FF (2): Dark Ties - NOTE - Page 132 (Thread 3) - Page 14

excellent job pritt!
eagerly waiting for the next update! 😃

it seems she had lost her memory

Wow..awesome story...u indeed are a pure suspense creator..and wen i thot it cud b simple that madhu lost her memory then atleast she shud remember sm accident atleast...priittb..please open up the suspense nw ...and yeah though aditya is a sweetheart who wud nt fall for rk..the handsome devil ;)...update soon

Chapter Twenty-Five – The Coma

I felt the presence of people around me. The pain had vanished and I felt a comfortable cushion beneath me…a bed. I felt a cold breeze of air brush against my skin with a repeated pattern, as though someone were pacing back and forth beside me. Every attempt at opening my eyes failed. I remember hearing people around me. I felt eyes on me, I was being stared at…I could feel it. I tried to open my eyes again but failed, as though my eyes were glued shut. Then I heard a familiar voice speak up.

"How is she?"

There was a pause but then the voice spoke again.

"Shh, bro control yourself, nothing will happen to her."

I felt a warm touch on my hand and then a squeeze. I tried to move, but failed.

"Madhy, wake up."

I tried. It was of no use.

"Madh…SHE MOVED. BRO!"

"What?! Madhu!?"

Had I moved? I couldn't remember having made even the slightest movement. I had given up. Was he mistaken?

"Madhu?!"

I heard another familiar voice. This time a firmer, soft hand grabbed my other hand. I wanted to wrap my fingers around the firm grip.

"Bro, I don't think she can hear us…"

I heard a sigh and then felt warm air brush against my face.

"This is my fault Adi…"

Adi? Adi…the name rang a bell but I couldn't put my finger on it.

"No bro, it's not."

"It is! Had I just told her about her father, she wouldn't be here right now."

My father? Malik? What happened to papa?! I tried to move, as I grew frantic. I needed to see papa. I needed to see ma…MA?! I screamed for my parents but there was no response. At least, I thought I screamed…I hadn't heard my voice escape my mouth.

"Bro, she'll find out when it's the right time."

"If she wakes up…I'm not ready to lose her again Adi. I can't lose her…"

"You won't. We won't. I'm going to get the doctor, I'm sure she moved."

There was silence, then the opening and closing of a door. Within minutes it had become easy to use all my senses besides my eyes. I tried to focus on smell this time. Something smelled like peppermint, a sweet peppermint. A musky smell…a familiar smell. I felt the firm grip on my hand disappear and I instantly tried to reach for his disappearing hand, but my body didn't move. The same warm touch made contact with my cheek. I felt his hand, his comforting hand stroke the side of my face.

"You can't leave me so soon. You have to wake up Madhu. You have to. For me."

RK…Rishabh…I recognized his voice, his smell, his touch, and his presence. As soon as I recognized the voice, I felt darkness overwhelm me once again. I felt my senses diminishing as his voice began to fade away.

"Madh…Wh…Fath…Lov…"

I tried to make sense of his fading voice but the few words I heard didn't connect. Then suddenly I lost everything. I couldn't feel him. I couldn't smell him. I couldn't hear him. Nothing. I felt helpless. What was wrong with me? Was I confined in a coffin? Why couldn't I move? Why couldn't I open my eyes…Why?!

Zara n iidona take a chill pill 🤣

nyc update ok she got her memory back n rk n madhu must be lovers n maliks have died n maybe accident by adi i think so

Unres

Nice update.u write each update very well...u hv held up d suspense very well!!!...waiting for the suspense!!!!!

Nice update..now madhu regained her memory..cool

Wow...lovely update..so now she remembered Malik n Ma..so she isn't orphan...hmmm!! But then ow come she was thinking about being in one orphanage all this while..I know I know I'll have to wait😆

yes the girl had lost her memory and this accident brought it back:D i hope this is the plot, plzzz, i can't take any more mystries or i'll loose my memory:D