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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Twilightsparkle

haii mahi read this story last night only you know time 2 am i am still reading result got fever haha ur story makes me go crazy re

i love this maan soo much much naughty while geet is quite oppsite
adi and geet's dad played good part in making them realise the value of marriage i loved there charters
haha dadi is soo naughty must say and theat apple hawww
maan dont tease her much ok but i am loving u as naughty chick only


the way of ur narration is really very good keep it on baby






you read in one go wow thanks 😃and for your fever ,medicine to ss main mil jayega from upcoming part 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

maan kya hai...be bold...jao aur leke ao...😉





update...



very much...





very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...










thanks for comment and don't worry maan bhi bold ban jayega 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago

Teaser of part 15



Aaina dekh ke bole yeh sanwarne wale

Ab to be-maut marenge mere marne wale

Dekhke tumko hosh mein aana bhool gaye
Yaad rahe tum aur zamaana bhool gaye

Jab saamne tum

Jab saamne tum, aa jaate ho
Kya jaaniye kya ho jaata hai
Kuchh mil jaata hai, kuchh kho jaata hai
Kya jaaniye kya ho jaata hai


geet trying different dress and dancing thinking she is alone in room ,but she sont have idea maan is there and watching her every moov without her knowledge and her very moov wake up his desire
because dress are like this

geet gown







back side




short dress







night dress


maan face

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 15

Aaina dekh ke bole yeh sanwarne wale
Ab to be-maut marenge mere marne wale


Geet imm ask where are you going it is that imp ,she scare somewear maan smile on her questions and say for some time I want some medicine for us if we need it in emergency geet just nodded her head and say but come back soon maan just smile and went from there ,he came out from hotel he have room key with him with naughty smile he went to medical shop ,he is excited as well as felling shy also it is new experience for him in collage ,in office friends are talking about it A protection for baby (you know na what) now he is standing in shop and confused how to ask them for ***** poor guy loosing his guts there are so many costumer in shop specially women's ,after some time with frustration he ask for chewing gum poor boy cannot ask his special medicine

Hear geet went near bag and open that special bag which is given by Pinky and geet don't have any idea what is in that bag ,when geet ask about it pinky tell her that it is special dress for geet and maan really like this dress so wear it ,but geet get shock of her life that bag is full of night gown ,party gown ,shot dress , lingerie etc ,geet just want to hit pinky with only look of that dress brought dark red shade on her cheek all dress are so exposing and not decent at all ,she never ever wear such type of dress ,she just grab her mobile and called pinky

Pinky waiting for her call she know whenever geet open that bag she will call her and she is all ready for blast from geet but pinky don't give chance to her and start to talk

It is for your maan dear , man like all this dress ,it is there fantasy geet , you don't want fulfilled your husband dream ,and you wear it only front of maan in your room geet it most beautiful surprise for maan ,geet think about it

This all sentence from pinky clam geet ,maan name clam geet anger and she start to think about it , not hearing any response from geet pinky softly call geet are you there

Geet : yes pinky

Pinky ;pinky get that geet is clam now ,she ask where is maan

Geet ;he went out

Pinky ; geet use this chance and try that dress than ,you fill comfortable in front of maan

Hear geet cheek turn in red like cherry with name of maan she just say I will and cut the call

She took towel from bag and went to bath ,after bath she come out in her bedroom in towel and stand in front of mirror ,she feeling so shy she took first that deep back gown material is so soft she went to bathroom for wear that ,she felling so shy to change her dress in that room itself ,she know she is alone there but she is geet a shy geet

Aaina dekh ke bole yeh sanwarne wale
Ab to be-maut marenge mere marne wale

Dekhke tumko hosh mein aana bhool gaye
Yaad rahe tum aur zamaana bhool gaye

Jab saamne tum

Jab saamne tum, aa jaate ho
Kya jaaniye kya ho jaata hai
Kuchh mil jaata hai, kuchh kho jaata hai
Kya jaaniye kya ho jaata hai

She came after changing into that sexy gown she wrap a duppata on her shoulder because that gown is backless and have strips on shoulder ,she come front of mirror and look image of her with shaking hand she unwrap her duppata she loosed that dupatta in slow motion start to look to her image oh god she felling that she is so much exposed and thanks Babaji that maanji is not there her cheek turn into dark shade of red like APPLE





but she dont have idea maan is present in room There bedroom is attach with dining room and he hide behind one pillar of that dining area he want to see what are she upto , but poor girl don't have idea that maan is there, actually he came into room when she come out from bathroom in that gown and when she unwrap that duppata poor maan forgate to blink his eyes that gown is perfectly fit to her white marble body she have perfect figure , her long hands and oh gosh her back that gown give good view of her flawless marble back ,he just want to crush her in his hug he want to touch her back and shoulder for while, he took step toward her but stop with some thought ,he hide behind pillar and watch what was her next moov so he imm hide behind pillar

our geet just put hand on her face in shy and took another dress from bag , maan just hold his breathe in anticipation all bold thoughts came in his mind that geet should change in front of him ,he start to imagine also, but sound of bathroom door brought him back from his dream he just shake his head oh maan control she is geet a shy geet don't expect it from her ,he look toward bathroom he first got look of her slender legs and she try to pull that dress, it brought smile on his face ,how that dress become big with pull again she came front of mirror her eyes pop out oh that dress is so shot she imm look hear and there in anticipation


imagine only geet hear




Chaaha tha yeh kahenge
Socha tha socha tha woh kahenge
Aaye woh saamne to, kuchh bhi na keh sake
Bas dekha kiye unhein ham

Dekh kar tujhko yakeen hota hai 2
Koi itna bhi haseen hota hai
Dekh paate hain kahan ham tumko dil kahin hosh kahin hota hai

Jab saamne tum

Ho jab saamne tum, aa jaate ho
Kya jaaniye kya ho jaata hai
Kuchh mil jaata hai, kuchh kho jaata hai
Kya jaaniye kya ho jaata hai

ha haa haa haa, ho

She sit on bed and took duppata on her legs and she again lost in maan thought how he want to kiss her on bed hear poor maan just hold his breath his throat went dry in desire he somehow control his desire and look toward geet

She come out from her thought and took nighty in her hand and went to change it is very short nighty with soft material she came out from bathroom she wear overcoat on them in slow motion she loose naught of overcoat and that overcoat slowly slipped from her marble body





Maan stand there with open mouth that nighty color suit her it is look like match to her skin he just bit his lip for control his moan poor soul get sweet torch er by his own new wedded wife ,he tight his fist to control his felling he just want to kiss geet and make her to his ,just wanted to mark her with his love and ...

Dekh kar tujhko yakeen hota hai
Koi itna bhi haseen hota hai
Dekh paate hain kahan ham tumko dil kahin hosh kahin hota hai

He some how control himself and decided no it is not right time ,she is not like other girl adi , pinky word come into his mind and he decided he took slow step ,he want to geet confess her felling to him ,then he took there relation to next level ,he know how nave is geet and he don't want to embarrassed her , it is bold step for her that she at list try that dress he want to took this relation with step by step he want her in whole meaning in physically as well as with mind and soul also so he have to control his desire for while when geet went in bathroom he come out from room


precap
thinking

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
please watch this video and imagine geet and maan in that 😛😉


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hfL9V1PLMjs
Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
will b waiting 4r nxt
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow maan...kya lene gaya tha aur kya leke aya...sudhar ja maan...geet ko chhup k dekh raha hai...besharam...

superb n beautiful update...






loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

wow maan...kya lene gaya tha aur kya leke aya...sudhar ja maan...geet ko chhup k dekh raha hai...besharam...

superb n beautiful update...






loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...









Thanks for biiig comment ,i like that thanks maan toslow slow sudher jayega ,when you have so lovely treat 😛 to your eyes to koi bhi besharam to baega na 😉 can you see dress in teaser ,you like it or not i just want to see this in geet but that is dream

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Posted: 11 years ago
pinky s vry intlligent,,,kya dresses chunii hei,,,ek se badkar ek,,,,😉😆
she put sm sense 2 geet,,,so she tried,,,maan se shup shup ke,,,,😳
apne maan ji nehle pe dehla maara ,,,saaree dresses dekh li ,,,,😉😆
he want 2 b slow wid geet,,,ab bechara kaise cntroll karega,,,,??😆😆
osm writing,,,,lov de dresses,,,👏

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