new MG ff Life of geet part 35,36 ,37, 38on page 106,109,114 - Page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Dear
 
Just caught up on all parts...great story...i loved how Geet faced her fear and make Dev go to jail...
 
One req, try to focus on spellings...it will improve readability a lot if you can do that...
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haii last track from part 12 will read it soon and will comment sorry yaar cyclone effect so i am struck up totally here 
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I was also very surprised with Geet's behavior...

she don't have to sacrifice her happiness for her worthless husband...aise husband ko to laat maar maar kar pehe hi chod dena chahiye tha...

but Geet was in mental trauma...and this takes time for any girl to come out of it and fall for another man...and the way Geet is staring at Maan's lips on her first day in KM was very surprising for me...

Daadi has seen all and she is making Maan understand...

nice update...

thanx for pm...


monikaseth thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb  update
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Hi Dear

 
Just caught up on all parts...great story...i loved how Geet faced her fear and make Dev go to jail...
 
One req, try to focus on spellings...it will improve readability a lot if you can do that...





thanks for your comment dear its imp for me for English i am little week in it so but i will improved my writing dear thanks  
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Twilightsparkle

haii last track from part 12 will read it soon and will comment sorry yaar cyclone effect so i am struck up totally here 



its ok dear i understand and welcome back
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Posted: 10 years ago
teaser for part 17

Sun Raha Hai

Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Yaara, Yaaraa... yaara!

Mujhko iraade de
Kasamein de, waade de
Meri duaaon ke ishaaron ko sahaare de
Dil ko thikaane de
Naye bahaane de
Khaabon ki baarishon ko
Mausam ke paimane de
Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro raha hun main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro raha hun main (x2)

Manzilein ruswa hain
Khoya hai raasta
Aaye le jaaye
Itni si iltejaa
Ye meri zamanat hai
Tu meri amaanat hai haan...

Apne karam ki kar adayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein
Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro raha hoon main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro raha hun main

Waqt bhi thehara hai
Kaise kyun ye huaa
Kaash tu aise aaye
Jaise koi duaa
Tu rooh ki raahat hai
Tu meri ibaadat hai

Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro raha hoon main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro raha hun main (x2)

Yaaraa...


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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part..Maan wants talk with Geet..I think Dadi's idea is good that Geet can think about what she wants..
Maan really fall for Geet..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6





I was also very surprised with Geet's behavior...

she don't have to sacrifice her happiness for her worthless husband...aise husband ko to laat maar maar kar pehe hi chod dena chahiye tha...

but Geet was in mental trauma...and this takes time for any girl to come out of it and fall for another man...and the way Geet is staring at Maan's lips on her first day in KM was very surprising for me...

Daadi has seen all and she is making Maan understand...

nice update...

thanx for pm...


lol di
dev ka ye haal hona chahiye
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Posted: 10 years ago
teaser
nice...
cont soon dear...