VeeBa FF "King Of my world" Part 45 pg 109

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Hey guys i know i should update my unfinished works first but my mind gives me new ideas im helplessπŸ˜†

well this is a very dark story i hope u guys can keep up with it and understand the situation.. 
Hope u all enjoy πŸ˜ƒ 
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VeeBa SS
"King Of my world"

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15 years had passed since Veera left for delhi for better education. 

And alot had changed especially in the past 5 years. Pritampura was 

no more the free village Veera left behind, it was different and now 

ruled by a single person, whom everybody obeyed, who was the 

richest and who had all the power of the village in his hands.
All the villagers were either under his debt and serving him to 

compensate or were working for him to be in his good books. His 

anger was enough to shatter their lives and destroy their families, 

making them jobless , homeless and on the verge of begging. No 

one had the bone to stand up against him, that was his horror.

Among these villagers was ranvi too, who had taken alot of loan 

,from the new surpunch, for veera's education and the time to pay 

had passed, he was bankrupt and even after selling all his 

belongings, even furniture, he didn't make enough money to clear 

the debt, and now, like all other villagers, he was working in his old 

fields which now belonged to the new owner. Even chaiji and ratan 

had to work to get some money for their living and for veera. 

Ranvi's house was nothing but walls now, he had to sell all his 

furniture and other appliances too, they didn't even have a matress 

to sleep on, just a sheet and 4 pillows, because Chaiji was too old 

to sleep on the floor with any support, Ranvi got some hay and 

made a bed for her, she looked like sleeping in a nest. Their clothes 

were piled up in one corner of the house and the kitchen 

demolished, Ratan cooked outside the house now. Most of the 

rooms were now converted into store rooms for crops and the 

family received a fair amount as rent. Every single penny mattered 

now and they lost no opportunity to earn some rupees. the only 

room that was left untouched on Ranvi's insistence was Veera's 

room, the furniture was sold but the room was still theirs to use. It 

had only walls and Veera's photos on them. Ranvi and family were 

living a life of complete misery which was completely unkown to 

Veera who was happy in her delhi life.

And as if this was not it, the new owner of the village, as he called 

himself, had friends who bullied and irritated the villagers, the took 

illegal taxes from the shop owners and threatened them.

Overall Pritampura was in distress, the owner was a pain to all and 

too dominating, and all had no choice but obey him.

And that owner and new surpunch of the village was none other 

than...Baldev


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Ranvi woke up in the morning, he checked his second hand only cell 

phone in the house and was alarmed. 

Ranvi; aaj to veerakhdi ki pariksha ka result he yani do din baad wo 

ghar wapas ajayegi..ab ki hoga.

He wanted her out of this mess forever but he didn't have the 

required means for that..he felt very helpless as he thought of 

Veera's reaction and the thought of his loving sister sleeping on the 

bare floor and eating only rice everyday or plain bread. He had 

pampered her in every way and treated her like a princess and now 

she would serve baldev to in one way or the other which was too 

painful for Ranvi.

Ratan woke up, Ranvi informed her about his concerns for Veera

ratan; ab kab tak wo rajkumarion ki zindagi jeeyegi akhir to pta 

chalna hi tha na..aur wese bhi aaj jo hum is haal me hen na wo sb 

uski hi wja se he, aur na sirf hum balke pura pind..hamare gareeb 

hote hi hamara rutba is pind me khatam aur phir sb pind walon k 

sath wahi hua jo hamare sath hua aur rokne ki na hamari auqat thi 

aur na taqat.

Ranvi; pr bg me apni veerakhdi ko...

Ratna; bas Ranvi..bas kr ab kya ye ghar bech k jhopdi me jane ka 

irada he tera? menu jaldi jana he warna malkin naraz hojayengi aur 

menu daantengi..Chaiji ko bhi utha de..agar malkin k uthne se pehle 

nashta nhi bana to hamnari tankhua me se paise katenge.

Ranvi was speechless..he was the reason that his mother had to 

work in some1's house as a maid and even Chaiji had to work as a 

cook. And they both worked for Bansuri..the new queen of 

pritampura.

Ratan and Chaiji left quickly after having tea, Ranvi left for the 

fields.

Chaiji prepared breakfast in bansuri's kitchen while ratan started 

cleaning. 

Balwant woke up and saw them, he came to chaiji

Balwant; menu maaf krdo chaiji..is umar me aap ko ye sb krna pad 

rha he..wo bhi mere nalayaq puttar ki wja se

Chaiji; na balwante is me tera koi dosh nhi..Baldev k bigadne me sirf 

bansuri ka haath he..aur teri sunta hi kon he ab..teri halat konsi hum 

se behtar he..ab ja wrna bansuri uth gai to hum sbki khatiya khadi 

kr degi wo.

Balwant left helplessly..he was nothing but an old chair whom 

nobody sat on in his house. Baldev barely talked or looked at him, 

Bansuri only scolded him while Gunjan sometimes showed some 

sympathy.

Bansuri was now a changed woman, loaded with gold from head to 

toe in her new silk dress she descended the stairs and sat on the 

dining chair. Her look, dressing hairstyle everything changed and 

she wore a small tiara shaped comb on her head daily.

Bansuri; O ratan ki kr rhi he changi tarah safai kr..farash inna saaf 

ho k chehra dikhai de

Ratan; jee malkin.

Bansuri took a sip of tea and then spit it out.

Bansuri; e ki he chaiji?..inni peekhi chai?! (she shouted) cheeni 

tumhare ghar se a rhi thi jo inni kam he?! ja k doosri changi meethi 

chai bna k la mere waste

Chaiji had made a mistake she served gunjan's tea to bansuri by 

mistake and now had to face her anger. Among all the 

villagers..sampooran's family was having the worst life as they were 

the reason of this destruction.

Chaiji served another cup which Bansuri drank in peace..no day 

passed where she didn't shout of ratan or chaiji, but they had no 

way out.

It was 10;24 am when the surpunch/king of pritampura left his 

room and came downstairs.
And not just by name but he was a king from his looks too,in a 

golden silk shining kurta and imported leather jacket he walked 

with grace in the hall towards the table, his curly hair combed and 

still wet, his black silk shalwar giving the reflection like a mirror, his 

long pointed shoes perfectly polished and his presence made the 

hall glowing. He was not smiling, as he didn't smile from the past 5 

years, so much had happened, so many things changed and he 

himself changed into a heartless soul who never smiled, or felt 

anything. He was immune to all the pain of others and his own, he 

just had a bold always angry look on his face, and his eyes always 

burning because of what he did this to the village. His anger was so 

dangerous that the mere thought left the person shivering, his voice 

so intense that it was enough to get a person on his feet, and if he 

ever raised his hand, that might break the bones of the person 

infront. This was Baldev Singh..surpunch of pritampura who had not 

won the hearts of people...but won the village itself..who was once 

rejected and now ruled like a king with everybody under his control 

and whom no one can defeat.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very intresting... Loved it
plz update soon and yes ur other stories too ⭐️
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Damn this is really good!!
Really enjoyed it 😊
Keep updating!!
Thanks for the PM!
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You love making baldev a mean b*****d!   Lol.
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Awesome!!! πŸ˜ƒ cant wait to know the mystery behind baldev,he is in a lot of hidden pain,i can see that πŸ˜­ continue soon πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Enjoyed reading it πŸ˜ƒ 
Do update soon!
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loved it dear!!!very interesting...loving grey baldev...the baldev singh...
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awesome update interesting start do continue and update the next part soon !! πŸ‘β­οΈπŸ˜›Tfs for pm dear πŸ˜ƒ !!