New MG ss Journey of -- Note and part 30 on page 104 ,30 jan - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
it is not related to my ss but related to our i again said OUR geet plesae read this

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3840038/please-read-this-it-is-about-our-geet-dt-note-pg-3
Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
part 7
nice...
Maan is so besotted by Geet...
cont soon dear...

PS - can u plz post the link when u update in this thread dear?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
teaser of part 8

bonding of new relation




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Posted: 11 years ago
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new beginning with soulmate



Do dilo ko ek sath judne ki survaat
beginning of two heart become one heart




Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Part 8 beginning of two heart become one

He try to catch her hand with glass he just want to see how soft is her hand so he try to hold glass with strong grip but glass fall with big sound Thud and that sound brought maan in reality and this time his bakara is not adi but poor pinky who herd maan talking with adi so she brought water for her jijaji Now maan wanted to urn away from there with fear he look toward geet but geet can not hold her laugh and start to laugh ,but maan got impress that geet cannot misjudge him he imm ask sorry to pinky and run from there to his mother

Now maan is so impassioned and look to his mother with pleading eyes Like want to say her start this ceremony ,


his mother got his thought and went near to rano and say Rano ji can we start ceremony now ,rano said yes yes


So within few minute ceremony start first pandit called geet and put sindoor on her forehead then he called maan and repeated with him ,them maan mother give gift to geet and geet mother give gift to maan then panditji ask them to stand and exchange ring ,so geet and maan stand for ring exchange

geet gift from maan family








geet ring




first maan took geet hand in his hand he is filling like he touch world smooth things ,he want to hold hand tightly but pnaditji interfere and said please wear ring to her,so maan put ring in geet finger and he is taking his own good time ,so he can hold hand for some more time, adi saw this and come near to maan ear and whisper Maan hat chode de nahi to ring ceremony adhuri raeh jayagi /please maan if you did not loose geet hand then this ceremony should be remain half it is not completed

Hear our geet going with so much emotions when they stand for ring her heart like dhak dhak and she fill goose bump on her body and when maan took her hand in his hand oh he is first male rather than his family and friends who touch her ,she feeling like her cheek have hit and she have shy smile she felt so much shy in front of all and maan take his own time, she again start silent conversion with her babaji like babaji ye maan kya ker reahe hai / what are he doing ,why he took so much time for it






maan ring



With adi word maan remove his hand after that geet put ring in his finger oh her hand is shaking in that procedure poor girl ,so much shy at last she put ring in his finger and all start clap for them, They took blessing for all elders of both family and adi ,pinky and three friends start to cong them oh poor maan want to spend time with her,want to talk with her but today all are acted like enemy and everybody want to cong them some time from geet some time from maan side

After some time all are called for diner maan and geet sit together ,and all started to tease them ,pinky came closed to them and say maan jijaji put first bit to geet mouth oh poor geet turn in red shade ,butterfly start fly in her tummy with only thought , maan happily took sweet from plate with her hand (not with spoon )



with naughty smile he brought sweet to near mouth of geet ,geet open her mouth for eat that sweet ,but current passed by her body when maan long fingers touch her lips it remind there for some second ,maan enjoying his finger on her rosy lips and geet because of new feeling get confused ,pinky come to near her ears and said in low voice geet we are asking for eat sweet not eat maan with your eyes and wink to geet oh poor geet turn in beetroot red she imm took sweet in her mouth

Now adi ask geet that she should give sweet to maan ,geet took some sweet in her hand and bring it near his mouth maan took that ,but with sweet he bit geet finger slightly , small gasp come from geet mouth





which pinky heard and ask her what happen geet ,poor geet what will be she ans that his would be hubby bit her she shake her head in no and say nothing pinky ,and look to maan who have naughty smile on his face ,without anyone's knowledge he winks to geet and ask geet Ha geet what happened with innocent face now geet make face and put her head down to covered/ hide her red face and with lots of fun they finished there diner







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Maan is thinking that now he can get time for talking but maan mother came there and say

Geet you looking beautiful dear, can you finish your diner ,maan ne tang to nahi kiya

Geet ; thanks anuty I finish my diner and no he don't trouble me

Maan Mother : maan we have to live now dadima is home so

With that both face lost there color, oh both of them like this togetherness they wanted to spend some more time with each other , both feeling miserable ,some how maan control his emotins and say geet dadima ke liye jana padega hope you understand ,and the diner is tasty, and arrangement is beautiful geet

Geet node her head ,but she want to hear something for her like how is she looking, and maan have idea what is geet thinking he stand for living geet face fail down with that she want to hear from him maan took some step but come back look to here and there everyone is busy with there work or talking he took chance and put peek on geet head and say geet you looking beautiful and breathtaking like Pari , and you are my and only my angel with that he left from there





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hear geet sit with shocking face maan word and action give shock to her after some second she got to know oh maan kiss her on her head ,she put her hand on that place she feeling his lips touch now also , hear once again maan look to her and wink her with naughty smile and geet put her head down in shyness







Precap - depend on your suggestion

I want some suggestion can I skip sangeet part or not

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome n wonderful...

bechara maan n geet...ek doosre k saath time nehi bita paye...aur maan...mauke pe chauka marne k kaushish kar raha hai...ladka sudhar jao...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: love2_soma

awesome n wonderful...

bechara maan n geet...ek doosre k saath time nehi bita paye...aur maan...mauke pe chauka marne k kaushish kar raha hai...ladka sudhar jao...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...




ye ladka sudharne walo main se nahi our bigadna walo me se hai 😉
Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Beautiful story mahi
Loved maneet here,loved Der arrange marriage journey.
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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dono paas aa rahe hain...

Adi bhi poora fayada utha raha hai Maan ko tease karne ke liye...

waiting for engagement...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
lovelyupdate
naughty maan sharmili geet
loved it
u can skip no problem as u wish

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