Dhadkan do dilo ki part 28,29 on page 124,126 on 1 april

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Dhadkan do dilo ki




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Maan car passing thru single he saw a beautiful face moment stop for him when he saw that beautiful face like angel who is standing near car and laughing with whole heartily like some sound of soft music two beautiful almond shape brown eyes like door of her soul ,his heart thudding in full speed he never saw such beautiful face of girl in his life he just hold his breath , he don't know that is dream or reality MSK who ignore girls is looking a girl live prevent person her earring dancing with her move and kiss her cheek he is felling jealous with that earring like only he have right to touch that parri ,he just looking to her and drinking her beauty with his eyes he just want to touch her ,hug her But when his eyes went to her neck he got shock of life ,his heart which dancing in joy before some time brake in thousand pieces ,he first time feeled about a girl but she is married

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Charactor

Geet handa /verma age 20



Maan sing kuhurana age 24



Dadima 65



Anni 20


Pinky24


adi 28




index

part 1


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98564113

part 2


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98619632

part 3


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98823525

part 4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98868159


part 5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99102383

teaser of part 6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99628726

part 6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3865415/dhadkan-do-dilo-ki-part-28-29-on-page-124-126-on-1-april?pn=24


part 7

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3865415/dhadkan-do-dilo-ki-part-28-29-on-page-124-126-on-1-april?pn=28


part 8


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3865415/dhadkan-do-dilo-ki-part-28-29-on-page-124-126-on-1-april?pn=30

part 9

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/100465097


part 10

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3865415/dhadkan-do-dilo-ki-part-28-29-on-page-124-126-on-1-april?pn=39

part 11

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3865415/dhadkan-do-dilo-ki-part-28-29-on-page-124-126-on-1-april?pn=44

part 12

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3865415/dhadkan-do-dilo-ki-part-28-29-on-page-124-126-on-1-april?pn=48

part 13

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3865415/dhadkan-do-dilo-ki-part-28-29-on-page-124-126-on-1-april?pn=53

part 14

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3865415/dhadkan-do-dilo-ki-part-28-29-on-page-124-126-on-1-april?pn=56

part 15

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3865415/dhadkan-do-dilo-ki-part-28-29-on-page-124-126-on-1-april

part 16

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102451688

part 17

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3865415/dhadkan-do-dilo-ki-part-28-29-on-page-124-126-on-1-april

part 18

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102727333

part 19


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102935206

part 20


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/103066357

part 21

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/103128748


part 22

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/103128748

part 23

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3865415/dhadkan-do-dilo-ki-part-28-29-on-page-124-126-on-1-april

part 24

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3865415/dhadkan-do-dilo-ki-part-28-29-on-page-124-126-on-1-april

part 25

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3865415/dhadkan-do-dilo-ki-part-28-29-on-page-124-126-on-1-april

part 26


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3865415/dhadkan-do-dilo-ki-part-28-29-on-page-124-126-on-1-april

part 27

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3865415/dhadkan-do-dilo-ki-part-28-29-on-page-124-126-on-1-april

part 28

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3865415/dhadkan-do-dilo-ki-part-28-29-on-page-124-126-on-1-april


part 29 (last part )

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3865415/dhadkan-do-dilo-ki-part-28-29-on-page-124-126-on-1-april


Epilogue of Dhadkan do dilo ki (complete)

msk ki suhag raat hogi ke nahi hogi

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3974738/msk-ki-sr-hogi-ke-nahi-hogi-my-ss-dhdkan-epilogue-os-two-part



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New os Dhadkan do dilo ki


part 1

Maan car passing thru signal he saw a beautiful face ,moment stop for him when he saw that beautiful face, like angel who is standing near car and laughing with whole heartily... li,ke some sound of soft music two beautiful almond shape brown eyes like door of her soul ,his heart thudding in full speed he never saw such beautiful face of girl in his life he just hold his breath , he don't know that is dream or reality MSK who ignore girls is looking a girl like prevent person, her earring dancing with her move and kiss her cheek he is so feeling jealous with that earring like only he have right to touch that parri ,he just looking to her and drinking her beauty with his eyes he just want to touch her ,hug her

But when his eyes went to her neck he got shock of life ,his heart which dancing in joy before some time brake in thousand pieces ,he first time feeled about a girl but she is married yes that is manglsutra in her neck ,than he obsaerd her with keenly red powder in head ,hand full of mehandi and red chuda and she is in her bridal attired ,maan just don't know how to react because he already know that he fall in her love ,love first side and irony is he got love pain in within second ,green signal and sound of car horn back him in reality he somehow control his heart who don't want to go from there ,and start car ,he just drive car like machine ,he don't know what are he doing her heart and mind totally numb with what happen few minute before him

He enter his house and without any single word went to his dadima room and sit near her feet ,he cant control his heart and some tear start to come from eyes and fall on dadima feet , dadima just wake with that warm water she light table lamp and just get shocked with maan state a crying maan ,so much pain on his face ,just totally broken grandson she just took him in her motherly hug ,start cares his head and ask with so much worry what happen maan ,what happen ,ma papa ki yaad aa gai kya why you are crying like this maan just start to more sob in dadima hug ,maan I could not took this tension beta please talk to me what happen

Maan wo dadima I am that bad that I never get anyone love dadima ,why dadima ,ma ,papa, dadaji went away from me in that accident and today when my heart bit for someone that girl is bride dadima

Dadima gasp maan she don't know how to react his grandson for world a ruthless business man ,but in real a sensitive person who cant express his feeling so easily ,after parent and grandpa death never open for anyone than dadi and his friend adi ,who grow up before time on age of 18 year he took there business with help of dadi ,never voice his demand ,never emotionally attach with any girl now suffering like this ,within few second got and lost his first and may be last love oh god what are you doing with my son dadi just cares his back and say don't cry maan ,don't cry some time we cant go against our destiny ,we have to accept it and you are my strong son The MSK ,you cant broke down like this beta please

Maan phone disturbed them first he want to ignore that called but adi name flashes on phone adi his one and only friend ,who never dustup him without reason ,maan somehow control himself and took called but adi voice alert him ,he just ask adi what happen adi ,adi just said maan can you came to XYZ hospital its argent

Maan just tell dadima and went to hospital there adi is standing in entrance of hospital when maan put his hand on adi shoulder ,adi just hug maan and and start cry loudly somehow maan ask adi what happen ,you are went to your cousin brother marriage na then what are you doing hear ,and why are you crying like this please say adi

Adi just say maan Raj my brother is no more he died in his marriage day when he going to his house from marriage hall maan ,maan just give some water to him and make sit him on nearby bench ,he ask him where is room adi point out in one direction ,maan feeling so uneasy when he start to went to that direction like he going to face some more verse than he imagine ,like this is silence before big tuffan ,he went near room there he saw pinky adi wife with a girl no a bride and when he saw face of that bride he just froze in his place whole world stop for moment he just mummer ye to ...

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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wow dear :) nyc one :)
plz continue soon
eager fo next
thanx for d pm :)
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Nice story
Poor geet became widow on marriage day oly.
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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omg this is unique continue soon
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Fantastic start dear love it
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geet is that bride right
oh man thats horrible loosing your hubby to be like that
but its the same girl he fell in love with

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Nice os.geet became widow on her marriage day😉😭

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