New MG ss Journey of -- Note and part 30 on page 104 ,30 jan - Page 14

Originally posted by: erumzaheer

part 9 is good n well written thanx for adding my idea
of phone talking.

Part 10

Geet stand there like statue  she don't know how you react maan each and every word brought some unknown feeling in her heart and she don't know what is that and she don't get the meaning of maan last line she just holding mobile with running heart she clearly heard her hart bits like  DHAK DHAK and her face turn into red like tomato

        After that day maan calling her every day then she is busy with shopping etc and maan busy with shopping, office work and chatting with geet on phone

      Haldi ceremony take  there own house maan haldi send to geet house and pinky don't miss chance to tease geet and geet become more red and red because of teasing and hear maan sending her sms every ten minute

      Pinky geet tera phone ku bar bar baje reaha hai uncle ko bolu kya koi lafange to tang nahi kar raha hai and wink to geet

       Geet feeling so shy first  she sitting there in women and everybody saying with haldi you get glow to your face and maan get lattu on that everyone teasing her with maan name she feeling thousand butterfly flying in her tummy her all body have unknown hit ,she have some fear also with this new relation new felling  she don't look to anyone face she feeling so shy

          In maan house all his friend took advantage of maan and tesing him like hell he give angry glare but nobody  have effect from that glare and our dadima admired him with tearful eyes maan notice that and nodded no for tear

            Maan came out from flashback when adi voice brought him back in present time adi try to put maan things in bag maan give nervous smile to adi ,adi come near o him and say

            Maan I know you take good care of geet but remind some things you know maan it is very tuff to every girl when a girl give birth ,study to her papa house she spend more than 20 years there ,you can imagine how much she have attachment to her relation her house ,friend etc so ,don't hope that she will accept this new life in one day so give her some time dear let give her time to blossom like flower than look how much that flower looked beautiful you gate me na ,maan it is not only emotionally but physically also ,this first few days make unbreakable bound between you two , and I think my bhabhi is little Nave ,you get me na maan so took your relationship step by step .and wink to maan

         Maan feeling so shy but as usual his friend took away his tension he just hug adi and said yes adi iwill ,idont hurt her in anyway adi nodded his head maan took blessing from elders and sit in car ,yes he sit on horse  but near hall so all travel to hall with cars

         Hear all handa family waiting of barat on hall gate hall was beautifully decorated with flowers and lights ,there come noise of band and cracker handa family be ready for welcome and in bride room geet heart bit stop for second when she heard sound of band so much emotions passing in her heart she have goose bump in her body she almost ready for jaimala pinky put mangtika and duppata on her head and point out image of geet when geet looked to her image she is feeling that she is not geet but there is new girl standing who look so beautiful  

she feeling so shy with thought now she have to face maan she just put her hand on her face because of shyness

Pinky just took  her in hug pinky know how nave and emotional geet is she is some wear tense for her ,how maan handle geet ,she shoo her thought and say to herself I will talk with maan on this hear they called for jaymala pinky slowly whisper geet chale maan is waiting for you geet bend her head down and nodded yes

         Hear maan barat come with band and all his friend are dancing and enjoying they are welcome by handa family at the time he enter in hall his eyes only searching geet , adi put hand on his shoulder and say

Maan first took blessing from elder ,wo ati hi hogi ,meri bhabi

      Maan got embressed ,and took blessing from elders and went to mandap for jaymala with adi and his all friends and there his geet come from steps  oh poor maan forget to blink his eyes his heartbeat stop for while ,beautiful word come from his  mouth,   

geet lengha

Maan got embressed ,and took blessing from elders and went to mandap for jaymala with adi and his all friends and there his geet come from steps  oh poor maan forget to blink his eyes his heartbeat stop for while ,beautiful word come from his  mouth

hear geet felling so nervous because all are looking to her ,she I shaking little bit maan got her nervousness when geet eyes meet his eyes he passed massage that she is looking stunning then erased he nervousness he wink to her without others knowledge

poor geet her eyes winded in shock but sweet smile come in her lips

Jaimala

First geet put jaimala but maan friends hold him in air oh geet make puppy face but she got idea and bend like she have pain in her leg poor maan come closed with tense and geet took advantage of it and put jaimala in his neck maan first get shock but then smile that she forget her  nervousness

then maan put jaimala in her neck

Panditiji say them to sit near holy fire and he start their marriage ritual

Originally posted by: Mahimaan

teaser


dream come true
dream of maaneet marriage

Bride



Groom







dream wedding two soul become one all maaneet are invited

Maan

weds

geet