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Posted: 11 years ago
part 7

Hai jisne banaya mitaaye vohi,

Phool kanton ko sang sang khilaaye vohi,




maan just laughs on her talk he just pull her cheek and say Rat nahi pari , yes pari just like you sweet , innocent and be... ,he just stop in middle and slap him in mind maan control maan , but he have big smile on his face

geet pari for me sachhi ,

maan muchhi yes pari like you

geet just put her hand on her tummy and start cares there with love and care ,she just lost in her pari,and her nave mind forgate maan word that he try to suicide ,he give her privacy and went from there when geet lost in her pari ,she just try to feel baby but failed she make baby face and called without looking up maanji saw she not responding me she just run when you talking ,she make pout ,when she don't get ans she look up but there is no maan there , she cribbed dekha pari wo hame bin bataye chale gaye hum do no milke unse katti lange ok .

Hear maan control himself he want to hug dadima , she ask nakul about dadima , nakul tell him that she is in his room , maan room ,maan just run to his room and called Dadima ,and hug her tighty and start to cry , sorry dadima sorry apane pain main itna kho gaya ke kuhdka pain sabse bada laga / so much lost in my pain ,and start to thought I have biggest pain in world but no dadima it is not true there are so many people suffering in various pain , dadima why Geet , that small girl suffer from so much pain , first her parent death , and that animal treat her like that and give her pain for life time , dadima can she handle this pregnancy , tell me dadima ,and what is future of geet and pari dadima , maan first time talking so freely to dadi , she cant hold her tear and it start to came from her eyes ,she just caressing his head with so much love , she want to maan open up in front of her or any body and that happen , now she don't have to worry about him


Mat bhool arre insaan,

Mat bhool arre insaan,

Teri neki badinahin usse chupi,

Sab dekh raha bhagawaan,

Mat bhool arre insaan

she took his face in her palm and pick his forehead ,maan it is destiny and human or say in name of human animal are rooming in our so called well cultured society , and geet victim of that animal ,we cant save her that time but now I can protect her and I know you also help me in that , am i right , maan just nodded his head , and for her safety we have to make her healthy with body and mind and you can help me

,

Hai jisne banaya mitaaye vohi,

Phool kanton ko sang sang khilaaye vohi,

Khel jeevan maran kaa

Khel jeevan maran kaa racaaye vohi,

Dale mati ke putale mein jaan,

Mat bhool arre insaan


I think she is conferrable with you ,and about your pain , yes sometime we took decision like this it is wick moment of your life , so don't worry about it dear and maan who is pari

maan just have broad smile on his face , pari dadima geet doughter

dadima start to laugh maan how you know that is girl ,she just want to pull maan legs and maan got it so he just say

You wait and watch dadima she is My Pari I am more than 100 % sure

he called that baby his but he is in so happy mood he cant focus on his word ,and dadima also ignore it ,both stop there talking when they hear crying sound of geet , both look towered her there she is coming to them and crying ,both are so scared , why she is crying , dadima took her in hug and ask what happen baccha , why you are crying ,what happen geet just nodded in no but she looking to maan with anger , now maan get confused ye emotion ki dookan kuch bolagi ya kahi dekhti rahygi god this girl ,geet just turn face to other side ,dadima softly say geet beta you want something to eat ,geet again nodded in yes , dadima eye to maan to take care of her ,give pick on geet forehead and went from there

Jo vidhata ne likhi use maan le,

Pran de ve vohi aur wohi pran le,

Tere bas mein hai kya

Tere bas mein hai kya yeh zara jaan le

Tu hai nirbal tho vo balwaan,

Mat bhool arre insaan

Mat bhool arre insaan,

Mat bhool arre insaan,

maan come to geet and ask what happen geet

geet make all type face ,again she start to glare to him with anger ,maan frustrated with her stair but he control himself and say geet what happen are you hungry

she make baby face with tearful eyes say what to do your pari don't know what happen to her wo hil nahi rahi /she is not moving ,after you came out from room

maan want to slap his head how a baby move always ,maan came near and put hand on her tummy ,with his touch baby start to move , both get amazed with baby reaction , geet is so happy she also put her hand on tummy

but again start to complaint see see this Rat only response to you , you put your hand and she imm react , i hate you she say with pout

maan just nodded his head in no oh god first she angry and worry for baby movement and now when baby give reaction she again angry on me that baby react to my touch god save me

maan softly said geet she is baby sometime react , some time not she is so small geet , after some time she will be more active geet ,give some time ,and one more thing don't called her Rat , she is pari ,angel so keep in your mind , he make stream face

geet smile sheepishly and say ,what to do if she jumping like rat so I called her rat , it is not my fault

maan just say Geeet

poor geet put finger on her lip like obedient /good child and nodded in no

maan just closed her eyes how he should angry with this nave girl ,she is so innocent ,he just want to pull her cheek , but some how control himself , he make his mind without need he cant touch her , so he following his own rule he wanted to win her trust ,make her comfortable with him




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Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hmmm the baby reacting to maan
That's interesting
But when geet wants the baby to react baby wouldn't
Which made geet mad
Ahhh finally maan let his pain out
About time too
No point keeping it in is it
Bless geet is so cute
Maan doesn't realise that he called baby his
And dadi too didn't react much
Cheers for pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update...
angry baby geet...
loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
geet n her talks with d rat ...its really funny...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely part
emotion ki dhukaan😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww cute update yar:)
loved it a lot:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part..
maan is crying 4 geet
he realised his stupidity..
n baby again responding to him..loved the part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update
Geet ka rat maan ko respond karta hai...!!
Maan ki pari geet ko respond nahi karti...!!
Maan dadi se pari ki baat karta hai...loved it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update.love it baby respond to maan so sweet

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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 8



Maine kaha phoolon se
Maine kaha phoolon se
Hanso to woh khil-khila ke hans diye
Aur yeh kaha jeevan hai
Bhai mere bhai hansne ke liye

O.. maine kaha phoolon se
Hanso to woh khil-khila ke hans diye
Aur yeh kaha jeevan hai
Bhai mere bhai hansne ke liye
Hansne ke liye




maan softly said geet she is baby sometime react , some time not she is so small geet , after some time she will be more active geet ,give some time ,and one more thing don't called her Rat , she is pari ,angel so keep in your mind , he make stream face

geet smile sheepishly and say ,what to do if she jumping like rat so I called her rat , it is not my fault

maan just say Geeet

poor geet put finger on her lip like obedient /good child and nodded in no

maan just closed her eyes how he should angry with this nave girl ,she is so innocent ,he just want to pull her cheek , but some how control himself , he make his mind without need he cant touch her , so he following his own rule he wanted to win her trust ,make her comfortable with him

next morning maan wake up with vomiting voice , and soft cry in early 4 am , he is so confused , maan don't know that dadi change geet room and it is now next to maan room ,he just wake up and followed the sound it is coming from next door , with heisted he knock on door but don't get response , he again knock at last he lost his patients and open door and ask who is there , are you ok, now he recognized voice yes it is geet voice he just run towered bathroom ,there geet vomiting like hell , she somehow holding wash basing , but he leg give up and her body fell on ground but maan rush to her in time and took her in his hand , he just called out geet geet what happen , what happen , where is her caretaker , he just in loud voice called nakul wife , his angry voice full house reverberated with maan angry voice , nakul ,nakul wife and care taker of geet just rush to geet room

maan just lay down geet on bed , he give her come water but she denied , she don't have power to talk , she laid there with pale face this early pregnancy taking toll on her health , body , her body is not ready for it

this is normal things in pregnancy that women suffer from Nausea and vomiting it commonly occur between 5 and 18 weeks of pregnancy and geet having 2 and half month so , geet pale face just pinch maan heart , he just want to kill that ba****** he some how control himself , when all appeared in geet room he gesture all of them to came outside , when they reach outside he just shout as thunder , why the hell geet is Alon her room , you cant give your proper duty , if anything happen today , who is responsible for it , he just turn to caretaker and said in streen voice , you are fired , his eyes red like fire ,which shake all of them , caretaker start to cry , but maan just turn to nakul wife and say from now ma you have to look after geet , its ok , she just nodded her head

maan again came to geet there she is sleeping , he make mental note that he have to talk about it with doc and geet chakup , he just sit beside her and start to cares her head , he just sleep there in sitting postion and in sleep geet just put her head on his lap and sleep there only in morning dadi know about it from nakul , she jst nodded her head but she is happy with maan care for geet , and geet comfortable with maan , she is happy for her children , she just went to geet room , there she saw maan sleeping I sitting position and geet head on maan lap

Two hurtful souls

Give support each other

One knowingly

Other one unknowingly

she just clean her tear and softly patterned on maan shoulder , maan open his eyes , first he don't got where is he , but early morning incidence came before his eyes , he just going to call geet but dadima say softly , don't called geet maan beta she is sleeping ,you get up and be ready , maan just nodded his head , he put geet head on cushions , geet imm have line on her forehead and she make baby face with pout in sleep and mummer rat ,please late me sleep , maan first angry with word rat but both dadi and maan chukale on geet , maan mummer she is impossible , maan finish his morning rooting and came to dadi room , he tell her all and called doc also , he don't want to took geet to hospital so ,he called her doc for checkup ,till than dadi make her ready ,first she is denying but with maan help she ready for it but she put condition that thay both should be there in room , dadi ,maan get hesitated for maan present but doc sign them , so they keep quite doc start her checkup there ,

Suraj hansa to bikhar bikhar gayi kirnein
Suraj hansa to bikhar bikhar gayi kirnein
Suraj hansa re..
Kiran kiran chun kar dharti yeh

Saj ke sunehri ban gayi re
Maine kaha..
O.. maine kaha sapmon se
Sajo to woh muskura ke saj gaye
Aur yeh kaha jeevan hai
Bhai mere bhai sajne ke liye
Sajne ke liye




she say maan to turn his face for other side , so geet make any fuss , and maan also filled comfortable , doc just put lotions on geet tummy geet giggle with filling tickle , maan just nodded in no , doc put covered on geet tummy and start her work than she say turn to maan maan just blow away when he saw image on screen ,




it is not big ,but doc indicate to small things he just froze in his place his pari , his eyes full of tear he just care screen with so much care like he is touching real baby ,he thinking what nature creation and nature give this power to women for that she have so much patients and strength to bear this sweet pain , after that our so called society called women as wick part ,human and treated her like *** toy disgusting , when she created word another life in this world

, all lost in baby ,and geet voice brought them back , she just cry , dadi I cant see it , all cant control their laugh , maan give side so geet can watch image poor girl open her mouth in O shape and maan , lo suru ho gayi emotion ki dukan , geet closed your eyes or eles ,some insect went in your mouth , she make pout , all some how control there laugh , she watch for some second with holding maan handand say ye to Rat se bhi chotha hai ,


but she have smile on her face and all happy for her ,maan ask for geet vomiting , doc say it is normal and it will be decrease after some day and will be stop ,but don't live her alone ,maan and dadi taking good care of her because of maan now she is mix with house servant , and her nightmare also decrease



Yeh shaam to.. yun hansi jaise hansi dulhan
Yeh shaam to yun hansi jaise hansi dulhan
Yeh.. shaam to neele neele saanware ambar mein
Rang jo gulaabi lage bharne..
Maine kaha...
O.. maine kaha rangon se
Chhalko to woh jag yeh sara rang gaye
Aur yeh kaha jeevan hai
Bhai mere bhai rangne ke liye
Rangne ke liye


last few day maan activity making doubt on geet mind he going in one room which is near maan room ,but he never allowed anybody to came there geet so many try to went there but maan cant allowed one day when maan went to market she went there and she get shock there , she just came out from that room and went to dadi room , she make angry face , there after some time maan also came he have big bag with him , geet pointed to dadi to maan ,dadi also want to know what is maan upto ,she make streen face and ask maan maan ,what is in your hand ask dadima , dadi took from maan and open bag she make big eyes there are so many phto of girl bas itnahi maan aur nahi mile /
that sit ,you don't get more maan
dadi ask with teasing smile








geet make happy face and say aur dato dadima , mere liye kuch nai laye /he don't brought anything for me and for rat , dadi come with me she just took dadi hand to her hand took her to that mistresses room

maan face colored change and dadima mouth open in O shape and eyes pop out she just called softly maan



wall




wallrobe


geet just open door of wall robe

Mausam mila woh kahin ek din mujhko
Mausam mila woh kahin ek din mujhko
Mausam mila re
Maine kaha ruko khelo mere sang tum
Mausam bhala ruka jo woh ho gaya ghum
Maine kaha..
Maine kaha apnon se chalo to woh
Saath mere chal diye
Aur yeh kaha jeevan hai
Bhai mere bhai chalne ke liye
Chalne ke liye



precap

maan with shy smile muje sabhi accha laga to maine ...





























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Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago

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