New MG ss Journey of -- Note and part 30 on page 104 ,30 jan

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Su_hana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Part 1
short but loved it
wow next me face off.
Cant wait yr

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Mahimaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Sffs
Part 1
short but loved it
wow next me face off.
Cant wait yr

thanks for comment and sabra ka fal mita hota hai baccha

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Hanishadevi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

lovely update...cant wait fr maaneet to meet..pls cont soon..

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pop77

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Maan wants to talk Geet alone..next part they see eachother..

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monika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

awesome update adi give maan right advice true friend..awesome love it

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love2_soma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

interesting...

loved it...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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seema

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

nice update
loved it
seems very fresh n tension free ff n im loving it

Edited by Anu_R - 12 years ago

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gurti30

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

beautiful start dear😊

maan is angry for not meeting the girl before marriage

adi made maan understand about arrange marriage

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

congrats for new story...

how cleverly and beautifully Adi made maan realize that arrange marriage is not that bad as he is thinking...when he don't have any option then instead of sulking and complaining he should see positive side of the situation...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...

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Mahimaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

teaser for part 2

Saat samundar paar ke gudiyo ke bajaar se
Achhee see gudiya laana
Gudiya chaahe na laana, pappa jaldee aa jaana

Tum pardes gaye jab se, bas yeh haal huwa tab se
Dil divaana lagata hai, ghar viraana lagata hai
Jhilmil chaand sitaaro ne, darwaajo divaaro ne
Sabne puchha hai ham se, (kab jee chhutega gham se -2)
Kab hoga unaka aana, pappa

Ma bhee loree nahee gaatee, hamko nind nahee aatee
Khel khilaune tut gaye, sangee saathee chhut gaye
Jeb hamaaree khaalee hai, aur basee deewali hai
Ham sabko na tadpaao, (apne ghar wapas aao -2)
Aur kabhee phir na jaana, pappa

Khat na samjho taar hai yeh, kaagaj nahee hai pyaar hai yeh
Duree aur itanee duree, aisee bhee kya majburee
Tum koyee naadan nahee, tum isase anjaan nahee
Iss jivan ke sapane ho, (ek tumhee toh apane ho -2)
Saara jag hai begaana pappa