VeeBa FF 'King Of my world' Part 45 pg 109

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Posted: 10 years ago

#541

Originally posted by: vinu24
That was an awesome update yaar...aaj toh sirf surprises hi mil rahen hain...Wahan Veeba kareeb aa rahen hain aur yahan Veera ki pregnancy 😆...wat a timing Sonu!!!
Baldev ki memory loss hui hain toh Veeba aur bhi zabardast honewala hain, I trust u more than MasH when it comes to bringing twist in the story.🤗

Expect the Unexpected...👍🏼

Thanks for the PM

aww thank u😳

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overactor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#542

Originally posted by: Bars
Great update! Really want second child of VeeBa to be a girl :) I was shocked while i read the memory loss part. But ur comment made me happy and feel relieved! Looking forward to ur update 😊

yup it will be a girl😳

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overactor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#543

Originally posted by: cuteBiya
Wow wow I have no wrods what to say for this update... I am totaly speechless balveer and baldev ki khushi was just awww aur baldev ab apni veera k liay PP m achar ko ban karway ga its was really to much caring ☺️ but at the end it really emotional hope so baldev ko apni veera aur apna balveer jaldi sy yad a jayn it was really lovely, careing, funny, sweet and emotional update...👏👍🏼

thanks, ajayega yad aur us se pehle bht kuch he😉

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overactor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#544

Originally posted by: monumolu
Haaye Sonu kya twist diya tune!!! Awesome update darling!!! Ballu kitna khush lag raha tha!!! Veera ki pregnancy was totally unexpected!!! This was an update with so many Awww moments!!! Loved it ❤️

get ready for some romance now😉

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overactor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#545

"King of my world"

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They decided to hide alot of things from Baldev as they planned.

Gunjan decided to tell Baldev that Balveer was her son and that's

why he looked like Baldev and Bansuri, Veera would pretend to be

unmarried infront of him and they decided to edit the parts of his

struggle to become the king of pritampura.

Balveer; i won't call my dad maamu!

Veera; sim baby please understand

Balveer; no he's my dad, and i won't call ranvi mamoo papa, no no

Gunjan; acha pyara booboo he na bua ka

Balveer; okay can i call dad "buddy"

Veera; yes fine call him buddy.

Balveer; thank you. Mom dad kab theek honge i dnt want to go to

mamo's house

Veera; pray for your dad's health baby

Jaggi and Billa met Baldev after Bansuri and balwant and told him

the made up stories.

Baldev; sach main surpunch ban gaya

Billa; haan paaji wadi asaani se, aapne surjeet se pritampura chuda

ke apne qabze me le liya to surpunch to aap hi hue na

Baldev; haan, par ye gunjan ki shadi us ranvi se, ye kese hone di

maine

Jaggi; paaji wo na wada rona dhona machaya tha usnephir aapke

papaji ne aapko qasam de di thi

Baldev; papaji to hamesha se ranvi ki tarafdari krte aaye hen

Gunjan came inside with Balveer.

Gunjan; veerji! kese ho aap

Balveer hugged Baldev.

Balveer; da..i mean how are you buddy?

Baldev; are ye angrez puttar kis ka hai? papaji bg ne is umar me?

oye tum log ne btaya nhi mera inna sa bhai bhi hai

Gunjan; nhi nhi veerji, ye to mera aur ranvi ka beta hai

Baldev; ki?

Baldev held Balveer and stared as his features, he was just his

mirror image.

Baldev; tera puttar he to mere jesa kyun dikhta he? tu jhooti he

zarur bg ne tenu sabse kehne ko kaha hoga, pr menu to bta de

Gunjan; nahi veerji, aap mere veer ho na, mera beta apne mamoo pe

nhi ja sakta ki, bg aur aap pe gaya he ye to main ki karan, papji ke

bhi baal ese hen bg ke bhi, to chale jate hen bache kisi pe bhi isme

kya he, main bhi to papaji ki door ki behen jesi dikhti hun, bg papaji

jesi nahi

Baldev; haan..e to he, tu bhi to Pammi bua jesi dikhti he, chal koi

nahi, e to mera yaar hoga phir, kyun mere sheru?

Balveer smiled on listening "sheru" and hugged Baldev again.

Balveer; yes dad, i mean buddy, hum best friends hen

Baldev; e inni angrezi kyun bolta hai? acha Gunjan iska naam kya

hai?

Gunjan; Balveer

Baldev; balveer? kyun?

Gunjan; wo na ranvi iska naam Ranveer rakh raha tha to mene kaha

sirf tu kyun apni behen ka naam dalega hai ye mere veerji jesa, to

isiliye humne balveer naam rakha.

Baldev; changa kiya, meri achi wali behen. Oye sheru main idhar se

niqal jaon phir roz tere saath khelne aaonga.

Balveer; okay

Baldev kissed Balveer's cheek and he then left with Gunjan, Balveer

Veera had already shifted back toRanvi's house and Veera had

gotten into her old clothes to look unmarried and like before.

Baldev; acha jaggi billa, ye 7 saal me mera dil nahi phisla? menu koi

kudi nahi mili ki?

Jaggi and Billa exchanged looks.

Jaggi; paaji aap ko pasand aaye wo kudi pritampura main thi hi kab.

Baldev; haan wo to hai.

Then there was a knock on the door.

Jaggi; andar ajao jee

And as soon as the door opened and the girl walked in , Baldev's

jaw dropped. He recognized the chubby cheeks, the innocent face

and the naughty smile at once.

Baldev; Veera (in a slow husky voice) Tu kab aayi Delhi se wapas?

Veera was shocked at his response and so were Jaggi and Billa.

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Nikki

@Nikki36

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#546

Nice! ! Are we gonna get a flirty baldev who fancies veera! I hope so

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overactor

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Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#547

Originally posted by: Nikki36
Nice! ! Are we gonna get a flirty baldev who fancies veera! I hope so

yes yes😉

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zainabawoon

@zainabawoon

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#548

ok this was an Awesome update but so so very heartbreaking at the same time,imagine how difficult and painful it must be for veera to digest the fact that her husband doesnt remember any bit of their relationship, the fact that they fell in love with each other, are married,have a son and to top it she is pregnant too. imagine the stress! the shear agony to pretend as if nothing has ever happened and that they are just friends,the agony of knowing that the one you love has forgotten he ever loved you, that is an unimaginable pain 😭😭😭 and then choti sheru, he just loves his dad beyond anything,the pain of not being able to call your dad "dad" 😭😭 there is huge potential for high emotional content and drama, imagine if baldev finds out that veera is pregnant and questions her of the child's paternity and even questions her regarding her character cuz for all he knows she is still unmarried😲 thats going to be intense if that ever happens!!! i dont know about how u are planning to take this forward buddy but if i were writing this,i will definitely write a scene where he finds out she is pregnant and questions her regarding it!

Edited by zainabawoon - 10 years ago

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-BeingMuslimah-

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Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#549

Oh gosh ! I laughed lyk anything at baldev's reaction after seeing balveer...🤣

Papaji bg ne is uram me..🤣and after that 🤣

It was short😡...but i just loved it😳

Old veeba

and y dont i feel veera's pain suddenly wat has mash dont to me...i hv no feelings😕😭

Waiting...

Edited by .Jenvita_Neha. - 10 years ago

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zainabawoon

@zainabawoon

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#550

Originally posted by: .Jenvita_Neha.
Oh gosh ! I laughed lyk anything at baldev's reaction after seeing balveer...🤣
Papaji bg ne is uram me..🤣and after that 🤣

It was short😡...but i just loved it😳
Old veeba

and y dont i feel veera's pain suddenly wat has mash dont to me...i hv no feelings😕😭

Waiting...

yes baldev's reaction to balveer and his comment about his papaji and Beeji was epically hillarious🤣