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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2 father ladali geet

Hear in handa family one girl who have very beautiful eyes put her head on her father shoulder and ask her father that he have to stay with her all time in visit of that boys home she can not meet that boy in alone

All geet mother rano her little brother and pinky start to laugh on geet talking

Pinky start to image geet front of boy and geet holding hand of Mohinder uncle oh pink cant control her laugh and give shbasi on her imagination

But poor soul geet look with nave eyes to everyone what is joke in this oh she really looking adorable like scared kit who sit near his mother oh

Mohinder give strict look to everyone like if you not stop your laugh then ready for its consequence geet is father ladaly daughter and how he took teasing of all for geet because he know how geet is nave like flower or child all stop there laugh by look of Mohinder ,Mohinder put his hand on geet head and say geet don't angry or cry dear now what I talking lesion carefully i know you are papas good girl


Mohinder : So geet what is marriage for you

Geet : without thinking geet said marriage means lots of shopping, dance and lots of food

Mohinder : Mohinder shook his head with smile he expected this ans from geet his nave geet ,yes dear that is true but this little part of marriage celebration ,but in true sense

it is bonding of two individual person in one soul , one heart

it is bonding of two family

it is commitment to other person who are your partner that you share his happiness his pain ,his sorrow and support him in his hard time like you support him like pillar you become his strength ,his power and not a wick point

now a day your young generation not have faith in joint family , but trust me beta it is best foundation of our life who share of pain who support us in our bad day so you have to respect your husband family because they also become part of your life after this marriage

marriage is samarpan of your Tan ,man and dhan to your life partner you get meaning of my words na dear with marriage you could be one with your partner in every manner dear ,don't scare for it beta boys also have tension about marriage, commitment dear

last one but important that you represent us in that house ,so you have behave like our pride but get one thing clear dear with this marriage nothing change in our relations it is like always this and you are always father sweet daughter dear in every problem of your I am there for you dear with this he put a pick on geet temple and took her in hug

now geet lost control of her emotions and cry out in her father hug all have tear in there eyes ,Mohinder say to geet now stop all your tear and get ready for going and wear you like dear so after 2 hours we going to your would be hubby house oh geet open her mouth in O shape all start laugh on this run to hug them it is an full family hug with happiness with emotions for there dear one

ignore rajji and imagine pinky



ignore tajji

Mohinder took all member with him because he know now geet need privacy, all went out from room and geet start think about father word and marriage till now she is very confuse scared with name of marriage that how she face it how she face new relation there expectations ,demand etc it is heard ,difficult for every girl to adjust in new family it give scary filling to every girl

Geet have boys friend but it is limited to only friendship she is little nave in this love romance etc ,so she have fear about that boy what if he mistook her or make joke on her etc but now father word "samarpan of your Tan ,man and dhan to your life partner"give courage to her give new view to her thinking that it is part of our life and we have to accept it in positive way I think papa is right like me that boys also be tense with marriage proposal but couldn't give him opportunity to touch me in our first meeting very good geet , geet give shabski to herself for her decision poor soul don't know after watching Msk her this decision going in vain

Precap impassions maan and chu mui geet

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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mindblowing update
plz conti soon waiting nxt pt
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
loved the innocent geet
please update soon and pm me

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Posted: 11 years ago
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waiting fr d maan n geet meeting...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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teaser for part 3

Thoda sa pyaar hua hai, thoda hai baaqi

Hum to dil de hi chuke, oh

Hum to dil de hi chuke, bas teri haan hai baaqi

I have given my heart, only your "yes" is left

Thoda sa pyaar hua hai, thoda hai baaqi -



Kaunsa mod aaya zindagi ke safar mein

Bas gaya tu hi tu ab to meri nazar mein

Dil ki har ek dhadkan tujhko pehchaanti hai

Meri chaahat hai ab kya, tu nahin jaanti hai

Main tujhe jaan gayi, oh

Tujhko pehchaan gayi, phir bhi teri haan hai baaqi

Thoda sa pyaar hua hai, thoda hai baaqi

Aaj yeh kya hua hai, dil nahin mera bas mein

Is liye sochti hoon tod doon saari rasmein

Umr bhar ke liye tu aa mera saath de de

Tera ho jaaoonga main, haathon mein haath de de

Haathon mein haath sahi, ho

Tu mere saath sahi, phir bhi teri haan hai baaqi


Thoda sa pyaar hua hai, thoda hai baaqi

Thoda sa pyaar hua hai, thoda hai baaqi



meaning

A little love has happened, a little is left

I have given my heart

A little love has happened, a little is left

What kind of turn has come in life's journey

You, only you have become fixed in my sight




A little love has happened, a little is left

Every single beat of my heart recognizes you

What my desire is now, you don't know

I have gotten to know you

I have gotten to know you, even still your "yes" is left

A little love has happened, a little is left

Today what has happened, my heart is not in my control

Because of this I'm thinking of breaking all traditions

For all of life, come give me companionship

I will become yours, in my hands give me your hand

My hand is in your hands, really

My hand is in your hands, really, even still your "yes" is left

A little love has happened, a little is left

A little love has happened, a little is left





Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Update amazing full of meanings...
Loved the way you describe
awesome
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 3 Do dil

After two hour full handa family ready for living for boys house and waiting for there princess and there princess come in green dress with flower in her hand an innocent smile on her place rano ma want to ask her about sari but Mohinder strictly said that what geet want to wear is imp for them

Pinky tease wow geet you are all ready to give flowers to your would be wow I don't know that you are so romantic

Geet mouth turn in O shape she slap pinky and say pinky it is not for that boy , and till now he is not my would be because I don't give my yes to him so and this flower for dadima who is ill so --------

All shake there head, they all know that there geet is like this always, golden heart like child now Mohinder said to all ,oh come on we have to go now

In maan house maan sit in dadi room and waiting for guest ,dadi is sleeping on bed and other member of family busy in there work after some time some car sound come from outside of house immediately maan mother and father went to greet them ,

There maan father welcome them with smile , come in come in mr handa we are waiting for you and your family all are settle in hall itself pinky geet and geet brother took blessing from maans parents ,maan parent really happy with this mr pratham maan father talking with handa and ask about there health and other things rano busy with maan mother nisha ,and our pinky geet and geet brother busy in looking and admiring the house its simple but beautiful after some time when maan mother notice flower in geet hand a naughty thought come in her mind she know maan present in dadi room she is very open minded and cheerful person she called geet

Nisha : Geet beta come hear with some hesitations geet went near nisha and sit besides her

Geet : Yes anuty ,

Nisha : beautiful flowers beta

Geet : geet with big smile, geet say it is from our garden aunty and i brought this for dadima ,can you give her from us

Nisha : oh thanks dear why you yourself give it to dadima she will be very happy ,go to that room and she indicated to one room which near to steps

Geet : geet got scared with sudden request and she look to her father for help with puppy face

All control there laugh after watching of geet scary and baby face at last Mohinder say yes geet you go and give it to dadima she will be happy for this so without any other option she stand to went dadima room but some unknown felling coming in her heart like visit to that room will be change her life like some one waiting for her ,like it is turning point of her life with dhak dhak heart she enter in room and yes like she thinking her life stop for one moment there is boy in black suit standing near bed of dadima looking in mobile oh he have beautiful features oh poor girl don't saw such handsome boy in her life


She don't know what is happening with her like she is froze in her place ,and many butterfly flying in her stomach she want to talk but not single word coming from her mouth she took that flower really closed to her heart like she want to shout her heart stop your Dhak Dhak

In this process her bangle make noises and that boy look to her and in her eyes oh poor soul totally bold out in that brown chocolate eyes oh so they are such beautiful and deep like Ocean

When maan eyes fail on most beautiful creativity of god with innocent face oh he look he from tip to top a girl in green dress ,with shaking hand stand there beautiful pair of eyes almond shape eyes , a little nose and soft pink lips like rose Patel he just want to touch them want to know it is really soft like he thought ,her long neck and fair color skin oh god make her with perfection maan never see a girl with beauty and innocence oh he only want to crush her in his hug .poor soul come back sense with beep of sms



He mentally slap himself for ogling a girl like this and start to read sms ,oh he is surprised with mother sms ," Oh, maan stop stare to her like that and talk with her poor girl got scared with your staring ya and its our pasand /choice for you and be gentlemen😉 " oh poor maan want to hide his face which turn like tomato

Hear our poor geet come back from her la la land and start to slap herself how she become shameless paray merd ko asi dehakte hai kya / how you look to unknown boy like this chi chi babaji ye mere sath kya ho raha hai suder ja geet tu to pinky or hindi filmo se dur hi rah ja now give this flower to dadima took her blessing and go from hear and PLEASE don't look towards him

Hear our dadima also open her eyes with sound of geet bangle and watch all what happen with maan and geet , both changing expression of face told all story of maaneet mind so she took charge of situation on her hand and called out maan, who is standing in door

Dadima ; maan i am talking with you

Maan ; maan struggle with word and said oh dadima it is your pasand /choice poor soul closed his eyes in embarrassment and say oh dadi it is geet

Dadima ;dadima have difficulty to hold her laugh and say oh geet come in dear

Geet poor geet bend her head after hearing word of maan choice of his family kya main inki choice nahi hoo / oh family choice why iam not his choice ,poor soul really get confused with her thoughts and slap herself in her mind once again say to herself jhalni dadima ko flowers de de /give flower to dadima she went near to dadima and took blessing from her and sit near to dadima

Precap ; maan talking with geet

Naughty dadima

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am cant stop my laugh..
Dono ek jaise hai..
Gosh geet i know that maan is drop dead handsome n geetu is so beautiful don busy drooling n daadi enjoying..

Wowww mast update tha...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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such a sweet scene yaar😳..precap interesting..pls cont soon..
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part 1
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the positivity he has got finally...

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