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Posted: 11 years ago
hi good morning , it is note about this ss i want your suggestion on it

can i write there love part in detail or in decent way ,(love making part ) 😃
😉😛 please tell me waiting for your reply ,because next part already written
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Posted: 11 years ago
U r the writer sweetie...we readers will like whatever way u write..but in my opinion..i wud like to read some naughty naughty moments..hahaha
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: revathinair

U r the writer sweetie...we readers will like whatever way u write..but in my opinion..i wud like to read some naughty naughty moments..hahaha




so naughty naughty moments na 😳😉
late me think
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Posted: 11 years ago


yaar Maan ko itna tadpane ke baad u r thinking of decency...

maan ki haalat to dekho...

lovely updates...sorry for late response...

Maan-geet married and now Maan desperately waiting for his SR...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6



yaar Maan ko itna tadpane ke baad u r thinking of decency...

maan ki haalat to dekho...

lovely updates...sorry for late response...

Maan-geet married and now Maan desperately waiting for his SR...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...





realy waiting for your comment and ye suhanna kaha gayeb ho gayi yaar
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 14

Love birds on their honeymoon



Maan mummered ya there are so many huddy there and run from there for packing he is so exited and geet felling shy and Goosebumps with felling she going with maan that also alone she just run from there after some time they come there with there luggage and geet change into beautiful dress she looking like pari maan also change into jeens and t shirt she looking so dashing both say by to there family and went to airport with pinky and adi .

After some time they reach to airport and adi gave ticket to maan then maan get place name and its Munnar ,kerala.oh maan is so happy it is his dream place he always want to go there and winter season is best season for it he just hug adi ,he is so happy and excited he tell geet also ,ther flight announced so pinky and adi bid by to them pinky hug geet and adi maan ,both tell them take care of both of them ,now maan and geet walk to their flight ,


geet little scare with mob as well as this new journey and maan got her nervousness and took one finger of her hand in his hand he know geet is shy he have to make her comfortable with him ,after some time geet herself took his hand in her hand ,he know he start to make her comfortable


Both took there sits after few time geet went to sleep and her head falling to other side so maan give shoulder and she imm put her head on his shoulder for sleep ,she is mummering in her sleep also maan shake his head she talking in her sleep also wow ,after some time they land on kochi airport from there they traveling by cab, sweet cold air welcome there now there is morning 5.am and atmosphere is so beautiful and romantic both reach there hotel in one hour


there are greenery every wear ,mist in air it give awesome look to place , maan inquired about there room after formality reception handover key to maan and maan turn to see geet and she is with one couple who have baby with them





hear our geet is playing with small child a beautiful baby 4 or 5 month old ,maan just look to her he just lost in her smile how she playing with baby ,after few second came out from his thoughts and show room key to geet, geet just nodded her head and come front of him ,and maan with teasing smile ask her

Maan : you like baby !

Geet : yes

Maan give meaningful smile to her his eyes say like we also have beautiful baby but we have to work for it ,she just bend her head in shyness

Both of them come to there room, both looking to room, geet say beautiful and maan looking to geet and say yes very beautiful .maan sit on bed and say geet this bed is so comfortable ,geet also sit there



slowly maan put his one hand on geet hand and other on her face she just closed her eye with anticipation and shyness slowly maan bend his face to near her face ,he just millimeter away from geet shivering lips ,boths heartbeats running like Dhak Dhak both are hearing their heartbets






now maan ready to just put his thirsty and manly lips on geets rosy lips he just ready to took that rosy lips in his lips a loud knok on door brake there sweet moment ,



maan growl in frustration he loosed his hold on geet and ask who are there and sound come room service sir ,breakfast for you sir maan some how control his emotions and went to open door and hear geet try to hold her racing heart ,and her face turn into dark red shade .

Maan open door and say nice timing with toant

That boy don't get meaning of his toant he put breakfast on table and stand near door first maan confused with his act but after get meaning of his act and give teep to that boy and closed the door he come near the table and sit for breakfast and called geet also

Geet no maanji you eat i will eat after bath and pray to god

Maan looked confused to her and say geet but where is god in room

Geet ; I brought small image of babaji with me

Maan give amazing look to her and say it is your daily rooting geet nodded yes

Maan : Ok geet but can you give company till I finish my breakfast and geet nodded in yes and sit opposite to him maan have hopes that she sit beside his but geet is geet he shake his head and start his breakfast

Geet maanji you have big friend circle

Maan yes I have big circale and you

Geet no I have only two friend's pinky and my papa her eyes shining with twinkle

Geet further said so you going to late night party

Maan ya some time ,occasionally we meet our friends and make party where we dance ,play,gossip,sometime drink and smoking

Geet make face with last word of maan ,maan got that he don't have to mention about smoking and drink now he just bit his tongue and geet give him look like what ,he say sometime geet sometime

Geet so you also have habit of smoking and drinking per papaji ne kuch nahi bataya

Maan wo mention nahi kiya tha kisine pucha hi nahi ,maan imm change topic and say ,geet you took bath I have some work I will finish that and he went to door

Geet imm ask where are you going it is that imp ,she scare some wear maan smile on her questions and say for some time I want some medicine for us if we need it in emergency geet just nodded her head and say but come back soon maan just smile and went from there

Precap

Maan standing in front of medical but, heisted to ask for special medicine

Now you guys think what maan want to ask to shop keeper

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
maan asking for medicine 😉😆
update next part soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb and awesome. maan asking for medicine😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
i came nd u alrdy updttd,,,thnx sweety 4 ur rgulrty,,,,👏
nw about updtt,,,maan on madhumaas on hs fvrt spot,,,😉
bechara abhi tak to rukawat hi rukawat aa rehii hei,,,😆
osm prt,,,,😊 waiting 4 nxt,,,,😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
part 11
awesome...
they are married now...
Maan is so much in love and Geet so shy...

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