VeeBa FF 'King Of my world' Part 45 pg 109 - Page 14

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Posted: 10 years ago
Its getting more and more intresting
Eagerly waiting for next update 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
its soo gud sonu loving this in every sense ,pls continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update. Just hope it was only the doing of someone like Surjeet Singh and neither Ranvee, nor Baldev were at fault.
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Posted: 10 years ago
"King of my world"

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Veera stood up and went to him,

Veera; btana baldev

Baldev; e baat to menu pata thi ke pind ke sab log surjeet singh ke

qarz daar hen aur ye bhi kahin na kahin janta hi tha ke wo kisi din

in sbko sadaq pe le ayega..pr mene socha surjeet kre us se acha me

karun

Veera; matlab?

Baldev; me surjeet singh ke paas gaya aur use behla fusla ke ek

khas jaga le gaya..jaggi aur billa ko keh ke mene kisi khas aadmi ko

bulvaya

Veera; phir?

Baldev; phir ek khel shuru hua

Veera; kesa khel?

Baldev; juye ka

Veera; jua? you mean gambling baldev tune

Baldev; tu sunnegi ya phir gyan dena he menu?

Veera; acha bta

Baldev; khel chalta gaya surjeet paise lagata gya...jua uski kamzori

he mujhe pta tha, ek do baar jeeta phir hara..mene use apne jaal me

buri tarah phasa diya aur akhir use pritampura ko dau pe laga diya,

Veera; aur tu cheating ke through pritampura ko surjeet singh se

jeet gaya

Baldev; haan

Baldev raised his arms high and shouted "aur main ban gaya

pritampura ka maalik"

Veera was shocked, behind the person she fell in love with was a

master mind who tricked famous surjeet singh and won pritampura

from him

Baldev; phir bg ne papaji se unki jaydaat pe bhi dastakhat le k mere

naam krwa li

Veera caught him from the shoulders, her eyes opened wide.

Veera; Baldev, tune...tune surjeet singh ko ulu bna liya..us se

pritampura cheen liya..kese?

Baldev; itne saath uske sath tha sb jaanta tha me uske baare me..bas

sahi moka dekh k choka maar diya..kab se soch rakha tha ke pind

ko is se bachaonga bas surpunch ban jaon pr nhi pind walon ko

ranvi ko surpunch bannana tha jo khud surjeet k hathon lut chuka

tha

Veera swallowed hard and sat down on the bench.

Baldev; ki hoya tenu? paani laon piyegi?

Veera; paani kahan se ayega?

Baldev; ye hamara adda tha pehle..ab ese hi kabhi kabhi ata hun

andar fridge me pani he

Veera; idhar ki dekh bhal kon krta he

Baldev; a re rehta he ek banta qareeb wo krta he masterni tenu pani

chahiye ya nhi?

she nodded.

he brought a bottle of cold water quickly and gave her, she drank it

and then stared at Baldev's face.


Baldev smiled.

Baldev; oye kamli..wo surjeet tha..use thaga he tenu thodi thugun ga

jo tu inna pareshan ho rhi he.

He sat down on one knee and the other bend, and took her hands

in his.

Baldev; tu to mujhse bhi badi thug he

Veera; wo kese?

Baldev; tune menu jo thug liya

Veera; mene kya thuga he tujhse

Baldev; he kuch, bohot khas

Veera smiled and lowered her eyes.

a few drops of water fell on them.

Baldev; chal veera, baarish hone wali hai andar chal.

they stood up..but instead of following him inside veera closed her

eyes and spread her arms to welcome the rain, the speed and

frequency of drops increased and now the rain fell in a large

amount and fast speed, baldev was in a shade now.

Baldev; oye veera, ki kr rhi he, andar aa..puri bheeg jayegi (he yelled)

but she didn't listen to him and enjoyed the rain falling on her face

and body.

Baldev left his place and came to her.

Baldev; veera chal yahan se dekh puri bheeg gai he tu..chal

Veera opened her eyes and smiled.

Veera; to kya hua..bheegne me to kinna maza aata he

Baldev; aur baad me bukhar bhi..chal andar

he pulled her grapping her hand but she pushed him.

Veera; nhi..menu bheegna he..bohot maze krne hen uchalna he

koodna he hasna hai rona he

Baldev; oye..has le par..rona nhi

Veera; barso re megha megha..barso re megha

Baldev put his hand on his head.

Veera; tip tip barsa pani,

Baldev went close to her and grapped her by her waist, he gave her

an intense look, she was lost in his eyes.

Veera took heavy breaths, she forgot the world around her, there

was only the sound of the rain falling on the ground. Baldev moved

his arm and then closed her eyes with his hand. Veera grapped

some courage to speak

Veera; menu kuch kehna he baldev

Baldev put a finger on her lips.

Baldev; sshhh..pehle me keh dun..phir tu kehna

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update <3 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for the update 😃 Sundays are boring without VeeBa 😔
Baldev is so clever!!Mastermind 😎
So,Baldev wants to confess first
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mindblowing surprise that too on a sunday at 10:30-11:00pm slot.
Baldev-"tune mainu jo thag liya" "Shhh tu baad mein kehna,,Pehle main keh doon" Awww *blush blush* ❤️ 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wat an update yaar! Ballu surjeet singh ko chakma degya😎
Veeba in rain☺️


Waiting...
Edited by .Jenvita_Neha. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow awesome update 👏hayee veeba in rain 😉Tfs for pm and update 😃😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loving this story,

bansuri tricked balwant into handing iver everything to baldev, awesome he does too much ranvi jaap

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