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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome start
both maan & geet r destroyed beyond edge
for maan, his so called parent is responsible & for geet i think she is physically abused by someone
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6



Mr Khurana ko do slap and Pammi ko kuch nahin...badi nainsaafi hai sardaar...char thappad Pammi ko kyun nahin maare Daadi ma ne... thank God Daadima is different from Maan's parents...she loves him...

Daadima took Maan with her to HP where Geet is also living her life like a burden...

she is pregnant...

very painful start...

waiting for next part...




Tahkur dirt main haat nahi dala jata apnahi haat dirty ho jata hai
Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Part 2

Maan laying lifeless on bed and dadima sit beside him ,nakul and his wife standing there with bending head ,nakul wife sita try to say something but nakul stop her but this not hide from dadima ,and she know it about maan because this couple treat maan as there own son ,dadima took them to joint room and say i know you both want to say something , I also want to know what happen with maan that a full of life child become a lifeless body ,I cant digest that my maan want to suicide ,he want to finish his life please tell me

Sita cant control her tear and sob start cry loudly ,dadima this child so alon in that KM ,sorry to say but it is very wrong decision to give maan to them yes I know they are parent but only biological ,not with mind ,soul or emotionally

You know dadima when maan is 4 year old he want to sleep with pummy mam and ,mam oly slap him and ,lock maan baba in his room as punishment I hearing that 4 year old child crying ,sob whole night mam but ,we are so helpless don't do anything you know which painting he made that time ,with that she brought bunch of painting to dadima and took one in hand to see

Main Kabhi Batlata Nahin

Par Andhere Se Darta Hoon Main Maa

Yun To Main,Dikhlata Nahin

Teri Parwaah Karta Hoon Main Maa

Tujhe Sab Hain Pata, Hain Na Maa

Tujhe Sab Hain Pata,,Meri Maa

Dadima took that in her hand that panting is full black and some white shadow like one woman beating a small boy , other sad faces painting which telling story of maan mind






a small gasp come from dadima mouth sita start to say another part when maan is 9 th year old he got price in painting competition and with so much happiness run to mr, kuhurana with hope that they appreciate his work but mr. kuhrana just humiliated maan in front of his friends that what a child , and say that if he gate this in Math and science then it is worthy and don't spoil your time in this Things which don't give any career ,I am not that much educated dadaima say sita but painting is that bad for children or maan ,maan don't gate whole meaning of his words but his small brain decides that paining is bad thing

Maan went to his room and just sob sob sob ,he never again look to that trophy dadima , never , but he cant stop him from painting we hide his all painting to our room dadima and last time when he is 16 year old mr kuhurana found him again painting in garden on that day mr kuhrana just fire maan panting which was he making at that time and that fired make ash maan mind ,soul dadima, he not cry dadim on that day after that maan never ever make painting never

He just want to see happy his parent and he start to study hard too hard ,day night but you know dadima ,he cant study daima ,he cant, how many time he read same lesson but he cant get that daima and in every exam he got less number and sir and mam presser on maan increasing day by day that is starting of this broken maan dadima he brake from mind ,soul dadima

Today also i can see that small face of maan with fear ,anger ,helpless when he got punishment ,when his painting fired by mr .khurana

Bheed Mein Yun Na Chodo Mujhe

Ghar Laut Ke Bhi Aa Naa Paoon Maa

Bhej Na Itna Door Mujkko Tu

Yaad Bhi Tujhko Aa Naa Paoon Maa

Kya Itna Bura Hoon Main Maa

Kya Itna Bura Meri Maa

With that they give bunch of painting and a dairy of maan to dadima hand Daima could sense now in which level his grandson is broken by is own parent hand ,dadima start to look to painting thay are so beautiful ,like they are not painting but living things maan make them alive dadima have sad smile on her face and say jo bacha life se dur jar aha tha ushane hi in painting main jan bhar di

A boy who going away fro life day by day he himself put life in this painting what irony of life she know nakul wife say only full thinks that are very little part of maan suffer , dadima soul shake with this thought that which extant her grandson suffer in his life

Jab Bhi Kabhi Papa Mujhe

Jo Zor Se Jhoola Jhulate Hain Maa

Meri Nazar Dhoondhe Tujhe

Sochu Yahi Tu Aa Ke Thaamegi Maa

Unse Main Yeh Kehta Nahin

Par Main Seham Jaata Hoon Maa

Chehre Pe Aana Deta Nahin

Dil Hi Dil Mein Ghabraata Hoon Maa

Tujhe Sab Hai Pata Hai Naa Maa

Tujhe Sab Hai Pata Meri Maa

Image of small crying maan , angry maan , hurt maan start to come in front of dadima eyes she just put maan diary near her heart and that old lady start cry like small kid ,she just run toward maan and say maan i am sorry maan I am sorry tear are falling from her eyes and some tear failed on maan hands ,he just shake his hand and try to open his eyes ,when he open his eyes ,dadima taken back with emptiness of that beautiful eyes ,her soul shake with maan face there is no sine of that he recognized his dadima ,dadima sit there with blank mind ...

Hear when geet lost her conscious veena care taker of geet and that girl who is sister of geet put geet on bed and veena went to called some one she went in one room that person facing back to veena ,veena softly called out dadima ,geet lost her conscious again ,yes dadima taking care of geet also she just called nakul say him to stay with maan and went to geet where geet laying on bed unconsciously

Dadima say call doc first veena and veena went from there dadima start to wake up geet choti brought water ,daima sprayed little on geet face and geet start to open her eyes firs she get scare but when dadima face come in front of her she just hug dadima and start to cry bitterly,dadima just hold her in her motherly hold

Daima is knowing handa family and she look geet from childhood geet she is full of life ,so talkative ,beautiful ,every time up to some prank ,love her parent and sister , naughty but good with heart never ever hurt anyone filling but life play most cruel game with her when she is only 13 year ,rano geet mother have accident in there house ,geet just lost her childhood in that accident rano lifeless body in her room , Mohinder geet father totally broken by wife state and this teo girl 13 year geet and 11 year choti at that time geet become mother of her sister when geet need more her mother in that tender age she become mother of her sister ,but she done all work with smile ,she taking care of all things but when she is 15 year her parent lost there life and geet so called relative took them to village which are far from hear , it took 4,5 hour to reach there and this two year dadima lost track of geet after death of her parent ,when she found geet in near by hospital she got this broken doll ,just broken by her own relative

Geet loud voice brought dadima from her thoughts ,she just screaming ,no please don't dard hota hai ,please don't do that its paining , iam felling scared please please maaa...

Main Kabhi Batlata Nahin

Par Andhere Se Darta Hoon Main Maa

Yun To Main,Dikhlata Nahin

Teri Parwaah Karta Hoon Main Maa

Tujhe Sab Hain Pata, Hain Na Maa

Tujhe Sab Hain Pata,,Meri Maa

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
such a painful update
maaneet's past is really heart wrenching😭
hope futures brings lots of happiness for them!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
very painfull n waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Sad and emotional part
Maan ka bachpan...😭
Liked paintings...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
both maneet past r painful
one is brutally wiped by his own parents
the other by her relative
i want both the elders to be punished for what they did to maneet

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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
heart wrenching update hate maans parent &geets relatives it was superb
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Posted: 11 years ago
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chi...koi parents apne hi bachche k saath aisa kar sakta hai kya?kaise ma baap hai...mabaap k naam per dhabba hai...

aur geet...apne hi rishtey daron ne hi usse tod k rakh diye...sharam bhi nehi ate in logon ko...

painful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: love2_soma

chi...koi parents apne hi bachche k saath aisa kar sakta hai kya?kaise ma baap hai...mabaap k naam per dhabba hai...

aur geet...apne hi rishtey daron ne hi usse tod k rakh diye...sharam bhi nehi ate in logon ko...

painful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...





yes dear yasi bhi parent hote hai now a days they prepared for race,race for money ,fame ,power
they are not worried that there child become a good human being or not but worried that there child must be a money machine




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