VeeBa FF 'King Of my world' Part 45 pg 109 - Page 57

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update but short too.. And baldev's reaction seeing balveer was hillarious 🤣 veera balveer ab baldev se door rahein ge... Its so painfull hope baldev ko jaldi sab yaad aa jaye.. Nd plzz update soon.ab intzar nahi ho raha 😆
Edited by Lovelyvb - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Baldev is very powerful,behen k bachhe bhi bhai par he gaye!lolz,just kidding! Veeba face off. It would be more painful for her nw. I think sheru will become a way to get back baldev's memory. While reading this part,i feel that it had gone 'sathiya' way. I knw its fiction,bt just my curiousity does this thing apply in real life also,i mean this relations flipping is needed?
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Posted: 10 years ago
This is why i love u Sonu, amazing update. Plz update next part soon, Mash ke atyachaar toh shuru honewale hain.
Loved Baldev and Balveer's reactions.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Cliffhanger...!!!!! okay i know patience is virtue but sonu after reading this chapter i'm running out of it,plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great update!
GunDev convo was hilarious 🤣
Baldev-Balveer 🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sonmusk

Baldev is very powerful,behen k bachhe bhi bhai par he gaye!lolz,just kidding! Veeba face off. It would be more painful for her nw. I think sheru will become a way to get back baldev's memory. While reading this part,i feel that it had gone 'sathiya' way. I knw its fiction,bt just my curiousity does this thing apply in real life also,i mean this relations flipping is needed?


actually after trauma ppl do have memory loss sometimes and bcoz head injury is severe so its better to keep them off stress but once they recover they can be told everything, its not necessary to hide anything😆 its just fiction
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteBiya

What I say for this update totaly funny, baldev's reaction after watching balveer was just superb oye tm dono ny menu btaya kiun nahi mera ek bhai b hai bg papa ji ny is umer m 🤣 yeh update parh kr to meri hansi hi nahi ruk rahi thi aur balveer k nam rkhny m gunjan ranvi ki jo policy wo to kamal sy b kamal ki thi but at the same time I am little sad for veera and balveer how they hide their pain infront of baldev 😭 hope so next part ap jaldi sy udate kr do kiun k twist's queen nxt twist k wait nahi ho rha 😆

haan haan😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Lovelyvb

Awesome update but short too.. And baldev's reaction seeing balveer was hillarious 🤣 veera balveer ab baldev se door rahein ge... Its so painfull hope baldev ko jaldi sab yaad aa jaye.. Nd plzz update soon.ab intzar nahi ho raha 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
"King of my world"

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Veera changed her expressions to joyful smiling ones and sat on the

chair beside Baldev's bed.

Veera; abhi kuch mahine pehle hi to aayi hun, iska matlab tu sach

main sab bhool gya he, veerji ne kaha to menu yaqeen nhi hua, tu

hai hi inna wada nautanki

Baldev; oye, kabootri! me nautanki nhi hun, tu hai.

Veera; acha ab ye bimaar hone ka naataq jaldi khaatam kr, bechare

tayaji kinne pareshan hen, jaldi se theek ho k ghar ja

Baldev; (slow husky voice) tu agai he na, ab to forun theek hojana

he menu

Veera blushed a little but she tried to hide it.

Veera; kya?

Baldev; kuch nhi, sher hun main, theek hi hun bas ye doctor log hen

jo rok k bethe hen wrna main to abhi ghar jana chahta hun

Veera; achaw!

Baldev; (getting close to veera's face and in a naughty voice) aazma

ke vekh le

Veera stood up.

Veera; tu ghar jayega na phir aaongi ab main chalti hun

Baldev; jaldi aaiyo, teri rah vekhunga

Veera was very disturbed with Baldev's obvious drooling on her, she

turned and left, and as soon as she was ut, tears fell from her eyes.

Her perfect life was defected again, she walked to the other ward

where she had an appointment with a lady doctor, she got her first

ultrasound and other tests done.

Doctor; aapka baby bilkul theek he aur healty bhi, bas stress mat

lijiye sab theek hoga

Veera then left the hospital.

Jaggi and Billa had noticed the change in Baldev too.

Jaggi; paaji..ye veera ko dekh k aapk ki hogya tha

Baldev; kuch nhi oye, bachpan ka yaarana hai na sada

Billa; bachpan ka yaarana? paaji wo to aapki dushman thi na

Baldev; haan thi, pr ab bachpan gya aur jawani agai he, aur ab me

samjha k ine saal menu koi kudi pasand kyun nhi aai

Jaggi; kyun paaji

Baldev; waqt aane pe batonga.

Billa; (whispering to jaggi) paaji ki sui ghoom phir ke veera parjai pe

hi rukti he
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At Ranvi's house Balveer was again arguing

Balveer; i won't call u bg, aap meri bua ho

Gunjan; to sirf veerji k saamne hi to bolna he aur wese bhi veera ko

to tu mom kehta he na

Balveer; no no no, aur mamoo ko to papaji never ever

Veera; to sim kya karo ge? dad ko sab bta doge? aur bimar karoge

apne dad ko?

Balveer; no mom, but me nhi kahoonga

Balveer started weeping. Veera hugged him.

Veera; sorry baby sorry, mom ko maaf krdo

Balveer; its ok mom

Veera wiped his tears and kissed his forehead.

Balveer; idea! bua i will call you gb, short for gunjan bua

Gunjan; haan theek he veerji ko keh denge tu ulta bolta he,

badmash!

Ranvi; par menu kya kahega?

Balveer; dad ke saamne aap se baat hi nhi karunga, but what will i

call my mom?

Veera; aap genius ho, khud hi decide krlo

Balveer; ok let me think

Veera; keep thinking my baby.

The next day Veera made some halwa and went to Baldev's house,

he was discharged from the hospital and resting at his house. She

went straight to his room and as soon as she opened the door her

jaw dropped, Baldev was changing and was about to remove his

towel. But he stopped as soon as he saw her.

Baldev; oye ese ki ghoor rhi he, udhar dekh

Veera turned her face and then smiled.

Veera; jaldi kr wrna me palat jaongi

Baldev; oye tenu sharam nhi aati ki

Veera; nhi thodi si bhi nhi, Baldev jaldi kr

Veera was feeling naughty again, the child in her suddenly back.

Veera; jaldi kr me palat rhi hun...ek ...do...teen

Veera turned and then Baldev pulled her and pinned her to the wall.

Veera immediately held her abdomen. Baldev was still shirtless he

put on only his pants.

Baldev; (husky voice) to besharam hai na tu

Veera; (confused, lowering her eyes) Baldev main to bas mazaq kr

rhi thi

Baldev; achaw!

Veera was stuck, imprisoned in his arms.

Veera; main..wo..halwa..halwa lai thi tere waste..maine...matlab chaiji

ne..bht pyar se banaya he...sooji ka halwa..bht pasand he na

tujhe...chaiji keh rhi thi

Veera was unable to speak, his warm breath, his hot body confused

her, she was feeling very uncomfortable and silly too because she

knew he was nobody else but her husband, and her children's

father.

Baldev; laai hai to khila bhi de na

Baldev opened his mouth, Veera's hands trembled as she opened

the box but she didn't open it and pushed baldev.

Veera; oye tenu ho ki gya he, door reh mujhse, besharm kahin ka,

ladkiyon se baat krne ki tameez nhi hai tenu, teri to khud ki ek

behen hai na usko koi ese chede to

Baldev; acha ab badi sati ban rahi he tu, aur tu jo meri izzat pe dore

daal rhi thi wo? tere ghar me bhi to bhai he, ranvi k saath koi kudi

esa kre to tu kya kregi tab, baat krti he

Veera; haan to main sach me thodi dekh rhi thi..aur wese bhi mene

to..(veera controlled her tongue)

she came to him and handed over the box

Veera; ye le khana he to kha wrna teri marzi, main jaa rhi hun.

She was leaving but he caught her arm and was about to pull again

but she turned in anger.

Veera; aur haan menu ese phir se kabhi mat kheenchna..kabhi nhi,

ese jhatke mere liye sahi nhi

Baldev; kyun? qamariya lachaq jayegi ki?

Veera; Baldev!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! tu menu nhi kheenchega bas, kyun kya

kese tenu batana zaruri nahi he.

she left. Baldev opened the box and tasted the halwa.

Baldev; huh! ye chaiji k haath ka hai hi nhi, sherni apne sher ko ulu

banayegi ab? ye to isi ne banaya he, kyun k naa to ye gunjan k haath

ka he na ratan chachi k, ye to is sherni ne hi banaya he, khud subah

subah mere waste halwa bana k laai he aur ab nakhre to dekho,

haye..Rabjee bas jaldi se maan jaye ye kabootri

Veera reached home and started crying.

Veera; kyun Rabjee, baar baar kyun le rahe ho mera imtihaan.

Balveer came to her and wiped her tears.

Balveer; mom don't cry please, aapko pata hai na, dad hates it when

you cry, please

Veera hugged him. Then he lay his head on her lap, Veera moved her

hand on his head.

Balveer; mom don't worry, moti chaaiji ne kaha he ke God meri baat

jaldi sunenge because me chota hun i will pray alot.

Veera; haan baby, keep praying for your dad.

Balveer; i love you mom

Veera; i love you too baby.

Balveer; mom i'm missing dad, mujhe bhi le chalti na

Veera; baby thodi dair me bua jayegi na aap unke saath jana

Balveer; okay

Veera; baby jao aap nashta karlo

Balveer; mom aapne kiya?

Veera; haan jao chaiji aapko khila degi

Balveer left. Veera sat alone and tears kept falling from her eyes.

She had seen too much pain and now this, her husband didn't

remember anything about their love their relation or their children.

She had to act like a friend.

Veera; nahi veera, doctor ne kaha he tu stress nhi le skti, tere bache

ko khatra hoga

she put her hand on her lower tummy.

Veera; Please Rabjee Baldev ki yaadasht jaldi ajaye, mene ek dafa

Baldev ko hamare bache se door rakha, ye din akele guzare ab phir

nahi, aur wese bhi 3 mahine hone pe mera baby bump dikhne

lagega, main kya karungi kya kahungi us se? Please Rabjee meri

madat karo, mainu himmat do ke main apna aur balveer ka khayal

rakh sakhun.

Balveer returned after a while, he hated her tears just like Baldev.

Balveer; mom shouldn't cry, have to do something.

He called Baldev from gunjan's phone.

Baldev; bol gunjan kya museebat hai subah subah

Balveer; no no, its me..Balveer

Baldev; oye mera sheru, haan bol ki hoya?

Balveer; buddy..wo meri VM aapse milne aayi thi, kya kiya aapne

she's so sad

Baldev; ye vm kon he

Balveer; Veera..meri mo...bua

Baldev; tu aur tere bulane wale naam, mene kuch nhi kiya kya hua

use?

Balveer; kuch nhi aap baat kro na

Baldev; de use phone

Balveer came to Veera and gave her the phone. Veera asked through

her gestures but Balveer didn't answer and ran away, Veera put the

phone on her ear.

Veera; hello?

Baldev; oye ki hoya tenu? main mazaq kar rha tha

Veera; its okay

Baldev; teri awaz kyun bujhi bujhi hai? dekh kaha na..ab maafi

maangni nhi aati menu.

Veera smiled.

Baldev; oye hoye ab achi lag rhi he na msukurate huye

Veera; par tenu kese pta me muskurai

Baldev; bas pta chal gya

Veera; Baldev menu bohot kaam he

Baldev; kr le, roka kisne he, wese sun halwa bht acha tha

Veera; bye

Veera smiled as she hung up. She saw Balveer peeking, she opened

her arms and he came running and hugged her.

Veera; tum bilkul apne papa jese ho pta he

Balveer; haan, ab no more tears

Veera; no more tears

Balveer kissed her cheek and she kissed him back.

Edited by overactor - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww aww aww aww !!!!🤗
That was sooo adorable 😳...poor veera she cant even enjoy her naughty hot sher!😒...
This is getting better n better !


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