MG os Baate kuch unkahi si part 2,3, last part page 18,22,26

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don't blast on me
but i want to finish
one ff either Fate
or adoore
so you decide which one i
finish first so i will give that update daily



and think this os as bribe so you don't get angry with me

but i always say i don't like to drag topic with so much twist

so i love to stop n right place thou both ff have more 12 to 15

part but you give idea so i work on that




and this os second part deepened on your comment not only
comment but BIG comment

Mahi


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MG os Baate kuch unkahi si

maan just cribbing on his faith ajj hi meri gadi ko kharab hona that nakul just forgate to give car for servicing it is just just ...poor boy now traveling with new wedded bride yes maan Singh khurana taking his bride Geet with him to his mention and distance is 5 to 6 hour At the time of bidai he saw so much dream that at last he get privacy in his car with his bride but Nakul mistake and new couple landed in mini bus in which his whole family traveling with him poor boy all just giving him teasing look specially anni and Vicky his small twins sibling

just than dadi say with innocent voice arre maan beta appp apni farrari ko chodke yaha kya kar rahe ho , maan cried just like small kid dadima , he took sit in front of vicky and anni , now he is fix In all this one person turning red and red which is geet they have wedding in 3 month thou they talk on phone but cant come face to face So on marriage ceremony they came face to face , geet family against meeting of bride and groom it is dadi who give geet number to maan so they at-list chat on phone but maan always teasing geet and shy geet more turn shy and talk less so now also both are just stranger to each other

in marriage ceremony when maan hold her hand more than need she become sharam se pan pani , but so much butterfly start to dance in her tummy with maan touch in phere also his hand grip is so tight like he saying that you cant go away from me now geet, and all just teasing her ke makeup main lal /red color jada use kiya kya babaji and now all just teasing them with maan car ,when after bidai maan took her to his car , she become cold with thought that next 5,6 hour alone with maan poor girl just prayer to her babaji but she don't know that privacy is more safe than travel with family with her naughty husband

When geet try to sit next to maan same time bus get start and poor girl just fall on maan lap and in fear maan just place his hand on geet wrist, geet just closed her eyes with fear that she will get definitely hurt but ...maan just lost in her closeness his hand on her tummy both hot breath falling on each other face when geet feel she is safe and landed on someone she open her eyes her beautiful almond shape eyes and she just lost in maan big chocolate eyes both just lost in each other Mahiii only Vicky word back them in real world

Vicky anni bhagwan jab bhi deta hai to chapad phad ke deta hai na and just wink to maan who glare Vicky ,geet just stand from maan lap and took sit next to him , she just bend her head in shyness poor girl just try to control her heartbeats which are sounding dhak dhak dhak dhak

maan just enjoying her shyness he just want to hold he hand and next moment when Vicky and anni lost in talking maan long finger start to caressed on geet chuda and geet eyes winded in shock she just look to hear and there like if anybody watching and her breath stop in her lungs when his long finger start to caressed her fingers her palm just than maan try to hold her full of mehendi hand dev voice make maan took his hand back from geet

maan please cover the mirror in front of you who giving us good view of ...he left sentence half oh geet just turn red like tomato and maan cribbed ye lo big bro bhi start ho gave he look to mirror and give angry glare to dev who is sitting to back seat of maan

but his dadima come rescue of maaneet and say in loud voice stop all of you and maan go sit back side with geet

now maan make bhangra in his mind and both maaneet sit on last sit geet fell so shy all just giving them teasing look poor geet just start to crib to her babaji and take window sit away from maan


maan get she feel shy and embarrassed with all teasing he also make distance and just start to admired his beautiful wife , she is just pari so beautiful he feel if his touch hurt her his eyes went to her forehead where maantika along with sinddor just adding beauty in her he feel so proud that he had right /haq to fill her maang and now onwards he fill her life with all happiness

jannaton ke dar khule kuch baashinde the chale

le aaye wo nanhi jaan us khuda ka ek payaam

tab se tu hai jahaan mein ban ke raunak yahan ki meri jaan

khwahishon se bhi aage jo khushi ka mile wo armaan...

the gates of heaven open some people started to roam

they brought with themselves a little life, one message of god

since then you are the vision of this place my love

you are above wishes, happiness of wishes come true. you are...

with phone called he get that how nave and innocent is his bride so many time she don't get meaning of his teasing word he look to her palm tuen so dark with mehandi he want to brought star from sky and just put them on her beautiful hand , when she fall on his lap oh he so much lost in her smell who is like like chandan , ssoft smell like flower ager Vicky ne tease nahi kiya hota to to shayad shayad...he shake his head in no poor boy just took big breath he just look to her face , her face is so beautiful and divine just like diya of front of god ...

cham cham jani raatein ye sitaron wale hath

bheeni bheeni khushbhoo jaise teri meethi baat

ujla ujla sa ye tan

jaise mehka ho chandan

baahon mein teri guzre mera ye saara jeevan

teri ada mein masoomiyat hai phir bhi hai shokhi rangeeniyat hai

taaron se bhar doon main aanchal tera,

rab se bhi pyara hai chehra tera.. chehra tera.. chehra tera...

stary twinkling nights, these star covered hands..

exotic aromatic aroma like your sweet words.

your body is so pure

just like the smell of sandalwood.

i could spend my life time in your arms

in your sweetness there is shyness still there is arogant yet full of colors

fill your veil with stars

your face is more beautiful then god himself

your face

your face..

Just than bus stop with speed and poor geet again lost her balance and just collide with maan but this time maan don't hold her but she took his shervani in her palm with fear she curse to driver and maan thanks to driver

all come out for tea it is tea time nearly 5.30 of pm all come out for fresh up and all anni just come near maaneet and took geet with her maan want to stop but he know that she need fresh up and all

in hotel fresh room for man and women it near to each other when maan reach there , geet come out from restroom , where anni saying her if she is not comfortable she remove her chunneri geet get confused , if any older don't like that , just than she look to maan like help and maan just nodded n yes but poor boy don't have idea that what trouble he is calling

when geet nodded in yes anni just turn her now geet back to maan and anni pull out pin form geet head and pull out her chunneri and maan eyes pop out he hissed with desire and his throat went dry with with ...

geet top have deep back cut and her milky white marble skin his hand just want to feel that caressed that and and ...he cant trust himself more and just run in rest room and just closed his eyes and want to forget that image poor boy ...but failed miserably after controlling his own thought he come out and saw geet sitting with Vicky and anni , anni sitting beside geet

maan saw his bride who have sweet smile in her lips oh poor boy just lost in beautiful smile , some twinkle in her eyes , she must drink water some drop of water resting on her lips and poor boy feel like perl resting on her rosy lips they are lucky than him which rested on her rosy pink lips , his eyes just want to see her , she make him just crazy , she look like full of life and full of color

phool hothon pe khile chand aankhon mein mile

phool hothon pe khile chand aankhon aankhon mein mile

bikhre moti subah ki jaise kirne teri ye muskaan

noor barse nazar se noori tujh mein basi hai meri jaan

noor barse nazar se noori tujh mein basi hai meri jaan

teri dhanak ki pyasi nazar hai

deewanagi ye tera asar hai

roohane rangon ka ye aanchal tera

sapno ki raaton ka ye baadal mera.. baadal mera.. baadal mera...

flowers blossoms on lips , moon can be found on eyes

flowers blossoms on lips , moon can be found on eyes

scattered pearls like the morning rays is your smile

Noor(light) falls from eyes, lightining is filled inside of u

Noor(light) falls from eyes, lightining is filled inside of u

eyes are thirsty to 1 sight on you

this craziness is your fault

roohane colors is your veil

this cloud of dreams is mine, cloud of mine, cloud of mine

when maan come near table geet just bend her head in shyness poor girl cant hold his gaze on her it burning her and when he say yes near rest room she got that he care for her and that touch her heart , so many butterfly flying on her tummy , both again lost in each other when geet aw in his eyes maan eyes ...Mahi...

dheere dheere sar chadha tera jaadu aage badha

dheere dheere sar chadha tera jaadu jaadu aage badha

hua khud se juda main phir bhi tujhpe fida main meri jaan

ishq le le tu le le le le, le le mera imtihaan

ishq le le tu le le le le, le le mera imtihaan

soone safar ki tu sohbat hai, bakhshi khuda ne ye milkiyat hai

aaja saja de gori aangan mera, jaise sajaya tune lamha mera.. lamha mera.. lamha mera..

slowly slowly head got up, your magic moved forward

slowly slowly head got up, your magic magic moved forward

i departed from myself but fall for you my love

take my love, take it take it my exam

take my love, take it take it my exam

you are the company of lonely journey, god has blessed this ownership

come beautiful, decorate my home, just like you decorated my moment, my moment, my moment

both feel like they are unded some magical , this new felling that other share your pain , give you happiness , you become one in all sense no any distance in between in them they start their journey as maan and geet to become maaneet their mind , soul and body become one in all sense

anni and Vicky just went away from this love bird which are so lost in each other

just than maan hear his car horn first he think it is his imagination but he again herd that horn and he come in real word geet also lokk hear their and saw Vicky and anni is not there she bend her head in shyness , she know she have to get tease now she make such baby face poor maan just want to pull her cheek

just than he look to road oh his car standing their he give look to dev who just give him thump up and point out to car oh first time red hu come on maan face , dev just come their and hug maan and mumeer in maan ear

your car is all ready but jada tang mat karna hamari bhabhi ko happy journey maan

maan turn more shy with his big brother talk ...

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Epilogue of Dhadkan do dilo ki (complete)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3974738/msk-ki-sr-hogi-ke-nahi-hogi-my-ss-dhdkan-epilogue-os-two-part


os JAB WE MET

MG ff Uljhe Rishtey----kahanni ek unkhili kali ki

Os Happy women day?

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3942891/happy-women-day-os

i will not vote in Nach

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3804079/i-will-not-vote-in-nach


How many time we have to hurt myself as GEET fan ?


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww it was sooo cute os
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love it
I like fate very much if possible please continue it
Waiting for ur update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I like fate concept continue it
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awsum os dear poor maan dil k arman gadi nai dh dia geet is shy shy love their teasing
want adore to be updated first
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so sweet story
enjoy reading it
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Nice update dear give update of adoore
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Nice update lovely os maaneet get married and their familly teas them waiting 4 next part

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