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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update.
RK dint love her?😭
He waited for 7yrs,omg too long for revengr frm her father.
Plz write about RK n Adi thoughts/pov regarding madhu.
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Posted: 12 years ago


Thanks for the amazing comments everyone! <3 I've seen a few requests for RK/Adi's POVs and I've decided I'll do that. BUT it'll have to be after this FF has completed because there is a secret that's been hidden since the beginning and will be out in the last chapter (around chapter 50-51). After that I'll be sure to write chapters showing how they felt.


Chapter Thirty-Two - The Talk

I paced back and forth in my room, frustrated by the fact that I hadn't spoken to my father yet. I had gone through 32 numbers while searching for my father. A few calls had been from new fans and some had been for model shoot offers. I was quite amazed at having become slightly famous overnight, though it was with the help of Adi and RK. It felt nice, but I still stuck to my decision of not wanting to be famous.

It was the 33rd call that caught my attention. I dialed the number and let it ring. No one picked up, so I hung up. RK had told me to call any number that didn't receive a response, and so I did as he asked. I called again...no answer. I called a third time...

"Madhu...?"

The voice was rough, old, and exhausted. He sounded as though he were sick, really sick. He didn't sound like a fan, he didn't sound like he had a job offer, and he had called me Madhu...not Madhubala. On top of that, his voice sounded familiar behind the tiredness; so I went with my gut instinct.

"P...papa...?"

There was silence for a few seconds on the other end when suddenly I heard him sobbing over the phone. He began to speak between his sobs.

"Madhu...beti...I need to see you...I need to tell you something...I don't have long..."

"Papa!? Don't have long? Wh...what do you mean? Where can I see you?"

He coughed into the phone and I let tears flow out of my eyes.

"G...get a pen and paper...I'll tell you...but make sure you tell no one else."

"Okay papa..."

I quickly grabbed a pen and paper to take down his address. As soon as I had it down, I folded up the paper and slid it under my pillow.

"Pap..."

I trailed off as I heard someone's steps coming towards my room. I quickly wiped away my tears and put on a straight face. I heard my door open, so I quickly turned around, and I wasn't surprised to see RK standing there. He was just about to say something as I spoke into the phone.

"I'm sorry, but I'm not interested."

"Madh..."

I hung up the phone, making it seem as though it was just another job offer as RK stared at me. I gulped as I felt myself choking up. Hearing my father say my name and then having me hang up on him broke my heart. He probably thought I had meant I wasn't interested in seeing him. As I tried to maintain my composure, RK walked towards me. I threw the phone onto the bed and crossed my arms.

"What do you want?"

"How many calls?"

"I've gone through 33."

"That's it?"

"I'd like to see you go faster."

"Did you reach him yet?"

"Do you think I'd still be going through the calls if I did?"

His nostrils began to flare and he grabbed my arms, which startled me. He pushed me up against the wall and my eyes widened as he caught me off guard.

"Give me straight answers, or else..."

"Or else what? Or else you'll forget everything we once shared and you'll hurt me?"

I felt his grip loosening on my arm as he slowly stepped back. He let me go and stared at me as I awaited an answer. Then with a cold voice he spoke.

"I've already forgotten."

I felt my heart shattering for the hundredth time because of him. How could he forget everything so easily? I felt as though he was lying though since he had just slept with me the previous night...or was that also part of his plan? He watched me as my face showed multiple expressions at once. I felt the tears, which I had put away, surfacing once again. I stared at him through my tear filled eyes and he stared at me with a firm look. I blinked and felt a tear rolling down my eye, and then as though my tears had stopped affecting him, he turned around and walked out of my room. Had he really forgotten? Those six years we had spent together...all those memories. And just the past few weeks, the time we spent together, was that all part of his plan? Did he really not love me anymore as he claimed? Was I the only one who felt there was still hope for us alive? As I slowly suppressed all the questions on my mind, I wiped away at my tears. I ran towards my bed and grabbed the paper out from under my bed. Then I ran out of my room and towards Adi's. I knocked on his door but he didn't respond. I was just about to knock again when I felt a hand on my shoulder. I slowly turned and sighed in relief as I saw him. Confusion crossed his face as he saw me.

"Everything alright Madhy?"

"No. I need your help. It's urgent...but you can't tell RK."

"Uh..."

"Trust me."

"But I..."

"Adi...do it for the friendship we had before everything that happened."

I knew he couldn't refuse to that. I smiled as he nodded his head okay. I quickly told him what I needed and he listened to every word I said. We both snuck out of the mansion without informing RK and then headed to Adi's car. He took the keys from his driver as I sat in the passenger side. Then within minutes we were off to see the man I hadn't seen in years...my father.

Edited by PrittB - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!!! 🥳
I'm first for the 1st time in this FF.Yayy 🥳
Sorry Pritt I couldn't comment for the last few updates ;-( but I read all of them.
Chap 27 :awesome update.I was not confused Pritt.RK and Madhu dated for 4 years.wow,loved it. 😊
Chap 28:great one 👍🏼
Chap 29 & 30: Yayy!! Double updates.Love you Pritt 🤗.Chap 29 was super hot ☺️.loved both the updates.
Chap 31:so finally madhu remembers everything.fab update again.👏
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Chap 32: superb update.Madhu spoke with her father and now she is going to meet him,that too with the help of Adi.loving it and waiting for the next update.
Edited by Hdhd - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res* lovly update.. Gud dat we wld get to know wat her papa wants to say. RK WAS TOO RUDE ND adi just d opp...thanks dat u gonna gv Rks pov... Wait did u say secret 'll b out n last update... Great work pri cont soon..
Edited by Desire6 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update...at last some hope from her father..lets see what is that he has to say now...😳
And it's great that later we will get to read RK's n adi's pov as well..yay!!! Am so happy😛
Edited by sweetdear - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woahhh.. Madhu meeting her father.. M just dying to read that update.. Atleast a few things may get cleared with that.. Phewww..! Btw awesomeee update Prituu.. Ahaha i loved it how Adi got ready to help her for their friendship..!!
Edited by -CuteChic- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome awesome update Pritto <33 loved it !! So curious further now :D
Edited by zara.92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
but why i have afeeling of adi being fishy
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey awesome update pritto..
she is going to meet her father and adi is helping her..bt i wish adi dnt tel RK ..i wnt her to meet her father to knw secret..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nehakariba

awesome
but why i have afeeling of adi being fishy


Thank you!
I think he's being fishy too... 😆

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