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part 18
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i feeling nervous with this part this is my first time that i write so bold so sorry for mistake and writing your comment 18+


Part 20

Hear geet come to that place first she all confused why he called her there ,she is in bridal dress she feeling so shy but office staff brought her with another way so anybody cant see her ,when she reach there she just forget to blink her eyes ,that place is so beautiful so many butterfly start to dance in her tummy ,she have goose bump on her whole body with anticipation she just clutch her duppata ,when she went to master bedroom she got idea of maan fantasy she just sit on bed with long veil and with thudding heart Dhak Dhak Dhak

Maan also came to cottage with thudding heart ,everybody thinks that girls get nervous but no men's also feeling nervous , how they proceed with partner there act hurt her or not etc , so with tension and new felling maan enter cottage he don't found her in ground floor so with heavy because of passion and nervousness heart he went to master bedroom , he push door of room and he just stand rooted in his place the sine front of his eyes ,firstly fully decorated room with flowers, candles and there his heart queen sitting on bed with long veil which hiding her face but her hand feel with henna ,because of nervousness her payal and bangle start make sound but that sound fill as music to maan ears .he somehow control his over flowing emotions and start to came to geet it is like he found his life treasure and he don't want that in hurry ,in slow step he is coming to geet


Geet when he hard sound of room door she just closed her eyes, clutch her knee in nervousness ,she start to shake like dry leaf ,she just sit there with so much feeling like ,happy ,scare, curiosity ,so much butterfly flying in her stomach her hand and lags start to went cold this desireful tension ,she just pry to god and wait for maan next move ,and maan come near bed and stand for second and start to cress his temple he little confuse that how to take next move this sexual tension lock his thoughts ,he just sit beside geet and geet took her knees to herself ,with thudding heart and shaking hand he open geet long veil ,he just stop to take his breath ,oh god geet face is shining like gold ,silk ,moon natural light and candle light brought golden effect on her face ,he forget to blink his eyes ,


he just watching his beautiful lady love ,his pari with so much love now he more feeling nervous because she just looking as beautiful flower he have scare to touch that flower , he have feeling that may be his touch scratch this tender flower ,and geet like why maanji talking anything or touching her ,this thought brought red hue in her face she smack herself ,how shameless you geet ,she just closed her face with her hand but maan hold her hand in husky voice say geet not today ,you don't hide your face today , I don't want to hide your face, eyes from me ,i want my mishty saw to me when I worship her with my my love and passion please geet ,mishty open your eyes and look at me ,I just want to see your beautiful eyes dear

jiv dangala gungala rangala asa piramachi aas tu..

jiv lagala laabhala dhyass ho to gahiwarala shwas tu..

pailtira neshil saath mala deshil kalij majha tu..

sukh bharatila aala nabh dharatila aala punawacha chand tu..

jiv rangala gungala rangala asa piramachi aas tu..

jiv lagala laabhala dhyass ho to gahiwarala shwas tu.

I am engrossed and engulfed You are my longing for love

Fallen in your love and received your love You are my desire You are my breath

Will you ferry me across Will you become my companion beloved You are my soul

Happiness, satisfaction is overflowing Sky came to earth, sky met the earth You are the full moon

I am engrossed and engulfed You are my longing for love

Fallen in your love and received your love You are my desire You are my breath

Geet clutch her duppata and start to open her eyes ,when maan saw in her eyes ,her love full eyes it give a satisfaction to his soul his mind and he is know that her geet accept him and she is ready to took there relation in next level ,some hair are falling to her face maan put that back of her ear he put his hand on geet hand which are shaking he know she is nervous and geet's cold hand telling story of her state




his long fingers start to cares her hand in slow speed he travel his finger from her hand to shoulder geet felling like some feather moving on her skin she just hold her breath when maan finger stop near her neck ,he start to make pattern there oh god his touch felling so heavenly ,maan come near to her lips and blow air there and said with husky voice breath geet breath ,geet face turn dark red colored and sweet smile came in maan face ,he then move to her ear and give kiss there and took out ear ring he make same things to other one ,he took her duppata he slide it slowly from her head and give kiss on her forehead and took mangteeka


He say geet this sinddor tell me that it is color of my life ,which you feel with happiness ,then he came to nose ring with he felling jealous at the time when he pull veil from geet eyes and say geet this nose ring just tease me ,it is my right to touch your pink lips which are like soft rose petal ,with that he give peek on her nose ,geet just clutch pillow which is beside her and hold his moan ,maan further move to her bangle and pull out that with kiss ,than last he went to her payal and say you know geet this my friends because they telling me where are you there sound tell me you are my life song misty


Maan came to really near to her face he is watching to her face he first kiss her eyes ,then her cheek geet so much wanted kiss on lips but maan plying with her , he know geet expecting kiss on lips but he is taking his own sweet time and torturing her with his smooch on face and she just say Maanji please ,with that word without any notice he just took her lips in long, beautiful kiss which ,maan just want to drink all her sweetness and geet eyes pop out with his move ,but after few second she also start to kiss him she put her hand on his shoulder ,maan put his large plam on her abdominal ,a big gaps come from her mouth and he just enter in her mouth ,he start to drink her saliva with his lips and his hand moving on her abdominal in sensuous way , she felling so out of world with that touch and kiss

After some time when maan found themselves breathless he stop that kiss , geet face fully flushes with passion ,maan in soft voice say geet you testing so sweet geet turn red in shyness she just hug maan and say maanji ,but that is wrong move because her voice come as moan and in hug maan hands went to her back and that direct contact with her back skin ,he just grown and say GEET ,




that choli have only one knot in back side , her whole back come under large palm he cares that with his long finger and in swift moment he open that knot of choli poor geet gasp and moan MAAN , maan on 9 th cloud because first time geet call maan and not maanji and he just love that and in shyness she hold her front with her hand ,so it not fall from shoulder and lay on bed in shyness on her stomach she cant face maan

chand sugandha deil raat usasa deil

sari dharati tujhi rujavyachi mati tu..

khula aabhal dhagaal tyala rudhi cha vitaal

majhya raagh sajana hi kakanachi tod maal tuu..

khula kalija he majhe tula dila mi aandan

tujhya payav makhil majhya janmacha gondhal

Moon will spread fragrance Night will sigh in relief

Entire earth is yours You are a fertile soil

The sky is clouded with ancient, age old traditions

Oh my dear, beloved You break this chain of bangles

I gave you my crazy heart to you as a gift as a offering

I will devote my life to beautify your life forever just like a tattoo on your feet my life will be yours forever

But her action give full view of her back to maan and maan eyes turn red in passion and desire, he come closed to her and put his manly hand on her marble back oh god he is felling like he touching some silk ,that milky white skin shining in moon light ,he start to make patten on her back and he say geet you know on our first morning after marriage and you are standing in garden that first time I saw your flawless back you know what happen to me that time and he just touch his abdominal to her there his ******** touching her back ,you don't have idea how I control myself that day ,with that he start kiss her back , geet start to moan ,maan oh maan ,now maan lay on her but not put his weight on her ,he turn her to himself , now also she holding her choli with her hand ,she feeling so much shy, he bend his mouth to her belly button and give smooch there with that geet put her both hand on maan hair and she just forget about choli maan smooch took her in new world ,maan take this chance and hold her both hand in his one hand and pin it on her head side and with other hand he just throw that choli from her should geet loudly gaps MAAN no ,but poor maan totally lost in her feminine . women beauty , he is just looking to her Bl... With passionate eyes ,he forget to blink his yes , he just hold his breath he just scare to touch her there ,if his touch damage that beauty of geet

Poor geet felling so shy with, half nude in front / upper of maan nude eyesof maan, his passionate gaze give Goosebumps to her body ,he just watching to her bl... With so much desire, second by second her face turn dark shade of red ,she called maan please that brought him back, with smile ,with thudding heart he just brush his finger on her that small little black dot and say beautiful ,geet you are so beautiful and he just start to touch them with his large palm and geet start moan his name , which give more courage to him ,now he took one bl... in his hand and start to squeezing it ,geet shake with this new felling it fired cracker in her body ,she just hissed in sweet pain and moan , now maan start this whole proceeding with other one with his hand

he put his mouth on first one he first softly brush his lips then he start lick that with his tongue and at last he took that in his mouth geet just grab his head in her palm and start to Rub, Run her fingers through his hair. it add fuel in fire ,he give other one same treatment and took geet hand on his shirt and guide her to undo that ,geet with shaking hand open her shirt he put her hand on his chest , and geet just start to feel her manly chest with her soft hand maan cant hold himself with her nave and soft touch her hand rub on his chest shoulder , back , torso ,


he just took her in his hug ,there upper nude body touch with each other and cracker start to fired in their body both are rubbing each other back and maan again took her lips with moan ohhh mishty , now geet also matching with his passion her upper soft womanly part touching hard against his chest ,and it create havoc in there body ,when geet totally loss in his kiss and touch maan just open her knot of lehanga , geet stop kiss and just put her face in his neck , she called out maan she is so shy ,maan just hold her face in his hand and say geet you trust me , she just nodded yes and say it is painful ?

he just smile with her qus and say little bit geet but it pain me also but we become one and it give pleasure to us geet it took our relation in further step dear ,trust me , geet just say yes maan I trust you , he again took her lips in his mouth with smile but it is slow one he nibbling her petal he give love bite to her neck he brought her in sleeping poison and start kiss her from head to her bl ... and in swift moment he pull her lengha down now geet is in her inner beautiful skin colored inner and



her waist chain ,he come closed to her belly and blow air there she just shake with his sweet torture he brush his face it tickle her she moan maan , maan then start to brush his lips near waist chain and he say in our puja this one so torture me geet , it is more lucky then me with that he pull that out and softly bit her belly he again took her bl... in his mouth and pull out her last barrier also , geet loudly gap maaan he start to see her full nude in front him now his desire on pick , he just want to took her and love her endlessly , geet in shy try to cover her body with duet but maan hold her hand and nodded no geet not today then he undo his own pant and lay beside geet took her in hug now there body part touching in right place which brought shy smile in her face ,because maan totally aroused his man**** poking in her V ,she just hide her face to his neck ,maan start to laugh with her reaction and say geet are you ready , I can not hold my self geet ,geet just nodded her head maan start to rub his body to her nude body in very sensuous way ,they fit to each other like puzzle , now he come to her toe and start kiss it he came very slowly upper side then he look to geet and rub his tip oh Ma... To her entrance her every mussels start to hard with tension maan got it and say relax dear if you stiff it give pain to both of us he again took her lips in sensuous kiss and in swift moment he enter her V geet hissed in pain maan part try to settle there and it brought tear in her eyes ,and some tear fall down ,maan drink that and say bas thodasa geet then it will pleasured geet he again trust her with force ,he broke her virginity he start to stroke in slow speed now geet pain turn into pleasure ,she smile little bit now maan increased his speed his stroke it is deeper and deeper it give heavenly pleasured to both of them the room is filed with their moan ,after maan big trust geet come to her climax and she moan in pleasured and maan called out l love you geet , he got his climax also which brought amused happiness in geet heart , both are breathing heavenly maan just pick near geet heart and say thanks geet thanks , and he lay down on her

jiv dangala gungala rangala asa piramachi aas tu..

jiv lagala laabhala dhyass ho to gahiwarala shwas tu..

pailtira neshil saath mala deshil kalij majha tu..

sukh bharatila aala nabh dharatila aala punawacha chand tu..

jiv rangala gungala rangala asa piramachi aas tu..

jiv lagala laabhala dhyass ho to gahiwarala shwas tu.

I am engrossed and engulfed You are my longing for love

Fallen in your love and received your love You are my desire You are my breath

Will you ferry me across Will you become my companion beloved You are my soul

Happiness, satisfaction is overflowing Sky came to earth, sky met the earth You are the full moon



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Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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very beautifull n ice update😃⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wondrful update dearr..
U hav done all justice to this suhaagraat update..it is awsum to read such a long update from you..
Please continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
both prts r osm,,
maan preprd hr 4 nxt stp
sr prt s butifl ...u done full jstice 2 it,,,👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
gr8 update☺️...
continue soon..
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both the updates are amazing
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nice update.finally maaneet r one
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hai mahi here i am sorry for delay
i love the way ur presenting the story gal and the concept is really good one i loved it

geet is soo navie haha she is telling her dream to her dad lolzz she is damn cute must say. and this maan all ways using her navie nature but i love his teasing secession. that phone talk rolf haha maan is really such a flirt but only for geet. and what he said at last i didn't get that

he confessed many times about his feelings i love his way of expressing that. adi and pinky are are really such a good friends for maaneet wow pinky is super sweet and cute yaar

i didn't expected her to be that much emotional she is really cute. i love adi teasing maan all ways

even that mohan also poor maan

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