MG Fate of the unfortunate thread 2, part 20,21,22 on page 84,94,114

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Prologue


one lady between 20 to 22 lying on bed without any cloth ,one man just attacking her body without any mercy , but she cant react to him , like his touch not touching her body , her mind her soul is not present with her beautiful body yes she have perfect beautiful body which made anyone crazy but she just hate herself , her body which took her in present situation ,she don't react to that man , that made that man more and more wild all her body turn blue with his bits , but she never hiss in pain , at last when that man finish his work he just slap her on her cheek and say You w****, cant response , i give money for this to you're your ...HUSBAND ,she say first word in full night


Yes her husband send her with another man for S** so he get money, she is his money making machine her body is way of his earning she is MRS GEET SINGAHANIYA /GEET HANDA a s***, she smile on her faith and push that man away and went from their after wearing her cloth and most imp things , money without that she cant entered in her own house ...after half hour she reach her house and start to knock door , after 5 minute , a man yes her so called husband open door ,and first come dirty smell of alcohol ,


she feel like omitting ,she want to enter ,but he just say , money , she just put all money to his hand and run to her room, she don't want to look his face also for second ...she just open her room door and went to near bed their her life sleeping peacefully and she get her life back , a small smile come on her face she just kiss that baby face , yes baby her baby ,her life Muskan 4 month baby ...she just took shower and clean herself , she want to clean that touch also but smile sadly and say herself ...you cant clean that dirt from your body till whole life geet , she smile sadly


she just come out and took her baby on lap and start to feed her ,her milk , that baby missing mother milk , she start suck hungrily in her sleep also...which brought tear in geet eyes ,she just say why , why with me , what is my fault so i got life like this ...why






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Index

thread 1


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3952132/mg-fate-of-the-unfortunate-part-11-12on102-teaser-and-note-141-155

part 13,14


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/105306757

part 15

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3999417/mg-fate-of-the-unfortunate-thread-2-part-20-21-22-on-page-84-94-114?pn=18

part 16


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/105651653


part ,17 18

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/105710475


part 19


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3999417/mg-fate-of-the-unfortunate-thread-2-part-20-21-22-on-page-84-94-114?pn=65


part 20

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/105938573

part 21

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/106066445


part 22


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3999417/mg-fate-of-the-unfortunate-thread-2-part-20-21-22-on-page-84-94-114



thread 3


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4019591/mg-fate-of-the-unfortunate-thread-3-part-42-43-44-on-117-129-135

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My writing

my page Dream come true with maaneet

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3857084/dream-come-true-with-maaneet-teaser-of-time-pass-on-113


Life of geet

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3632879/new-mg-ff-life-of-geet-part-35-36-37-38on-page-106-109-114

Journey of maaneet arrange marriage (complete )

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3826436/new-mg-ss-journey-of-note-and-part-30-on-page-104-30-jan


ss Dhadkan do dilo ki (complete )


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3865415/dhadkan-do-dilo-ki-part-28-29-on-page-124-126-on-1-april


Epilogue of Dhadkan do dilo ki (complete)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3974738/msk-ki-sr-hogi-ke-nahi-hogi-my-ss-dhdkan-epilogue-os-two-part


os JAB WE MET

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3988417/hi-new-mg-os-jab-we-met-part-2-on-page-4


Adoore Sapane

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3854841/mg-adoore-sapane-part-25-26-27-on-133-143


Journey ... Season two
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3921883/journey-season-two-epl-update-on-page-138-24-sep



Os Happy women day?

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3942891/happy-women-day-os



MG os one part
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3993179/mg-os-marriage-of-soldier-one-part



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my other post

happy republic day
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3897661/happy-republic-day

i will not vote in Nach

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3804079/i-will-not-vote-in-nach


How many time we have to hurt myself as GEET fan ?


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3987824/how-many-time-we-have-to-hurt-myself-as-geet-fan



Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Hey read this , this just like so much honer to me yaar
this comment by gujar
thanks dear


HI MAHI...

...I miss u as much as i miss air
while stop breathing

You know i am literally dreaming of ff's...
it has became a great part of my life reading mahi's ff and commenting on it...
mahi r u enjoying the wedding dear...
Eagerly waiting for thursday to come soon...
u know today i just woke up and asked my mom..mom is 2day thursday and without waiting for her answer i was shouting yes mom it is thursday and i am going to meet my mahi 2day...
and mom was seeing me like i m gone mad look...
and mom said whats that ur reading day and night and even dreaming about it...
i made her read fate and mom was really impressed nd said me to say her every update...
she said to give u her blessing and wishes mahi...
she was literally in tears while while reading update where maan sings for muski and maan's breakdown infront of rano...
she even said me to save all the updates so that she can read it...
eagerly waiting for u mahi to come back...
till then enjoy the wedding mahi...



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congrats on new thread dear
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Naya Thread khul gaya. Congrats.

An update Dene ki baari hai
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Originally posted by: chavvi16

congrats on new thread dear






thanks dear but without reader like you its just impossible





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Originally posted by: Mahimaan






thanks dear but without reader like you its just impossible







ahhh now you are being kind
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Originally posted by: chavvi16



ahhh now you are being kind




its true dear good reader always encourage writer
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