FF (2): Dark Ties - NOTE - Page 132 (Thread 3)

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(Dark Ties will be receiving daily updates unless I am unable to update on a certain day!)

Index

Thread #1

Dark Ties Siggies

Prologue - Page 1

Chapter One - The Senses - Page 15

Chapter Two - The Kidnapper - Page 23

Chapter Three - The Kind One - Page 29

Chapter Four - The Advice - Page 33

Chapter Five - The Darkness - Page 39

Chapter Six - The Clothes - Page 45

Chapter Seven - The New Job - Page 50

Chapter Eight - The Interruption - Page 55

Chapter Nine - The Burn - Page 60

Chapter Ten - The Preparations - Page 64

Chapter Eleven - The Dinner Table - Page 72

Chapter Twelve - The Rose - Page 77

Chapter Thirteen - The Party - Page 81

Chapter Fourteen - The Shock - Page 89

Chapter Fifteen - The Light Touch - Page 94

Chapter Sixteen - The Runaway - Page 100

Chapter Seventeen - The Saviour - Page 106

Chapter Eighteen - The Night - Page 113

Chapter Nineteen - The Talk - Page 118

Chapter Twenty - The Emergency Button - Page 123

Thread #2

Chapter Twenty-One - The First Day - Page 1

Chapter Twenty-Two - The Kiss - Page 6

Chapter Twenty-Three - The Two Questions - Page 11

Chapter Twenty-Four - The Accident - Page 17

Chapter Twenty-Five - The Coma - Page 22

Chapter Twenty-Six - The Awakening - Page 28

Chapter Twenty-Seven - Living In The Past - Page 33

Chapter Twenty-Eight - The Rejection - Page 36

Chapter Twenty-Nine - The Passionate Night - Page 43

Chapter Thirty - The Nightmare - Page 43

Chapter Thirty-One - The Year - Page 50

Chapter Thirty-Two - The Talk - Page 55

Chapter Thirty-Three - The Final Farewell - Page 59

Chapter Thirty-Four - The Soulless Body - Page 64

Chapter Thirty-Five - The Wake-Up Call - Page 69

Chapter Thirty-Six - The Unexpected Breakdown - Page 74

Chapter Thirty-Seven - The Question Of Love - Page 79

Chapter Thirty-Eight - The Oatmeal - Page 90

Chapter Thirty-Nine - The Surprise - Page 96

Chapter Forty - The Memories - Page 102

Chapter Forty-One - The Love Mark - Page 107

Chapter Forty-Two - The Breakdown - Page 113

Chapter Forty-Three - Day One - Page 119

Chapter Forty-Four - Day Two - Page 126

Thread #3

Chapter Forty-Five - Day Three - Page 1


-Dark Ties-

Sometimes this house feels like a prison, that I just can't leave behind.There's so many rules, I gotta follow, cuz you can't let go.I don't wanna hear it, and I just can't believe it,All the stupid things you say, but one day,I won't take this anymore.

-Simple Plan

Prologue

I felt myself being dragged away in a drowsy state. I tried to open my eyes but all I could see was a big blurry building getting smaller and smaller. I struggled to get free from the tight grip on my arm but it was of no use. I screamed for help when suddenly a gloved hand covered my mouth.

"Shut up!"

I heard his deep, ominous voice ringing through my ears as my eyes became heavier.

I knew what was happening. All I could think was that this couldn't be happening to me.

Was I dreaming?

Why was this happening to me? What did I do...?

My eyes closed and darkness overwhelmed me as I heard the closing of a car door behind me.

Was everything over?

Was this really...the end?

Had I just been...kidnapped?

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Yay! New thread timee. Made a new thread early, just so I can reply back to comments on the first thread, which I'll be adding a link to in the post above. Thank you all so much for the comments and for liking my FF! Love you guys. <3 (P.S. First kiss will be happening tomorrow! Between who? Hm, I'll just let you guys guess that ahah.) I'd like to add (since I saw a few comments on the first thread) that no one will be heartbroken at the end of this FF! In fact, the twist I plan to bring in the end will probably be liked by most of you!


Chapter Twenty-One – The First Day

I followed him to his office and was impressed at how organized it was. Everything was neat and in perfect condition on his desk. His papers were piled neatly as well. You could also see almost the entire city from his windows, and it was a beautiful sight. As I stared outside the windows, he called my name.

"Madhy?"

I turned to look at him standing next to Supriya.

"Welcome back Madhu!"

"Hey Surpr…"

"Priya, just call me Priya, remember?"

"Oh yeah, Priya."

My eyes landed on Adi who stood there silently. I gestured towards Supriya with confusion and he smiled.

"Madhy, you'll be doing your first photo shoot with Priya. She's a photographer in our office."

"First photo shoot…? I've never had a picture taken of myself before and you want me to model!?"

"It's your job now Madhy. And don't worry, Priya will be there to help you."

I looked towards Supriya who gave me a reassuring look. She smiled and I followed her out of Adi's office as I sensed his eyes on me the entire time. I followed her into a dark room with a lot of photography equipment I assumed. There was a huge white screen on one side and I followed her towards it.

"This is going to be a simple shot with a simple white background. Now there's a change room to my left, quickly go put on this dress."

She threw a purple strapless dress at me and I ran towards the change room. I changed into it as quickly as I could and ran out before I could even take a look at myself in the mirror. I tried to ignore the fact that I felt uncomfortable in the dress.

"HAIR! MAKE-UP!"

Seconds after she yelled out, I was surrounded by a few people holding a bunch of brushes, some for make-up and some for hair. Not even five minutes passed when they all left me standing there. Supriya's eyes widened and she gestured for me to go towards her.

"Amazing! Now sell that dress as though your life depends on it!"

In a way, I felt my life did depend on it. I was working under the Kundra brothers who had kidnapped me. So the connection kind of clicked in my mind. I walked in front of the white screen and decided to give it my all. After all, I had nothing to lose. She took at least a hundred pictures of me and then stopped. She picked up her phone as I stood staring at her.

"You've got to come see this."

I walked up to her as she put her phone away. She looked up at me and shot me a huge smile.

"First time?"

"Yeah."

"I don't believe you."

"It's my firs…"

I trailed off as Adi came running into the room.

"What is it?"

"Adi! Where'd you find this girl!?"

"Uhm…"

"She's perfect! Look at this."

She turned her camera towards Adi and began showing him my shots. I watched as Adi's eyes lit up. He looked up at me after a moment.

"That's you?!"

"Yeah…?"

"You did wonderful! Nothing's stopping me from making you the biggest model now! You're going to be on billboards around the world, selling our brand! How exciting!"

Billboards?! My eyes widened at his words. My face…my body was going to be on billboards around the world?

"N…no! Billboards?! No Adi!"

"Don't worry Madhy, Supriya always picks the best shots."

"I don't want to be big. I don't want this."

Supriya and Adi stared at me with disappointed looks.

"But you're a natural Madhy…"

"Adi, I'm tired. I just want to go home."

"Alright. I'll drop you off. Thanks Supriya."

Supriya nodded her head as I turned to quickly go change back into the summer dress I had been in originally. I walked out of the change room and then followed Adi. We remained silent the entire way to the car, but as soon as the driver began driving away from the building, Adi spoke.

"Why don't you want this Madhy?"

"I don't know what it's like to be famous. I'm not that kind of girl…I won't be able to handle it."

"You've got both the Kundra brothers behind you. There's nothing to worry about."

"I don't know Adi…"

"It's alright. You take your time and decide. Until then, I'll keep your shots just in case your decision is yes."

"Mkay."

That's all that was said on the drive home. As soon as the car came to a stop, I stepped out of it and closed the door behind myself. I waved goodbye to Adi since he was headed back to work and then I walked back into the Kundra mansion. I ran directly towards my room and sat down on my bed. I began to think about everything that had happened to me since the first day I had been kidnapped. They had both made it obvious that I was a specific target, not a random one. They had also made it obvious that they both cared for me. RK had almost acknowledged who I was to him, but Adi had stopped him before he could finish. That meant that RK knew something about me. The meant I was someone to RK. I felt that was impossible since I had never interacted with an RK before, but I decided to test it out. I knew there was only one way to get answers out of him, by being the girl he thought I was.

Edited by PrittB - 12 years ago
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Yuppiee... I am the first to comment. . Maine sabko hara diya.😆. Awesome Update Pritt. Waiting for the secret to be revealed.
Edited by SHINYSHREYA - 12 years ago
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Res
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I'm not first one -.- No problem..3rd is also ok..LOL 😆
Congratulations for the #2 preeto 🥳 🤗 ur FF is really awesome

Coming to ur update..
I liked it..first shoot and so confident and good looking-->Madhu always looks beautiful 😊
Thanks for the pics..so I could imagine it better
Hw sweet adi is..he wants to make her a model but only with her permission
But I hope madhu will kiss RK 😃 😳 LOL
Hmm..smart madhu..she wants to get the informations out of RK by "acting" *RK-smirk* 😆
Can't wait 👏
Edited by ..Aliya.. - 12 years ago
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Yayyy :D congrats on the 2nd thread Pritto <33

And yes awesome Update !!! I can't wait for tom's update !!!


And why does Madhu want to take a panga wid RK ? Hasn't she exprienced enough of his anger ?
Edited by zara.92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update pritt..congrts on thread 2..madhu and model.. love d theme..
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Congrats Pritt🤗

Nyc update
Waiting for 2morrow...desperately
love this ff...it's the best i've come across
nice suspense😃
Edited by anjaliipkknd - 12 years ago
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its going to be between rk and madhu
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Congratulations on making the second thread. Why do I get the feeling that Madhu will eventually end up on the billboards? I don't like the idea of her pretending to be someone else. Enough cloak and dagger going around as it is.
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congratulations for new thread pritt🥳


awsome update...

waiting for ur next update desperately 😊
Edited by sai.janu350 - 12 years ago

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