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Posted: 11 years ago
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very sad part...

I am not able to understand how own parents behave with a child in such a way...and that when Maan was only 4 yrs old...

so Daadima is taking care of both Maan and Geet...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6




very sad part...

I am not able to understand how own parents behave with a child in such a way...and that when Maan was only 4 yrs old...

so Daadima is taking care of both Maan and Geet...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...





yes dear some time human behave more worst than animal
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely update maaneet has a past abh dono dadima ke sath hai waiting 4 next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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such an emotional update
maan had gone through a lot & same goes with geet
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MERRY CHRISTMAS
Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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MERRY CHRISTMAS
TO ALL
MAANEET


FROM Mahimaan

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Posted: 11 years ago
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before update read this ,this episode of Gumrah on V

Kanak is an ambitious girl, but her family doesn't want her to study. Meanwhile, Kanak's brother Kumar is spoilt and filthy. With much persuasion, her father allows her to study. One day, Kumar gets hold of a love letter of Kanak. He and his friends rape Kanak and make her pregnant. When Kanak divulges the truth to her family, they refuse to believe her. To save the family's reputation, Kanak is poisoned and killed. Kanak's teacher files a complaint against the family and gets them arrested.

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story of real rape case

Kanak is an ambitious girl, but her family doesn't want her to study. Meanwhile, Kanak's brother Kumar is spoilt and filthy. With much persuasion, her father allows her to study. One day, Kumar gets hold of a love letter of Kanak. He and his friends rape Kanak and make her pregnant. When Kanak divulges the truth to her family, they refuse to believe her. To save the family's reputation, Kanak is poisoned and killed. Kanak's teacher files a complaint against the family and gets them arrested.




i name this story as ar_art suggestion Adoore sapane
thanks dear
Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Asuon ke chalne ki awaz nehi hoti
Dil ke tootne ki ahaat nehin hoti
Agar hota khuda ko har dard ka ehsas
to use dard dene ki adat nehin hoti...


Part 3

Geet loud voice brought dadima from her thoughts ,she just screaming ,no please don't dard hota hai ,please don't do that its paining , i am felling scared please please maaa...dadima feeling so helpless for there children ,she just want to erase there pain ,why god suffer them she start cares geet head and make her clam ,geet don't scare beta i am hear nobody harm you , nobody touch you beta ,you are safe beta

Svapn jhade phool se, mit chubhe shool se
Lut gaye shrr^ingaar sabhi, baag ke babool se
Aur ham khade khade, bahaar dekhate rahe
Kaaravaan guzar gayaa, gubaar dekhate rahe

Aankh bhi khuli na thi ki haaya dhoop dhal gai
Paanv jab talaq uthe ki zindagi fisal gai
Paat paat jhad gae ki shaakh-shaakh jal gai
Chaah to nikal saki (na par umar nikal gai) - 2)
Git ashk ban gae, svapn ho dafan gae
Saath ke sabhi diye, dhuaan pahan-pahan gae
Aur ham jhuke-jhuke, mod par ruke-ruke
Umr ki chadhaav kaa utaar dekhate rahe, kaaravaan guzar...

Till then doc also arrived she check geet and give eng to her for some sleep

Doc savitri ji iam really worried for her she have be gain waith , first her mental condition , her tender age and this pregnancy ,we cant abort this child that harmful to her life but for baby and geet she have to be normal

Dadima just nodded her head ,start to think what shall I do she cant live like this ,I have to do something but what dadima feeling so helpless ,for geet and maan one thing about geet she scare to other present but if anybody come with dadima she don't behave violently that indicate that she trust dadima

Dadima again lost her in geet thought how she find geet in hospital

Flashback before 5 month dadima went to her monthly checkup after coming back from doc cabin she hard some painful voice in near room she cant stop herself and went to that room ,a gasp come from dadima mouth there a 15,16 old girl tied with bed her hand and legs tied with bed , she have so many injury on her body ,hand ,legs , forehead have bandage ,she have so many cut on face near lips , below eyes ,with lots of courage dadima went near bed and closely look to girl face ,dadima just froze in her face ,it is biggest nightmear for daima , in her bed dreams also she cant think like this a small voice come from dadima lips Geet

Kyaa shabaab thaa ki phool phool pyaar kar uthaa
Svapn jhade phool se, mit chubhe shool se
Kyaa kamaal thaa ki dekh aainaa sihar uthaa
Is taraf zamin aur aasamaan udhar uthaa
Thaamakar jigar uthaa (ki jo milaa nazar uthaa) - 2)
Par tabhi yahaan magar, aisi kuchh havaa chali
Lut gai kali kali ki ghut gai gali gali
Aur ham lute-lute, vaqt se pite-pite
Shaam ki sharaab kaa khumaar dekhate rahe, kaaravaan guzar...

Haath the mile ke zulf chaand ki savaar doon
Honth the khule ke har bahaar ko pukaar loon
Dard thaa diyaa gayaa ke har dukhi ko pyaar doon
Aur saans yoon ke svarg, (bhoomi par utaar doon - 2)
Ho sakaa na kuchh magar, shaam ban gai sahar
Vo uthi lahar ke dhah gaye kile bikhar bikhar
Aur ham dare dare, nir nain mein bhare
Odh kar kafan pade mazaar dekhate rahe, kaaravaan guzar...






Dadi just run there and lose all ropes of geet hand and legs ,she crying by pain ,dadima saw some blood near geets back side she just closed her nouth with her hand it is big shock for dadima ,she don't belive that ,she just called doc , doc come there and say Yes dadima sshe is Geet hand admitted before 3 days , she is ,she is raped till 5 days

Dadima just held that doc and shake her with force no it cant be it is not true she is little girl doc even she don't growth fully with her body ,with her mind no , why the hell you tied her legs and hand when she is suffering from so much pain , now dadima crying eyes start to spit fire on that doc , she cant control herself

Doc gate scare with dadima reaction , but she said it is necessary dadima she wanted to finish herself we don't have any other option dadima ,daima cant control herself and start to cry bitterly meri bacchy ,my girl geet , geet

Dadima ask doc who done this ,doc her cousin Brij and his friends dadima just froze in her places how brother done this with sister , brother sister relation is most pure relation in world , brother who have to protect her from whole world who done this with her ,her just brake this beautiful doll in several pieces ,why why ,dadima some how control her emotion and ask is he arrested , doc just nod her head in yes ,further dadima ask where is her sister

Doc say she is in nest room sleeping , she is so scare and tense because of all this , dadima nodded her head and say I take this both girl to my home please you arrange a nurse in my house for 24 hours so dadima brought both of them to her house and start to take care of both of them ,first few days really hard for dadima geet is not her sense at all ,many time she try to suicide , and after one month dadima gate another news that geet is pregnant ,dadima don't to know how to react on that

Nature biggest beautiful gift for any women become most painful and unwanted curse for geet dadima just hold geet in her motherly hug and start to cry bitterly ,she just crying her heart ,why god you punish my child like this ,what you wanted with her life ,how much this girl have to suffer in her life why god why ...

Maang bhar chali ke ek jab nai nai kiran
Dhol se dhunak uthi thumak uthe charan charan
Shor mach gayaa ke lo chali dulhan chali dulhan
Gaanv sab umada padaa, (bahak uthe nayan nayan - 2)
Par tabhi zahar bhari gaaz ek vah giri
Poonchh gayaa sindoor taar taar hui chunari
Aur ham ajaan se, door ke makaan se
Paalaki liye huye kahaar dekhate rahe, kaaravaan guzar...

Svapan jhade phool se, mit chubhe shul se
Lut gaye shrr^ingaar sabhi baag ke babool se
Aur ham khade khade bahaar dekhate rahe
Kaaravaan guzar gaya gubbaar dekhate rahe



Precap

Maan out of room

Geet maan face to face


Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago

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