Dhadkan do dilo ki part 28,29 on page 124,126 on 1 april - Page 28

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome and romantic update...
the restaurent scene was so cute...
oh gosh maans slow torcher on geet...
the atmosphere and scenery just dreamy and perfect for maaneet...
geet ko sab kuch yaad aagaya aur confess bhi karliya...
wow just doing dance on their confession...
continue soon...
eagerly waiting to know where they are going...
thank u thank u sooo much for such awesome ff's ...
just falling more and more for such beautiful writings...
thank u for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Is last dream seq ??
Hope its not, Nice part
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Posted: 11 years ago
mahi aaj kya baat hai itne ache update deke mare ka irada hai. love it awsome update n waise bhi msk agar kuch than le to vo to vo karke hi rahega akhir geet kab tak bach pati aakhir confess kar hi diya na. eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
geet confess wow maan u made her confess
she know about dance in disco
now they kiss heyyy
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Posted: 11 years ago



Maan is teasing Geet and Geet is teasing him with her adaayein...

loved the way they have become comfortable with each other...

although Geet was not married to Raj for long time but still that was big blow for her and then all the tauntings she had to hear that makes a person very scared...but Geet has come out of her past is good...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome updt
geet confess her love
and their moment haye😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome updates
uff ye geet bhi na... iska radio on krdo phir off hi nhi hota
but maan ne aakhir geet se I love u bulwa hi liya
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Posted: 11 years ago
Don't know what happen to me can't stop myself from writing this , i think this week special for Dhadkan , this maaneet always in mind , i cant write other , today i want to written Journey ... next part but land on Dhadakan ...😕


Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 16

That sit maan smile on her confession and just took her rosy lips in his... manly lips he just sucking her lower lips , oh she making him crazy , he don't give her chance to breath and took other lips in his lips he just sucking her non stop , and she moan and maan just slowly put his hand under her kurti on her tummy geet just gasp with his touch and maan took that chance and trust his tongue in her mouth and start to drink her Silva , now geet also start to response him and maan on 9 th cloud , both are sucking each other ,both wet body touching each other and both soul on fire ...now maan hand went to back side and he start to cares her back which have law cut , last few days control took toll on him , he is no wear to stop, his desire on peek and ,he just madly kissing her like there is no tomorrow , beautiful romantic atmosphere , his lady love who confess her feeling and water , who add fire in there desire , geet try to reach his passion level , now her lips swollen because of maan passion ,dress is crush by maan ...she chock for air she is verge of faint , and maan just lost in his passion , so there is no other way geet just slightly bite on his M shape lips , that brought maan back from his passionate world


First he grown with bite and parted away from geet , and start to look her like what , geet just giggle on maan face ,and pull his cheek and called out so cute ...and maan mummer not cute geet , Msk and cute yuck , but why you stop me geet , ek to itne din tadpaya , aur abhi kiss bhi nahi de rahi hai thik se / first you crave me for so many days and now you don't give me proper kiss not fair , geet ke babaji you look yourself , geet face turn red in shy , she make baby face , look look babaji what he do with my lips ...after this also he saying I don't give him proper kiss , babaji , she point to her swollen lips just than maan look to her her swollen lips , crush dress , both standing there under waterfall in their journey , because of water she totally drench and her dress glued her like second skin again which give not so innocent image to his nude eyes , his eyes turn dark with desire but he took long breath and say Geet , we have to go now , he start to look hear and there , if anybody watching them , his possessives wake up and he don't want anybody look his misty like this



maaneet are lucky because there are no body , it is sunset time and some yellow , orange shade of sun fall on geet face which add beauty on geet wet look , he mummer , beautiful , breath taking misty , he mummer to himself in slow voice , Msk control control , warna first kiss ke sath sath first Night bhi yahi ho jayegi , under the waterfall , that is not bad idea , but it is not proper place , but today night turn to be longgg night , he just smile on his own thought , geet just lost in his beautiful smile with so many efforts he control his naughty thought and desire and say come on geet , we have to change first , geet start to look hear and there , like where they will change



maan took her hand and brought her out from waterfall , he pull jeep backside cover closed front door glas and ask geet use backside for change or els she got cold , geet just nodded her head , before geet went to change , he took his dry cloth and towel to dry himself , geet just went backside , and maan stand near jeep and asure her that he is there don't worry , she just say yes , she feel shy to look him ,because he caught him when he looking to her wet beauty after their kiss ...

she start to change but this is real torcher for geet and maan , because geet bangal , payal sound and sound of wet cloth give idea to maan , that what is she doing in jeep , he just closed his eyes , and start to count 1 to 100 so that all hot image not come in his mind , geet also aware of maan situation because she know bangal and payal sound giving idea to maan she just feel so much shy and closed her face with her palm ... as maan called her chalti , firti disaster, she can't complete any work without any problem or hurdle , so she struck in problem , and she cry out and mummer to babaji , why me always ... she is in deli-ma , to called maan or not , actually she struck with kurti , she try to closed her zip of kurti which is backside , at time of doing that her sleeves net , struck with hook which are above zip where zip is closed , she try her best to pull that but more presser it will be turn out and to add her misery she don't have salwar on her body ...her bare foot ...



it is more than 15 minute geet went to change , so at last maan called out geet , hurry up ...geet called maanji in slow voice there is one problem , maan just shook his head with smile , and mummer MY DISASTER QUEEN ready with next disaster to trouble me torcher me with her act it is sweet tourcher but ihave control my desire , Geet ke babaji please save me and he ask geet , you need my help , geet just say yes , with lot of courage maan entered in jeep , light is on in jeep , a gasp come from maan , there his lady sitting on back sit of jeep her one hand on her back , may be struck there ,her back facing him , her every dress have low cut and because of geet moving , zip get open , and last blow for maan when his eyes went to her nude legs , oh that beautiful sexy legs , he just gulp hard , his body start to react naturally , his throat went dry with thrust , her kurti can't hide her bare legs , geet just closed eyes ,when she heard maan foot step near her , next moment she start to breath fast , because maan finger on her hand which are struck in hook ,he pull out that , but next moment maan hot lips land on her back , he start to give her open mouth kiss ,with mummer oh geet , why you always ready to took exam of my self control , she turn red in shy and moan MMMaan ,he slide her kurti from her shoulder and bite her on her white milky skin ... geet moan loudly maan , maan start to erase that pain with his tongue... and his one hand land on her thigh , he just try to pull kurti from her thigh , he want to touch her bare legs ...same time maan phone start to ring which brought them back in real world , maan just took back his hand and hurriedly closed her zip and huka of dress and come out from jeep , geet also control her heart beats and wear her salwar took duppata and come out from jeep , maan attending phone call and geet controlling her raising heart beats ...


Poor souls feel shy to face each other after their closed moment in jeep , like obedient student geet went and sit in her place she all red with shyness , she feel maan touch on her back on her Shoulder and her love bite ohhh, maan also finish his call took long breath mummer Yoga , maan Yoga and sit on driving sit , he once again look to her , her shy face telling story of her mind , and when his eyes went to her shaking lips , all swollen because of his passion , he make sound to attend her attention but she feeling so much shy , he again try it so he closed his eyes and say geet wo wo apply something on your , your lips ...she look with shock to maan , her cheek turn more red with maan talk she just look in mirror and bend her head in shyness ...

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
maanlost his control n their passion in high
geet again needs his help
lolz testing his patience
if phone didnot come he would have done more:P

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