another nightmare in geets life    

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3632879?pn=2 

                        Part  3  zakham /injury naye purane                        

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3632879&TPN=

Part  4  New shock and new hope in life  

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3632879?pn=5

                          Part 5 Bathe kuch unkahi si                                       

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3632879?pn=7

Part  6   New zakham injury on mind  and  soul  8

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3632879?pn=8

    Part 7 new start and some part of past                 

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/89010573

part 8

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3632879?pn=11

Teaser

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3632879?pn=12

part 9  

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/91330227

Teaser  10

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/92426657

part 10 New hope for life

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/92839311

teaser part 11

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93159283

part 11

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93777312

Part 12

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/94208405

part 13

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/94749388

part 14

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/95679295

Teaser of part 15

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/96554948

Part 15

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3632879?pn=26

part 16

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3632879?pn=28

teaser part 17

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/96867906

part 17

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97042018

teaser of part 18

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3632879?pn=35

part 18

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3632879?pn=35

part 19

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3632879?pn=38

part 20

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98273650

 part 21

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99569865

part 22

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3632879?pn=49

part 23

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3632879?pn=51

part 24

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3632879?pn=55

part 25

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3632879?pn=59

part 26

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3632879?pn=64

part 27

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3632879?pn=67



Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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My first   ss

Journey of maaneet arrange marriage






This ss based on Marathi film Yanda kurtaya ahi  in this maan is not tycoon but working on good post ,have arrange marriage because of family pressure but last is his decision to choose girl but situation is he don't get time to meet that girl before marriage because of his ill dadi marriage happen within one week he first meet her in front of his dadi ma So it is journey of couple who don't know about each other what is their like ,dislike there nature etc, so both have tension how they go with situation Girl who is maan would be wife is geet who is shy, talkative very closed to her family specially to her father (that is fun)of this ss


Index


part 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3826436?pn=2

part 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/96749726

part 3 teaser

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3826436?pn=6

part 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/96811483

part 4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/96873382

part 5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97050213

part 6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3826436?pn=15


part 7 teaser  and update

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97231431

part  8 teaser

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97388329

part  8

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97395510

part 9

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97457772

part 10 teaser

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3826436?pn=28

part 10

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97510905

part 11

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97570148

part 12

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3826436?pn=35

part 13

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97644597

part 14

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97692570

teaser of part 15

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97731784

part 15

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3826436?pn=43

part 16 teaser

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97800543

part 16

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97805483

part 17 teaser

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3826436?pn=51

part 17

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3826436?pn=51

part 18

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3826436?pn=52

part 19

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3826436?pn=56


part 20

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/97999149

part 21

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3826436?pn=64

part 22

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98214944

part 23

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98398853

 teaser  part 24

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98620365

part 24

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98731756

part 25

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98777202

part 26


part 27


part 29
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3826436?pn=99


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second ss
Dhadkan  do  dilo ki





Prologue

  Maan car passing thru single he saw a beautiful face moment stop for him when he saw that beautiful face like angel who is standing near car and laughing with whole heartily like some sound of soft music two beautiful almond shape brown eyes like door of her soul ,his heart thudding in full speed he never saw such beautiful face of girl in his life he just hold his breath , he don't know that is dream or reality MSK who ignore girls is looking a girl live prevent person her earring dancing with her move and kiss her cheek he is felling jealous with that earring like only he have right to touch that parri ,he just looking to her and drinking her beauty with his eyes he just want to touch her ,hug her But when his eyes went to her neck he got shock of life ,his heart which dancing in joy before some time brake in thousand pieces ,he first time feeled about a girl but she is married


 Character

Geet handa /verma  age 20

Maan sing kuhurana  age 24

Dadima 65

Anni 20

Pinky and 24

adi  28


index

part 1


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98564113

part 2

 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98619632

part 3


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98823525

part 4
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98868159

part 5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99102383

teaser of part 6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99628726

part 6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3865415?pn=24

part 7

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3865415&TPN=28

part 8


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3865415?pn=30

part 9

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/100465097

part 10

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3865415?pn=39

part 11

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3865415?pn=44

part 12

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3865415?pn=48

part 13

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3865415?pn=53

part 14

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3865415?pn=56

part 15

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3865415?pn=63

part 16

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102451688

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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New  story Adoore Sapane





Prologue

It is so important that every one have to followed elder in there own carrier /business ,he don't have right to choose his own way , he cant give decision for himself for god sake I am artist and I cant match this so called profit making business world, corporate world with fake smile with fake thought where on name sake of profit they ready to do any wrong any sin , I cant be a profit making machine icant live in limit of rule ,regulation why cant papa understanding me why

 

And for mom I am dome student who gate only passing marks which damage her image in society ,why she  always look me as failure  A Big Zero  why she look my as her son who want his mother love why some sound stared in my room

 

You are  failure

You are big zero

You are ashamed for us

You are shame on our family

You cant be true kuhurana

 

I want shout NO NO stop it stop it ,yes I am zero ,I am zero but now iam free from your so called practical world where emotions is same word for full and I am big full so I don't have right to  live in this practical world so I Mr. Maan kuhurana free my parent from my Zero and he start to laugh like manic and whole bed of room deep with red blood

 in other city in one house one girl standing before mirror and thinking After all this  I have to live life for else/other  because others life are depended on me when my body ,my soul have so much injury  i cant finish my life because of other, bachpan se ( bachpan chut gaya kya ?)  IS my childhood passed don't know? Not live for me with my opinion with my lifestyle and now I cant died , death decision also not mine hamesha dusro ke liye jiti ayi hu abi khud ke  liye mar bhi nahi sakti why god why I got this punishment in my life of 16 year old yes I am 16 year old Geet handa who want to die but don't have right of death of myself why why why me she just look to her image in mirror she saw her  tummy without any expression , beautiful eyes of that  girl looking so dead emotionless, lifeless,yes i am pregnant...dadima say



index
teaser of part 1






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Fate of the unfortunate



Prologue


                 one lady between 20 to 22 lying on bed without any cloth ,one man just attacking her body without any mercy , but she cant react to him , like his touch not touching her body , her mind her soul is not present with her beautiful body yes she have perfect beautiful body which made anyone crazy but she just hate herself , her body which took her in present situation ,she don't react to that man , that made that man more and more wild all her body turn blue with his bits , but she never hiss in pain , at last when that man finish his work he just slap her on her cheek and say You w****, cant response , i give money for this to you're your ...HUSBAND ,she say first word in full night

 


Yes her husband send her with another man for S** so he get money, she is his money making machine her body is way of his earning she is  MRS GEET SINGAHANIYA /GEET HANDA  a s***, she smile on her faith and push that man away and went from their after wearing her cloth and most imp things , money without that she cant entered in her own house ...after half hour she reach her house and start to knock door , after 5 minute , a man yes her so called husband open door ,and first come dirty smell of alcohol ,

 


she feel like omitting ,she want to enter ,but he just say , money , she just put all money to his hand and run to her room, she don't want to look his face also for second ...she just open her room door and went to near bed their her life sleeping peacefully and she get her life back , a small smile come on her face she just kiss that baby face , yes baby her baby ,her life Muskan  4 month baby ...she just took shower and clean herself , she want to clean that touch also but smile sadly  and say herself ...you cant clean that dirt from your body till whole life geet , she smile sadly

 

 


she just come out and took her baby on lap and start to feed her ,her milk , that baby missing mother milk , she start suck hungrily in her sleep also...which brought tear in geet eyes ,she just say why , why with me , what is my fault so i got life like this ...why

Thread one

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3952132


thread two

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/105285600


thread three


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4019591




Edited by Mahimaan - 9 years ago
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teaser

Journey of maaneet arrange marriage
teaser of part 22


maan gift from maan ab socho maan geet ko ye pahene dega ya fir ******



Life of geet
teaser of part 20



and







and


enjoy


New story
teaser of part 2





maan called dadima





maan you have to live for me maan say dadima


geet  a girl called out in fear

updates on Monday ,Tuesday


teaser of part 24 of journy


maan geet i got more vacation of 8 days from office and geet
 Geet : maan I have a problem

 Maan : don't worry I will solve that

Geet : maan problem is whisper Geet say with bending head

Maan Whisper ,no geet tell me loudly I am hearing  don't be shy

Geet turning full red with maan talk

 
Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Lovely teaser waiting 4 updates
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interesting teasers...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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nice teasers
update sooN!!!!!!!!!