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Posted: 12 years ago
u wrote so beautifully about madhu feelings.
loved the update😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Updated my cmmnt on page 64
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Posted: 12 years ago
feeling bad for madhu
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I have officially finished writing all the updates for Dark Ties! This FF will go until chapter fifty! Thanks for the lovely comments. <3 Enjoy!


Chapter Thirty-Five – The Wakeup Call

I felt myself being placed in a different set of arms. Then moments later I was sitting on my comfortable bed…that never really was mine. I had become used to calling the room mine…but in all reality, nothing was mine. I had nothing anymore. I had truly become an orphan. I felt Adi rubbing my hand as I leaned against the headboard behind me.

"Madhy…it's me Aditya. I need you to listen to me."

Did he think I couldn't see or hear him? He spoke as though I was back in my coma. They were under the impression that I was shocked but in all reality, I was just shutting myself down.

"Madh…Madhu…"

He said my name in the right way for the first time in so long. In a way, it gave me a warm feeling. I felt him squeeze my hand and then caress it with his thumb. My eyes fell on our hands and froze there as he continued.

"I know you just lost your father. I know you feel like giving up. I know it hurts…but we all have lost something in life. That's just a part of life. We love, we lose, and we move on. I need you to cry. I need you to let out how you're feeling…don't suppress it. If not for me…do it for your late parents…"

I felt my heart jump as though it was starting up again. I figured he noticed some sort of movement from my end because he began to speak with slightly more enthusiasm…as though he knew he was getting through to me.

"Madhu! Cry Madhu. Cry. Your parents are gone. They're in a better place. You need to cry for them. You won't see them again…but that doesn't mean you don't have anyone anymore. You've got me Madhu. I'll always be by your side. Always…"

I knew he left out RK for a reason, and it was obvious he knew how I was feeling and just exactly what I needed to hear. I needed to know someone would be there for me. I needed to know I wasn't alone. I gasped and my eyes flickered as I stared up at Adi. I noticed a smile cross his face as he realized he had gotten through to me. Then suddenly I let it all out. All the tears, which had built up, began to flow out of my eyes as I pushed myself into his arms. I wrapped my arms around him tightly as I cried onto his shoulder. I noticed it took him a moment before he slowly ran his hands across my waist and took in the hug himself. I felt his breath against my neck and goose bumps raised where his breath brushed against my skin. I felt his arms tightening around me and I did the same in response. We were both sharing our first true hug when we were interrupted.

"Adi the doctor said he'll b…"

I heard RK's voice trail off as his eyes had probably landed on me in Adi's arms. Adi slowly pulled away from me. I kept my eyes on Adi as he turned to look at RK. I refused to look in RK's direction…not because I was angry with him, but rather because I knew seeing me in another man's arms would probably hurt him. I actually hoped he would be hurt, because that would confirm he still has feelings for me. I lowered my eyes to my hands in my lap as Adi spoke.

"She's okay now bro…"

Adi spoke nervously and I almost wanted to hit him for being afraid of his own brother.

"I can see that."

I heard the irritation in RK's voice and couldn't help but look in his direction. Just as I looked up at him, I saw his eyes on me. I saw a pain in his eyes, yet anger at the same time. I didn't want to see that look from him every day. I didn't want to see the pain in his eyes and feel helpless knowing I couldn't do anything to help him. He had secluded himself and had distanced himself from me.

I slowly tried to get out of bed but Adi stopped me.

"What are you doing?!"

"I did what you guys wanted me too. You kidnapped me to get the truth out of my father right? I did it. The recorder is in the car. I have no reason to stay here anymore. Let me go back to the orphanage…where I rightly belong now."

"No…no, what? Shut up Madhy."

My nickname returned in RK's presence. I stared at Adi as he became worried with my decision to leave.

"Let me go."

Adi let go of my arm and I got off the bed. I felt his eyes on me as I walked up to RK who was eyeing me sternly.

"Bro! Stop her…"

I was walking by RK when he spoke. Our shoulders were side by side and I looked up at him. He stared at the wall on the other side of the room as he spoke to me.

"If you ever loved either of us…you'll stay."

I knew whom he was talking about. I knew he was referring to himself and it was clear he wanted to know whether my love was true. He was under the impression that I never loved him…at least, that's what he had said. I wanted to leave anyways. I wanted to show him that he couldn't control me anymore. But I couldn't hurt either of them like that. I couldn't even if I tried. I turned my head and looked towards the ground as I felt his eyes land on me. I thought about it for a second but then sighed and turned to walk back into my room. I saw a smile cross Adi's face as I walked back towards the bed. I sat on the edge of it and looked back up towards the door slowly. He was gone.

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Posted: 12 years ago
yepii
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awesome update
Edited by nehakariba - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update Pritto. <33

I hope RK sees tht Madhu loves him truly :)
Edited by zara.92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res.

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Gosh pritt wonderful update...
😆Heheheh R.K was jealous..he shld b, watever he did he got punishment fr it by jealousy...
& adi..ah! m fell fr ths man..its nt fair pritt..
do smthn fr R.K 😆, love his indirect req. to madhu..

waiting to read more..
Edited by RockchickFaiza - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I dont want madhu and adi i
want only and only rishbala...
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Posted: 12 years ago
M really feelin vry bad both fr rk nd madhu...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Todays update... cry nd loss ..dad... Dats a harsh reality n bitter past to me..

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