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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

nehi hota hai...apna mummy papa ko chhod ke jaana bahut hi mushkil hota hai...jahan adhise zaada zindagi bitatae hai woh root chhodke jana mushkil hota hai...





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you got my feeling dear its really hard for girl dear any girl
thanks for comment

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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update
all d rituals n emotions r vry well written
waiting 4r nxt
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahimaan





geet se madhumas ka kand karwana hai ya nahi give me suggestion

i thnk it shud b btween maan nd geet,,,maan ko hi handle karne dete hei,,,😉
rst as u wish,,,,😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
maan taking care of geet from now
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Posted: 11 years ago
new life with humsafer
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahimaan

updating part 12 and 13

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Part 12

Naya basera ,new life with humsafer

maan eyes also turn moist he kept hand on mohinder shoulder and said that i promised you papa i always take care of geet give her respect and love don't worry papaji she is now mine responsibility ,Mohinder took maan in there hug maan put his hand on geet hand and nodded no like ,don't cry its brought sweet smile on geet face now pinky also get emotional she is her childhood friend and she have idea that how nave geet is ,maan behaviour give some belief to her but she want to talk with him when geet went to freshup imm pinky went near maan and with folding hand ,with tear in eyes she start to talk with maaan



first maan confused and shock because in last week he never saw pinky like this but he get that it is something related to geet ,and he ask what happenpinky

Pinky : maan jijaji I know you are matured person ,you handle geet very well but my heart is not ready to stopping talk with you ,jijaji geet is very nave girl her world only with us , our friendship and our family she does not know about this cruel world she have heart like child what is in her mind she will talk ,so don't get angry with her if she behave childish before you or your family please jijaji it is request from us ,pinky have true worry and tear in her eyes and it touch maan heart ,he get that geet have special bound with pinky ,maan nodded his head in acceptance and took pinky hand in his hand and say

Maan : I know pinky you have special bounding with geet and iproud on your friendship because your true friend care for you like this and don't worry about geet pinky ,in last week iget it that she is nave but beautiful heart girl and now she is Mrs Geet Maan singh Kuhrana ,and msk love her ,yes I fall in love with her in our first meeting itself and now she is my humsafer or say my life and I took care of her igive this promise to papaji also and iam bonding with that promise dear ,and yes you can trust your brother for that

With last sentence she look to maan with shock ,she have tear in her eyes maan just took her in his bear hug and say don't cry pinky nahi to all wii say my sister is cry girl ,and about teaching to geet All type of Knowledge I expert in that so don't worry with that he wink to pinky pinky standing like open mouth with O shape

Pinky : maan bhai you are so shameless ,but thanks now I am so happy for my friend and bhai thanks

Geet come there with happy mood she took blessing from all elders, dadima give next surprised to all ,dadima hear all conversation of pinky and maan dadima called geet mother and father and say ,Mohinder can you send piky with us, if she is with geet then geet feel comfortable in new house what say

Mohinder and rano more then happy they imm except this and in excitement geet just hug pinky and say Yes ! all start laugh on them and poor girl sharm se pani pani

Now both family say goodby to each other maan geet sit with adi and pinky in one car and other in other car witin in hour they all reach to maan house maan mother stop them in entrance







First geet have to fall kalash of rice ,with right leg ,












same time adi brought something in his hand and put near door it is for foot print of maaneet then maan took geet hand and place there first step at same time ,then geet put her foot in red water ,water of kumkum ,maan mother say him now maan took geet in your hand godi for hand print it is custom, poor geet bend her head in shyness and maan start smile in naughtiness ,maan mother further say but maan not any naughty things ha all started laught with it and both maaneet turn red in shyness ,




maan pick geet in his hand brought her near wall poor geet when maan touch her in hes waist ,her neck ,she just lost in his touch ,start to look to maan and maan just wink to her and she come back from her la la land ,with shyness she comp lit that custom and maan put her in down







Now maan losing his pations he just want to took geet with him to his no their room he need some privacy so he spend time with her ,geet is sitting with pinky and dadima and giggling for something ,he looking her with so much love ,he just lost in her smile he come out with sound of maan mother who brought one big bowl with milk and called maan and geet for ring game both sit opposite to each other start to play pinky and dadima cheering geet and maan father and adi cheering for maan ,but naughty maan have other plan he just holding geet hand in bowl ,geet pleading with her eyes ,she get tense if anybody know it all will tease her

Maan mother : what happen maan ,how much time you have for ring

Maan want give some reply but dadima say are bahu maan ye game nahi jitaga all start to look her ,dadi said for win game first he have to loose geet hand na kabse geet ka hath pakadke baita hai she talk with so much innocent face, all are brust into laugh and poor maan and geet just want to run from there both feeling embarrassed that dadima caught them ,maan loose her hand and both of them just finish that game and maan stand for live and say mother ,mother I am so tired I want to go my room cani, all have teasing look on there eyes because maan so much love and hope looking to geet ,all get his meaning except geet she is thinking why maan ask like this and now what happen why all are smiling in this simple qus ,she is thinking Wo Madhumas ka game to hua hi nahi first she want to ask maan mother but she come near maan and whisper

Geet : app kuch bhul rahe hai wo madhumas ka game to hua nahi

Maan gap her with open mouth , he thanks god in his mind that geet ask him and not to others , if all gate this them will tease them like hell ,he some how conrole his feeling he just want to crush her in his hug oh man how is she nave,but dadima word brake all his dream of HIS SR

Dadima ; Oh maan in our family we have puja tomoorw so you and geet have to sleep separate today you got meaning of my word na dear and she just bit her lip for control her laugh because maan face is worth watching like what

Mean time maan mother took geet and pinky to guestroom, maan just looking to geet ,poor boy don't know how to react in front of his father and dadima he just keep quite ,dadima further say adi you stay hear tonight I think maan need you and she just start to laugh and within few second maan father and adi also joined her poor maan just run from there to his room

Precap : maan and geet first day after marriage, and there hide and seek

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh my god. geet is so sweet
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Part 13 maan geet luka chupi

Mean time maan mother took geet and pinky to guestroom, maan just looking to geet ,poor boy don't know how to react in front of his father and dadima he just keep quite ,dadima further say adi you stay hear tonight I think maan need you and she just start to laugh and within few second maan father and adi also joined her poor maan just run from there to his room


Adi just fallow him now he know that it will be tough night for him hear maan come in his room with frustration first marriage in less time and now this custom but somewear he knew he have to followed this for family he say to himself its ok maan or ek din bachelor life ji lo ,but how will this night go i don't know geet is in same house I cannot meet her ,feeling of her hear in my house it give so much felling like Goosebumps, desire, happiness to me and this duriya ,he make baby face , meantime adi reach his room and look maan expression which are changing with second ,some how adi distract him and they both are fall in sleep with talking to each other

Hear our geet away from all this felling of maan she just want to sleep after changing she also went to bed but she having feeling that something is missing but she don't point out what is that ,she closed her eyes but maan smiley face come front to her ,she just open her eyes, with shock what was that she just shook her head and try to sleep but again same thing happen with her she start to cribbed to babaji what is it babji unka face kue smane aa raha hai why I don't able to sleep babji app mere sath kya ker rahe hai ek to wo DD dust danve every time pulling my legs now he cant give me to sleep also a big DD



After some time she gate sleep in early morning maan mother came to her room and start to wake up her ,geet called out papaji sone do na but few second she wake up with thud ,she gate that she is not in her house but she is in maan house then she saw maan mother and say sorry with teary eyes , maan mother just hold her in her hug and put hand on her face and say geet it is also your house dear today we have puja so have to wake up early and i want my daughter with smiley face not with this tear dear

Geet just hug her and say I will ma you go i will gate ready and come maan mother give her beautiful saree with jewellery geet wak up pinky also and both ready for puja she just pray to babaji and she come to kitchen when maan mother saw her she could not took her eyes from geet ,she look so beautiful she have open hair which are little wet ,she just say geet beta you are looking so beautiful ,and put kala tika near geet ear maan mother ask geet and pinky to brought some flowers from garden

Both girl went to garden and there maan is standing in his room balcony he don't gate peaceful sleep all night he only dreaming about geet some voice took his attention and he saw toward that voice there his lady standing in garden in sari oh he hold his breath for second ,she looking so beautiful her beautiful eyes full of life


maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere - (4)

aankhein teri - (2), kitni haseen


ke inka aashiq, mein ban gaya hoon


mujhako basa le, iname tu


(ishq hai


maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere - 2) - 3


ke inka aashiq, mein ban gaya hoon


mujhako basa le, iname tu



My Lord, my God...

Your eyes, so beautiful,

that I have become their lover.

Give me place in these eyes.

love is

My Lord, my God...

that I have become their lover

give me place in these eyes

geet sari and jewellery






and her sindoor ,mangalsutra and chuda in hand all are looking so beautiful her wet look add more hotness in her beauty a long hair till waist wow and some drops of water on her lips oh my god he just want to drink that water with his own lips that beautiful lips like pink rose he just wanted to see it is natural color or she use something for lips he filling thrust in his mouth he just want to grab her in his hand and ...



mujhase yeh har ghadi, mera dil kahe


tum hi ho usaki aarzoo

mujhase yeh har ghadi, mere lab kahe


teri hi ho sab guftagoo



baatein teri itni haseen, main yaad inko jab karta hoon

phoolon si aaye, khushaboo


rakh loon chhupa ke main kahin tujhako


saaya bhi tera na main doon


rakh loon bana ke kahin ghar, main tujhe


saath tere, main hi rahoon

every moment, my heart says to me

you only are its (heart/moment) desire

every moment, my lips say to me

every conversation about you only

your talks are so beautiful, when I remember those


I smell fragrance of flowers

let me hide you somewhere


I will not share even your shadow

I will keep you in a home that Ill build

and only I will live with you



But adi voice broke his thoughts ,there adi saying beautiful man look him with confused look ,adi say flowers maan flowers they are beautiful na ,maan just nodded his head and went to bathroom adi don't except this reaction from maan a silent reaction he just shake his shoulder and went from there now geet is in kitchen and making rasoi puja ,with ma and dadima and pinky ,adi in maan room and maan father in garden ,maan came in hall after get ready and called out Ma where are you i want water and my coffee ma

All ladies stared to giggle on that dadima pinky and ma give teasing look to geet and poor soul bend her head in shyness she also want to see maan from last night she just want to see maan it is surprising her and now his voice raised her heartbeats ,ma want to tease maan so imm say yes maan I am coming dear wait for me

Hear after hearing ma maan face fell down he expected that ma send geet with water and coffee poor boy but soft musical voice of pyal and bangls sound took his attention he look to that direction there geet coming from kitchen and a tray in her hand she have shy smile on her face she don't looking to his eyes she put tray on table and took glass in her hand and hold before maan , maan just want one eye lock but she is not watching him

He he hold glass as well as geet hand also with touch of maan current pass through her body she just look to maan and maan have teasing smile on his face




Like kab tak nahi dekhogi geet she try to loose her hand but maan is not ready for that her soft hand ,he just want to hold it but after few second he loose her hand and in husky voice said Geet, you looking so beautiful geet don't know sari is more beautiful or you ,and I like your long hair



julfen teri, itni ghani


dekh ke inako, yeh sochata hoon


saaye me, inake main jiyoon


(ishq hai


maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere

(mera dil yahi bola, mera dil yahi bola,

yaara raaj yeh usane hai mujh par khola


ki hai ishq mohabbat, jiske dil mein

usko pasand karta hai maulaa)

Your tresses, so dense

I see them and think

I have to live under their shade

love is

My Lord, my God...

my heart said only this

oh dear, it (heart) has divulged the secret that

one whose heart is filled with love

God loves him too.


then he took his coffee from table and start to drink ,he just watching her face and lips geet get his gaze and just bend her head in shyness ,after watching maan don't know but her heart relief in peace ,With naughty smile maan put his coffee mug on table and say you know geet when our dear one share our food or drink it increased our love and went from there towered garden with serious face and hear our geet start to think on maan word when she took coffee mug she found that there is some coffee left in mug now maan words struck her with so much blushing she drink that coffee from maan mug and our maan watching this from window of hall he felling so happy that his geet share his coffee

After arrival of panditji they start puja our maaneet with great difficulty concerted on puja ,whenever their hand or shoulder touch each other they feeling like current passing in there body and pinky and adi give them teasing smile to them some how they finish puja ,they took blessing from all elder and same time geet family arrival there and our geet run to papaji like a small child all gave smile in her act maan shook his head and pinky give him look like I told you he smile to pinky ,geet start her bakbak with her papji ,some how rano control her and all went for there lunch it is like small gat together ,all are chating with each other then Mohinder start to talk maan ask ,what is there his next planning ,

Maan : don't know papaji some one not telling me and he look towered his family and adi all shook there head

Adi ; uncle on 4 pm TODAY he have flight for his destination

Maan : look towered him with surprised look and ask with his eye what is that

Actually it is marriage gift from adi to maan and adi want to give him surprised so he is not telling him what is surprised Mohinder really happy with bonding of maan and adi it reaming him geet and pinky he look towered geet ,and her face have glow with happiness and Mohinder very happy with that

Now all family member ask maan and geet to go and pack there all things when maan ask for ticket adi with teasing look say why maan what is hurry I am coming with you on airport and on airport I give you or you don't want any kabab main huddy dear

Maan mummered ya there are so many huddy there and run from there for packing he is so exited and geet felling shy and Goosebumps with felling she going with maan that also alone she just run from there after some time they come there with there luggage and geet change into beautiful dress she looking like pari maan also change into jeans and t shirt she looking so dashing both say by to there family and went to airport with pinky and adi

Precap maan and geet in --------

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago

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