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Posted: 11 years ago
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teaser

please read this song before reading part 1

link of song

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sX7hFKjm_n4

Song : Kasme waade pyaar wafaa

Music : Kalayanji-Anandji

Lyrics : Prem Dhawan, Qamar, Indeevar & Gulshan Bawra

Singers : Manna Dey


Kasme waade pyaar wafaa sab,

Baatein hain baato ka kya

Koyi kisi ka nahi ye jhoothhe,

Naate hain naato ka kya

Kasme waade pyaar wafaa sab,

Baatein hain baato ka kya

Hoga masiha...

Hoga masiha saamne tere,

Phir bhi na tu bach paayega

Tera apnaae

Tera apna khoon hi aakhir tujhko aag lagaayega

Aasmaan mein...

Aasmaan me udne waale mitti mein mil jaayega

Kasme waade pyaar wafaa sab, baatein hain baato ka kya

Sukh mein tere...

Sukh mein tere saath chalenge,

Dukh mein sab mukh modenge

Duniya waale...

Duniya waale tere bankar tera hi dil todenge

Dete hain...

Dete hain bhagwaan ko dhokha,

Insaan ko kya chhodenge

Kasme waade pyaar wafaa sab,

Baatein hain baato ka kya


Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Index

teaser and part 1


part 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98228880

part 3
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3854841/mg-adoore-sapane-part-25-26-27-on-133-143?pn=13

part 4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98490038

part 5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99157578

part 6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3854841/mg-adoore-sapane-part-25-26-27-on-133-143?pn=24

part 7

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99577940

part 8

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3854841/mg-adoore-sapane-part-25-26-27-on-133-143?pn=31

part 9

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3854841/mg-adoore-sapane-part-25-26-27-on-133-143?pn=36

part 10

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3854841/mg-adoore-sapane-part-25-26-27-on-133-143?pn=40

part 11
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3854841/mg-adoore-sapane-part-25-26-27-on-133-143?pn=44

part 12
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3854841/mg-adoore-sapane-part-25-26-27-on-133-143?pn=48

part 13
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3854841/mg-adoore-sapane-part-25-26-27-on-133-143?pn=52

part 14

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3854841/mg-adoore-sapane-part-25-26-27-on-133-143?pn=57

part 15

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3854841/mg-adoore-sapane-part-25-26-27-on-133-143?pn=61

part 16

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3854841/mg-adoore-sapane-part-25-26-27-on-133-143?pn=65

part 17

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3854841/mg-adoore-sapane-part-25-26-27-on-133-143?pn=70

part 18

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3854841/mg-adoore-sapane-part-25-26-27-on-133-143?pn=76

part 19

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3854841/mg-adoore-sapane-part-25-26-27-on-133-143

part 20

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3854841/mg-adoore-sapane-part-25-26-27-on-133-143

part 21

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3854841/mg-adoore-sapane-part-25-26-27-on-133-143


part 22

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3854841/mg-adoore-sapane-part-25-26-27-on-133-143


part 23


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3854841/mg-adoore-sapane-part-25-26-27-on-133-143


part 24

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3854841/mg-adoore-sapane-part-25-26-27-on-133-143

part 25,26

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3854841/mg-adoore-sapane-part-25-26-27-on-133-143


part 27

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3854841/mg-adoore-sapane-part-25-26-27-on-133-143






Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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you are amazing writer dear😊 .keep on writing
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Part 1

Kasme waade pyaar wafaa sab,

Baatein hain baato ka kya

Koyi kisi ka nahi ye jhoothhe,

Naate hain naato ka kya

Everyone say that god bless us with various relation because human is social animal but now a day he behave only as animal or say monster for money, power ,aim ,race . we love our parent like god ,brother as protector and big sister as mother ,teacher and small sister as friend but when your own relative destroy you behind repair that ,they broke you like lifeless toy then that relation become burden of life it is like cancer who slowly destroy body, mind and as well as soul also


One old women ask in strong tone in cold and silent hospital corridor with tight slap ,mr. raj kuhrana what are you done with my child , with my maan that he take such decision talk to me mr raj i am his dadima and i have right to know about my child ,ups sorry i ask wrong qus so your race horse failed in race ,but you can't shoot this horse with your own hand so you made him so helpless to take such decision to took his own life ,you know mr. khurana ,today my maan was not failure but i am biggest failure because I done first most biggest mistake that I give birth to you , second I married you to this money minded girl and third and most imp mistake that I don't took my maan with me ,she again slap maan father and gave cold look to pummy and went to maan room where senior doc examine him

Yes she is non other than Savitri Devi Kuhurna maan dadima who love him like a mother maan is her life and she done big mistake that he give maan to his parent who don't have value of there own son ,maan is gem but in a painting he is soft hearten person ,less talkative ,angry but clean with heart ,who want to live his life without any limit any restriction but ...

Dr. voice broke dadima thoughts ,don't worry savitri ji he is physically fit but mentally disturbed so i give you advice you take him with you ,now he have weakness ,but that recover after good care but we have to change his atmosphere ,you know the reason behind that change so took him with you it is better for him and one more thing don't thank me thank to your servant nakul and his wife because they are more sensible then your son and daughter in law ,what a couple mr and mrs khurana more worry for there reputation then son health ,life dadima just nodded her head in shame and say I will doctor i took him with me I don't repeat my mistake

Dr just went from there maan don't have his consciousn ,wo abhi bhi behosh pada hua tha ,some how dadima control her tear come near to maan and start cares his forehead and say I am sorry maan I am sorry ,she can't control her sob and went outside of room and start to cry bitterly, with closed eyes she start to cry and image of little maan came in front of her .a happy, cheerful maan ,and then his cry voice on phone , dadima just hate herself that she trust her own son and bahu than maan and result is front of her ,maan sobs start to come in her mind and it broke that old lady one wrong decision and fruit is front of her a young 20 year old boy lying lifelessly on bed of hospital who want to end his life in this young age



No charm on face ,dark circle under eyes , weak body and damaged mind and soul she don't have idea that how she collect all this and put it in there place ,how she brought back maan from that dark past, valley she don't have idea she just sine discharge paper and with consult with doctor she just took maan with herself to her village hoshiarpur ,she don't talk single word with her so called son or daughter in law



.maan condition

In hoshiarpur a girl age 16 with lifeless eyes watching to out of window ,we can say beautiful body without soul if any one watching her eyes that eyes are so empty which scare other all saw there a pain ,emptiness the age of 16 when every girl have dream of life , study career they fly like butterfly freely without any tension that time this girl live with so much burden, her smile is miracle for other yes if she have smile that is miracle for other , her empty eyes and emotional less face crush anybody face ,she never come out from that room without reason ,that room also turn cold and lifeless like her she just sit there without any movement like Mote nahi aa rahi hai to jilo / death is not coming so her beautiful but pale face took away anybody breath give burden to any one heart like that person is responsible for her state like a beautiful a partially opened flower, crushed by any monster


One old aged lady with 14 years old girl enter in room that lady put her shaking hand on her shoulder and called Geet, geet that girl shutter like dry leaf she just hold her breathe ,her body turn cold like ice , word not coming from her mouth she just run behind bed sit there and hug her knee she shaking like leaf ,and nodded her head in NO . NO and start to mummer no no please don't touch me please don't touch me , ma ,baba please save please save me ,please don't touch me and next moment she start to rub her face, hand ,neck with so much roughly ,with anger and speed like she want to pull her own skin from her body ,


she start to say ,look there are so dirt hear ,so many insect running on my body please Maaa save me they will eat me please they will make impure me please baba come and kill them baba they will make impure to choti also maa baba where are you please come hear Baba he is touching me baba I don't like this baba please baba please save me baba ,save choti baba with that she lost her conscious , both lady called out geet and went near her and softly put her in bed ,it is daily routing of that house and every day that room fool with this sounds ,cry .sob of that girl whose name is Geet Handa ,16 year old girl ,pregnant girl who live her life like ...

Precap

Maan and geet got there consciousness

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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awesome cs and teaser awesome part
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Mr Khurana ko do slap and Pammi ko kuch nahin...badi nainsaafi hai sardaar...char thappad Pammi ko kyun nahin maare Daadi ma ne... thank God Daadima is different from Maan's parents...she loves him...

Daadima took Maan with her to HP where Geet is also living her life like a burden...

she is pregnant...

very painful start...

waiting for next part...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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beauty full theme . lovely narated their state of mind and physical i missed ur previous works yaar due to lack of time now i deffinetly find time to go through them urs is a very good style of writing ,.. there is lot which i have to learn fr. u. thank.u. for ur pms .please dont stop pming me,.. fr here after i will give u commts regular.
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maneet ..both are lifeless soul
having a great burden in life
maan is saved
geets state..cant say anything
poor girl..
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Painful start
Both suffering from bad phase
Conti soon
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Yar i love the prologue very much
mast ek dum

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